2 simple paraphrasing tricks - how to paraphrase ielts writing task 2

[@kememma]

"Around the world there has been increasing cultural similarities in recent times than ever before, this may be because the world is becoming more receptive to different cultures and beliefs. In my opinion this is a positive development"

[@sadagnoori1909]

There are so many similarities can be found all over the world than ever before. I think traveling is the main reason is for this and in this essay i will come up with evidence to support why this is a positive trend.

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, you forgot to mention "culture" in your first sentence. Also, you need to add "that": ... *that* can be found...

[@jaschoriyev5842]

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[@girishsai8590]

In recent times, there is been a resemblance in cultures from different parts of the world.I believe this is due to advent of technologies and increase in world tourism . It is a positive trend which would help to maintain good relationships.

[@manjeetrajinder7524]

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[@riyadhussain9019]

In recent years, there has been ever increasing cultural similarities among countries relative to the past. This is probably due to the fact that people are more receptive to other cultures’ values and traditions. I hold the view that it is a good development as it will unite the world to form a more meaningful bonding.

[@LilieIELTS]

You did a good job in terms of paraphrasing. Just delete 'relative to the past'.

[@jayrangani2671]

The similarities between the cultures around the world is growing more than ever before. The possible reason could be the inclination towards adopting a different culture. To my of thinking, it is a positive change.

[@beatstiqs]

Nowadays, there are more similarities between cultures globally than there used to be. This is happening because there has been marriage between people of different cultural history leading to a blend of different cultures and traditions. This is a positive development as it reduces tribal wars.

[@boyunsamana]

Thank you for this tips... it helps me understand what paraphrasing is.

[@azizshaikhpk]

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[@LilieIELTS]

Thank you, I will do my best!

[@Dailylifeuwu567]

Cultures around the world seem to become more familiar than ever before.As people travel more and more parts of the world , they get to experience about the cultural aspects of countries all over the globe. It is certainly a positive attitude since people gain more knowledge and can respect each other's religion.

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, "familiar" doesn't mean the same as "similar". Try "alike'.

[@Dailylifeuwu567]

@@LilieIELTS thank you

[@kuldeepsharma-os4ld]

May god bless you for providing such a beautiful information. It will be of great use for most of people that includes me as well. I have been watching your videos for a quite a while now. And i gotta admit, all the videos are so well explained. Thank you so so much for your efforts. Keep up the good work. I sincerely request you to upolad videos on how to group pie data together. I would really appreciate it if you would help us more. Thank you once again. And you have a very beautiful voice.

[@LilieIELTS]

Really appreciate the kind words. The next video will be a line graph video. I'll try to make a pie chart video this month.

[@kuldeepsharma-os4ld]

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[@sanjarbeksadriddinov6674]

​@@LilieIELTS Hi! Lilie I've been watching your videos recently My exam is near please help me🤲. Is this paraphrase true down below Children facing academic, social and commercial pressures. Causes and solutions -some academic, social and commercial activities that make children feel pressure. There are some reasons why this is happening and steps to tackle them

[@palomamartinez5948]

There is a tendency around the world to have similarities with each other. This essay might discuss some reasons about the change and why is a positive movement to the earth.

[@inderjotsingh5868]

Nowadays, worldwide similarity between different cultures is increasing. Globalization and rise of internet are most plausible reasons behind this prevailing phenomenon. However, in my perception it has negative consequences,in terms of loss of culture and traditions.

[@Se.mu01]

This is what band 6 looks like. Overcomplicating, I bet you are Hindi.

[@ar6487]

@@Se.mu01what does being a hindi does with that 😂😂 anyways can you pls help me often abt writing if you know much abt it i need a desperate help :(

[@Se.mu01]

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[@rika-a2304]

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[@khanjasmin3313]

Help me also with writing module

[@IsholaGloria]

The akin between the cultures around the society is increasing than ever before. it is a positive development as it promote peace in the society

[@MatutoCorner]

Cultural similarities are being apparent now than it was before. This has an overall positive impacts in our society, as we are becoming more inclusive and united.

[@ghoniyyahakintilo2776]

Around the the world, cultures has now becomed more similar than it was before. Thank you for this video.

[@LilieIELTS]

... have now become...

[@muhammadmushtaq7908]

Has now become...Not becomed? Am I correct?

[@BigBros123]

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[@luckylaxman4391]

In these world cultures have now become more similar than it was long ago

[@natasa674]

Cultures across the globe starting to look a like which wasn't a case. What is the reason? Do you think whether it is good or bad thing? Can we say it like that?

[@itspeewee2452]

Every culture all over the world are much alike now compared in the past. One of the reason why is this happening is because of the social media. People around the world share their beliefs and cultural experiences, and finding out that most of the doings of every culture are the same. It has a positive effects for everyone because they're now aware of what other cultures experienced and what are their beliefs.

[@badhanpaul9110]

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[@haoheanchan1763]

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[@vahorasujan5037]

In the contemporary era,cultural similarities is widely seen in most countries of the world.The reason behind this event has several positive and negatives.This will be explained in further paragraphs

[@miriamdiala4149]

There is cultural similarity around the globe than in the past.

[@BigBros123]

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[@rohitparajuli7165]

It is universally accepted that the culture seems familiar in all nation nowdays .I strongly believe that it is positive change for the development

[@bill-kissabdul-razaq621]

Worldwide cultural activities have become almost the same than it is in the past. I personally believe this is a great change as it will bring more development and cooperation between nations.

[@reybadiola4057]

Around the globe, there are more similarities in cultural beliefs than ever before. Maybe one of the reasons is that, because of the technologies, for example, social media, we can easily adopt the cultures of other countries by watching them online. I think this is a positive development because we can transmit cultural ideas in just a few minutes of our time.

[@go.nightfury]

It is true that there is a growing number of culture in many countries' have been becoming show more similarity than ever before. I personally agree with these due to people are getting more attractive to others culture .

[@skuya6753]

The globalization in this era many similarity among cultures in various county grow more much

[@PinayInOz]

Hi Lilie, I just stumbled upon this video of yours today. I am so amazed how you explained the process of paraphrasing clearly! Thank you. Compared to the past, there are now increasing similarities among cultures in different parts of the world.

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, there are no errors but 'compared to' may be better than 'compared with' in this context: books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=compared+to+the+past%2Ccompared+with+the+past%2C&year_start=1800&year_end=2019&corpus=en-2019&smoothing=3

[@PinayInOz]

@@LilieIELTS Yes, compared to is more appropriate. Thanks again. You're a blessing to us who are taking IELTS exam. Kudos to making brilliant videos!

[@PinayInOz]

@@LilieIELTS By the way, I have read somewhere that 'compared to' is used for dissimilar things while 'compared with' is used for similar things. Wishing you infinite success in your endeavors!

[@paulsoneldho6152]

In recent times,culture show many similarities on one another in diffrent corners of the world,because of increase in tourism,and in my opinion it is a positive sign of progress.

[@jawadahmed-j6d]

Nowadays, there are more alike cultures around the world than ever before. I think travelling and media play an important in this and believe it's a positive development.

[@minhchautruongvo5697]

It is believed that the world cultures share more similarities than they used to be because of the growing of the Internet. I think this wide spread phenomenon would benefit intercultural working environment.

[@AcquilasBeula]

Thank you for the information it is much helpful! Answer to the task provided: Cultures worldwide are increasingly becoming more alike than they have ever been in the past. What's going on? What is your opinion on whether this is a good or bad change?

[@hardeepbajwa1745]

It is often argued that museums are not required to acquire historical as well as cultural Information as masses can get easily via internet .Co vessels,I opine that unlike places online information is way much better and I will articulate notions in forthcoming paragraphs

[@uroojayesha]

There is so much similarity in the cultures of different countries of the world today it is because of Internet and increase in travelling across the countries of the world it is a it is positive development as more people can accept differences of each other and become one to make a world beautiful place to live in

[@aungkyawzin1240]

In recent years, cultural similarities have been increasing in various countries. It is in my opinion that this is a positive development because people are beginning to accept different cultures in their regions.

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, "various countries" don't mean the same as "around the world". You don't need to change every single word. If you're not sure how to rewrite a phrase, it's okay to use the original wording.

[@조바이든-r6r]

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[@조바이든-r6r]

Local cultures surrounding us become more globalized and more synchronized with foreign cultures than past. is it better?

[@sujangautam1927]

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[@DouaeLfellahi]

The world cultures's are changing from similarless to more similar. What's the reason of that? What's your oponion about this développement ?

[@MoHdMoId]

There are many cultures around the globe which has now become homogeneous compared to before. In my view, it's a great way of positive growth in people's thoughts.

[@outcasttv2976]

There are more cultural similarity that can be found around the world . This is happening due to various aspects like booming of internet , Travelling and many more. I think it's a positive development.

[@alchemist3938]

Nowadays we can observe the similarities between the cultural believes around the world, which has never seen in past eras. According to my opinion it due to influence of social media and other platforms which has helped traditons to reach to everyone and it is a huge positive for humanity.

[@abukaradenelmi2367]

There is a growing similarities among diverse cultural values across countries

[@emanandmusic5255]

An increasing similarity between cultures is witnessed these dags across the world

[@TM-mp6gm]

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[@adityakapil274]

Nowadays, cultures all over the world are become more similar than never before.The reason behind this event has several postive and negative.

[@LilieIELTS]

are becomING

[@mahraahmed1617]

In this day and age cultures similarities are often associated together as compared to previous generations. This is a common occurrence among our generation since sharing cultures in technology, networks, and media platforms.

[@shahi_1]

Hi you wrote informal instead of information 2:10 .

[@ravioza7100]

In recent years, there have been more similarities increasing between cultures all around the globe than ever in the past. In my opinion, it is completely a positive development, and its reasons will be articulated in upcoming paragraphs along with the conclusion.

[@LilieIELTS]

In recent years, there have been more similarities among cultures around the globe than ever before.

[@DorothyJolly-z2u]

There is a belief that cultural activities are trending to be the same than before. I think this development is occurring because people are imitating other cultures.

[@dhanrajsingh7778]

There have been more similarities than ever before in terms of cultres across the globe. I believe that this is a positive advancement

[@LilieIELTS]

It's better to be concise. How about: globally, there have been more cultural similarities than ever before?

[@manishas807]

It seems different cultures from the world are becoming more alike than olden days. There are many cultures around the world which seems to be more familiar with each other in recent days.

[@leanh524]

Cultures of countries around the world are sharing more similarities than ever before. Thanks a lot for your channel. It is a great help for my IELTS test preparation.

[@LilieIELTS]

Cultures around the world are...

[@rwiqaref]

There is no denying the fact that there is a significant growing in the similarties among the cultures around the world. While it is commonly held belif that it is a negative trend, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider it as an unhelpful trend that may lead to negative consequenses.

[@I-just-post-random-things]

Cultural understanding around the globe are showing vast similarities now a days ,to my view bonding with different culture can lead to better outcome in our society

[@Iskandarov_Faxriddin]

In recent years , there has been more cultural similarities than past .

[@pattapusai3647]

In recent years , there are so many similarities in cultural activities throughout the world. In my personal view this consequences creating good relationship among the people world wide.

[@pattapusai3647]

Hi

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, 'so many' and 'cultural activities' are not accurate paraphrases. There are INCREASING/MORE AND MORE similarities AMONG WORLD CULTURES. Hope it helps.

[@mcfrancisgist]

In recent years, there are similarities among cultures worldwide than has ever been. Reasons for this will be discussed alongside my opinion on whether it's a good practice or not.

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, you forgot the words "more" and "there": There are MORE similarities among cultures worldwide than THERE have ever been.

[@MelodiousZahra]

Nowadays, many cultural trends are showing similarities compared to what we have in the past. This essay will discuss the cause of the event and why it could give some drawbacks on a country's traditional heritage.

[@priyabalraj451]

Hi lilie It is irrefutable that these days , cultures are similar and it can be seen more common among people everwhere.This is happening for many reasons , mainly people are curious and have an interest to explore them.However,i strongly believe that seeking abd practising new culture would give a way to unite people.

[@blessinginegbenehi9395]

Recently, there be similarities in cultural activities around the globe. This era of technology, such as internet contributes to the cultural diversity, am in support of the positivity that this has brought, by creating a bond between developed and undeveloped country.

[@LilieIELTS]

Recently, there have been more cultural similarities around the globe.

[@faithemake3157]

There are similarities between cultural practices globally in the recent times,other than decades ago.This easy tends to discuss the both sides and i will give my view in the subsequent paragraphs.

[@khizerghouri]

It is said that Cultures among the globe are becoming same than ever before, in my point of view this is positive development because similar cultures lead to world connected with each other and people understanding norms well if they will go to foreign countries.

[@LilieIELTS]

... are becoming MORE ALIKE than....

[@tajulshaheen3706]

There are so many similarities can be found in cultural events around the world, which could not seen before.

[@悲しい魂-r4m]

Cultures from different Nation has become much similar than it was back then. Which is quite unbelievable because the world is very diverse.

[@LilieIELTS]

Cultures of different nations are becoming more alike than they were previously.

[@悲しい魂-r4m]

@@LilieIELTS Thank you so much miss! Means a lot.))

[@chiomauzoechi9893]

Nowadays, similarities among cultures, globally, are significant

[@gfadhilla]

Globally, cultures are getting more similar than they used to be. Note: this is my first attempt at paraphrasing lol I'm so struggling

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, you did a good job. Alternatively, you can say "are becoming more ALIKE".

[@AayushMahat-jn1yy]

It is believed that culture around the globe are becoming more alike than ever before the question is, is it positive or negative development.

[@jasmeenarora8745]

In recent years, cultural have been changing around the world. The reason behind is that people follow there tradition. According to my view there is caused by positive growth.

[@ngozibernard3825]

Nowadays, there tend to be an increasing cultural similarities among countries of the world. This is probably due to globalization and increase in tourism which has exposed people to other cultures, values and beliefs. I believe that this is a positive development because it will breakdown barriers as well as foster unity.

[@dilshatzinurov9093]

There is an increasing cultural similarity between nations of the world. Does it work?

[@Iamtrishna8]

In recent times, there seem to be increase in similarities between the cultural aspect around the world.

[@nepcad9935]

As the whole world is changing into a small global village, there seems to be more similarity in culture all around the world than it was before (Plz rate this miss) .

[@LilieIELTS]

I don't think u need the first clause.

[@boburziyoyev3655]

thanks really useful video

[@RupinderKaur-jn6re]

It has recently been observed that there is a similarity of cultures across the globe.I believe fast modes of travel and internet are the two predominant factors behind the cultural homogeneity and certainly it is a negative development as it will adversely affect the tourism and economy of many nations.

[@goodstudyqaq]

Compared with the past time, there are more similarities in cultures around the world. thanks for your video. It is really helpful!

[@LilieIELTS]

compared with the past (not 'the past time').......among cultures (not 'in'.....)

[@goodstudyqaq]

@@LilieIELTS LOL, thanks!

[@alansaji2107]

Cultures among the world are becoming more similar ever before.. In my opinion there are people who are trying to adopt others culture... This is the reason for it.................. Lilie mam is there any problem?

[@tselmune]

Similarity of cultures around nations are increasing rapidly. i wrote it with my own :)

[@rameshneupane7683]

Presently the cultural of around the world are becoming now more familiar than the before!! I just try it coz m really bad at paraphrasing

[@LilieIELTS]

Try this: cultures around the world are becoming more alike now than ever before.

[@07.nguyeninhtuanat42]

It is acknowledged that there will be have more similarities about cultures among the nations all around the globe than in the past.

[@sahermehboob2316]

It can be seen that similar culture becoming more common in many counties than before.

[@LilieIELTS]

... similar cultureS ARE becoming ...

[@kasuni1988]

A similar culture is shared globally now unlike the past.

[@LilieIELTS]

Similar cultures are ...

[@caristarchikwanda8781]

It is certainly true that world wide there are a number of similarities with regard to culture now than ever before.

[@Tamangbibek]

At the present time, there is a significant increment in cultural similarities more than ever before between different countries on the planet earth.

[@sharinabastidas5702]

Hey Lilie!! Thank you so much for these tips. I hope you read my paraphrase. xoxo There are many similarities with cultures around the world. This is happening because of the increase in migration that causes a mixture of traditions.

[@masterjericho9026]

That's nice, Undetectable AI is the best tool for me it byoassed my essays by rewriting it

[@sanzubalami7514]

in the contemporary era, the cultural activitis are being alike between the countries from different part of world.

[@sudlahuu6293]

There is a change in culture which become much more similar around the world.

[@amritakaur1585]

Technology has had changed our life drastically. It’s undoubtedly believed that internet has abundance of material regarding museums.Some people argue that in reality we no longer needed the physical museum because internet is giving the subject knowledge particularly for history and culture basis.

[@kumogaming8738]

Nowadays technology made a lot easier too access over the pictures of historical and cultural sites. While, deu to high cost and difficulty to get tickets museum is losing its popularity. I partially agree with this statement and provide my own relevant example.

[@sanjarbeksadriddinov6674]

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[@lovedoram5358]

Nowadays, it is common to witness that similarities between variety of cultures are only increasing. In my opinion, benefits of this process conterbalance the negative sides and in this essay I will explain why.

[@LilieIELTS]

Nowadays, it is common to witness that similarities among world cultures are increasing. (I don't think "it is common to witness" is necessary.)

[@aadildeva2657]

It is more often argued that similarities in different cultures are increasing at an alarming rate but in my opinion it is a positive development as advanced technology is getting introduced like Robotics, Machine Learning, Artificial Intelligence, Digital Banking etc. With this development it has changed the life of everyone. Nowadays with the help of AI you can operate a machinery while sitting at your home, you can transfer your money by a single click from your cell phone etc…

[@abhilashreddygangadasu5895]

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[@baihaqi.r.a.7637]

In recent times, there are more cultural similarities across the world than at any time in history

[@shahinoorshahan2630]

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[@нурпаяссултанов-й2л]

It is currently still becoming more common in cultural stereotypes comparing to previous one.

[@adityanarayan5943]

it is being said that similarities between the cultures are getting more common on a global scale than before.

[@bruddaboy20]

There is a similarity of cultures across the world which has become highly common than ever before. Someone tell me if that's correct

[@9.244]

Cultures are beginning to be more similar than past centuries, this caused by globalization impact around the globe. I'll discuss about disadvantages and drawbacks of development, from my perspective, this similarity is positive on country's development

[@АянайИсабекова]

In the contemporary world, the culture widespread similarity becoming more common than in the ancient times

[@manjeetrajinder7524]

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[@mechan1996]

A huge similarities are observed in terms of culture globally due to people studying aboard or go for a trip and programs like cultural exchange shows

[@Cricket-studio379]

There is a cultural similarities are more enhance in recent decades as compared to previous era.This is because of advancement in technology,internet and other social media platforms.

[@samjhanawaiba7229]

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[@crystalevans510]

It is a fact that recently we have been seeing more similarities than ever before among cultures. There are many reasons for this, mainly globalisation. I think this is a negative development for traditions of a culture but a positive one for the unity of humanity

[@LilieIELTS]

we have been seeing more similarities among world cultures than ever before