I love the double entendre

haha you seem to use the same female name quite a bit

What was the object?

Good story part two was much better.Like I allways say true love is all anyone wants and needs .Like the love of christ!

... really cheesy

Great story I loved it want to hear more stories like this

Warm, engaging young love. Very well done👍😁😁

Cute story. I was hoping John would go with her too! A part 2 would be great! It seems a shame to end such a story of a alien with such a beautiful heart and curiosity? 😊

What happened to the end of the story?

I was hoping john would go with her.....

4:05

K-9? Now we steal...er, appropriate from Doctor Who?

Nice, now make that a movie or an anime. XD

Name of show please

NO! NO! i never want to come back to this miserable place where we have to kill to eat, where one govt forces soldiers to kill the soldiers of another govt...and where the rich exploit the poor. Its a LIE. All the religions kill in the name of God! No! I refuse to agree to come back as that would be agreeing to return to Hell. Its a lie and a trick to get souls to stay in Hell again and again...

whats the title

Do it on the bed together meow

You want it now

WOW THIS WOULD BE A DREAM COME TRUE FOR ME...SUPER HOT TALL CHICKS AND I AM RICH? OH HELL YES!

Check your text before applying AI as a narrator. This could have been an entertaining story, but AI made it painful to listen to.

This need's completely re-recording. Sorry but this is awful.

Who wrote this CRAP??? Makes me think of one of those hastily written erotic pulp fiction novels. With this terrible dialogue and silly plot, it looks tailor-made for an "epic" starring MIA KHALIFA and REILLY REID.

truley BAD

Man this AI voice is terrible....It's hard to understand what it is trying to say half the time because it doesn't pause after each sentence or sound out many words correctly. I had to turn off the video about 2-3 mins into it. Try a different AI voice next time there are a lot to choose from to settle for something garbage like this.

finally a story that starts out right, but told by a AI that is just 1 generation removed from a 1980's speak and spell....

This is a great concept of a story, but geez the grammar and the spelling of the AI makes my teeth cringe, and my brain explode a little. Overall, a great concept of a story about aliens surviving on Earth as prisoners and learning about themselves. But by all the Stars and Gods and Goddess', please clean up the grammar and spelling and fill in the missing parts of the story. It really needs work!

Get to the alien ass to mouth.

I enjoyed that story. Moved at a blur, as these short stories must be in order to cram so much information in so little time while still allowing the story to flow. I keep a list of channels I have no use for so I don't accidentally click on one and get royally irritated when they never have closer and leave me hanging over a void. I look forward to listening to more stories from your channel. Well Done.....Well Done.

"Trip", I have a job for you, again

I think an AI actually wrote this trash. A complete waste of time.

OK, the story shows promise, but the AI reads in a monotone and lifeless style. The story is pretty choppy as well.

Wow, working and living together in peace... Totally Science Fiction

The AI reading this needs to be given punctuation. It's not just one long stream of words.

This is supposedly a very good story but I lost much time in collateral poetic circumspections, philiosophical insights, idealism, etc...

God! I HATE an AI reading!

Well, I was with the story until the last few minutes when the mutated human savior was able to fly into space, or at least low orbit, carrying a alien woman and flinging her into an open hatch on a spaceship, undetected! Seems like author was in a hurry to end the story. Also, your AI narration had problems with gender descriptions of the Princess from one sentence to the next. Overall, I’d score this about a 5.5 out of 10. I didn’t finish the last few minutes because of the previous few minutes!

Terrible AI reading

Nice story, but lousy presentation. It’s not the AI voice, but the misspelled words, the syntax, punctuation, lack of appropriate pauses where sentences end, and the run on sentences. Do a better job with your AI, or hire an appropriate real human to read the script correctly.

I enjoyed the story but the delivery needs work.

extremy annoying elevator music

THERE ARE NO "ALIENS", ALL HOLLYWOOD FANTASY CREATION FOR GULLIBLE PEOPLE//

Cute story. Only thing missing from the story is Jason & Lilia getting married by both planet's traditions before Nova was born.

A little on the rapey side

Would have been a better story is not for the annoying AI narrator. There are places where even the most normal of pauses should exist, others where the benefit of vocal inflection would be appropriate, yet this particular AI narration is worse than the others I've heard. I have to believe the story itself was written by a human, and I like the premise and the writing, but it needs better narration.

Horrible narration

The story started off good, but the AI narrator made it hard and near impossible to finish listening to the end. Would recommend you have someone listen to it before you post a story.

Good 👍 story to connect two worlds despite the struggle

You call the woman pictured "beautiful"? Have you had your eyes tested recently? 😮

Read this story before with a different picture. Please take more care.

Wouldn't mind hearing a human read the story.