Yessir! I really like the way it came out. Thanks for the effort!
@p-bot8.66910 ай бұрын
I liked the story but you either need to narrate it or use larger text. The way it is, is hard to read.
@formerhobbit559910 ай бұрын
Thank you for watching and thanks for the comment. Sometimes I narrate. sometimes I don't. I don't really care for the sound of my voice. Did you find it hard to read based on text size alone or is it the color contrast or perhaps the speed of the graphics? Oh, did you watch on a small or large screen?
@p-bot8.66910 ай бұрын
@formerhobbit5599 I watched on my phone, so that may have been part of it
@formerhobbit559910 ай бұрын
@@p-bot8.669Alrighty. I will still consider adding narration later. My next video may in fact require narration.
@BabaluKaloodle10 ай бұрын
O, behold Walter! Bow down, Human, bow! All hail Walter! Fall at His feet, Human, fall! Fear Walter! Die, Human, die! Long live Walter! No more Human, no more!
@formerhobbit559910 ай бұрын
No more Humans... Stay tuned for part 2.
@lauriamandich258510 ай бұрын
😢😢😢
@formerhobbit559910 ай бұрын
🤷♀
@BabaluKaloodle10 ай бұрын
And THAT is why I could never hunt. You captured the feelings perfectly, my brother. Very nice.
@formerhobbit559910 ай бұрын
🦌
@BabaluKaloodle11 ай бұрын
O, the depth O, the breadth O, the humanity I love it!
@formerhobbit559911 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@BabaluKaloodle11 ай бұрын
You are something else, brother. A true smithy of words!
@formerhobbit559911 ай бұрын
Much appreciated.
@BabaluKaloodle11 ай бұрын
Truly haunting. You're really good at not just the writing, but the presentation as well. Fantastic!
@formerhobbit559911 ай бұрын
Thank you, brother.
@lauriamandich258511 ай бұрын
Beautifully written ❤
@formerhobbit559911 ай бұрын
Aww. Someone is watching. Thanks, Lauria!
@BabaluKaloodle Жыл бұрын
You never fail to put a smile on my face, brother! Great stuff!!!
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
And that puts a smile on my face!
@BabaluKaloodle Жыл бұрын
I don't know how you do it, bro. Simple, expressive, and evocative. Lovely!
@cjkordon Жыл бұрын
Haha! 😂
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
I'm glad you got a chuckle out of it. 🙂
@curtishadley4114 Жыл бұрын
Really well done on this tale of autumn. Some great imagery and thoughtful phrasing in there!
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
Thank you, my friend.
@cjkordon Жыл бұрын
Yucky! Glad I didn't watch this before bed last night! Though Dad did say I yelled while I was sleeping. Stupid nightmares.
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
I'm OK with "Yucky!, sweet sister.
@cjkordon Жыл бұрын
@@formerhobbit5599 Sorry. Your writing is excellent. I'm just a scaredy cat!
@BabaluKaloodle Жыл бұрын
Great atmosphere, brother. A perfect melange of pictures, music, and storytelling!
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
It really is a lot of fun to put these together.
@curtishadley4114 Жыл бұрын
I'm glad we're talking roller coaster... I think...😮😂
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
OK, my friend.You can go with that.
@BabaluKaloodle Жыл бұрын
BIG smile on my face with that one! Of course, now I want to go do D-land! Another fine poem from the Master.
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much, brother!
@cjkordon Жыл бұрын
Love!!!
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
Glad you liked it!
@randomwiseguyonyoutube7406 Жыл бұрын
Amazing
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
😁
@lauriamandich2585 Жыл бұрын
Too funny! I love the "warning" in the beginning 😂
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
Thank you, Lauria!
@lauriamandich2585 Жыл бұрын
Beautiful ❤
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
Thank you, Lauria! I am glad you enjoyed it.
@pangur8775 Жыл бұрын
It's lovely ❤
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@BabaluKaloodle Жыл бұрын
Jaunty, romantic, and graceful! Simply mah-velous! And now we know why KZbin was created!
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
You are too kind, brother.
@BabaluKaloodle Жыл бұрын
It reminds me of my 16-year-old self sitting in my room, my hand around her neck so tightly and for so long that it was all I could do to release my aching muscles and tendons to let go when I was through with her. Looking back, it was all worth it. She's gone now, replaced. Fantastic poem, bro!
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
I guess we all have to go through that torturous stretch. Some of us are able to overcome it. You are definitely one of those.
@BabaluKaloodle Жыл бұрын
Leaving a comment, I'm not sure how I feel Will it be taken in the spirit 'twas given? As I sweat oer my keys, I make this appeal May my words, if not adequate, be forgiven This poet I've read and admired for years His talents are deep as the sea I've laughed and I've cried, both ended in tears His words strike a chord within me Cowboys and cavemen, coastlines and fields As an artist, he tells tales like no other Evoking imaginings...Yes, I'm sure how I feel I am proud to call him my brother
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
Oh...my...goodness! Thank you, big brother. Any further response would be no less inadequate.
@cjkordon Жыл бұрын
Beautiful
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@curtishadley4114 Жыл бұрын
What an amazing poem - "the breath of life upon which the poet suffocates". That is REALLY GOOD!
@formerhobbit5599 Жыл бұрын
Thank you, my friend!
@gramgram1158 Жыл бұрын
Simply Gorgeous. One of my favorites that you've done... thus far.