I really loved this poem - i feel it really underscores the human experience and resisting the indoctriniation of a broken system

A delicate daisy dancing

interesting

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shocking poems, legit dont make sense, give a bit more detail not just say "when youre given leaves, you gotta be happy with the leaves" how about give me some legit info so i dont get f u cked in hsc

This was great! Can't wait to see what else they do! ✊♥

The people in my school are going to see me comment this lol

I like this, intriguing, and the sense of layers. Hasib reads well too, nicely understated. Now I'll have to check out Rock Flight. Big thanks.

Big fan of Mr. Edgar’s work from the United States. I learned of him through Clive James.

Thank you

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love this!

Been there! Thanks, Rob.

Poems are rapping for lesbians? Fing clown. Why would anyone post this as if it's a positive? These people who believe that their sexuality overrides everything else. What an ignorant fool.

I love you and your poems Solli. Your my inspiration 😊

i feel bad for eckermann, you can tell she cares about her work but people clown on it because no one wants to study this for hsc

This was a profound poem that equiped me with the mind set to right more emotional provoking poetry. Thank you

This is pure garbage

Rest in Pease Cath Walker Oodgeroo Noonuccal MBE. I first met her at a friends place on Zig Zag St and then in Why Not St in West End. She told me one of her poems, and I told her one of mine. She instantly like me, and I will never forget her. I am a white man. She was part of my life as a boy.

this was really beautiful, thank you for sharing.

Love - the trees remember because they do.❤

Haiku garden is GREAT.

Great to see John Tranter talk.

Hello Warren, I would like to ask you what does Babarrabin mean in your poetry?

Needed this

Such an amazing woman,only just discovered your book today. Was deeply inspiring and eye opening. God bless u and your family Sarah from Sydney, Australia ❤❤🙏🙏

How about a poem about all money she was given by the Australian taxpayers?

Great job Beesley

"Oombulgarri" This is the title, referencing a specific place, likely with historical or personal significance. "Tumbleweeds of blue patterned dresses" Imagery that conveys memories or remnants of the town's inhabitants. Blue patterned dresses could represent the typical attire of Aboriginal women or a specific memory. "Drift down empty streets" This indicates abandonment or a lack of life and activity. "Where paddy wagons once patrolled" Paddy wagons (police vehicles for transporting prisoners) symbolize law enforcement or oppression that once was a regular occurrence in this place. "The town is empty now" Direct emphasis on abandonment and desolation. "As empty as the promises that once held it together" The abandonment is compared to broken promises, suggesting betrayal or unfulfilled commitments that might have led to the town's current state. "Even the wind can no longer stir movement" A depiction of stagnation and lifelessness. "At the playground all the equipment is rusted shut" Indicating that even places meant for joy and childhood play are now dilapidated and unusable. "Echoes have laughed a roll like distant thunder, but unlike a storm cannot pass by" There are still remnants of past laughter and happiness, but these memories, unlike passing storms, linger and don't fade away. "Hysterical energy whips and wails, and wails" There's a palpable tension or unrest, an emotional energy that's very present and haunting. "Tumbleweeds form an interwoven frenzy" The tumbleweeds, often associated with desolation, here seem to represent chaos or the tangled nature of history and memories. "A fortress to guard the perimeter of this site" Despite the abandonment, there's still a sense of protection or preservation for what this place represents. "Broken" This single word emphasizes damage, despair, or a fractured history. "Even the creak of the gate is silent" A final note on the absolute silence, indicating the depth of abandonment or the weight of what's been lost.

"Trance an old woman's eyes -> An elderly woman reflects or appears distant in thought. mist over -> Her eyes become teary or clouded with emotion. ghost gums begin to dance -> Trees, specifically the ghost gums (a type of eucalyptus), seem to move, possibly due to her emotional state or the atmosphere. fire light flickers -> The light from a campfire or flame wavers. the night air prepares its exit -> Dawn is approaching as nighttime ends. Hunched in her possum skin cloak -> She's wrapped in traditional Aboriginal attire, indicating her connection to her culture. the dawn breeze chills -> The early morning air is cold. a whisper inside her trance -> She hears or feels a faint call or thought during her deep reflection. the sound of instinct -> She is in tune with her natural instincts or ancestral memories. in her mind, she observes -> In her thoughts or memories, she examines... both the hardness of the trunks -> The firm, unyielding structure of the tree trunks. and the softness of bark -> And the gentle, textured surface of tree bark. and requires neither -> She is at peace and doesn't need to choose between the two sensations. She floats in a pitchery haze -> She is lost in deep thought or memory, perhaps influenced by traditional rituals or substances. among the river of trees -> Surrounded by or moving through a forest. bleach sand burns her skin -> The intense, bright sun heats the sand, causing discomfort on her skin. She enjoys the sensation -> Despite the discomfort, she appreciates or finds meaning in the feeling. Heat is the love of the campfire -> Warmth from the fire represents the comfort and love she feels or recalls. the yellow kiss of the Sun -> The sun's rays are like affectionate kisses, warming and familiar. the passion that flows after hunting and life -> She recalls the intense emotions and vitality after hunting or significant events. before her man died -> These memories are from a time before her partner or loved one passed away. In her trance she observes the hard and the soft of trees -> During her reflective state, she once again contemplates the duality of life, represented by the trees. branches uplift his bark bound body -> The trees seem to support or lift the body or essence of her lost loved one. There is no request more sacred -> There's nothing more profound or meaningful than this memory or connection to her loved one. Heat was a grip with fingers entwined -> Their love was intense and intertwined, like holding hands tightly. the firmness of his torso -> She recalls the physical strength or presence of her loved one. the instrument of his voice -> She remembers the sound or tone of his voice, which affected her deeply. His smile missing -> His comforting smile is absent now. in her empty hand" -> She feels the void of his absence, as if something she used to hold is now gone.

Trance "Trance" by Ali Cobby Eckermann delves into the profound connection of the Aboriginal people with nature and memory, emphasizing the restorative power of the natural world amidst personal loss. The poem starts with the image of an old woman, with her "eyes [that] mist over," which evokes a sense of nostalgia and reminiscence. The dancing "ghost gums" and flickering firelight immerse the reader into the spiritual realm of her memories, indicating her deep connection to the land. This relationship is further emphasized with the line "She floats in a pitchery haze among the river of trees," illustrating her spiritual journey. The contrast between "both the hardness of the trunks and the softness of bark" captures the duality of life - the challenges and the comforts, both of which she accepts without bias. The line "Heat is the love of the campfire, the yellow kiss of the Sun" suggests the warmth of past memories, of love experienced and perhaps lost. This notion of loss becomes evident when she reflects on a man, perhaps a loved one or a partner, emphasizing the absence with the words "His smile missing in her empty hand." This profound sense of longing is palpable, as she reminisces about their intimacy and the void his absence has left. In essence, "Trance" beautifully captures the journey of memory, grief, and the timeless bond the Aboriginal people share with nature. The poem showcases the therapeutic power of nature and memory in healing personal trauma, emphasizing the indivisible connection between an individual's history, the natural world, and the broader Aboriginal heritage. The poem also subtly underscores the significant themes of intergenerational relationships, connection to the country, and the role of memory as a source of solace.

i still dont understand anything

That's lovely :)

My favorite teacher and poet💐

Beautiful Alice, nga mihi nui

RRed, omg~ how fantastic video,see you later, ))

Beautiful poem. Beautiful ❤️🐋🙏🏾

Great performance

Thank you for sharing your feelings here Laid open and bare For all to listen & perhaps share. I see sadness in your eyes Emotions on the rise Although I cannot say I'm a Fan of bad taste, Hey. I greeted my brother today He made it around the Sun yesterday We had brekky together As he was leaving we noticed a bird with feathers. A Top Knot pigeon was provided by the Cosmos I was delighted. & now I sit replying to your prose With feelings both high & Low. Thanks to you & The Red Room Just as my mind goes Booom. GJB Instant Poetry 22nd Of August 2023...

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An evocative and intimate reading.

What beautiful videos - I can't wait to use them with my class. Thank you! :)

That was beautiful! 🥹

Mohammed, this is such a brave piece and courageously performed. It’s clear you enjoy both the intensity of the content as well as the performance itself and that’s very engaging. On top of the potency of your poem, you’ve also written it with an honest eloquence. Thank you for sharing and mustering the strength to attempt to move a stranger. 😊

can she get to the point please

You're so wonderful Nina!

Someone please help me with this assignment

NOTHING SHE SAYS IS MAKING SENSE.