Fourth Wing -Xaden's POV | Chapter 19
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Fourth Wing -Xaden's POV | Chapter 18
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@OhSo_GoneXO
@OhSo_GoneXO Сағат бұрын
Wait a min .... YOU wrote Xaden's POV?!?!?! Holy crap!!!! The questions I've had still after Iron Flame ..that's been answered!!! so well written !! it's a beautiful tapestry that perfectly fits (in Zaden's words) How Fascinating!!!!! ❤❤❤
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 54 минут бұрын
Yep 😊 I hope most everything is relevant and answers a lot of those questions legitimately, but this is just a fanfic, the only canon Xaden POV we have are two chapters from the special edition of FW
@Superboredatschool
@Superboredatschool Күн бұрын
Going with your theory I also have a feeling that it has something to do with Vennin like maybe she could turn Venin back into humans going with the ending where Xaden talks to Jack and Jack says that there is no way to go back to human form. So like maybe that’s a part of her signet. Like balance turning good to evil and healing that kind of like if you turn venin back you take away some destruction.
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan Күн бұрын
Totally, I get into that kind of thing more in the full length video, just had to cut it down to <1 min for the short. If you're interested in watching the whole thing, here it is kzbin.info/www/bejne/oXO1g3x-gM90rac
@christinelegrange
@christinelegrange Күн бұрын
And I thought her second signet would be to see the future. As she saw in her dream what would happen to her but it was actually what happened to Xaden at the end of Iron Flame.
@HorseandRodeoLover
@HorseandRodeoLover 2 күн бұрын
Wheres chapter 21?
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 2 күн бұрын
The audio version will be up next week at the latest, there's also the text version which you can read here if you don't want to wait archiveofourown.org/works/51670834/chapters/138667009
@HorseandRodeoLover
@HorseandRodeoLover 2 күн бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan thank you!!!❤️❤️
@wolfcraft1293
@wolfcraft1293 2 күн бұрын
@That_somebody
@That_somebody 2 күн бұрын
I’m a bit confused about the point made about violets eyes… I’ve read both books but neither mentioned them as having any meaning?
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 2 күн бұрын
Yeah, there's nothing in the books (at least yet 😉) but I have a whole theory about what Violet's second signet is and how it'll affect the arc of the series kzbin.info/www/bejne/oXO1g3x-gM90rac . It has a lot to do with colors and light vs dark, so that line was meant to foreshadow that kind of thing (assuming it comes to pass, if my theory is wrong then, oops 😅)
@That_somebody
@That_somebody 2 күн бұрын
YES, we finally get to see more of Sgaeyl! Great job with these
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 2 күн бұрын
@@That_somebody oh there's plenty more of her in subsequent chapters, hope the way I write her continues to be to your liking 🙂
@matthewwhite9390
@matthewwhite9390 3 күн бұрын
Okay! Relistening to this! Did you know the third book was going to be called Onyx Storm before describing tairn’s power as an onyx storm?!?!
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 3 күн бұрын
@@matthewwhite9390 haha, yeah that announcement came out just a day or two before I first posted this chapter on Archive of Our Own, so I stuck that in as a little easter egg. I know one other person mentioned it on Discord, but I'm pretty sure you're the first person to point it out in the audio version at least. Kudos 👏
@HorseandRodeoLover
@HorseandRodeoLover 3 күн бұрын
Are you planning on doing the second book aswell?? Also i love the dedication that you put into this❤❤❤
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 3 күн бұрын
😁Thanks! At this point I'm hoping to focus on writing something of my own in hopes of getting it published once I'm done with this fanfic
@noemicp
@noemicp 4 күн бұрын
Andarna being a menace 😅😅😅
@noemicp
@noemicp 4 күн бұрын
Every time they talked about Liam's future next year, it hurts my heart 😢💔 Also, they keep mentioning electricity ⚡ we all know who would be able to use electricity 😏
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 4 күн бұрын
@@noemicp Yep, in my version of the story Masen turns out to be the inventor of something that that we don't see in canon until Iron Flame 😉
@OkekeJenifer
@OkekeJenifer 5 күн бұрын
OMG! Totally loving the Panchexk voice. It's exactly how I imagined he'd sound 😂
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 4 күн бұрын
@@OkekeJenifer really?! Haha, for most of the other characters I spent a long time thinking about and practicing different voices, but since this one of the only time he speaks in FW I just kinda went with the first thing I tried, but I'm glad it worked for you at least 🙂
@OkekeJenifer
@OkekeJenifer 5 сағат бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan oh, alright. Then I guess it's all just you. It was perfect for a first try
@cathiescathie3306
@cathiescathie3306 5 күн бұрын
Yes, i agree with Seawolf. And you put so much emotion in your storytelling. Xaden is so commandinf and doesn't mind pushing to get his point across. ❤😊
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 5 күн бұрын
That's definitely true, but it's also interesting to explore how much comes naturally to him vs how much is the mask. Obviously I can't know what RY envisions when writing him, but it's it was fascinating to read this comment right after recording the audio for Ch 21 which is when my version of him let's his guard down most and you see a lot more of his insecurity...
@cathiescathie3306
@cathiescathie3306 5 күн бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan Can't wait.
@cathiescathie3306
@cathiescathie3306 5 күн бұрын
When your book is published, let me know, i would so want to read It.
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 5 күн бұрын
@@cathiescathie3306 haha, have to imagine it would be at least a couple of years. Planning to finish the fanfic first and then suggest that people who read the whole thing might be interested in more of my writing and link to a sample of it. Hopefully if a decent number of people check it out and say they like it I'd stand a better chance of making a case to a publisher to take a chance on it...
@seawolf365
@seawolf365 6 күн бұрын
Excellent! I would also encourage you to keep writing. You clearly have talent and a good work ethic. I think people don't realize that writing is actually work- even though it's fun. You also have voice talent. That might be something to look into. All the best!
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 5 күн бұрын
Thanks! I'm definitely going to continue writing, both to finish this story as well as work on a couple concepts of my own. I do really like the voice work too (though not so much the editing 😐) not sure if I can just send a sample of my work in somewhere, but maybe I'll have to look into it...
@seawolf365
@seawolf365 5 күн бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan It's something I have thought of too. I saw a class was being given on-,line but that was awhile back and I don't know how credible it was.
@mohikasethi1676
@mohikasethi1676 6 күн бұрын
This is pne of my favorite chapter till now. I think your onyx storm thoery will actually be true after the cover is reveled. But in all i love this journey. I really hope you follow your dreams and publish a book.
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 6 күн бұрын
Thank you so much! I've actually started on something original and I'm beyond excited about it. I'll definitely make sure to post a sample of it here after I finish this fanfic in case anyone happens to be interested in checking it out 😅
@seawolf365
@seawolf365 13 күн бұрын
Hello. Hope you had a great vacation. I enjoyed this very much. I can not wait to get to #23 because I've read through 22. But I love all of the episodes.
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 13 күн бұрын
@@seawolf365 Edited: it might actually take at least a few weeks to put out chapters 20 and 21, and I think I'll also be posting a vlog style video with the last one explaining how things are going to work/change starting with 23 and onward, so stay tuned for that...
@seawolf365
@seawolf365 13 күн бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan I understand. I just wanted you to know I was excited to read it. Normally I don't even read this genre- I read his/ fic, literary fiction and history- but every once I awhile I get stuck in a world. And that happened with 4th Wing. I keep reading the books. I would actually love a recommendation in fantasy, if you have one. And thank you for your writing. I know it takes an enormous amount of time. I appreciate it.
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 13 күн бұрын
@@seawolf365 Actually, probably scratch what I said in my last comment (I just edited it, so see the updated version...) As for book recommendations, you may already know this but it seems like almost everyone is in agreement that if you love FW/IF the next book to read that's very similar in a lot of ways is A Court of Thorns and Roses or ACOTAR. It's the first in a series of 5 books so far. The first was great and I just started the 2nd, but I'm also relatively new to the genre so I don't really have any other Fantasy/Romantasy recommendations. I'm usually more into sci-fi and Andy Weir's is my favorite body of work. He's the author of The Martian (who's an astronaut, not an alien) which was big something like a decade ago and got made into a movie starring Matt Damon. I do think that one's great, but my all time favorite book (with the possible exception of FW) is his most recent called Project Hail Mary.
@seawolf365
@seawolf365 12 күн бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan No, I didn't. But I'll add it to my TBR pile. I just finished The Nightingale by Kristin Hannah. It's absolutely brilliant and devastating novel about Nazi occupied France and 2 sisters who are part of the resistance. I usually read Medieval or Viking history though like The Last Kingdom or Master of War. I'm not big into Sci-fi but my partner is. He read The Martian and I saw the movie which was good. My favorite is The Matrix but I haven't read much in the genre. Something I loved and should read is What Dreams May Come - the film was deeply moving and thought provoking. Thanks for the suggestion and I'll look forward to what's next.🙂
@cathiescathie3306
@cathiescathie3306 13 күн бұрын
Another "Wow" chapter. Poor Xaden. ❤😊. He needs to be incontrol.
@cathiescathie3306
@cathiescathie3306 9 күн бұрын
Patiently waiting for chapter 20... well, almost patient.
@bookswithcrys
@bookswithcrys 13 күн бұрын
Most of your writing is well paced and creative. I am enjoying the overall story a great deal. However, this chapter doesn’t feel like it fits. It is an exercise in monologues. It slows the story down. Perhaps all this exposition would be better revealed in smaller servings interspersed throughout other chapters. I think it would really help this stall in the pacing. Just a thought.
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 13 күн бұрын
I appreciate the feedback, and I even agree with you to a certain extent. Unfortunately with this being a fanfic that's retelling an existing story from a different POV I don't really have the flexibility that would be necessary to actually execute on it. Each chapter lines up with the corresponding one in FW so when events that Xaden's involved in are happening that's where we have to be, I only get the opportunity to explore these side stories when Xaden's absent from FW which isn't very often. I know it's a lot to cram into this one chapter but in order to have the discussion and explore all these things with Brennan (not to mention arrange for the creation of the daggers and saddle) he had to be in Aretia and I can't just set a scene there whenever I want, it has to fit into canon chronologically 😕
@bookswithcrys
@bookswithcrys 13 күн бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan I understand. The last half of the chapter - anything after the Xaden/Bodie/Brennan scene was amazing. I especially liked Xaden’s rolling arrival to rescue Violet.
@nargitsingh7101
@nargitsingh7101 13 күн бұрын
Loved this
@tafuckingdarh
@tafuckingdarh 14 күн бұрын
I've been looking forward to this one😍😍
@staciefennell865
@staciefennell865 14 күн бұрын
Thank you ❤ This is actually one of my favorite chapters of many!
@tanyam8610
@tanyam8610 14 күн бұрын
I did not read the book but listened and i might be missing something but the is a prophesy where three brothers: dragon rider, griffin rider and evil one. And then there is a prophecy of one from sun to fix everything. I wish i had a hard copy of the book.
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 14 күн бұрын
@@tanyam8610 ooh, you're starting down the rabbit hole I went down that led to my endgame predictions...
@matthewwhite9390
@matthewwhite9390 17 күн бұрын
You really have all your eggs in a basket with xaden’s mom. Thoughts on the new cover reveal this morning? Going to do a video on new thoughts?
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 17 күн бұрын
@matthewwhite9390 Yeah, I'm sure that his mom will be an important part of the story at some point in the next three books, and I'd be willing to bet that she'll be generally good, though I suppose there's always a chance she'll be an antagonist. My only concrete thought on the cover is that it looks cool, I think it's notable that the dragon centered over the sun is black this time instead of gold, but I think perhaps there's just some general color inversion going on and it is still meant to represent Andarna. No plans for a video on new thoughts at this point at least but if I feel like I come up with any more revelations that aren't too endgame spoilery then I might do another eventually.
@Ashervalcrux
@Ashervalcrux 17 күн бұрын
BYEEE Xaden broke that deal all to quickly 😭 Can’t wait for the new chapter!
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 17 күн бұрын
@@Ashervalcrux haha, I know the audio versions of chapters 19-21 aren't posted yet, but there are 4 chapters and at least a month between Brennan forcing him into the deal and Xaden kissing Vi (that is, I did my best to arrange the timing such that he had at least some restraint 😅). And don't worry, there will be consequences...
@jennifervazquez8949
@jennifervazquez8949 14 күн бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan
@cathiescathie3306
@cathiescathie3306 17 күн бұрын
Wow! Just wow! ❤ I think Brennan is not going to like that Xaden breaks a promise! And poor Bodhi. I felt sorry for him. He seemed nervous. Loved the end! I knew what Xaden wanted made. Can't wait for the next chapter. ❤😊😂
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 17 күн бұрын
@@cathiescathie3306 haha, yeah Brennan is going to be pissed, got a whole plan... 😉
@elizabethwheeler4749
@elizabethwheeler4749 18 күн бұрын
Mark, you’re doing a fantastic job I can’t wait till the next chapter
@kathytejada3573
@kathytejada3573 19 күн бұрын
Where are 19 -20-21
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 19 күн бұрын
@@kathytejada3573 they'll be posted over the next few weeks
@staciefennell865
@staciefennell865 19 күн бұрын
Looking forward to the next chapter ❤
@kathytejada3573
@kathytejada3573 19 күн бұрын
So violet was right when she got jealous about emigen ( they were definitely fucking)…
@elizabethwheeler4749
@elizabethwheeler4749 19 күн бұрын
I love to see a playful side to Xaden ❤
@jacquiehuerta5429
@jacquiehuerta5429 20 күн бұрын
Muchas gracias !!! Espero con ansias cada publicación 🙌🏻
@michellemcconnell4974
@michellemcconnell4974 20 күн бұрын
I love your Version of Xadens pov, Thank you for doing these recordings I can listen to it while I’m getting other things done instead of going down the reading rabbit hole💗
@aelin1032
@aelin1032 20 күн бұрын
My day was already going good (got some new books today), but you posting just made it way better :D
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 20 күн бұрын
@@aelin1032 Nice! Any books you're particularly excited about (I'm always looking for good recommendations)?
@aelin1032
@aelin1032 13 күн бұрын
​@@George_RR_Sagan None of these are anything like Fourth Wing, I got them at a bookshop I stumbled across here in Berlin, which functions entirely on donations, so you can take a certain amount of books per day for free. One of them got me really excited, it's an astonishingly beautiful collection of German ballads from 1978. I also got a book about a woman traveling with aborigines in Australia and their culture, which is something I don't usually read, but I think it'll be pretty interesting :)
@aelin1032
@aelin1032 13 күн бұрын
​@@George_RR_SaganI also just saw that you posted a new chapter, so I'm listening to this one again and then the new one, pretty excited for that one
@seawolf365
@seawolf365 21 күн бұрын
Thanks for posting. It's been a crappy week and this helps. I hope your vacation has been fun.
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 21 күн бұрын
@@seawolf365 sorry to hear that, glad this could help 🙂
@jenniegjerdsbakk9478
@jenniegjerdsbakk9478 21 күн бұрын
Love this so much❤ looking for updates every day because I love it so much ❤️ take your time and I will listen when it comes out 😊
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 21 күн бұрын
@@jenniegjerdsbakk9478 hopefully I can post 19-21 weekly, but it'll likely slow down a decent amount once I need to start writing new chapters again rather than just recording/editing preexisting ones
@emanuellafreitas4602
@emanuellafreitas4602 21 күн бұрын
I saw a theory that Violet's second signet would be extract the truth. As mentioned in the opening of chapter 35, "The only seal more terrifying than an instinctive one is the one that tells the truth, nd yet we left them alive" . In addition to nothing involving her being common, like being chosed by 2 dragons, it makes sense for her to also have a rare and powerful second signet, as is wielding lightning. And we have the scene where Violet accesses Xaden's mind after the throne scene, capturing the truth of his feelings. I think it would make sense, as the seals are linked to what the knight is and needs in his essence, what she always seeks is the truth at all costs. I think if the truth is truly his signet, it would help in the search for a cure for Xaden.
@pheberebe2430
@pheberebe2430 18 күн бұрын
That is my theory too. She is so hung up on knowing the truth about things. I even thought she was unreasonable in wanting Xaden to tell her EVERYTHING. It's a big part of her personality.
@valentinevincent8787
@valentinevincent8787 21 күн бұрын
"Hey I hope your liking my fanfiction" YES WE DO !!!❤
@thenguyen-yb9gq
@thenguyen-yb9gq 21 күн бұрын
Hell, I love it
@jennessas578
@jennessas578 21 күн бұрын
Yay I'm so happy you posted it ❤
@mohikasethi1676
@mohikasethi1676 21 күн бұрын
Hello!. I was wondering when you were gonna post. But no hurries take your time. Loving all of them and especially the effort you make in making everyone's voice different and exactly how one would imagine. ❤❤
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 21 күн бұрын
@@mohikasethi1676 Thank you! Especially for this chapter that means a lot to me, I was pretty apprehensive about how well I'd pull off Irana's old lady voice and Bodhi coming off as a likable goober during that one part of the confrontation 😅
@michellemcconnell4974
@michellemcconnell4974 20 күн бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan you are doing awesome!
@cilenialb
@cilenialb 22 күн бұрын
I just finished reading and I'm glad I came across your channel. I reay enjoyed to know more about Bodhi, Imogen and Garrick, I really like your insights on them (I have been waiting for Imogen/Garrick happening). For what I can sense from the cannon books Bodhi is one of my faves, and you seem to have captured what I had imagened, I really enjoyed that conversation with Brennan, so funny. I hope you continue with chapter 23, I am curious on the after kiss thoughts from Xaden Pov.
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 22 күн бұрын
Thanks! 😄 I will continue with 23 and beyond relatively soon, just need to finish making the audio for 19-21 first (18 will be up tomorrow)
@cilenialb
@cilenialb 22 күн бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan definitely will be waiting on those
@cathiescathie3306
@cathiescathie3306 22 күн бұрын
Guess your still working on chapter 18. Patiently wait... as much as I can.❤😊
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 22 күн бұрын
@cathiescathie3306 Sorry for the delay, it'll be up tomorrow 😅
@cathiescathie3306
@cathiescathie3306 22 күн бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan No problem. I understand. You do have a life. Have a happy 4th! 😊
@cilenialb
@cilenialb 23 күн бұрын
out of curiosity, do we know what is Garrick's signet? I don't remember it being mentioned in the books
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 22 күн бұрын
We do not know, at least yet. It is the topic of many spirited discussions and theories 😄
@cilenialb
@cilenialb 22 күн бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan thanks for the answer, I thought I missed something
@matthewwhite9390
@matthewwhite9390 25 күн бұрын
Feel like Violet in iron flame after assessment day “it’s been ten days!” Through gritted teeth.
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 25 күн бұрын
Sorry 😔 on a road trip, hopefully I'll be able to post Ch18 towards the end of the week but there is a chance it won't be until next week
@matthewwhite9390
@matthewwhite9390 25 күн бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan I’ll allow it…
@MelodiousMaxima
@MelodiousMaxima 25 күн бұрын
I found your work yesterday and already read them all 😂. You did a very good job at bringing Xaden alive and making him a more rounded character. It’s nice seeing the events through his eyes. This clearly comes natural to you. You will surely reach your goals.
@divya8684
@divya8684 26 күн бұрын
okay but haven't seen so many notice this but in Fourth Wing in the first stretch of chapters Mira asks Violet if she's good with daggers and Violet replies something like "Yes I'm quick. Lightning quick." See... that's way before we knew anything about dragons and signets. And ofc Violet was not bonded. That was an easter egg acc to me. In the very same way (I'm sorry I don't remember the chapter) somewhere around the first half of FW I swear I came across a line something like " The sun overpowered me" and since I was re reading a few months ago I kind of looked through the lines. Gosh I know I sound so crazy but till this date this lives in my head rent free . Will update this with Ch no once I reread FW. Do tell me about what y'all feel about this and try to look out for the wording and please update here if you're re reading FW/IF.
@andreaauzenne2656
@andreaauzenne2656 26 күн бұрын
Can u please do 18 to 22 please
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 26 күн бұрын
In progress, 18 should be up end of next week or the following at the latest, then 19-21 weekly thereafter
@mariecurtis5733
@mariecurtis5733 26 күн бұрын
As an FYI, the official audiobook of Fourth Wing has 2 Xaden POV chapters, (included at the end of the audiobook), which includes this bit of the book. I listened to it on the Libby app.
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 26 күн бұрын
Yep, this is just a fanfic, I wrote my version before reading those in an effort not to be too influenced by them, but did so afterwards and actually ended up altering my Ch 16 a bit to make things line up with canon just a bit better
@seawolf365
@seawolf365 27 күн бұрын
I was hoping to see 18 this morning. I hope over the weekend? No pressure, lol. I'm just looking forward to it.😊
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 26 күн бұрын
Sorry, I'm on a 2 week road trip and thought I'd still be doing the same amount of work on this each night, but it seems that wearing yourself out each day is the key to actually sleeping well, for me at least. Might be able to finish editing (very long) Ch 18 for next week but there's also a chance there'll be a 2 week delay before I get back to my regular schedule 😓
@seawolf365
@seawolf365 26 күн бұрын
@@George_RR_Sagan Well, look it's a complement to you that I was really looking forward to it. But of course I understand everyone needs a break. I also love a road trip. Enjoy.
@tafuckingdarh
@tafuckingdarh 23 күн бұрын
​@@George_RR_Sagan, I was getting worried for you! I'm glad to hear the delay is because you're (hopefully) spending time enjoying life!
@andreaauzenne2656
@andreaauzenne2656 28 күн бұрын
Can we get more please
@George_RR_Sagan
@George_RR_Sagan 28 күн бұрын
I'm on vacation right now, hoping to be able to drop Ch 18 next week
@leahspry4037
@leahspry4037 29 күн бұрын
I just listened to all of these in a row. I can't wait for the next chapter! You've done a great job. Thanks so much for the entertainment.