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@russelllowden1660
@russelllowden1660 Сағат бұрын
grate story keep them coming
@markoknezevic3027
@markoknezevic3027 3 сағат бұрын
There is OP Earth Fleet but Earth and Earthlings have lost War and gone extinct? Interesting...
@petermatthews-ob1dg
@petermatthews-ob1dg 3 сағат бұрын
rubbish, to many adverts, i gave up
@thomasandrews6910
@thomasandrews6910 4 сағат бұрын
Wow How many different ways can you say the same thing Bad bad bad
@puffnstuff12
@puffnstuff12 5 сағат бұрын
The chronology in the storyline is super bad. How many times does the fleet get destroyed then limp away to be destroyed again.
@edbergin4902
@edbergin4902 9 сағат бұрын
Earths defence, destroyed the alien fleet at least 3 times. Story needs work.
@NancySmith-x4t
@NancySmith-x4t 12 сағат бұрын
This story was so stupid. First they’re killing everybody down the last person and destroying every ship then all of a sudden they’re saying they’re letting the ship slip away and so is the general or the admiral. He can’t do both and how would they say Earth Day remembered earth for all time, how great that was the Earth was forgot about it for 5000 centuries that was stupid who was there witnessing that only the one ships they destroyed most all of them I guess if they told everybody they know it but otherwise we would leave an AI to destroy everybody. What the heck is that for makes me freak not one AI around me.
@willwade1101
@willwade1101 12 сағат бұрын
So what happens if while the aliens are marching toward their target, their ship gets taken by earths soldiers back to their underground base, stripped and investigated? When the aliens return from their "Successful mission" in order to leave they are stunned to find their ship gone, what then? Of course their mission was a set up by humans but how would the aliens react? Do the humans surround them but only watch as they look around? Do the aliens surrender or wait for the humans to attack? Do the aliens give up once their supplies run out or do they get rescued by their alies?
@leonwallace9449
@leonwallace9449 15 сағат бұрын
We must remember that the AI we create today will live forever. Therefore, we must be careful how we develop our A.I.
@Sol_yluna
@Sol_yluna 17 сағат бұрын
Hear me out. What if all the channels on youtube that pass stories off as fantasy, are actually stories from real life. Only without the spaceships and other planets and stuff. Have heard too many military people speak of battles with creatures unknown.
@publiusforum
@publiusforum 18 сағат бұрын
Not bad. I enjoyed it. But someone needs an editor.
@TheDurid1
@TheDurid1 19 сағат бұрын
Drinking game! Drink every time you hear a statement repeated 2 minutes later!
@JoesChillingChannel
@JoesChillingChannel 21 сағат бұрын
Nice!
@bladerunner2361
@bladerunner2361 Күн бұрын
This story keeps repeating itself.
@michaelking7231
@michaelking7231 Күн бұрын
Repetitive garbage
@michaelking7231
@michaelking7231 Күн бұрын
Repetitive repetition
@michaelking7231
@michaelking7231 Күн бұрын
WTF no explanation of how did Bonner die …..honestly these stories written by stupid AI are not only idiotic but lack continuity and at least a pinch of SFI realism woul work
@RobertL.JonesJr-hz8vl
@RobertL.JonesJr-hz8vl Күн бұрын
You may have a clocking device, but you still emit a smell a dog can sense and find! Or as I call them a four-pegged, fur covered, sharp toothed, heat-seeking missile.
@AndyCaley
@AndyCaley Күн бұрын
Too much repetition. But still ok. How many times do u have to say mercenaries???????
@126wil
@126wil Күн бұрын
I can't ignore this one: A "Human dog?" If the dog is human, then it is not a dog... Am I being too literal? Perhaps "...a Human's dog, "would be a clearer way to phrase this? I hesitate to mention this because I am not a writer, but it seemed to need a bit of tweaking.
@kayombomangowa3624
@kayombomangowa3624 Күн бұрын
This is BS. Where was the CIA and MI6 and others
@thaddeuszukowski4633
@thaddeuszukowski4633 Күн бұрын
Whoever wrote this was premature in releasing it to be read. There are numerous inconsistencies which detract from what could be a very interesting story. Try reading it to your friends first, everyone likes a few minutes of a break to listen to a friends work and most people are kind enough to comment on how to make the story better.
@jeffreyschuler7271
@jeffreyschuler7271 2 күн бұрын
Stupid
@Shadowkey392
@Shadowkey392 2 күн бұрын
A bit inconsistent. You shouldn’t be so reliant on AI to write your stories.
@abraham99929
@abraham99929 2 күн бұрын
The pictture is a very good piece of art.
@michaelo393
@michaelo393 3 күн бұрын
Needs a human narrator
@Weaselbroom
@Weaselbroom 3 күн бұрын
Let me get this straight. The humans had something hidden. Some technology that they were not supposed to have. God this is horrible.
@ThePuko24
@ThePuko24 3 күн бұрын
Missleading title. Also, video is riddeled with ads but story is okay.
@brianblackwell5713
@brianblackwell5713 3 күн бұрын
Bonner died before the first fight, when did you resurrect him?
@eugenehiggins8695
@eugenehiggins8695 3 күн бұрын
Why is the start repeated twice? Still a great story
@maximusmorphine2418
@maximusmorphine2418 3 күн бұрын
They kicked me out for smoking in the bathroom...
@solreaver83
@solreaver83 4 күн бұрын
Maybe the worst I've listen to so far. Continuously repeating itself and contradicting itself too.
@meethos12
@meethos12 4 күн бұрын
So, first, they infiltrated the enemy flagship and blew up the AI Supreme, and then they infiltrated the enemy flagship and blew up the AI Supreme, and finally, they infiltrated the enemy flagship and blew up the AI Supreme?
@samfrancisco8095
@samfrancisco8095 4 күн бұрын
No probe would be able to get past the defenses.
@ianreid
@ianreid 4 күн бұрын
Love your stories
@cloudcoder
@cloudcoder 5 күн бұрын
Does anybody know what toolchain she use to generate this?
@jamespseaman4136
@jamespseaman4136 5 күн бұрын
This is a goofy story!
@jamespseaman4136
@jamespseaman4136 5 күн бұрын
At the start of this story you said she was a doctor and what is she a doctor of?
@jamespseaman4136
@jamespseaman4136 5 күн бұрын
Why would a doctor have to prove herself? This doesn’t make sense!
@mark98115
@mark98115 5 күн бұрын
Please take a grammar lesson.
@davidlester6673
@davidlester6673 5 күн бұрын
You give humans far too much credit.
@SciFiCreation
@SciFiCreation 5 күн бұрын
perfect
@ChickenNuggetman192
@ChickenNuggetman192 5 күн бұрын
ew
@donaldboyd7496
@donaldboyd7496 6 күн бұрын
Story was good, but it has nothing to do with title or picture. War with an AI... Ok. So where was the alien girl?
@DarrenEden-ub4vj
@DarrenEden-ub4vj 6 күн бұрын
After listening to these crappy stories, the aliens built a bigger fleet to wipe out the humans
@ccasalie
@ccasalie 6 күн бұрын
Sound Like more AI Bullshit
@NataliahBrown
@NataliahBrown 6 күн бұрын
First
@Jurnymn
@Jurnymn 7 күн бұрын
You mislabeled the title, absolutely nothing to do with it. Do you just copy the same story from each other? Using the same names?
@tioraytm
@tioraytm 7 күн бұрын
Ummm, yeah that would be planet earth
@DanWint
@DanWint 7 күн бұрын
WOKE got Humans.