Im happy to see openmind thats what we need and yes its a life style whats great and i never chance for a moment
@damedeso11176 күн бұрын
Thank you so much for this video! I have been compiling and editing all my poems for a couple of months and I’m motivating myself to submit my manuscript. I will continue to work hard on this project and hopefully my dream of being published will come true. 🙏💖
@knotbrooktaylorpoetry123913 күн бұрын
great piece of teaching, thanks...
@albertetheridge405221 күн бұрын
She is a natural sexy woman can't stop watching 😊😊❤❤
@deepbanerjee8680Ай бұрын
I'm from India can you please tell me can i send my poem or story from India to any other country
@LCbookАй бұрын
This is a very difficult....thank you for explaining! This is attempt 1 for my high school class :) Edit: oh i messed up at the end....oh well Pantoum for Growing Up Always thinking, Just one more year. Never actually getting there, To that place where I’d finally feel That I had grown. Never actually getting there Because no one ever thinks that I have changed. That I had grown, Oddly content…but wanting more. Because no one ever thinks that I have changed, I skirt the responsibilities of age, Oddly content but wanting more Time to experience without consequence. I skirt the responsibilities of age, Longing for that simpler Time to experience without consequence. The things I took for granted, longing to grow, Longing for simpler: That place where I could finally feel That my age no longer handicapped. Always thinking, Just one more year.
@Georgek1220Ай бұрын
It's always interesting to learn about other poets' processes. Mine differs from yours in several respects. I almost never start with a handwritten draft. I prefer to see it on my computer screen. Part of the reason may be that I've never really liked my handwriting, and I like going immediately to seeing what it looks like typed out. Plus then I can start to do some early revision. I agree that reading the poem out loud to yourself is a crucual step. I belong to a workshop that meets once a month, so I usually go there for feedback from other poets. But an open mike night is also a good idea if there is one nearby. There are also a couple of steps that I take with my phone. I often email myself a draft of my poem so that I can pull it out and reread it whenever I have a spare minute and the mood strikes me. The other is that if an idea for revision pops into my head during the day I will text it to myself, and come back to it when I'm revising the poem on my computer.
@ts214121Ай бұрын
Do the clothed people begin to look funny after awhile? Humans are the only animal that wear clothing.
@haroldswick99622 ай бұрын
I tried nudism years ago. It's a wonderful life I enjoy the freedom and you don't have to worry about about talking to anyone. Everyone is equal here.❤❤❤❤
@FransiscoCastaneda-hm6gi2 ай бұрын
Where are some places that allow being naked
@miriamdarlington42662 ай бұрын
Great review! Joelle is Reading tomorrow and this is helpful!
Please make a video on writing a Haibun. I’ve visited other channels, but I dont understand much, you teach so well. 🥹🥹
@JosieAlfordPoet3 ай бұрын
I will add it to the list 😁
@MABSTER13 ай бұрын
2024.... are you still there
@ZainCheema-x1u3 ай бұрын
I want to publish my poem?? Please help me which plate form is best
@lennySmith10003 ай бұрын
Milton.
@RobertharrySutton3 ай бұрын
Planed a first time camp next saterday a little nervous as do not hear borne deaf advice please 😬
@roberttalbot63974 ай бұрын
You dont see younger males and females on uk naturist beaches aged 18- 35 yrs range. It always older aged 40+ to 80s. Young naturist have there own clubs going forwards
@TubbyTifa4 ай бұрын
So really neither of these pronunciations are right...if you speak french, the front of the word should be more similar to the "r" and the end of bonjour. The stress should be on the first syllable, more similar to "GUZzle" than "ghaZAL." If you're going for an anglicized pronunciation, the word I think would actually be closest is "gazelle." I think English-speakers often say "guzzle" to try to replicate that "gh" sound better. Regardless, preparing to try to teach the ghazal to my students, and this overview is very helpful. Thank you!
@JosieAlfordPoet3 ай бұрын
Thank you for the pronunciation tip. Going to pin this comment so people know! Glad you found the video useful though. Good luck to your students 👍
@leroyswenson71654 ай бұрын
I am a nudist and God bless you in your journey
@Seren3ti4 ай бұрын
I am literally crying listening to this. Walking to the corner shop, has become something that I rarely do. I work remotely and go into the office once a month, which is 1hr 45 mins away. Numerous times I have struggled to get there, faint, struggling to walk, needing to buy a suitcase twice, so that I can rest on the handle as I walk. And having to book a hotel to stay overnight because there is no way I can physically make the journey back. I take taxi's almost everywhere. I had to go from London to Reading recently and from London to Oxford and had to take a taxi to and from both because I physically couldn't do the commute. I have spoken to the Dr's so many times but they just fob me off, with blood tests that reveal nothing and the cycle starts over again. Thank you so much for sharing.
@193319364 ай бұрын
Miss Mrs Ms Alford or whatever you choose. I have had long term mental and physical illnesses type2 diabetes since 2003 bi polar schizoid since 1993. Huemans are very adaptive to situations but it takes time patience and mistakes. I'm not sure of your orientation. But in my book Big is Beautiful.
@ishbOutu14 ай бұрын
Are you naked if you are still wearing your watch?
@sehajmangat9784 ай бұрын
love the suits mug
@JosieAlfordPoet4 ай бұрын
Thank you! I smashed it by accident a while back 😭
@didi-nr6qf4 ай бұрын
Great video Josie! You should do a follow up one 😀
@JosieAlfordPoet4 ай бұрын
Funny you should say that...
@berits.23464 ай бұрын
Stupid
@DanumSkald4 ай бұрын
Hello and thank you for your videos, I have just discovered your channel from a recent discovery of my hobby of poetry. I have been writing a few months and the standard has been well received normally in end rhyme or sonnet. However i rrally struggling with writing a free verse any ideas or guidance would be well received?
@JosieAlfordPoet4 ай бұрын
Hey! I'm glad you like the channel. You're comment has made me realise that I've never made a video on how to write free verse *adds to list*. In the meantime time, I say, check out this video and go through the steps and focus on what you want to say and not how you're saying it kzbin.info/www/bejne/lZOWn62thr-mhqMsi=QEIXKWQrfilDhS5p
@746nishant4 ай бұрын
♥️♥️ very helpful. Thankyou so much
@JosieAlfordPoet4 ай бұрын
Thanks pal 😁
@fromyourheadtoyoursoul87854 ай бұрын
thanks 4 all the advice i have hundreds of poems
@JosieAlfordPoet4 ай бұрын
Let me know if my advice helps and your I get published 🎉
@baoxang46824 ай бұрын
Sounds interesting…..would love to experience it one day
@roberthardy20134 ай бұрын
“Shocked, and didn’t know where to look for the best”. A mate of mine went to a nudist wedding and found out that he wasn’t the best man after all.
@MathJonesPoetry4 ай бұрын
The whole notion of 'courtship' as 'hunting', the desired as 'prey', could certainly do with a good kicking here, linking it to that long history whilst demonstrating what a sick and abhorrent metaphor / mindset it is - even a genuine hunter, the bear, is preferable to those who still operate within that framework.
@JosieAlfordPoet4 ай бұрын
Thanks for the comment ☺️
@JMRAWLE5 ай бұрын
Ha! me again! You are in NZ in these vids, my home, hope you enjoyed the trip!
@JosieAlfordPoet4 ай бұрын
I did! I definitely want to come back - a month was not enough time to explore.
@JMRAWLE5 ай бұрын
As a writer and diploma graduate in 'Writing for Creative Industries' I found this video so helpful. Wisdom from a soul that has rolled up their sleeves and got the job done! Nice work Josie - off to go watch the other vids now. hugs from NZ
@JosieAlfordPoet4 ай бұрын
Love this thank you 😍
@JMRAWLE5 ай бұрын
Hey folks, and @josiealfordpoet. Anyone have info on sites similar to Submittable for New Zealand. I have two collections I'd like to query/pitch. Many Thanks!
@JosieAlfordPoet4 ай бұрын
Hey pal! I don't know about any specific sites but I suggest checking out the publishers websites for your favourite NZ poets to see how they accept submissions
@SquishyTrym5 ай бұрын
Overall, this poem is pretty good. I like the rhythm, particularly with "to protect us" and "to digest us." I feel that the poem needs some visceral descriptions to make the point clear about how scared and uneasy we feel around men and how women have evolved to have to resort to using the survival mechanisms in order to survive, but we should be telling men to not attack women. Something like men claw off our clothes and thrust themselves into us until they roar with gratification or something of that ilk that can match the iambic meter and rhyme. As for the name of the collection, "Little Songs" is simple and is more or less what it says on the tin when it comes to sonnets. Hope all this helps.
@JosieAlfordPoet4 ай бұрын
Thanks for the feedback! I agree about needing stronger images, I'm not sure I want to go quite that graphic but I get your point and will work on the second draft.
@SquishyTrym4 ай бұрын
@JosieAlfordPoet I mean, that's an extreme example, but yeah. Definitely stronger images to make it impactful as well.
@nathannewland53835 ай бұрын
I wonder Whether prose poetry Is simply poetic prose. Surely form has a role To play? If I met a traveller From an antique land Yet wrinkled my lip and Sneered in a paragraph, Ignoring rhyme, Would it still be A poem?
@JosieAlfordPoet5 ай бұрын
Lush poem :) Thanks!
@ernestadams92835 ай бұрын
Hello Dear🥰
@tonibee90106 ай бұрын
Nice Teaching / greaaaat Villanelle
@JosieAlfordPoet5 ай бұрын
Thank you! 😃
@emiber19126 ай бұрын
Is that an Arwen necklace?!! Where did you get that? Looks beautiful <3
@JosieAlfordPoet5 ай бұрын
It is! My husband bought it for me for Christmas - I'm not sure where from though!
@Stephanie-hl7lo6 ай бұрын
love your video, and I love your HAIR!!!
@JosieAlfordPoet5 ай бұрын
Thanks! My hair is a bit different now - that pink bob was the result of lock down - the top grew out so fast!
@Umai.6 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@katiereed50387 ай бұрын
Very useful! Thanks
@JosieAlfordPoet7 ай бұрын
Glad I could help
@katiereed50387 ай бұрын
I'm cheering for you in those endeavors surrounding the care and keeping of a self! I'll also look forward to hearing about the work of living poets in your reviews! I grew up with the Complete Works of Robert Service and A Light in the Attic by Shel Silverstein only. So now i have it in my head that i need years to even become acquainted with anybody's poetry and a distinct lack of knowledge particularly around anything modern
@JosieAlfordPoet7 ай бұрын
Hey Katie. Thanks for the comment. You can catch up with all my book reviews so far here: kzbin.info/aero/PLsj6SyfAog5QCYjMQdc3PQyaPNTFRvq9E
@Seren3ti7 ай бұрын
Thanks Josie, I loved this 'intro' for me to Verve. There are so many great tips and I relished your authentic transparent lens. I live in London, so I hope to make the next one. I resonated with Charades and admired how you put it all together! 👏🏾
@JosieAlfordPoet7 ай бұрын
Thank you 😊 maybe I'll see you there next year!
@stuffthings14177 ай бұрын
why would you catch a cold? silly question.
@laticiadebbarma28537 ай бұрын
Grateful for all your videos
@JosieAlfordPoet7 ай бұрын
Grateful for this comment. It keeps me motivated ❤️
@Lightworker-ye4nv7 ай бұрын
I'm a tantric male masseuse and even tho i am use to being partially nude with female clients same id still be abit nervous..have u ever tried a tantric masseuse?? Id be happy to show you
@redchthonic7 ай бұрын
why do people make such a near religious event of having no hair. It is common, attached to certain gender politics and really just a cliche. Have it by all means but it is not rewriting Satre.
@JosieAlfordPoet7 ай бұрын
Cheers for the input pal 🙄
@redchthonic7 ай бұрын
@@JosieAlfordPoet Just a comment about how we take ourselves a bit too seriously.