That tank is probably similar to a soviet tank. Terrible gun depression, slow reload time, and honestly kind of crappy. It's too tall for me liking. It seems to have two turrets but one main gun?

By destroying the earth's fleet and conquering earth, they might have unleashed the very future they were trying to stop.

Nice story - No pc/woke kumbayah...........

i like the stories of who ever the humans beat, they reverse engineer the tech and even make it better

88 good story a lot better then others I heard thank you

Nice story!

"According to our station, all without exception!" "On the blood of our fathers, on the blood of our sons, we swore to uphold the Covenant!" "Even to our dying breath!" "Those who break this Oath are heretics, worthy of neither pitty nor mercy, even now, they use our lords' creation, to broadcast their lies..." "We shall Grind them into dust!" "And continue our march to glorious salvation!"

88

88 That was a good story.

1/2 trough and it seems like it just tells a recycled han solo star wars story.

nice angle , fun start

Hesitation is defeat , roy lost that day

At about the 11:30 mark it goes into repeat mode. FIX IT

great story 88

Crap

Well 88, I think this was a great story, loved it. Hopefully there will be a follow on about the Princess. Oh that hand looked all wrong, it was like the fingers were twisted 180 degrees.

I'm sorry what? You will leave a heart for everyone writing that despicable number used by extreme far right? >:(

Boring. You need some more models of stories, as it is now you have a small number of stories, filled with stupid transitions, action sequences as bad as StarTrek - all eqpt failing after 10 seconds,, terrible disaster looming, bad guy having upper hand, than The Good Guys win on a fluke. Bad dramaturgy, just "running and screaming". Nah. Bad.😠😤

Wow, how cool!

Use the Flagships weapons why don't ya? Damn, who wrote this? A unintelligent AI?

88

Try not repeating the sane thing over and over.

Who just watch one al story and just keep watching

If one human is so deadly, why didn't he inform the rest of his kind and instead start his own insurrection.

How can I put some of my own stories on here?? Any suggestions?

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I found the concept of the story good. But, the rendition qas disjointed.

88 loved the story is there a second part to it?

When he magically escaped I stopped right there. The whole color vision bit was pushing it any way but the magic escape was too much.

Where is a LARGE can of raid😂

that was ridiculous from beginning to end

Sounds like krieg

AJ is the Invictus?

I loved the story, please continue it ❤❤

Space Atlantis

I do so much have have a certain appreciation for the proper use but not over use of the word “miasma”…

and then the Doom music kicks in...

Well! How did I know before I started the story that in the midst of high-tech spaceships using all kinds of exotic weapons to kill each other, the most important battle would be waged by the two main players having a sword fight on the bridge of the alien’s command ship? This story might have sold well in a 1950 men’s magazine. But you need to add sexy women somewhere. Then it’s a sure winner!

I like the story

Good story! What does HFY stand for? Are there additional stories to this one? Thanks

Excellent story.

88😄

if it bleeds, it can be killed.

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88❤

Reminds me something happening right now in Palestine.

Interesting, believable.

Every time i hear or read the word " Dradnought " anywhere , all i can think about is : A SHADOW MOVES ACROSS THE WATER IN PURSUIT ...

Enjoyed the story very much. Thank you!

88 88 88 !!!