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@michaelcgrigori7823 6 күн бұрын
Jesus Christ😂😂😂😂!
@naomilambert4994 12 күн бұрын
I loved the story but it was so sad that his daughter had to die. Next story please don`t have any children die because it`s too sad.😪
@DeenTheMachine78 12 күн бұрын
I love the part when all of HUMANITY United and agree to the man who lost he loved one in the most cruel and painful death 😢
@jennismith4041 13 күн бұрын
A good storyline, humans Terrans or primitives as idiot alien's call them, vengeance is mine.❤❤
@drcovell 14 күн бұрын
Shameless *ripoff* of Star Wars Episode 1. 👎👎
@enormousdork3831 18 күн бұрын
Strange how every story includes some level of infiltration. When light speed drones, loaded with ordinance would move likely cut most ships in half. Line up targeting then jump to light ir near light speed. Speed multiplies mass, increasing the kinetic force applied. Each battle ship could carry dozens if not hundreds of these drones. In all seriousness, a single drone like that would be nothing short of a planet killer. How is that for "shock and awe" ? Wrong way to start a story, as that would clearly make a story very short, but as a grand finale, possibly a prelude to sequal, it is a solid idea.
@williamhsquireiv661 26 күн бұрын
88
@davidross6145 26 күн бұрын
I like the story. Ready for part 2
@MH5XXXX 28 күн бұрын
a very nice story thank you.
@labelledamedumanor4876 Ай бұрын
Is that..... Kratos? WITH DOOMSLAYER'S CRUCIBLE???? DID HE FORGE IT??????
@gregdal8459 Ай бұрын
I really wish people would proof listen to AI generated stories.
@jimleon7894 Ай бұрын
One situation after another…this get old and drawn out. And boring.
@PatchesandJim Ай бұрын
I would subscribe, but not since you threatened me!!!
@ClayUrmomington Ай бұрын
Pedo as fucc
@kylebailey1831 Ай бұрын
How does the admiral become a captain? Did someone else add to this not knowing or what?
@PatchesandJim Ай бұрын
Admiral is a Navy Rank, Captain in the Navy is a position or job title.
@kylebailey1831 Ай бұрын
@PatchesandJim An admiral is a higher rank than a captain. I know all about the ranks.
@Jamhael1 Ай бұрын
Alien: *torture and kill human children* Humans: "We, Humanity, by decree of Fate, we trial the Xenos who, by their impiety and cruelty, killed one of our own. And We, Humanity, declare them guilty. And We, Humanity, condemn the Xenos to death. 100 thousand of their lives for each drop of blood of ours. With that, justice is served, vengeance is satisfied, and vendetta is settled. May God have mercy upon the enemies of Terra, for its Children will show none, know none, and give none..."
@IAMTHEMAN69420 Ай бұрын
88
@jakobnunez4964 Ай бұрын
What is the name for the background art?
@carlhelmick7711 Ай бұрын
88 thank you for a great story.
@DiverDan2010 Ай бұрын
Looking forward to additional chapters. 👍
@margaretlowans8429 Ай бұрын
Terrible ending. Wait there was no ending just no more words!
@FransFourie-g6c Ай бұрын
No ending. Part 2 needed
@PerfectImperfectchoices Ай бұрын
600
@PerfectImperfectchoices Ай бұрын
556
@russellwillingham1536 Ай бұрын
Why listen to this makes want more ❤
@pauldolman6504 Ай бұрын
What the heck does the writer mean they couldn't blame the observers for not helping with back breaking labor?
@Youtubecensormydick Ай бұрын
should we send our best? no send our prisoners they will do the job - non 40k verse
@Youtubecensormydick Ай бұрын
never 40k again, we will rise and not allow such a miserable existance
@TheDurid1 Ай бұрын
Story makes less and less sense the more you listen to it
@margaretlowans8429 Ай бұрын
Terrible end. Is there a second part?
@samsnetsdynasty5496 Ай бұрын
This was a great story
@ryanmuhm7584 Ай бұрын
Good times.
@margaretlowans8429 Ай бұрын
It ended far too soon
@robertsuter4671 Ай бұрын
Well, this could have certainly been continued a little longer. The closing was very abrupt and a little cynical. It needs some softening. Some hopefulness after the sacrifice. Otherwise the listener feels cheated: main characters die, story dine, no resolution. Just my thoughts.
@PhilipSmith-c9k 2 ай бұрын
Fantastic story, really captivating and enjoyable 88.😊
@creinicke1000 2 ай бұрын
Very depressing
@Douglas17D 2 ай бұрын
This story was an emotional rollercoaster. Very well done.
@iandapp8125 2 ай бұрын
88
@brangertheburger4227 2 ай бұрын
Has there been a part 2 yet??
@carlhansen4648 2 ай бұрын
88
@paulaeg1 2 ай бұрын
88
@tomdondlinger4034 2 ай бұрын
The Chen family makes another appearance. Though this time in a minor role.
@sweetyturner2214 2 ай бұрын
88
@sdragut 2 ай бұрын
very disappointing . The title made a claim but the story failed to reflect the title by a long shot. you lost one more subscriber for having deceptive title. if you claimed multiple worlds but only one facility is destroyed, you're like a Chihuahua with a megaphone. poor story
@jameshansford8355 2 ай бұрын
88
@2xghostx2 2 ай бұрын
88! Great work! you had me hooked! :D
@big10inch-record 2 ай бұрын
Waste of time
@PreppingInProgress 2 ай бұрын
88 eighty-eight
@rogueraven7603 3 ай бұрын
Eighty eight
@FrankAmodeo-zj7kq 3 ай бұрын
88