A Night to Remember | Fantasy Short Story

[@elizeallisonkorff977]

Nice story... ending could be better though

[@Queenofshortstories]

Sometimes I have trouble staying within my word count since I do short stories and especially this one I could have done better. Thank you for the feedback 😊

[@rosemariethompson2657]

Nice story, but ended too abrupyly.

[@Queenofshortstories]

I know I am sorry sometimes its hard to keep it short especially after this video I tried to make the videos a little longer ☺️

[@BobbieAtwood-bk7py]

@@Queenofshortstoriesgood, because one more minute would have been enough with your stellar storytelling!

[@delmatrevino3639]

Like vrry much

[@Queenofshortstories]

Thank you