15 сағат бұрын
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@a.swartz9916 Сағат бұрын
Empty. Meaningless. Time wasters. Is this your best effort. Plotless drivel..😢😮
@DW-wc9sx 2 сағат бұрын
audio keeps jumping around through random chapters, no continuity.
@DW-wc9sx 4 сағат бұрын
It seems that a lot of the story skipped far ahead around the 30 minute mark.
@nealschieberl9601 5 сағат бұрын
Excellent!!!! Very enjoyable tale. Thank you for sharing 👍
@terivertefeuille6996 6 сағат бұрын
Story is missing a lot of the finishing details. Had potential to be a good story 😥😥😥😥.
@wesleywallin9557 7 сағат бұрын
And people don't understand why we don't trust our leaders. And the ones in power. Because their all the same. Cruel heartless and hateful
@markiusgalfordii9248 7 сағат бұрын
And where's the u s military?
@stevearnold7825 19 сағат бұрын
Story ended without an ending
@F-15maintainer Күн бұрын
Another rerun
@stevearnold7825 Күн бұрын
Part 2?
@williamcarney8119 Күн бұрын
I like the story.
@Gatekeeper-p6g Күн бұрын
That was a totally very different kind of Science Fiction Story! I thought maybe that the vampire alien woman would just kill the human man and that would be the end of the story just a thought!
@thomascassells5595 Күн бұрын
It just ends leaving you wanting more Or a better ending
@khylerbane4523 Күн бұрын
“Even if I am slain, I will leave you with wounds by which you will remember me!” -Demetrian Titus
@wesleywallin9557 3 күн бұрын
Half a story that repeats itself 🤨
@Ferengiprofiteer 3 күн бұрын
It's kinda okay
@whodidthat2732 3 күн бұрын
Well, the ending could have been more expansive with more details about the babes.
@WilliamCairnes-fi2po 3 күн бұрын
Well, that didn't end well.
@stevearnold7825 3 күн бұрын
Half the story😮😢
@stevearnold7825 4 күн бұрын
Half a story😢
@stevearnold7825 4 күн бұрын
Half a story😢
@stevearnold7825 4 күн бұрын
Half a story😢
@Licotus007 4 күн бұрын
If a little bit of blackberry jam caused so much trouble, imagine what would have happened if she had a sexual orgasm. 🤯🤣
@billhicks4537 4 күн бұрын
It's not trying to be disrespectful but the AI gave him three hands but overall a good story
@WinstonBarrett-p4e 4 күн бұрын
What is the consideration given for repair orb? Nothing. This story is nonsense.
@Gatekeeper-p6g 4 күн бұрын
To me this Science Fiction Story sounds really mixed up
@davidcliatt1314 4 күн бұрын
Well I don't think I'll hear anymore from him. 😅
@shelldie8523 5 күн бұрын
This story is a lie. There was no blue waffle pounding
@Tenright77 5 күн бұрын
No Text Shown, or Available via KZbin.
@williamgore7309 5 күн бұрын
That was just stupid
@darthash18 5 күн бұрын
There was nothing about reproduction in this. I call clickbait
@timothygreensweight1676 5 күн бұрын
Need more
@davidj.leavitt7176 5 күн бұрын
Great story. I sure would like to have more about Nix. Perhaps a mini-series of about 10 45 minute videos?
@sci-fitime-b8z 5 күн бұрын
Noted!
@jamesogden7756 5 күн бұрын
Okay, your AI pronouncing things different ways is annoying. Your story is, at best, incomplete. There's backstory and world building that are incomplete. Stop hitting the highlights, and build the story. And FINISH THE STORY.
@jamesstokes8692 5 күн бұрын
That far vampire was a long lost cousin of count dracala
@terivertefeuille6996 5 күн бұрын
Unfinished!
@terivertefeuille6996 5 күн бұрын
Love the story, but feels un finished. Part 2?
@joanbrunswick813 6 күн бұрын
Wasted 25 minutes
@jimlow6824 4 күн бұрын
Watch it at 2x and you'll only waste 12.5 minutes.
@Gatekeeper-p6g 6 күн бұрын
A very good Science Fiction Story with a good experience and ending!
@rchad6064 6 күн бұрын
There was only part of a stoty. B.S.
@Madjuls 6 күн бұрын
Story needs part 2.
@RitaSchmidt-e6l 6 күн бұрын
Wish they were longer love the stories
@rhondatrout1360 6 күн бұрын
This story was long winded and ended disappointling.
@adiamondforever7890 6 күн бұрын
yes, Incomplete. Have fun
@Gatekeeper-p6g 6 күн бұрын
A very strange science fiction story in a way because it didn't make sense to me at all
@cj6617 7 күн бұрын
So odd.
@GeorgeBroad 7 күн бұрын
Sigh. Another non-ending half-story.🤢
@jamesogden7756 5 күн бұрын
Thanks for the warning.
@DavidClark-es1ww 7 күн бұрын
Where's the inevitable character named Chen,...the usual twin moons are present. The only problem that's present is the usual Chinese commie AI story line!🥶😕😮
@wolfguard1180 7 күн бұрын
It's one of those Shakespeare like endings.
@I.C.U-c7l 7 күн бұрын
OMG...... 22 min's of GARBAGE...... Like the other post say the picture it the best thing about this GARBAGE STORY..... Oh and the A.I was good...... THAT WAS IT......... GOT TO LOVE CHAT GTP STORIES THAT JUST ADD THIS AND THAT FROM OTHER STORIES TO MAKE NEW GARBAGE
@ronwilliams4184 7 күн бұрын
Yeah, needs more. Like a backstory that explains why she captured him. Why the 'custodians' knew she had him. What they did afterwards. And more.
@neiloconnor9349 7 күн бұрын
Vampire Alien Woman? Transgender tax auditor is way scarier.