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@emusic4269 4 күн бұрын
Wonderfully exciting and "straight to the point" music. My only comment, which is a minor (hah) thing overall, is maybe consider writing in it Eb minor instead of D#? Just slightly easier to read - no double accidentals.
@karlolewandowski 3 күн бұрын
Thank you for watching! The reason is that I want the performer to play with a sharp musical motif. Indeed, the two tonalities may be mathematically or scientifically identical. However, psychologically or sensuously they are different. Taking this difference into account, I use Eb minor when I want the piece to be more mysterious and elusive, and D# minor when I want the tune to be cool, although this is my feeling. In this case, I decided to use D# minor because of the latter image. This is how I ended up harassing the score-readers a bit lol.
@emusic4269 3 күн бұрын
@@karlolewandowski I actually totally agree and I would be a hypocrite if I said that Eb/D# are exactly the same, because I also don't perceive them that way. Fair point honestly.
@karlolewandowski 4 күн бұрын
Which version do you prefer?
@liszt132 4 күн бұрын
2nd
@emusic4269 5 күн бұрын
You have a great ear for melody! I would perhaps suggest doing more to vary the melody the second time around though - I like the addition of the inner voice, but it seems a bit cluttered, so perhaps you could take the melody up an octave to alleviate that? That's just one idea. I really like the piece though!
@karlolewandowski 5 күн бұрын
Thank you for watching! I find your opinion very fascinating. In my opinion, I feel simply raising the melody an octave would create another acoustic problem. Therefore, I want to consider and brush up on other ways besides your idea!
@emusic4269 5 күн бұрын
@@karlolewandowski That's fair. What issue do you foresee? Perhaps, if you think the left and right hands would be too distant, consider fleshing out the inner voice harmonies even more.
@karlolewandowski 5 күн бұрын
@@emusic4269 Thank you for reply! What you point out in this reply was one of the major problems, and after reviewing and correcting it, I have just converged on exactly the solution you indicate. I expect to upload it in the form of a 2nd version in the near future. If you would like, I would be happy to receive your comments there again!
@emusic4269 5 күн бұрын
@@karlolewandowski Awesome and you're welcome!
@Paeioh 8 күн бұрын
those triplets and nonuplets are lovely...
@nodoubts5922 8 күн бұрын
i dont usually comment on vids but honestyl this was AMAZING! good luck with ur musical journey <3
@karlolewandowski 8 күн бұрын
Thank you for watching and comments!
@adrianstasiakbbe 9 күн бұрын
The main theme is actually pretty damn good ... really good... thanks for sharing
@classictastic 9 күн бұрын
This is genius work brother
@karlolewandowski 9 күн бұрын
Thanks!
@classictastic 9 күн бұрын
Great!
@karlolewandowski 9 күн бұрын
Thank you for watching! I appreciate your advice.
@Scottparkmusic 12 күн бұрын
Beautiful! I love the chord progression of the theme
@LucidityRemains 13 күн бұрын
where's the sheet music for this?
@karlolewandowski 13 күн бұрын
Thank you for watching! I post the URL here. URL(PDF) drive.google.com/file/d/1oX2aBdBE_suXr4NbGjl_Vq5GStlSkufp/view?usp=sharing
@Hello_507 13 күн бұрын
Love that inner line
@Scottparkmusic 13 күн бұрын
I like Var II and Finale! They have some Bach vibes.
@Project_Shine 17 күн бұрын
Simplesmente apaixonante ❤
@kinkipup 18 күн бұрын
Very nice! you have used one of my favourite Grieg pieces to compose this :)
@mico_nos 21 күн бұрын
I didn't now Toscanini was also a capable composer! this scherzo is very well written and, it seems, also well orchestrated. I'm gonna look for more oh this!
@karlolewandowski 20 күн бұрын
Thank you for watching! Toscanini's compositions are very few and not often performed. However, in my opinion, each piece has unique harmonic sound and is very interesting. Please try to find something you like!
@Project_Shine 21 күн бұрын
Beautiful ❤
@skorza1148 22 күн бұрын
Great work Lewa ‼️‼️
@karlolewandowski 21 күн бұрын
Thanks ‼‼
@classictastic 22 күн бұрын
Genius work man! I would turn the tempo down a notch tho. Although you might be going for a faster approach
@karlolewandowski 22 күн бұрын
Thank you for watching! To be honest, I'm confused about the tempo. If it were you, what would your specific tempo be?
@Sharkiiieee 22 күн бұрын
It's too fast...
@karlolewandowski 22 күн бұрын
Thank you for watching! To be honest, I'm confused about the tempo, so your opinion is valuable to me.
@uffdude2936 24 күн бұрын
Murder, She Wrote
@liszt132 25 күн бұрын
By far, one of your best compositions
@classictastic 27 күн бұрын
You could call these Little Inventions and make an “album” named 5 Little Inventions for the Piano. Just an idea… great piece btw!
@karlolewandowski 26 күн бұрын
Thank you for watching! It sounds good. I see what I can think positively.
@classictastic 28 күн бұрын
It’s like an invention
@karlolewandowski 27 күн бұрын
Thank you for watching! Indeed, it would be interesting to create "15 Inventions of 8 bars for busy people"
@classictastic 29 күн бұрын
Very nice modulations
@st4rmeye Ай бұрын
this is SO COOL!! i cant imagine how long it would take to compose a whole piece by yourself!!
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
Thank you for watching! Glad to hear it. But...the time directly spent composing may be less than you think...
@Project_Shine Ай бұрын
Beautiful, as always! 🎼
@carlosantonioguevaraalcana715 Ай бұрын
An advice for the Pre-Final bar: The B natural note will be a B-sharp, because is the major 7th grade of the Harmonic C-sharp minor scale (the sensitive note). 🎼🎵🎶
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
Thank you for watching! I understand your opinion. However, I have intentionally avoided the use of leading-tone in this piece. By doing so, I intended to create a slightly old-fashioned feel.
@liszt132 Ай бұрын
That reverb effect is excessive, doesn't fit well to the composition. Instead of using that reverb effect, try to download a better piano sound, like musesounds or pianoteq.
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
Thank you for watching and for your advice! Actually, I agree and we can see this problem in other of my compositions as well. I will try your suggestions!
@liszt132 Ай бұрын
@@karlolewandowski By the way, the composition is fine, I can see you've been improving your skills. Maybe my first comment seemed too rude.
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
Thank you for reply! Don't worry about it. These comments help me grow.
@Benjamin-eu6zj Ай бұрын
Muy bella.
@T4TheTidePod Ай бұрын
Very nice, kind of reminds me of Handel
@perritomusic10 Ай бұрын
just created a canon
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
Thank you for watching! And, I look forward to listening to it.
@Hello_507 Ай бұрын
Are you related to him???
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
Thank you for watching! Unfortunately, I'm not related to him...
@classictastic Ай бұрын
This is excellent
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@classictastic Thank you for watching!! Thanks to your great theme. Congrats on the 1000's of subs! (Sorry for the delay)
@classictastic Ай бұрын
@@karlolewandowski Ah thank you! No problem man
@Musicforever743 Ай бұрын
Super cool!!!
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@Musicforever743 Thanks!!!
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
I composed this piece when I was 13 years old. I don't think I had any talent in this area, even taking into account that my musical life began at the age of 11. This view has not changed to this day. That is why I believe that I need to continue my studies in composition. I am still a novice, but I look forward to your continued support.
@RealRaizo Ай бұрын
2 years of experience for this is crazy, keep it up
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@RealRaizo Thanks!!
@JW-Composer Ай бұрын
Good Mozart-like sonata/sonatina composition. I especially like the change to minor in the recapitulation :) I also upload my own compositions, which are mostly orientated towards the style of Mozart. For example, I also wrote a sonatina in D major. Maybe you would like to drop by sometime - I would be very happy!
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
Thank you for watching!! I'm going to go listen it now!
@VeronikaPianist Ай бұрын
Wonderful❤
@classictastic Ай бұрын
Amazing. Genius
@liszt132 Ай бұрын
What's the difference between this one and the original by bach?
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@liszt132 Thank you for watching!! Ch. F. G. Schwencke added one measure to Bach's original(added measure: 1:24-1:27). The added measures are written in such a way that the bass progresses chromatically while maintaining the original figure. This is the difference between Schwencke's version and original. As an aside, Ch. Gounod's Ave Maria was composed based on this version.
@liszt132 Ай бұрын
Nice performance
@perritomusic10 Ай бұрын
thank you really much😁
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@perritomusic10 Thank you for reply!! My performance may not be enough, but I would be happy if you are pleased.
@perritomusic10 Ай бұрын
@@karlolewandowski im so pleased about this😁😁😁
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@perritomusic10 I'm glad to hear such comments
@RetroRonin-nf1qg Ай бұрын
Sounds a bit like "the people united will never be defeated" by Frederic Rzewski at the start! Pretty cool sonata man :)
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@RetroRonin-nf1qg Thank you for watching!! Not that I was aware of it, but it may indeed be reminiscent of it.
@RetroRonin-nf1qg Ай бұрын
Nice piece, but if I'm not mistaken, a romance is written in 3/4 not 4/4- nice piece though. I'd change up the harmonies in some parts, specifically around the beginning, but it's a nice simple piece.
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@RetroRonin-nf1qg Thank you for watching! The knowledge that "romance is usually composed in 3/4" was lacking for me, so I will check and apply it in the future!
@jakrol Ай бұрын
@@karlolewandowski That's because it's not really that true. Plenty of romances in duple meter. Both of Beethoven's violin romances are in duple meter. Amy Beach's violin romance is in duple meter. Max Bruch's viola and orchestra romance is in duple meter. Eine Kleine Nachtmusik's romance is in duple meter. The romance from Rosetti's C Major Oboe Concerto is in duple meter. The romance from Brahms' Op. 118 may start in 6/4, but its midsection is in duple meter. Another romance that starts in three but has a duple midsection is the Romance from Mozart's gran partita. So I really do not see where this 'romance is typically in 3/4' comes from.
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@jakrol Thank you for watching and comments! Actually, I agree with you. My perception is that a piece entitled Romance is not defined by its time signature, but by the content of the piece. So, to be honest, I still don't understand what is the basis for the "romance is typically in 3/4" thing...
@perritomusic10 Ай бұрын
thank you man i really appreciate it😀😀😀
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@perritomusic10 Thank you for watching!! I wholeheartedly support your challenge!
@classictastic Ай бұрын
This is so good man!! I love the minor section
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@classictastic Thank you for watching!! Glad you like it!
@perritomusic10 Ай бұрын
can you perform my piece pls?
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@perritomusic10 Thank you for watching and leaving a comment!! By your "piece" do you mean a movement of a sonatina or another future work?
@perritomusic10 Ай бұрын
@@karlolewandowski yes my first movement to my sonatina
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@perritomusic10 Thank you for reply! When you have all the movements in shape, I will perform them if you don't mind! When I play symphonies, sonatas, and sonatinas on the piano, I like to work on all the movements. This is because there is often a hidden story that can only be told through all the movements.
@perritomusic10 Ай бұрын
@@karlolewandowski im gonna upload the second one today and im working on the 3rd one. And yes can you perform my sonatina when its finished?
@karlolewandowski Ай бұрын
@@perritomusic10 Thank you for reply! Sure, I will!!