Turn up the music I could almost make out what you said.

Information in the video is great 👍but this annoying music it overshadows your voice

you have great content. thank you. hope you're still here.

Excellent chart! Thanks for such a useful guide!

This video was very helpful, but the music was too loud.

God bless Nathaniel

There is a severe lack of chase scene advice from authors on KZbin, so this was very helpful, and the graph too. Thankyou. Would you consider doing as more in-depth video? How do we write briefly, keeping our descriptions snappy, purveying the speed of the chase, whilst still being as descriptive as possible?

Omg it is going to be so useful for me! Thank you so much! ❤💪

Awesome review, thank you! Will order a couple of journals for myself. 😊

I need to know what happens during the chase. This sounds like what happens after the chase is over.

hey. this helps but im still kinda lost. i want to write it as descriptive as possible.

Very useful man! Thank you very much!

At 12:51 I was crying- touched Thank you for your video Great review for me:)

No music

This was a really cool idea - I never thought of using a journal as an outlining technique. I think it might be especially fun and helpful for young writers who don't have a lot of life experience to put into their characterizations and need prompting to think more deeply about how their character (not just themselves) would react to situations. A great contribution to the reviews of this journal. I found this while considering buying the journal and I really enjoyed your review.

Appreciate the work you’re doing mate!

One technique I find interesting is the idea of having characters switch between playing static and dynamic roles (for example, in a long fantasy series in which every book focuses on a different character, some characters may remain static for a while, then turn wildly dynamic once they've become a central protagonist!)

What if I am a cat watching this?

Cool intro!!!!

The music made this hard to understand.

Interesting diagram! Seems like you did a lot of research into this! I am currently writing a book as well and trying to teach writing tips like you :) This is useful to use in my teaching, keep posting!😁😁

Very excited about working through this video for insights on chase scenes. Please consider removing or at least drastically lowering the music volume in your future videos. I will definitely try to power through this one , but I wanted to let you know that the music situation is harming my ability to process what you're saying more efficiently.

Omg what a nightmare! Happy you were able to fix it :)

Hi Nathaniel, I'm Andrew's cousin. Great video!

Congratulations on your release Nathanial.

Cool! Nice cover! The release is the day after my birthday 🤣

I already posted the first part of mine 😊

Wow, I keep marveling at how different my approach is from yours. “Go to an actual cloud” lol 😂

I like the idea of the world building chart for basics. I would put more importance on other elements than you do. I agree that the name is important, but mostly when you're ready to publish. You don't have to start at the top and work your way down. World building is an iteration to me, not a linear process. I would also like to point out that those boxes are too small to fit the world I already build. As a matter of fact, I think that if the elements do fit, that the world isn't nuanced enough. This is a great starting point though. :)

I like how you split opening lines into different categories 👍

Love the channel, keep up the great work.

What's your favorite opening line ever? 😀

What a cool tag! It was fun hearing your answers. :) Merry Christmas!

Nice one :)

Hope the channel blows up

I am Groot

Thanks so much. This helps me a lot

Impressive work.

Yess!!

Yay! Great video! And congrats on the launch of your channel! ☺️ Wishing you the very best of luck! 💜

Big things !!!

Hey, I hope this channel blows up. Btw this is Anthony