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@archiemitchell8426 57 минут бұрын
How can the squad take heavy casualties but still survive??? A squad isn't very large to begin with, unless a US Army squad is limitless. 😂😂😂😂😂😂🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴
@user-qd9of2sh6q 2 сағат бұрын
Great story 👍👍
@janamathis4729 2 сағат бұрын
Definitely different thinking here.
@murphymmc 2 сағат бұрын
The author assumes all high IQ creatures are filled with a hubris unparalleled. All that reveals is intellect without wisdom, ICYMI, wisdom is key to utilizing knowledge, without wisdom, all you have is a college professor who is educated, not necessarily wise enough to use his knowledge, so just educated.
@bigstevie1690 2 сағат бұрын
I don't think he Would Have It Any Other Way 😂
@randomstranger9674 4 сағат бұрын
Please add 'bioluminescence' to the list of words your bot is not allowed to use. And you might as well not bother with the subtitles if you can't put in the minimal effort needed to get them right.
@luangu 5 сағат бұрын
"Yes, good idea sir. Let's not startle the 'ancient weapon of doom'."
@eblkii6314 6 сағат бұрын
Why does everyone fire at Will, what did he do to so many people to be so angry at him?
@AlexandreMS71 7 сағат бұрын
You could, at least, proof read the text after the AI generated it.
@cab8866 7 сағат бұрын
Need a better editor. For one, it's comms not calms. You know, communication...
@andrewkyes2428 8 сағат бұрын
Imagine if they also tried someone like smoked brisket
@hypnotoad5861 8 сағат бұрын
Aliens: “It’s one of the deadliest beasts in existence!” Human: “Then why friend shaped?”
@mikes8510 13 сағат бұрын
story repeats towards in end... some problem on one of your other recent videos that I watched.
@Reh8111 13 сағат бұрын
A so so story not a very realistic time line. Really needs to be rewritten.
@AlexandreMS71 7 сағат бұрын
You are very generous with a so polite comment.
@Reh8111 6 сағат бұрын
@@AlexandreMS71 Sorry if I offended you, but the story does have merit and it could with a bit of work linking the various chapters to flow to make an enjoyable read. It is easy for people to trash story’s without giving a reason as to why, that’s the easy and crass way out. I have subscribed as this story has potential.
@AlexandreMS71 6 сағат бұрын
@@Reh8111 on the contrary, I was agreeing with you. I just said you were quite polite, no sarcasm in it.
@Reh8111 6 сағат бұрын
@@AlexandreMS71 I appreciate your comments and thank you.
@MarkSmith-zg5hq 16 сағат бұрын
@18: no you did not make an enemy today, you were fighting an existing enemy!
@djdark1 16 сағат бұрын
My concern with cross species cuisine is the awkwardness of finding someone you knew on your plate.
@SlicerJen 17 сағат бұрын
This story was painfully simplistic.
@seneca1932 17 сағат бұрын
With all this “constructive” criticism, I’m excited to listen to everybody’s stories so they can demonstrate how it’s done and I can offer my own critiques. Constructively, of course.
@MitchellEdwards-ql7ji 18 сағат бұрын
By the way the first part of the battle was set out I taught they had much more than one ship on the ready
@murphymmc 20 сағат бұрын
Why does every alien foe surrender when the commander is taken, shouldn't there be a second in command to take over? When the obligatory , "The battle was won but the war was far from over" was stated, it was time to go. I'm not hanging around for "the tension was palpable" and the stupidest phrase ever when landing on another planet, "the view, glow, light, sky (pick one) was otherworldly".....well duh.
@davidgiles4681 20 сағат бұрын
humans do not like to fight because humans fight dirty, nasty, and with the will to take the heel of thier boots and grind it in the point between your head and shoulders. Humans will fight until you are completely destroyed - then completely rebuild your entire infrastructure (if they so desire).
@veramae4098 21 сағат бұрын
Experience from WW I and 2, Korea, other wars have shown a pattern. Most forces, when their officers are killed, retreat or just hold ground. Americans get creative, fast, and very aggressive.
@UnyieldingSpiritHFY 14 сағат бұрын
hi
@leerussell8499 21 сағат бұрын
Looks like you worked out a lot of the hitches from the word spacings for the AI reader Bravo
@darthnihilus9502 21 сағат бұрын
Here ...Have a mosquito 😂
@cptmalcolmreynolds3623 21 сағат бұрын
Only democrats
@murphymmc 22 сағат бұрын
How were the tungsten rods installed on the comm satellites? Did this take place after the attack, or was that little detail a "rabbit out of your hat" thing the author needed to continue the story. Making up crap as you go does not work well in sci-fi.
@Gr3nadgr3gory 9 сағат бұрын
What the fuck are you talking about? 90 % of Sci-Fi is making shit up as you go. Just ask George Lucas or Gene Roddenberry.
@jasonbull6560 22 сағат бұрын
Slurm,brilliant!
@hunter5425 22 сағат бұрын
Try to get military rank hierarchy right or get a new AI
@gregmcmahon8284 23 сағат бұрын
Why does a sergeant order a lieutenant?
@garysakamoto4007 20 сағат бұрын
I guess in this universe generals are privates and noncoms are the officers? Or maybe the Lt. is a butterbar that actually listens to the veteran Sgt.? Although I don’t know of any Sgt. that would put up with being called, “sir”.
@bunnyadams353 12 сағат бұрын
Maybe the Lt just got out if school si the sgt took control?
@gregmcmahon8284 23 сағат бұрын
Story repeats instead of continuing to an ending.
@noahkleugh9323 23 сағат бұрын
repetitive story line
@gregmcmahon8284 23 сағат бұрын
Japan, Germany. Why do all 5he team leaders have Anglo names.?
@diarradunlap9337 20 сағат бұрын
NATO personnel. Also, this story is likely written entirely by AI.
@nathanvega6281 19 сағат бұрын
They needed diversity and inclusion
@UnyieldingSpiritHFY 14 сағат бұрын
hello
@archiemitchell8426 9 сағат бұрын
In the same way Big John Wayne won WW2 on his own 😂😂😂😂🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴
@privateperson5054 Күн бұрын
Why would experienced soldiers need to be told to wait until the enemy is in range ? Many other issues.
@PartytimeYOLO Күн бұрын
verry start of the story: Humanity, proud of its galactic diplomacy every sentence after that: Humans haven't stepped off our own planet since our last visit to the moon written by someone without object permanence, quite possibly not human...
@MrBongsky Күн бұрын
McDonalds would be proud! Terminator cows....
@roberthodge2771 Күн бұрын
WHY indeed do the consoles always break out in sparks and failures? Gad, what a balls up way of telling that he dang ship had troubles?
@nfldend501 14 сағат бұрын
I'll continue with this. Why IA every strong leader President/ deadliest diplomat commander always a woman, and why does every weapon cut threw the ship like a knife threw butter or scissors threw paper lmfao. as soon as I hear one of these it's automatic skip. Terran Contact just came out with an offshoot of part 1. It's written amazingly I can only tell by subtle clues probably military current or ex either security or logistics. It has Army Navy ODSTs two similar armies smart AI Athena that I'd pretty much like cortana on steroids. The Aliens sellians are at a constant hot then cold war with it's neighbor the confederation. They find two new Terran/Earth colonies think we are weak and kill and enslave the people until a ship finally makes it to fleet comm where Terran Command finds out why the colonies went dark and Navy vs Navy. It also switches from Terran POV to Sellian Pov in some chapters
@vickymolinar4248 Күн бұрын
This is so fantasticly funny.
@roberthodge2771 Күн бұрын
Cow farts with Real Impact; UN take note of the power of cow farts ! lmao
@christenascott5280 23 сағат бұрын
Just as bad are fish farts. Fish farts come from cats diet of wet fish food! For such small cats. Come the biggest smellish stinky toxic fish farts! If you have a cat who eats wet cat fish, food made out of fishes, you’ll understand!😂 😅
@johnwyden3021 16 сағат бұрын
They are so potent 😂
@retrozmachine1189 Күн бұрын
It was a high risk mooooooooove. They really should have released chickens in choppers to deal with the alien fleet.
@mikeburkholder7458 Күн бұрын
Frozen turkeys.
@solomonkane6442 23 сағат бұрын
How about honey badgers and wolverines as berserker infantry
@locke11216 Күн бұрын
Rods from god 😂
@sarahhardy8649 Күн бұрын
Check the editing please 6 mins and 15 mins ish. Story repeats itself.
@semmel_PB Күн бұрын
Is it just me? I find this really tiring...allways the same phrases.. "the battle was far from over" "exchange glances" hands flying over consols. Please come up with some new formulations.
@patrickdurham8393 Күн бұрын
Sure is lot of mandible clicking and clacking going on in these stories.
@tomray8765 Күн бұрын
Pretty good story, but, both between the battles and after the last fight we should have revisited the Krulax side. After the first battle they should have expressed surprise, but resolved to come back with a bigger fleet. At the end of the last battle they express surprise at the humans innovations and the horror of being chased by the humans as they retreated, thanking the gods that some of them got away--- and then admitting Zorax was right.
@beccabbea2511 Күн бұрын
Shades of Star Trek, the console erupted into sparks! Sigh, one hit and sparks from the console. If the ships have shields and the shields are operating then why are the consoles sparking? Please no more console sparks, well, unless the ship is about to explode 😢 If they fired EMP bursts why didn’t they immediately take out the enemy flag ship instead of letting it start to come back on line. Why didn’t they fire an EMP burst towards the space station? Apart from all that I did enjoy the story. We are an ornery bunch aren’t we? Thanks.
@stephenpublicover8818 Күн бұрын
Great SciFi story!!
@debradollisson9551 Күн бұрын
Too far fetched and repetitive.
@mattyallen3396 Күн бұрын
Stop repeating yourself
@l.yvonnemurray6521 Күн бұрын
Victory through boarding? I thought that went out after Lepanto.
@christenascott5280 Күн бұрын
Okay but not one of your better ones!