1. The stick pathways and motions for the buzz are great, keep that but try to get the buzz to be longer and more buzzy, you'll have to achieve this by messing around with how you grip the sticks and how much fulcrum pressure there is 2. the way you play the check is pretty solid but it gets very floppy as soon as you play diddles, double check that your grip and fulcrum pressure is firm enough before you start playing the diddles so the heights and dynamics produced are all the same note to note

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Watch out for those diddles at 0:28 make sure they’re balenced and evenly spaced. Also watch those singles at 0:34 Make sure that they are evenly spaced and subdivision is a good thing to do On these singles strokes at 0:57 make sure that that right hand isn’t louder than your left hand. Please don’t crush these down the drums here at 1:15 it just sounds bad.. Again, try not to crush these quick single strokes here at 1:40 Great job here at the diddles at 1:54 I can tell it was well rehearsed Great Job!