Just a thought but I wouldnt add if the game is a win or loss on the thumbnail, I think more people tend to like videos that are wins, and it also lets there be some more suspension. That being said fun vid, great job talking through your through processes

You should lower the game audio and raise your voice. I didn’t hear you and turned up the audio to then get jumpscared be the queuing sound

Mate try to punish Vlad when he has his q in cd don't just stay there afk csing, you can trade with a W and AA then you go away when he doesn't have Q

I just happened to stumble into your channel randomly by youtube and I think you are doing great overall. For some backseating: The ward at 7:27 unfortunately doesn't cover the scuttle since the ward will expire before the scuttle spawns. A ward level 1 is active for 90 seconds. It is not bad to ward bot side of the river since Lee Sin started top side. I would personally hold onto my ward until maybe 2.5 min since most junglers will do a full clear around 3 minutes and look for a gank/scuttle fight around 3.5 min. Your laning seems fine for now but pressing more abilities on Yasuo and trying to poke him out and annoy him would be good. Laning is so different for each matchup so experience and knowing your own limits is key so I can't blame you at all. Laning experience comes with comfort with the champion and that is why sticking to one champion is really good. I would try to stack your manaflow band rune as fast as possible. That gives 25 mana each time you hit an enemy champion with a spell up to a maximum of 250 mana with a 15 second cooldown. You had a really nice kill at 16:56. If you had pressured him a bit more with your spells earlier you probably could have forced him back/killed him earlier. I would probably have stayed and taken a tower plating or two after killing him since Wukong is dead too. You tpd back so staying would have been great for at least 1 plate (175g). Buying control wards as Ryze is fine higher up but I dislike buying control wards on scaling champions and gold hungry champions. Ryze is primarily a spell caster and he scales damage the more mana he builds which means you have even more freedom to spam EQ and EW combos. The most efficient dps rotation for pure damage is to cast Q W Q E Q so don't be afraid to cast spells when you have catalyst, some tear stacks and manaflow stacks. Ryze is an amazing scaling champion. You need to know what you are doing with control wards otherwise you are just wasting gold you could have been using to be even further ahead. The roam to bot lane at 19:40 is just ? to me. Ryze should be happy just farming in mid. The "optimal scenario" at 14 min for you would be that mid and bot should swap so you can have a great sidelane experience with a bunch of free farm and the possibility of tps and escaping sticky situation with ult and being annoying for the enemy team by split pushing (this happens later which is great). When you are going 1v1 vs miss fortune you could have used your W multiple times to chase her down and maybe kill her. When Leona tries to help miss fortune you ult out when I am certain you could have just focussed mf down to kill her but that comes with time and knowing your own limits. Limit testing is kind of a meme in league when you die if you go in too hard but that is part of learning too. But in general you should stay in a side lane (safely) most of the time and be selfish gathering resources for yourself since you need gold in order to be a menace late game. I would personally almost always buy sorc shoes and a void staff as a third item since magic pen is so op on ryze since he doesn't just scale with ap like other mages he also scales his magic damage with mana and if you are only buying ap the "mana damage" does not scale. You can test this on your own in practice tool vs certain magic resist training dummies and you will see that void staff is insane. Overall pretty unfortunate outcome to a decent performance. If you become more in touch with your own limits and if you get some more efficient spell rotations you could easily climb up the ranks. Sorry if I was too rambly...

Yoo! Wp man. You played within your limits which is smart when you are starting out, you got great CS and you played around you team and the map well. As someone who has played alotta Ryze I just wanted to point a few things out. You can ignore this if you want but I'm just gonna backseat coach a bit lol. You have more control over the wave than most champs in the game, try to be a bit more decisive about what you want to do with it, it can give you a lot of advantage's in tempo / cs over your opponents. Don't be afraid to trade either, you need every bit of damage possible to kill anyone early as Ryze. Also try to auto the wave more if you're wanting to push, for example when you wanted to go to do rift with darius you could have been autoing the wave the whole time when kennen was in fog and just done like one EQ. Also don't be afraid to chase when you are strong! At that drake fight with darius if you kitted them out and kept throwing EQ's you could probably kill MF and Amumu. Anyways thats enough backseating from me, wp and goodluck in the climb!

keep up the good work! Please upload more! you are very helpful for me so i can base my practice

yoo continue the grind, I've seen your content since you were Bronze 3 and I gotta say I love the thumbnails

the commitment you have is astonishing

Notes: - When knife is out, still keep crosshair at head level. Only exception is for utility when it makes sense to not look head level to use it. - Defensive Pre-round plans are pretty sparse, try to involve at least 1 teammate, and comm utility to teammates whenever you use it or are about to. - Defense Pre-round plans need to answer the question of "If I get 5 man rushed on my site, what will I do?" and also "If I don't get rushed, what will I do?" - No Yoru VOD you analyzed has ever done an aggressive dry peek start of round for A Long like you have done numerous times on defensive rounds. Either find a PWEA Yoru Haven VOD that supports it & the frequency you do it, or stop deviating from the Yoru playbook. Time Stamps: 1:37 - Saying "Breach is there" is a bad comm, say "A Long Breach" or "One A Long Breach" 1:45 - Because it's a 2v4, I'm okay with insane plays like this, but you need to aim before you shoot. 9:00 - I start hard deviating from Yoru playbook by playing A on defense repeatedly, but it was a proactive decision to mitigate the risk of Brim tilting from our Jett during 1st half. 11:40 - Don't just spam ping that - you need call the comm "Garage Brimstone!" 18:17 - Saying "Yep Breach Reyna are there - Graffiti" - is so TROLL, just say "2 A, Breach Reyna - Graffiti" or something like that. 21:02 - Bad comms, didn't even use push to talk. Don't whine and mumble, say "Reyna hold site with us, we have guns!". Mid-round whining under your breath about teammates giving away their big boy guns is really stupid as well, you need to save the mental power mid-round for making better decisions. Self VOD Review Doc: docs.google.com/document/d/1DkViYaz8GrJnPgagY8dTc1tZ7yWzn_GChK6_ZAWM21k/edit?usp=sharing PRIORITY: Crosshair Placement -> Gunfight Hygiene -> Pre-round Plans -> Mid-round Comms

put a name on it

your just him

how long do ya do it for a day?

i love ya vid man

ya to good bru, but like can ya give ya vid a name

bru your mad good

nice shit

13 straight rounds is crazyyyy! Did you make the crosshair smaller ?

The hero is back

yooo ur back

Where are the rules you’re using for DM? (Like letting yourself die when you miss)

what happened to the vids? u hit plat yet? i hit diamond 3 im in ascendant lobbies now lol

I also want to ask if you don't mind. Can you explain what it means when woohoojin says to be aggressive? Do I peak when there's OP? Like when the spike is planted do I still go around looking for enemies? I don't really understand what he means by that.

Thanks for posting this bro! I was getting discouraged by the overdrill aim on medium mode cos I hit less than 5. On easy I do better and I was wondering what's wrong with me. Good to see that Woohoojins drills do work. Congrats on you getting to Gold!

Just wondering, why do you have your map so small?

yo good luck on your journey

wouldnt be surprised if u hit radiant

congrats on gold, I've been watching since I found someone who followed the woohoojin method and I just been coming back since. W

Good shittt

make sure u have at least 4,500 creds for the next round (buy up)

ayy goldd 2

Some advice for you, when counter strafe, click the opposite at the end when u press the direct you want. For Example, when you press D, at the end you need to press A, and vice viersa. So your gun will more accurate.

bro why title is not correct i think

Thanks for the ACT rank...

*Promosm* 🤤

Wooo game 100 babyy

These games can be hard, and I am the same rank as you, but recently i deranked to silver 3 then solo qued and got put in all G3's and plat lobbies and 2nd top fragged but we lost I just want to be put, against my own rank for comp. especially if I solo que. But thanks for posting these. Edit: Can You Show Your ACT Triangle in your next video?

u have spent more thann 200 hr on this game

can i join with u and play

nice video man, keep up the grind!!

0:59 I'm too lazy to do it, but it may be worthwhile for you to take a look through the past 40-50 pistol rounds on attack and see how often you end up using both devours. It feels like you want to leer to push aggressively out of tree here, but cant do it without a leer and end up tip toeing around and not accomplishing. i don't play reyna, but for what it's worth leer is better on pistol rounds, its not easy to break with just a handgun. I think you know from you comments afterwards that you needed to close the distance, and a leer there wouldve helped do that. 2:12 you want to be tighter against the wall against better guns where yoru is, at that range your classic right click at least has a chance. 6:03 let somebody else with a better ult have the orb. KJ, Gekko. 8:00 if nobody is getting a sheriff or marshall, you have to close the gap. leer main to get to half wall, then get in tree, and leer out of it. this is the only way you guys have a chance here. Otherwise B is your only option. 8:50 this is a leer to help the team cross to the wall. same thing at 10:08, you're so lucky you got hit in the foot. 9:13 this is a leer as well in case he's holding you. otherwise good instinct to push rope and then stairs here, good job. 11:22 this team just doesn't enter. you need to decide here whether for the rest of the match you're going to enter aggressively and hope your team follows, or whether you will lurk at a different site to create space and maybe get a pick because the team cant be sitting at the door like this. 11:57 yep, called it, all 4 of you just wait at the mound waiting for somebody else to do something and end up getting surrounded and picked off one by one. 13:00 you need to clear the box here 14:50 well, you did leer this time, good job. but you're right, too slow. and also too fast, since you know raze has been nading it every round. 16:41 yes! good job, so you do know when you're supposed to flash, you just don't always do it haha 16:58 I'd risk going up rope as soon as the rez on the second flasher went off, your spot is bad for obvious reasons, but if you move fast you can get behind them easily. the alternative is tucking yourself along the wall closer to the smoke. and of course just leaving and playing time. 17:39 yep, its good that you know what you did wrong. we just got to work on getting you to a point where your instinct knows that before you do it and not after. 18:30 you should recognize here that if she didnt see you then she at least probably heard you roping and youre giving her a 50/50. back off for a second, leer, and then go for the fight. 21:56 you need to be warning omen here that phoenix was stairs 23:06 what's your plan if they take wall and then grenade you or flash you? 23:14 you havent heard anything, you probably should be lurking up here for a closer angle to the door, if not flanking completely. they dont have a trip, flanking is strong against them. 23:19 picking up this orb is 8 seconds wasted that youre too late to getting to the site being hit 24:14 this is actually fairly common, its really hard to stay safe from B, Stairs, and Box. I think you should be routing through B and the door, especially since you already broke it and the omen is routing that way. 26:01 ooph, yeah that's a lazy clear. i don't know if its ever ok not clearing it when theres still three enemy up. its not too risky because omen had your drop and yoru had default, so the only risk was from the hut. 27:07, this isnt shift walk, you need to be running here to help omen fight 27:21 in a flash zone against 2 flashers 32:20 honestly I think we need to be flanking more this game 32:45 they rotated out, and we dont know about it because we never flank 33:38 id be really concerned when this kj swings and finds nothing. you either tuck yourself in more to the left so the remaining block is between you and the swing from main, or you let go and go fight main while KJ defuses 35:45 this gekko really needs help on site, we're basically abandoning him to die like this 36:09 in general i don't like this play because we let them have stairs which makes rotation a nightmare for the same reason you got killed in spawn by that yoru previously, but here specifically we need to be flashing coming out of here 36:28 dont be scared, you have a second flash, and she's in a flash zone, she should be scared of you 38:06 flash zone against two flashers 38:26 you don't know that he's C, yoru can be anywhere with the TP, you need to be running to link up with your omen to not give the yoru 1v1s

Loving the series. You honestly look like a much better player than me. The only thing that I would suggest at this point would be to change your enemy outline colour to yellow because yellow is the colour that the mind reacts fastest too. You would prob want to change your crosshair colour if you did this to a blue or cyan. Just a suggestion 👍

dude they are all so toxic why dont u just mute them

congrats on gold the fight starts here

nice

Congrats on gold!

Good Work. I'm rooting for you. :)

AYE YOU REACHED GOLD BRO! i saw ur video a couple days ago glad to see u made it to gold. excited to see u at plat bro

Gg ez Plat when?

great video! (id recommend not putting win or loss in the thumbnail because you'd want people to stick around and watch the whole video to see if you lost or if you won)