Beautiful translation. I would just like to say that བྱ་ངང་པ་ in English is better translated as swan. This makes the lyrics even more beautiful. In addition, I believe གཤོག་སྒྲོ་ཅན་མ་ better translates to wings or feathers. ཐུགས་རྗེ་ཆེ།
@tenzin8392202 жыл бұрын
Hello Stephen, thank you for your comment. Yes, I could see that I've made some errors on the lyrics. I will try my best on the next song 🙏
@givepeaceachance9402 жыл бұрын
@@tenzin839220 no problem, Tenzin la! Like I said it is great translation, I am still learning Tibetan myself.