hi guys , this is a piece i composed in FL studio , i do not know how to proceed at this point
@276-21 күн бұрын
this is insane!! i love it!!!
@kaijugrit21 күн бұрын
thanks man , it means alot
@melonade905317 күн бұрын
Hippity hoppity ur sample is now my property 🥷
@lillie302920 күн бұрын
A few critiques; you definitely need to learn theory. Only genres you can get away with not learning theory is riddim and extratone. Other than that, definitely change up the arp patterns, too repetitive, and maybe borrow from the parallel major to resolve into the final chord. Another thing I noticed is that you don’t stay on the same chord tone for too long, you shouldn’t try to spam chords together, but instead make it flow from chord to chord. Other than that, pretty good 👍
@kaijugrit20 күн бұрын
thanks, ill try to keep this in mind
@Syr3i23 күн бұрын
This sounds great!
@kaijugrit23 күн бұрын
thanks , any feedback??
@Syr3i23 күн бұрын
@@kaijugrit I mean, it’s incomplete so I can’t judge it rn.
@Syr3i23 күн бұрын
And most of my works are also pretty eh
@kaijugrit22 күн бұрын
@@Syr3i im sure your work, isnt eh
@Syr3i22 күн бұрын
@@kaijugrit thanks but ngl it kinda is 😓
@wolfplay01320 күн бұрын
i cannot believe it.
@kalacarte22 күн бұрын
ARPEGIOS YOooooooOOO
@kaijugrit22 күн бұрын
yeah 🔥
@Cr1mson00021 күн бұрын
Id say its a little bit too repetitive, try switching it up more a bit. And for arpeggios, u should do more chord scale relations, cuz those sound fire, and the bass also shouldnt be an arpeggio pattern as well but more of its own thing, but yeah id say my only critique is that its too repetitive, good job on this track.
@kaijugrit21 күн бұрын
sure ill try doing that , but the problem is i honestly dont know what is going anymore at this point