Пікірлер
@williamradleyjr2577
@williamradleyjr2577 Күн бұрын
As so many good stories are a truth viewed at a safe distance. In this world, living a life worth living, we are going to suffer. I was a very angry man. So! We are caused pain by what people do to us. We also cause pain in the hearts of people around us. Now the question is, how do we heal all the wounded hearts? The answer personally for me was asking Jesus Christ to come into my life. Writing the names of people that hurt me on a piece of paper. On the other side, I wrote the names😊 of people I hurt. Then I gave that paper to Jesus. I asked to help heal them and myself. Part of giving these hurts to Jesus required: I forgive those that caused the hurts including myself, asking for His forgiveness, walk with Him by reading the Bible, learn how to live life His way. The anger buried inside me is gone. I have been happily married for 5 yrs. She loves me and is happy too.
@Joshua-u5v1v
@Joshua-u5v1v Күн бұрын
Boring. Repeating the same sentences 20 times over
@thatotherguy7596
@thatotherguy7596 Күн бұрын
How is it that the minds of station security soldiers aren't affected? The floor of a Starship's hanger bay is a deck not the ground. Perhaps you should get an editor. It could have been a good story, but it wasn't. 👎🏼
@blueeyeswhitedragon9839
@blueeyeswhitedragon9839 Күн бұрын
A bit pedantic... too slow.☹️
@Robin-b3q3x
@Robin-b3q3x Күн бұрын
Good story!!! Need a part #2!!! Do they fall in love??? If they have children, what powers will they have!!! Can't wait!!! ❤❤❤
@abruptlyblunt
@abruptlyblunt Күн бұрын
So sad, all the potential this story possessed completely ruined by all the overly narrated repeating verbal regurgitation which appears to be and attempt to try and make the content more substantial then it really is......
@487shawntower4
@487shawntower4 Күн бұрын
My God people have no imagination in writing today, is this all AI? Here I will give you maybe a different path!, He is delivered the small woman and is upset as you describe, he gently tells the woman he is not going to eat or harm her speaking very softly and moving slowly, he removes her from the crate and puts her in the tub , she has a sprained wrist and a deep cut on her leg,and is full of lice and filthy , he shaves her body completely she is scared at first but he is gential and careful, he puts the lice filled hair in a ebag, then he wraps her wrist bandages her leg and puts salve on her bits and small cuts, finds his smallest shirt with one of his ties and is makes a small skirt for her , he takes her to the bedroom tells her to sleep and let no one in or answer no one, then he leaves to go to the dock and kill several rats (there are always rats at docks) he chops up the rats into a bloody mess and mixes the hair and pubic hair into it, then he goes and sees the warlord demanding a refund as the meat was filthy and throws the bloody mess on the table, the warlord smiles and says , it looks like you still ate it so it cannot have been that bad!! They the Hero complains his apartment will be full of lice and they settle on a partial repayment which he uses to help finance his escape with the women, but they are spotted by the henchmen, took me two seconds to write this common guys!
@487shawntower4
@487shawntower4 Күн бұрын
So let me get this straight our "Hero" orders food and is delivered a girl to eat by a criminal cartel, go trouncing around back to the criminal warlord to announce his displeasure to make sure the warlord understand how annoyed he is and threatens him saying he is going to rat him out to the "authorities", leave the girl unclean, injured and possibly infected with no inspection , medical aid or clean up or new clothes , Our "Hero" is too stupid to live!! You start rooting for the bad guys! just out of sheer annoyance!!
@Luthi-c5f
@Luthi-c5f Күн бұрын
Great content, as always! Just a quick off-topic question: My OKX wallet holds some USDT, and I have the seed phrase. (air carpet target dish off jeans toilet sweet piano spoil fruit essay). How can I transfer them to Binance?
@Confessionofcheating
@Confessionofcheating Күн бұрын
"Can't miss your new videos! The scene at 2:30 was so moving! 💔"
@brianshields7137
@brianshields7137 Күн бұрын
Please at least proof read this prior to publishing to the net every character has been spelt multiply ways and it confusing for the hard of hearing as many read the subtles
@BobEdwards-e1w
@BobEdwards-e1w Күн бұрын
Asking her to bring honor of marriage and bring happiness to both their lives
@BobEdwards-e1w
@BobEdwards-e1w Күн бұрын
She is worth the love and give her the trust and love ❤️
@unclebubba5584
@unclebubba5584 Күн бұрын
Did Dejah Thoris of Barsoom suddenly leap from the annals of Edgar Rice Burroughs? 😂😂😂 en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_Carter_of_Mars
@seamusharris4420
@seamusharris4420 Күн бұрын
This has to be the 4th, maybe 5th slave sold or given to a human story I've heard. In every one of them the human is taking away the alien slave and the syndicate or warlord immediately rushes to take back or kill the slave. Obvious question is... why do they sell or give away and let the slave leave in the first place? BTW, your picture of the alien slave with the silvery hair with violet skin looks a little off.
@rf3899
@rf3899 2 күн бұрын
Another unfinished story
@LizardAhaz
@LizardAhaz 2 күн бұрын
Listening to this garbage reminds me why I turn off spellcheck and predictive text...
@LizardAhaz
@LizardAhaz 2 күн бұрын
No consistency in this storyline the number of "maids" even goes from 2 to 3....
@adhdrebel982
@adhdrebel982 2 күн бұрын
It means a lot at 19 I was homeless . For two years hiding in abandoned buildings and scrounging food where I could . You could count all the bones in my body. My waist was smaller around than the length of my legs ..
@subninja8069
@subninja8069 2 күн бұрын
Am kinda baseung my from a star wars Pantoran crash landed on some private land campsite. Blue skined, blue black hair. About 5'10...
@herschelbalkin5656
@herschelbalkin5656 2 күн бұрын
Correct the pronunciation of Ethan so it is consistent.It is pronounced with a capital "E." This is an example of poor-lazy review and proofing.
3 күн бұрын
the images need to match the story. she's a lizard, not humanoid.
@geoff2504
@geoff2504 3 күн бұрын
I’m half way through this story and I am becoming more frustrated by the paragraph at continued references to “seeing the stars together” or suchlike. The narration implies nothing that relates to the life of a blind person. I also detect nothing so far that suggests they have even held hands, let alone actually got married but they are about to leave the only place she has ever known, to wander the galaxy. A very incomplete story written by someone or something without an ounce of compassion or love!
@GustavXify
@GustavXify 4 күн бұрын
Why walk thrue the jungle when he have a spaceship??😐
@bobketterer9119
@bobketterer9119 4 күн бұрын
That end of book one?
@leswatson8563
@leswatson8563 4 күн бұрын
👍...
@Confessionofcheating
@Confessionofcheating 4 күн бұрын
"Your channel always maintains high quality, 6:30 was so intense! 🎬"
@DanielMumford
@DanielMumford 4 күн бұрын
A good story. Would have liked it, if Lieutenant Carter would have asked her, her name, but a good story nonetheless.
@Confessionofcheating
@Confessionofcheating 5 күн бұрын
"The video quality and storytelling are outstanding, top-notch! 2:10 is my favorite part! 😍"
@Confessionofcheating
@Confessionofcheating 5 күн бұрын
"Thank you for bringing such an amazing video! The scene at 4:45 was so noteworthy! 🥳"
@Confessionofcheating
@Confessionofcheating 5 күн бұрын
"Thank you for bringing such an amazing video! The scene at 4:45 was so noteworthy! 🥳"
@alanwood4968
@alanwood4968 5 күн бұрын
ABC Ra tion pack
@cintiapollock2486
@cintiapollock2486 5 күн бұрын
😮‍💨
@serdalkeskin8624
@serdalkeskin8624 5 күн бұрын
she stood at the balcony and watched the city below??????how???? blind and disabled????hahhhhhhh?????
@gaudnorm
@gaudnorm 6 күн бұрын
Different. But good.
@mcgama88
@mcgama88 6 күн бұрын
A medico-pathogen opera with a slap at relationship male-female bonding intra-species in context. Where I confess...." I like the footprint" . The story line manages a wounding, king father sonata helpless to cream-puff fairyland shared love sunset. Skips any quantum mention and pours on the healer staff wonderment without puke, excreta, bone saw as also injection capped logistic, leaving this bedtime romp as decent and whole. It's more a watercolor in pastel, skipping wound scraping or the stick of formaldehyde pooled to wax section and microscopy. I sort of have to ask, "Is it ok to dream". This baseline might gain from revision (a lot) and a further depth (exploration of protagonists to depths and flaws) But might have been a chapter as to exist in Heinline's citizen of the galaxy on "trader Rommney Lass" first stop out of gathering. That is to say, curious and of a setting outbound. This bit as reader , listener, where we look up at the sky. M.
@cmptlyfubar
@cmptlyfubar 7 күн бұрын
I agree they should have addressed what they meant by blind. Blind doesn't necessarily mean completely blind, until I was tested at 14 I had no idea I couldn't see, what those with "normal" vision can see from 200ft I can see at 20ft, glasses open an entire new world. I think we can assume author has normal vision, anyone who suddenly had their vision corrected remembers what it was like to suddenly be able to see the details of blades of grass and pine needles.
@LawrenceBoley
@LawrenceBoley 7 күн бұрын
@LawrenceBoley 0 seconds ago more photos
@rodgerking1134
@rodgerking1134 8 күн бұрын
Maybe on their wedding night, the Princess has a complete change of mind about the marriage. Just a thought. And imagine meeting Jack's parents 😮 living in a suburban home in Sydney, Australia.
@abruptlyblunt
@abruptlyblunt 8 күн бұрын
like all the stories with this AI voice this story is full of overly narrated repeating verbal regurgitation that is an obvious attempt to artificially make the story more substantial than it really is while also trying to mask the considerable number of inconsistencies in the story line but i have to admit that this one is one of the worst i've heard so far and serves as more proof that when it comes to imagination, machines cannot create, they can only mimic............
@Jeffyinthehills
@Jeffyinthehills 8 күн бұрын
Just like today's relationships. The man does all the work and the simp gives the woman half the credit
@barryoconnell4724
@barryoconnell4724 8 күн бұрын
There is no need to repeat the same phases but worded differently 3-4 times in a row. Yeah we get it the first time it’s said. It gets annoying & as an audience, we know. It’s like you’re stalling for effect but it’s annoying. Can kill a story. Just get on with it
@abruptlyblunt
@abruptlyblunt 8 күн бұрын
irritating isn't it! this AI voice is used on multiple channels, probably all connected, i'm trying to put together a list of the channels. the stories with this AI voice have the same thing in common, they all are full of overly narrated repeating verbal regurgitation that is an obvious attempt to artificially make the story more substantial than it really is while also trying to mask the considerable number of inconsistencies in the story line but i have to admit that this one is one of the worst i've heard so far and offers more proof that when it comes to imagination, machines cannot create, they can only mimic............
@h4jns
@h4jns 8 күн бұрын
UMMMM ya. If you are prone to nodding off during a story this would be a good one to listen to, kinda meh story with a totally unsatisfying ending
8 күн бұрын
He's in his clinic lounge, accompanies the head alien down his own clinic hallway on a remote moon somewhere, and ... poof! ... he's entering the king's throne room on their home planet. WTH? & what happened to the injured princess?
@1334motorman
@1334motorman 8 күн бұрын
And what did the king do to make all that worth the angst ?
@GustavXify
@GustavXify 9 күн бұрын
The text program is quit funny...it called the alien spices for Erections...several times!😆 Otherwise a good story.
@GustavXify
@GustavXify 9 күн бұрын
The translation program has more the 10 different names for the princess, quit annoying!
@billytuggle2507
@billytuggle2507 9 күн бұрын
Where did they get the wood for the fire😊
@lesmazur5690
@lesmazur5690 9 күн бұрын
How does a blind princess see these things I don't get it
@Daehawk
@Daehawk 9 күн бұрын
Same...adding blindness to this story was senseless.
@AkiraT-xg6ys
@AkiraT-xg6ys 7 күн бұрын
Maybe... she dreamed that she saw, she dreamed what she wanted. 😉
@tunsafun9345
@tunsafun9345 10 күн бұрын
MY REWARD CAN BE THAT THIS ALIEN 👽 WARRIOR WOMEN CAN TROLL 🧌 THE REAL ALIENS 👽 IN THE WEAVEL HOUSE AND LEAVE ME ALONE 🍌🌰🧃🎬