學員是馬來西亞的牧師,發來這個連結,水流之音聖樂團是我常常聽的,但這首詩聽後,在課堂上給學員們的分享,也在這裡回饋,供水流之音生樂團參考,或者可以回饋給填詞者: 副歌的求賜炭火將我鍛煉,雖然與上半句奉獻的祭壇最後一字押韻,但炭火語出以賽亞書第六章,那裡的意思不是鍛煉,而是潔淨我們的罪(嘴唇不潔),個人以為煉淨會比鍛煉好,雖然我們也需要經過或的熬煉(彼得書信),但熬煉是為了煉淨我們。 副歌那裡講到“主你揀選我,是因恩憐,我揀選你是為償願”,個人以為雖然約翰福音15章那裡的確耶穌說不是你們揀選了我,是我揀選了你們,但在教義上,揀選是神學專有名詞,用在神的恩召和揀選,所以如果要講我們信徒回應神,倒不如改為:“主你揀選我,是因恩憐,我跟從你、或我選擇你,或我順服你(的呼召),心被恩感”,如果不考慮押韻,就可改為“主你揀選我,是因恩憐,我跟從你,乃因感恩” 第二段講到“只是我心早有所屬,讓他們去盡力佔有”後半句的他們,是指世人嗎?如果是,前面第二段開始已經講到了眾人蜂擁汲汲營求那些亨通大路,這裡就不需重複,為了與第一句對應“世間雖有亨通大路,眾人蜂擁汲汲營求”,那麼第二句就應該講到我們信徒與世人對比的信徒部分,而非回到他們(讓他們去盡力佔有),而是我們信徒這部分的盡力、汲汲營求,所以建議可改成“只是我心早有所屬 要得主所得著我的”,當然,如果不考慮押韻的話。 接下來那句 “主,我已經蒙你聖別”,建議改成 “主, 既蒙你分別為聖,我專一服事你/或我聽憑你差 遣” 下一句 “你手掌管我的一切,使它全部用在新路”,建議改成:“我一生你全權掌管,求使用使多人蒙福” 第三段“香膏只能枉費一次”,枉費二字,似乎用在主的身上不合宜,可以考慮改成傾倒,或耗盡,那就看世人和信徒要選擇把寶貴香膏耗盡在哪裡。 最後是提問:當我們把原創的曲拿來填新詞時,不知是否有徵得原作者的同意?畢竟個人改編,在家唱唱,沒有問題;但若要發表公眾聆聽,就涉及版權。我想,台灣乃尊重版權的,基督徒也是尊重版權,應該沒有問題,是我多慮了。 This is my two-sent opinion, hope I did not offend anyone. Thank you for your time, and God bless you all.
Lord, You chose me, ’twas mercy and grace; Gladly I choose Thee, to repay. 应该是报答的意思吧,我也是到这有疑问去找了英文版❤
@tammychen24212 ай бұрын
1. Worldly affairs encumbered me; till the Lord said, “Come, follow Me!” I was exhausted, faltering; still He called and would not leave me be; At once, when I responded: “Yes!”, He shined His glad’ning ray! Glory, rest, shouts of praise fill all my days as I follow on His way. 2. Though in this world a way exists Filled with crowds with greatness obsessed; My heart already is possessed, let those who would take it try their best; Lord, I’ve been sanctified by Thee, For God alone I’m meant, My all is in Your sovereign hand, all for the new way to be spent. 3. No man can serve two masters, from God and the world seek reward, Whether ’tis spent or whether reserved, ointment can but once be outpoured; Lord, You’re my only one true love, I’d ne’er repent nor swerve. Lord, You alone are worthy of all my life and all my love. Upon this altar of consecration, supply the flame; refine me, I pray; Lord, You chose me, ’twas mercy and grace; Gladly I choose Thee, to repay. The days of this life don’t seem that special, but the earth to heaven they join; In Your smile’s delight, I fix my sight, running towards th’ eternal crown. 当我正为事务忙碌,主对我说来跟从我 疲乏之中我仍踌躇,他又呼召不肯放过 喜乐光明立即涌出,在我答应之时 荣耀安息加上欢呼,在我一路跟随日子 世间所有亨通大路,众人蜂拥汲汲营求 只是我心早有所属,让他们去尽力占有 主我已经蒙你圣别,专一为神用途 你手掌管我的一切,使他全部用在新路 一人不能事两个主,要神又要世界赏赐 不是保留就是倾注,香膏只能枉费一次 主你对我乃是真爱,无悔爱你不改 让我天天向你表白,惟你配得我命我爱 副歌 我再次筑起奉献的祭坛,求赐炭火将我锻炼 主你拣选我是因恩怜,我拣选你是为偿愿 这一生岁月看似无稀奇,竟是把地连结于天 主你的笑容,是我欢喜 定睛奔向永世冠冕
@brhuang18484 жыл бұрын
阿門,主你揀選我是因恩憐
@闕進雄-e6x2 жыл бұрын
感謝主❤️
@chenpenchao9581 Жыл бұрын
我要用絲弦樂器讚美 祂
@poetrasamoeel2 жыл бұрын
阿們感謝主耶穌基督,阿們
@闕進雄-e6x Жыл бұрын
神愛世人❤
@yalegusmle4 жыл бұрын
Beautiful serving and blessings!
@a1247828 жыл бұрын
張葉彬說 話 : 主.你揀選我是因恩憐.我是何等不配,蒙您揀選.
@nicoong3742 Жыл бұрын
Haleluyah Praise The Lord 🙏
@蔡定融-j1q5 жыл бұрын
好聽的斯
@林育信-u2e5 жыл бұрын
Thanks Lord's.
@jennyzh14875 жыл бұрын
这是和撒那的曲子,只是把歌词改了
@greece93418 жыл бұрын
我再次築起奉獻的祭壇,求賜炭火將我鍛鍊
@leedongsha6 жыл бұрын
阿們
@暗香晚风5 жыл бұрын
阿门
@Prayers2023 Жыл бұрын
最后一句最好改一下,人有什么资格拣选上帝呢,只有上帝拣选人。
@Prayers2023 Жыл бұрын
借鉴上面网友,可以改成:主.你揀選我是因恩憐.我是不配,蒙您揀選. 歌词字数正好也押韵
@healthy_palace9 жыл бұрын
Lord Jesus, you chose me because of your mercy, but I chose you for award.
@runtowin92317 жыл бұрын
Serina Xin hi sister we have an English group for Christians on LINE (app), we share hymns, the word of God and spiritual messages every day,would you like to join us? Please add me if you would like to join us, my LINE ID is : 0_opandao_0
Is it possible to get the SATB scores for this arrangement? It is so beautifully arranged!
@danielpan1348 Жыл бұрын
阿门
@daviD-ek9ms4 жыл бұрын
great !
@omgjt15 жыл бұрын
【拣选】 当诗班员在唱的时候 我心中响起以下这首诗歌 【祢是荣耀的君王】 ------------------------------------------------------ 你是榮耀的君王,你是和平之主, 你是天地萬有主宰,惟有你聖潔公義; 天使都向你跪下,敬拜尊崇你; 因為在你有永生之道,你是主耶穌基督。 和散那歸於大衛的子孫!和散那歸於萬王之王! 願榮耀歸於至高神,耶穌是彌賽亞! [ You are the King of Glory ] You are the King of Glory, You are the Prince of Peace, You are the Lord of heaven and earth, You're the Son of righteousness; Angels bow down before You, worship and adore, For You have the words of eternal life, You are Jesus Christ the Lord. Hosanna to the Son of David! Hosanna to the King of kings! Glory in the highest heaven for Jesus the Messiah reigns. --------------------------------------------------- 要以创造性的诗歌赞美上帝 上帝太伟大 只有上帝配得敬拜赞美 人不配赞美上帝 (蒙主怜悯悦纳垂听) 如果没有圣灵感动新的创作 老老实实的唱弟兄姐妹“灵感”的创作 不要尽唱些什么 改歌词 改歌曲 乱七八糟的圣诗 以致基督徒在敬拜赞美的事上都不能 同心合意 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 求上帝赦免我 恐怕我话多了