"A Night in the Hospital" by EmpyrealInvective - Creepypasta

[@Nudhul]

When "the man" showed up at the room I immediately knew who it was and cringed when he was let in.

[@CreeparoniTime]

+Nudhul “Noodle” me too.. the suspense killed me there because I knew bad things were happening..

[@elizabethescobedo316]

Nudhul CAN U NOT SPOIL IT OMG

[@micheuala]

I knew it was him......

[@rachel_v_k]

Once again, you have brought this wonderfully written story to life! 😁 I started getting nervous when that guy showed up and claimed to be her father. Something about him seemed sketchy! Maybe they can get some fingerprints from the hospital room where he "visited" Christina...or they can search the area where she was found after running...😰 Why didn't they move Christina after the kidnapper showed up? The security guard is not the only one here who messed up!

[@CreeparoniTime]

I work in a hospital and agreed with a statement by the narrator fellow "with a little more training in protocol" he would have been better prepared.. so true!!

[@bradleykars6817]

I was honestly MAD when she let someone in without police consent like WTF

[@CreeparoniTime]

+Bradley Kars yes, and the author said it's based on a real experience for him :/

[@jennifermommy9373]

Creeparoni ***spoiler alert to first time listeners***, no, no, no. I don't know if I can take that it's based on a true story. I seriously hope it is loosely based and that the real child is OK at home with their parents. It would almost bring me to my knees to think otherwise. Lie to me Creeparoni...

[@jaxgallagher911]

SPOILERS:Jesus, that is just fucked right up. I loved the fact that she was being interviewed by the police, I figured she was just recounting her story like most creepy pastas. Great story, and good accent too.

[@CreeparoniTime]

thank you ^_^ hope you find more you like here!!

[@erikponciano]

it's a short tale of incompetence.

[@CreeparoniTime]

+erikponciano forreal though!

[@erikponciano]

Creeparoni I meant the characters in the story, if there is a misunderstanding. It's not just the main character. They probably have the man in the video surveillance. They have the girl in custody and she still got retaken, They never discovered the abductors hideout. It's one huge blunder fest.

[@heidi681]

Perfect comment... honest :)

[@DustWarden]

WHOA WHOA WHOA. Whoa. Wonderful, by which I mean utterly horrifying. EmpyrealInvective never fails, in my experience, nor does Creeparoni.

[@lizzieisbaked]

Hospitals aren't scary, they're peaceful. But this was an enjoyable story so good job x

[@CreeparoniTime]

thanks!! ^_^

[@jeanfye2001]

Wow completely messed up..: so great horror story!

[@CreeparoniTime]

thank you, i liked how twisted it was :)

[@AntiqueAngel44]

"Like flies over a shit heap." Ha-ha.

[@CreeparoniTime]

i too enjoy that phrase :)

[@daughterofthewolf2252]

To believe people do this in real life not just stories sickens me. When he whispered in her ear I knew it was him and cringed so hard at those words he told her. It really makes you question humanity.

[@DawnFire05]

She should have just looked the girl up on Wikipedia and followed the page to who her father was to see if the guy was actually her father or not

[@Cordelia-again]

Superb narration!

[@moonlightmadness5849]

i hope you continue this story

[@RageTyrannosaurus]

This story is depressing.

[@jennifermommy9373]

OMG! seriously?! ***SPOILER ALERT***....I know these stories are fiction but they r so well written n told. This story knocked me heart sick and had tears in my eyes. You are to good at your job, hun. I guess that's a chance I take when I listen to these narrations that every so often I'll hear a story that makes me wish I could turn back the clock and rewrite a happier ending. Yes, I know how ridiculous wishing for a happier ending sounds when I'm commenting on a creepypasta but sometimes these stories are too realistic, too well written and too well told. It hits your heart in its softest place. So I guess this is a compliment to you and the author, lol. You have both broken my heart for this fictional girl. xoxo

[@CreeparoniTime]

thanks so much for your kind words, jennifer!! empyrealinvective is an amazing author, and i hope that you also enjoy some of his other works i've narrated :D

[@g1rldraco7]

The fuck happened here man?!?!?! Very disturbing :o

[@CreeparoniTime]

+LadyDraco87 I know! Empyrealinvective has some of the most jarring pastas I've read

[@nehabhatnagar4858]

wow amazing story!!

[@CreeparoniTime]

thank you! I thought it was super twisted ^_^

[@TheJdaldridge]

You really need to get picked up by Chilling Tales for Dark Nights!

[@CreeparoniTime]

+Joshua Aldridge thank you very much!! ^_^

[@Pibbmasta]

Hi Creeparoni! Would you be able to tell me the background music you used for this video? I really like it along with the story you narrated!

[@CreeparoniTime]

thank you!! i actually believe i did this one on my old computer that bit the dust earlier this year.. so i'll check to see if there's somewhat i can locate the audio. i know i got the music from audiomicro..

[@Pibbmasta]

Thanks! Audiomicro huh - i'll look into that myself, maybe I could find some other good tracks there too! Honestly I really like the music you use for a lot of y our videos, so maybe ill find more there haha.

[@deanroodt]

1000 SUBS YAY!!

[@CreeparoniTime]

thank you!! ^_^

[@deanroodt]

I still think you deserve more but you are growing sooo fast

[@BrothersJacksonVideos]

This was messed up, a great read on your part :)

[@CreeparoniTime]

thank you!! :D it is super disturbing, huh??

[@BrothersJacksonVideos]

+Creeparoni Yeah the ending was really messed up, it was a well written Creepypasta, that was delivered fantastically :)

[@Armazillo]

Cool video

[@CreeparoniTime]

thank you :)

[@EmpyrealInvective]

Thanks for the narration (creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/A_Night_in_the_Hospital). I liked the Southern drawl you added to it. As always, you did a good job with it. Sadly enough, the story was based on an experience about back when I was hospital security when an abusive father sweet-talked his way into the ER to visit his daughter. I wonder if you might have any interest in any of the other parts of the series (creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:EmpyrealInvective/My_Stories#Occupational_Hazards)? It's more of a theme of work-related horror stories than interconnected stories, but it might interest you.

[@CreeparoniTime]

thank you! the southern came when I read the word "boondocks" and it made me think of where I'm from. this narration is more close to my own speech. anyways, I really appreciate your feedback and would love to take a look at more of your work. your stories are really moving. I hate that this is based on a real experience. as a psychotherapist I totally identify with horrible stories being the normal.

[@EmpyrealInvective]

Luckily the guy left before the girl woke up (she had gone to sleep after being examined) and she was none-the-wiser, but that was the one moment that made me realize I was too ill-prepared for the job and resulted in me putting in my two weeks notice.

[@keithdunning3455]

👍

[@jackdiamanti6576]

That's some fucked up shit right there.... Good job narrating it though.

[@CreeparoniTime]

+Jack diamanti ikr!! Thanks for listening :)

[@dulcineaparker6469]

That's terrible

[@CreeparoniTime]

+Dulcinea Parker according to the author it's based off of a true friend, too :/

[@BlaqueCzar]

the accent was good the story was sort of lame though.

[@CreeparoniTime]

+BlaqueCzar thank you for listening :) if you like southern accents, the characters in "sisters of mayhem" are texans and it is pretty twisted