A Preview of "Grounded" | Oct. 28 - Nov. 13, 2023

[@freewheeler8924]

I can't make the performance that weekend but I'll send a drone.

[@paules3437]

Ha!

[@captainbarbosa6567]

😂

[@paules3437]

Is "You won't be living on the base. There are no barracks on the base" good lyric writing?

[@benman1577]

Better than “the grey jeep is driving too fast”

[@biancacastafiore8760]

did you expect it to be in verse?

[@paules3437]

@@biancacastafiore8760 The use of rhyme in lyrics is a complex aesthetic choice. Usually, using what's called an "Identity" (the same word, like in "There's a bright golden haze on the meadow....") needs justification for not being a rhyme. Maybe this music was not meant to be rhymed.

[@freewheeler8924]

Here's a meticulously-crafted improvement: "You can't live on the base cos all your base are belong to us."

[@JWP452]

Not another one of these.......

[@Ace168Ace]

This looks totally unwatchable.

[@federicozimerman8167]

Time is flat, this sounds like Nixon in China from 40 years ago

[@Ace168Ace]

It’s so deeply unfair that she can’t pilot a fighter plane while pregnant

[@candy9986]

😂