What makes a good 30 mark essay - Gender and achievement

[@monerakifai6089]

Thank you sooooo much for this super helpful video! I have my sociology exam in two days and I was struggling in what to include in my 30 marker essay plan for gender and this really helped. Also, the way this student laid out their essay is very different to the structure my teacher taught (5 PACE paragraphs with into + conclusion). Which structure would you recommend is best?

[@numaruddin9607]

Hi how was the sociology exam, I have mine in two days and I was wondering if it was hard?