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@HamiltonRowan-r6z 13 сағат бұрын
What an absolutely miserable and horrible story! This is occurring in Mideval times!
@curvs4me 3 күн бұрын
Boring
@HamiltonRowan-r6z 4 күн бұрын
Where's her pointed ears? These beautiful alien women always meet up with noble and kind men. What if she met up with an abusive, controlling man who would take advantage of her condition?
@stuartodell1709 5 күн бұрын
I think that Claira's name was maybe said the same way twice for the entire story. Who ever is narating tends to stumble/hesitate with some words causing sentence discontinuity or rythm (distracting from story line).
@ObsceneSuperMatt 4 күн бұрын
AI text to speech.
@The_Secret_Fantasy_Tales 4 күн бұрын
Sorry For This dear friend
@ghostshadow9046 4 күн бұрын
it is AI, ton of AI generated stories have been posted over the last few years many fail to review and edit obvious errors from the stories.
@brian554xx 5 күн бұрын
It's funny how so many lines are broken.
@ordinarybloke6962 5 күн бұрын
And they all speak English.
@evilsimeon 4 күн бұрын
It’s a good thing too.
@tezza3733 5 күн бұрын
DAMN first 6 mins are the end of another story about clara etc then goes straight into the middle the the title story. NOT GOOD BRUCE!!!!
@dannycalloway4360 5 күн бұрын
“You have failed me for the last time captain Keena!”
@feel7251 8 күн бұрын
you might want to think about things like how they managed to be speaking in person , from one line to the next when there were seperated by distance and non contact in the line before
@albertmoleii9511 9 күн бұрын
Fitst off. How many Off worlds, are dying? Peehaps Earth could create a federation of possable mates ? Note Using dreams could be invade rhe private persoal areas we hold sacret
@tiptondavid 10 күн бұрын
A pointless exercise in vapid suspense for no reason
@Kevin-e9y3i 10 күн бұрын
I thought he was supposed to do Lorena’s daughter, not Lorena herself
@Kevin-e9y3i 10 күн бұрын
It’ll take more than one pairing to save her species, it’ll take a few thousand pairings for that
@Confessionofcheating 10 күн бұрын
"Can't miss your new videos! The scene at 2:30 was so moving! 💔"
@The_Secret_Fantasy_Tales 10 күн бұрын
Thanks for feedback dear
@jerrycranford268 11 күн бұрын
Alright, you had a Jumpstart beginning, but that's okay. How about giving him some ball's and keeping the f'ed up government from taking her without him. Better yet he needed to kick some ass and go find a planet that would leave them the hell alone. Still studying her, isn't a good ending. We all know how that crap ends.
@nethanelmasters5170 11 күн бұрын
What do you want ? I want you and and a family with at least 4 children. A life long love a mate.
@AlbertoRodriguez-ju6hc 12 күн бұрын
She made his brein hurt, ok call the teen titans, have Larry come by with a brain bandaid lol.
@deadlynytshayd2220 14 күн бұрын
First
@raven4k998 14 күн бұрын
First🤣🤣
@f.hamourapi8889 14 күн бұрын
What a sick story...
@dropshot1967 14 күн бұрын
The pauses, rhythm, emphasis and intonation in the narration are off and make this a hard story to listen to.
@towhook 15 күн бұрын
Be my husband or my prisoner. What's the difference?
@RaymondCoggins-xd2re 15 күн бұрын
Lmao
@phmiii 12 күн бұрын
None! But I am such a SIMP, I would have said yes at the very begging then figured out what to do.
@davidcliatt1314 16 күн бұрын
The description of her leg and breading parts sure don't sound sexy.😅
@cxrasher8472 16 күн бұрын
Did you pick the picture with the beard stubble on her face, or was there some tangent where she was one of Tolkien's dwarves?
@Sci-FantasyWorlds 16 күн бұрын
Who knew a human medic could bring such a wild twist to her story? The struggle, the mystery, and the connection-this is next-level sci-fi drama
@ganesannarayanan2047 16 күн бұрын
Very nice👍 🌹
@Mike-nc4kl 16 күн бұрын
*
@bradwbangerter863 17 күн бұрын
I would love to hear the rest of the story !❤
@HeeroYuy911 17 күн бұрын
I approve of this story he was drinking tea not coffee for once.
@markmartens2029 18 күн бұрын
Life is getting HARDER & HARDER. We need fantasy fairytale love story endings to lift our spirits & give us hope.
@johngardner2807 18 күн бұрын
Title is WRONG,and MISLEADING,AS USUAL!
@cxrasher8472 17 күн бұрын
Normal. 90% of these have bad titles and thumbnails that don't have much to do with the actual topic.
@jerrycranford268 18 күн бұрын
This didn't really make a lot of sense. It just left things hanging. He had no reason to be there at all. Strange.
@Roger21989 18 күн бұрын
Not a very interesting story!
@rayairey5770 19 күн бұрын
I just "MIGHT" be interested in watching but until you tell me "what she was" as in the introduction then there is NO WAY I'm going to even turn it on psst 15 seconds.......... Your turn..
@gtfg3800 19 күн бұрын
nice little story !
@ThBlueSalamander 19 күн бұрын
wtf lol
@krowodom5719 19 күн бұрын
It is a bit annoying when he retreads questions she answered more than 4 times. Also: there was no passage of days, yet it jumps to all of a sudden it's been days even though they were still in the same spot, sane conversation, just an anomalous "after all we've been through" is narratively jarring.
@georgeedwardbrown5117 20 күн бұрын
HOW DID SHE SURVIVE WITH NO FOOD OR FLUIDS, AND THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN THE FIRST THING A HOST WOULD PROVIDE .....
@rayairey5770 18 күн бұрын
It's just as well this is a "story" as no one could possibly survive given the time she spent locked in her cage as first described at the beginning.....
@daltonx6177 20 күн бұрын
The author fails to realize that KZbin was created to upload videos, not soundtrack. There are podcasts for audio only, or Audible. Dear AI, time to get with the program, this is the 21st Century after all... 🙄
@kevinrice2721 20 күн бұрын
Heh, it talks about blue women and shows green ones so....
@michaelcrittenden7523 20 күн бұрын
This story put me to sleep. And I was driving at the time.
@hamster2845 20 күн бұрын
The thumbnail text almost reads like a porno. lol
@GastNdorf 21 күн бұрын
The hell is this title man
@sharolbangerter4057 21 күн бұрын
I would love to hear the rest of the story ❤❤❤❤❤❤
@Cx10110100 22 күн бұрын
Bruh, its gettin wild out there😅
@Confessionofcheating 22 күн бұрын
"Every time I watch your channel, I get hooked on the story. 3:45 really took me by surprise! 👏"
@johnwoa 22 күн бұрын
Jeezzusss Chrysler !!!
@darrenamos8653 23 күн бұрын
You claim that all your products are taking the world by storm, yet, I have e never heard of your product. Could you stop exaggerating your stuff? Them I might listen to your ads. BTW there is a cheap way that involves using super glue and baking soda.
@Confessionofcheating 23 күн бұрын
"Every time I watch your channel, I get hooked on the story. 3:45 really took me by surprise! 👏"
@WinstonBarrett-p4e 23 күн бұрын
Exchange of genetic material vs. normal reproductive act. How boring.
@AsakuraYukiko 23 күн бұрын
So it was like when that alien with the holodeck technology bred with Trip in Star Trek Enterprise...but this was consensual !?
@Gary-k2g 23 күн бұрын
Another balless earth male. Very sad.