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@DeannaPaki-x2m
@DeannaPaki-x2m 18 сағат бұрын
0.12 Good storyline. Shame you changed over to the female voice, the story changed in frequency and lost its vibration. Thank you.
@johnvermette9466
@johnvermette9466 19 сағат бұрын
Where is the conclusion? It's really irritating this f'ing repetition! Please guys: DO BETTER THAN THAT!
@miketaylor-g2e
@miketaylor-g2e Күн бұрын
love it <3
@ChavezPete
@ChavezPete Күн бұрын
Sucks😠
@michelelyons9410
@michelelyons9410 Күн бұрын
This was hilarious, but you might need to make note that it begins to repeat itself half way through the story.
@kevinblair983
@kevinblair983 Күн бұрын
Good story but it wasn’t finished.
@weldonwilson
@weldonwilson Күн бұрын
Starts repeating at 18:56. Story continues at 25:31.
@MareeHughes
@MareeHughes Күн бұрын
It interesting and good about kid of different way of living working together.
@lynneclark5313
@lynneclark5313 Күн бұрын
Interesting!!! Tho it is strange how the aliens' become "plural" and are referred to as "their".
@rayairey5770
@rayairey5770 Күн бұрын
NO ONE PROOF READS or even WATCHES these stories....... What a waste of time this is with its repeated sections.
@overk1ll520
@overk1ll520 Күн бұрын
Have your AI proofread itself and stop repeating. As a person who likes stories I absolutely dislike repeats just to make a story longer.
@DennisBell-tz2sb
@DennisBell-tz2sb Күн бұрын
Should have had the Marines stand ready for combat like the old Greeks, Jake with sword n shield in hand. Bet that would have change the day.
@johnc6738
@johnc6738 2 күн бұрын
Nope not caring enough to proof story before posting. Letting it repeat and mispronounce words. Not worth rinishing. Step up, do better or give up
@wow-roblox8370
@wow-roblox8370 2 күн бұрын
2:58 desynchronised closed captions
@roberthodge2771
@roberthodge2771 2 күн бұрын
At 5 minutes in; the ass got in front of the head - going forward? Or backward; man, I am now confused as to when is what doing??
@tedenderpal1299
@tedenderpal1299 2 күн бұрын
Story is repeating itself
@DeannaPaki-x2m
@DeannaPaki-x2m 2 күн бұрын
0.12 cool story, gotta love those humans.
@stevenharper5055
@stevenharper5055 2 күн бұрын
If this Ai says protocols one more time!!
@aislygncovante7524
@aislygncovante7524 2 күн бұрын
Chen! Take a shot! 😂
@lynneclark5313
@lynneclark5313 2 күн бұрын
Seems like the story repeated itself.
@jimgilbert9984
@jimgilbert9984 3 күн бұрын
"No matter how advanced a civilization might be, everyone needs to flush their toilets somewhere." I can testify to that! I worked on the night shift at a wastewater treatment plant for 13 years, and yeah, that 💩 has to go somewhere. However, a spaceship is not like a planet bound ship. A ship plying the seas of a planet can dispose of its waste in any number of ways, but there's only a couple of options available to a spaceship. A spaceship could just dump its waste into a sun to be consumed, but that's incredibly wasteful (if you'll pardon the pun). The best and most economical way of dealing with a spaceship's waste is to recycle it. Separate out the amino acids, proteins, carbohydrates, hydrocarbons, and other useful bits and pieces to be used again. After all, what did you think happened when a toilet was flushed on the USS Enterprise-D? All of that "stuff" joined the other organic matter the replicators used to make food and other organic consumables. Anyone up for some fecal steak tartar? 😂 "Let's try again with a modified amplitude." So those scientists merely turned up the volume. Just like tourists in foreign countries think yelling in their own language will make the previously unrecognizable words suddenly make sense. 🙄 A stand-up comedian named Jerry Clower once made a comment about people whose supposed intelligence often got in the way of common sense: "That boy was educated beyond his intelligence." 😆 The narration was choppy, and the punctuation was nonexistent. "Sometimes the best solution isn't necessarily the most complicated one." Just like Picard suggesting to Data that the best way to disable the Borg cube was to put all of the Borg to sleep. He couldn't access their weapons or power core, so just send them to Dreamland. 😂 Still, all in all, I enjoyed this story.
@simi1950
@simi1950 3 күн бұрын
1/3 repeated?
@simi1950
@simi1950 3 күн бұрын
oh sorry.. maybe like this: you got 3 dishes and 2 of them are the same?
@shrapnelslurpee
@shrapnelslurpee 3 күн бұрын
AI definitely made this story. It's ass
@paulacornelison243
@paulacornelison243 3 күн бұрын
Narrator speaks much too fast and doesn't stop at periods.
@DeannaPaki-x2m
@DeannaPaki-x2m 3 күн бұрын
0.12 cool story line, and good humor, thank you.
@hua_man
@hua_man 3 күн бұрын
A crew of maintenance personnel on this ship renamed "The Galactic Sweeper" I see fear of ... The Cleaning Crew. Their fearless leader known only as Ragmop.
@simi1950
@simi1950 3 күн бұрын
hahahh nice :P
@josephhyland8904
@josephhyland8904 3 күн бұрын
Loved it.
@nicolaparsons5703
@nicolaparsons5703 3 күн бұрын
😂
@stephaniewilson3955
@stephaniewilson3955 3 күн бұрын
Sorry, but peniciline was found when someone actually noticed that a long neglected petre dish showed that a known bacteria was being devoured by something else.
@jyvben1520
@jyvben1520 3 күн бұрын
story restarts after a while, first part should have been dropped
@sunitaboodram7770
@sunitaboodram7770 3 күн бұрын
X
@jyvben1520
@jyvben1520 3 күн бұрын
hurting nope herding
@krazzygranny7032
@krazzygranny7032 3 күн бұрын
First story, Dr. Quincy would be proud of your speech, making sure everybody passed out
@danoslmn
@danoslmn 3 күн бұрын
I believe you need to actually do some editing like actual listing to your creations before posting. Other than that you have a good story line. The end was a bit abrupt.
@DeannaPaki-x2m
@DeannaPaki-x2m 3 күн бұрын
0.12 the humor, funny as, thank you, cool story
@MareeHughes
@MareeHughes 3 күн бұрын
Last bit of the story was repeated.
@MareeHughes
@MareeHughes 3 күн бұрын
It funny and I like how there brings in coffee also about the children playing.
@roserea3156
@roserea3156 4 күн бұрын
Wally gator joined the Arny
@ferrelallan9575
@ferrelallan9575 4 күн бұрын
He is the swingness gator in the swamp!
@giljensen1132
@giljensen1132 4 күн бұрын
The Chen's and Patel's are back at it
@jeremyswanson459
@jeremyswanson459 4 күн бұрын
Kai Nacomora Rodriguez, really? This sounds like an AI 3rd grader wrote it!! Lol 😂😂😂
@kristermagnusson8146
@kristermagnusson8146 4 күн бұрын
To bad the story is broken.... it had potential.
@heihe26
@heihe26 4 күн бұрын
A „Chen“ Story without a „Patel“??🥺😢
@DeannaPaki-x2m
@DeannaPaki-x2m 4 күн бұрын
0.12 Brilliant storyline, loved the q/physics and entanglement, I had a good chuckle thru that story, thank you
@samsignorelli
@samsignorelli 4 күн бұрын
Good story, but the AI readback is STILL a fucking shit show.
@DeannaPaki-x2m
@DeannaPaki-x2m 4 күн бұрын
0.12 enjoyable story, thank you
@iainrumsey7672
@iainrumsey7672 4 күн бұрын
Dot= full stop, or period for our American cousins.
@phantomreaper2057
@phantomreaper2057 4 күн бұрын
How the heck did you come up with this it’s far too hilarious yet awesome work
@carlfranz6805
@carlfranz6805 4 күн бұрын
Wait? Were all Canadian now? How did that happen.
@stephaniewilson3955
@stephaniewilson3955 4 күн бұрын
How many know that the Geneva Convention was established after people found out about how the Canadians behaved during WW1. And Canadians still have the belief that it is not a war crime the first time because there is no rule against it.
@skyesfury8511
@skyesfury8511 4 күн бұрын
I mean, to be fair, until a rule is made, you can't break it. lol
@cave7228
@cave7228 4 күн бұрын
Yep, we are nice, till we aren't. And when we aren't, we really, really, aren't 😆
@stephaniewilson3955
@stephaniewilson3955 4 күн бұрын
@@skyesfury8511 the view of the Canadians...
@skyesfury8511
@skyesfury8511 4 күн бұрын
​@@stephaniewilson3955 OK... You seem to be implying that's inherently bad. Or do you have an issue with Canadians? Humanity has been doing this since the dawn of time.
@jeffpribyl6488
@jeffpribyl6488 3 күн бұрын
As a Canadian veteran, it seems you only call us when you really, really need something done. We always play to win. Sometimes, you need to be creative to get there.
@mattnoble2100
@mattnoble2100 4 күн бұрын
Great story except for the fact that you cut out the entire sparring match which is near as I can tell was the whole point of this story