IELTS Task 2 Writing Band 9 Ultimate Guide 2024

[@Abdicator]

Well, it is not hard to find an IELTS essay start with the template: "This paper will discuss ... , My writing will discuss ..." which is an absolutely terrible opening for a beginning.Not many examiners talks about this problem.

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[@HuuPhuocVN]

Can you give me a better way to start the essay?

[@lavanyaattili1995]

How about this essay will elaborate…?

[@Abdicator]

@@lavanyaattili1995 With that opening u can get a band less than band 5.In fact, we need a good paraphrasing of the question rather than rewriting it.This only makes your become worse :(

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[@PhongLe-rx1yf]

excuse me, can you explain the sentence is " but decrease consumption HELPS " means ( in conclusion )

[@geraltofriviaa9659]

​@@PhongLe-rx1yfit means people don't have to stop eating fast food for good, but they should simply eat less.( Fast food )

[@MohinurbonuMurodova]

Tomorrow, I have a main exam. Could you please answer my question? Did you write an essay after watching this video ? Or just you watched it before sitting the exam ?

[@patelshiv6781]

​@@MohinurbonuMurodovabro what is your score.?

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Hopefull

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Did you get your score or not yet ? mine is next month and I'm a little nervous

[@aparnaearla8199]

Thank you so much Sir! The way you explained each section, is very understandable and it has helped me a lot in the writing exam that happened a couple of days ago.

[@Aehelp]

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[@NodirbekMuhiddinov-no6sd]

Are you native english girl right?

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[@marvhan888]

It's so entertaining to watch you making corrections to the essay. So nice

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[@CraftsmenFilmProduction]

15:00 > Another problem to keep a balance in healthy food and some exercise can improve the body, not just to look good, but also to be healthy. Working out at the gym is tough to lose overweight, but they can do other activities instead of doing that, such as biking, hiking and doing exercises that can assist to develop the body. Some of the vitamins that a body needs, especially vitamin D. Score this please...

[@ieltsspeakingandwriting9170]

Another significant issue is maintaining a balance between healthy eating and regular exercise to improve overall health, not just appearance. While working out at the gym can be challenging for some, alternative activities such as biking, hiking, and other forms of exercise can also effectively support weight loss and physical fitness. Additionally, ensuring adequate intake of essential vitamins, particularly vitamin D, is crucial for maintaining a healthy body.

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[@anaceciliagaitan4625]

Now everything makes sense. Some mistakes mentioned were the advice of my language teachers at school 😅

[@AS_IELTS_HUB]

In body paragraph, the word after studies should be "show", because studies is a plural

[@abidhassanrayat4223]

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[@poojarao1770]

Thank you so much!! I didn’t practice writing at all and around an hour before my exam I went through this video and was able to score really well. Thank you once again ✨

[@hassanniaz09]

what was your score?

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[@ramachanderg.8266]

True..

[@haresakrami6855]

I had no idea about the first, second and third person's voice which I have learned from this video. thanks a world.

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Great. Thank you for the explanation

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[@ratnesh0307]

Thank you sir, I've my exam tomorrow...hoping for the best!

[@kevinkenny871]

what was your band score?

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[@zafarbazarov328]

@@STROKE1263 possibly ftom Uzbekistan

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[@Shwetay793]

How was your exam?

[@NiginaIkrom]

@@Shwetay793 hey it was gud thx but i didnt get my results yet

[@Levideosnet]

Hi. I have another recomendations. at 18:10 “studies show” instead of “studies shows” to match the plural subject. Use “the high number” instead of “the higher numbers” to avoid comparison and confusion. Use “is” instead of “are” to match the singular subject “the high number”. Use “exercising” instead of “excercises” to correct the spelling and the verb form. Add a comma after “junk food” to separate the two independent clauses. Is that correct?

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Thank u very much, You convey information so understandable❤️

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[@juvklucy]

Thanks sir, I was really confused because I didn't know many fancy words. But after watching this helpful video, I think I can get a high band.

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[@KirylMladenets-g5c]

Just want to clarify. You've said that we can't combine first and third person voice, but in the essay we analyzed here is exactly this combination of voices.

[@KirylMladenets-g5c]

And another question, is it necessary to write in the first person voice if in the essay question includes "To what extend do YOU agree?"

[@minhnhatvan2392]

@@KirylMladenets-g5c the question is literally asking YOU directly.However,it doesnt mean that you should use the second voice too.As the video mention,you could use either 1st person voice or 3rd person voice

[@emrekuslu4418]

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Excellent

[@itzarcade5141]

I cant write so much fancy vocabularies but i can decorate the sentances and then provide valid to the point details

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[@b0bursh0h]

Hello, I have a question for you 4:12 You said that we must not mix voices. But if the essay asks about our opinions, can we use the 1st person voice in the introduction and conclusion, and 3rd person voice for body paragraphs ?

[@MdRakibulHasan]

Yes, you can.

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I'm going to face for the ielts writing exam today and I'm very nervous as it's my first time. Hope everything will be fine. Sir, thank you for this great video

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How was your test

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@@asimbutt32090 it was good. I got 6.5 for writing just by following these yt videos

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Thank you for the wonderful teaching. You've gained a new subscriber. Sir, I want to ask in the aspect of writing with the voices. I didn't fully understand the third person voices. Is it something like, "This essay will"?

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This is a classic example of level 2 in HKDSE. After correction,that’s much better.

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Thank you so much

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You're most welcome

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Helpful!

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Glad you think so!

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My exam is tomorrow wish me luck..

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Go ahead 😊

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Score?

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[@lilkwinass5077]

thank u, sir! it was really understandable, but I could not image, that current essay really had band 6... when I started to read, I thought that it had band 5 as maximum..

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Thank you, this video is so helpful😍😍

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Glad it was helpful!

[@periwinkle_mingyutwinkle]

thank u teacher

[@can_do2024]

Thanks for all your great points but in fact the country that you are taking the exam really matters. In my country, Iran, unfortunately many examiners pay attention to academic and complex words. For example the band 6.0 that you read in the video will get 5.0 or even less in Iran I think there should be an option that if we have any doubt in the correction of our writing, we can report it to IELTS center in UK and they recorrect the paper themselves.

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I promise I will get a band 9

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