Mrbruff: "10-12 hours of study into this poem." Me: Instantly likes the video...
@Forflies8 жыл бұрын
Kinda wish you were my English teacher lol
@lowbudgetgamers42237 жыл бұрын
So do I.
@Ghost____Rider7 жыл бұрын
Forflies lol yeah if he was then I wouldn't have to do last minute cramming 😂
@-kye6 жыл бұрын
don't we all?
@sq18076 жыл бұрын
Forflies aren’t you rich anyway
@annonymous54416 жыл бұрын
same
@tanishaparekh86907 жыл бұрын
"as I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I take a look at myself and realise there's nothing left" lmao, great rapping skills
@gillysings37234 жыл бұрын
mc bruff on the mic yes eye
@dravidianalchemist3 жыл бұрын
cause ive been blasting and laughing so long that even my momma thinks that my mind is gone
@thanish52363 жыл бұрын
hello tanisha i have a similar name to you
@ethannation41087 жыл бұрын
Just another structural point that I made which could help people.The poem contains rhyme which mirrors the charging of the horses and men. There are several moments in the poem where there are lots of rhymes (e.g. "die" and "why", "shell" and "well"....). However, thee poem contains even more lines which do not follow a rhyme scheme, therefore losing the rhythm and tempo of the ballad. This could reflect the "shatter'd and sunder'd" soldiers who attempted to retreat from the charge. The rhyme which before reflected the trotting of the horses which the men rode on, now becomes almost non existent which reflects the death of not only the horses but also the men. Hope this helps. Would love to hear any improvements or other points to make.
@letiggo14486 жыл бұрын
I wrote that down. Thank you so much!
@epicgenius10146 жыл бұрын
Ethan Nation thank
@oliverbouchard14995 жыл бұрын
i really like this interpretation but i don't think it really fits. yes the end of stanza 4 has no rhyme but stanza 5 is full of it and both are describing the retreat. i suppose you could just comment of the lack of rhyme in stanza 4 but i feel that painting the entire poem with that rather broad interpretation isn't correct
@yazinal-janabi51995 жыл бұрын
Brilliant!
@drake-om7ir4 жыл бұрын
gezza
@crispylegion8952 жыл бұрын
I just want to say that the little song at 24:22 made me chuckle a little and lifted my mood whilst going through this little and very well picked out analysis. Thank you for that 🙂
@thatonekidonaboat1269 Жыл бұрын
gotta love some gangstas paradise!
@davidegedi884710 ай бұрын
I was absolutely shocked😂
@bynx39598 жыл бұрын
I struggle with English , but good at maths , the way you analyse the poems helps me analyse them as a sort of equation like mathematically. That might not make sense but , thank you
@mrbruff8 жыл бұрын
+Gripper great!
@bynx39598 жыл бұрын
mrbruff I might actually do well in my GCSE now
@mariacakulova92016 жыл бұрын
Bynx did u do well?
@thenight87985 жыл бұрын
@@mariacakulova9201 im guessing he failed
@tasfiasc42085 жыл бұрын
I’m the opposite
@daffytech83176 жыл бұрын
I too felt a sudden tremor in my heart at 26:50. The sudden commencing of Mr Bruff's mumble to a soprano rendered within me a discomfort which one could not give an explanation of in the ordinary words. My eyes balled out of their sockets on the strength and passion that was deployed by Mr Bruff, how one is blessed by such pleasant experiences, and in my remembrance always will be.
@hamzah7 Жыл бұрын
you've lost the plot mate is this what english literature does to people?
@Rybo65 Жыл бұрын
@@hamzah7 indeed good sir some people have lost the plot indeed
@Aadil_242 Жыл бұрын
@@hamzah7 🤣
@hamzasherasmat659310 ай бұрын
@hamzah7 I am afraid, *yes*
@ipretendtocare24806 жыл бұрын
One of my favourite poems. Didn’t click on it expecting this but couldn’t stop listening to you. Keep it up, marvellous teacher.
@mrbruff6 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@estellemccann15807 жыл бұрын
WOOO! I've completed the whole playlist of your videos on poetry! Thank you so so much for this, it means the world. I love the alternative interpretations in each video and the creativity, it's actually inspired me to do A level English literature, as i have found that i love analysing the depths and hidden meanings of a poem. So once again thank you so much! :)
@destiny-powerhouse32606 жыл бұрын
apart from watching his videos for power and conflict, how else would you recommend revising the power and conflict poems?
@auratownsend74766 жыл бұрын
destiny- powerhouse I’m literally doing this now and I’m just taking my own notes on what he’s saying aswell as making sure I include my own ideas. Labelling your poem analysis notes using SLICCE (Structure Language Ideas Context Characters Explore) is something I lovee to use when in poetry as it makes you talk about everything! X
@victord25206 жыл бұрын
same here lol
@krupajacob90168 жыл бұрын
This video had many points that we didn't cover in class....thanks a lot
@Sion67Productions8 жыл бұрын
The point you made about 'erred' was fantastic! Someone else may have suggested it but I'd never hear that at school! Thank you so much for these videos. We really didn't look at the poems enough and you're making it so much easier for me to understand them.
@mrbruff8 жыл бұрын
Thanks Sion
@Ikiguyy5 жыл бұрын
When I first read it, i thought of a similar idea. The "ered" sound sounds like "errmmm" or those other phrase that people say when they dont know what to say. This could reflect the people in power (plosives here should show power, followed by the "ered") and how they didn't know what to do, and so failed.
@Nightwatcher208 жыл бұрын
At first, I thought that this poem was just plain boring (repeating itself, nothing new etc.), but after watching your vid... I LOVE it now! It's actually really interesting! The context actually particularly helped since my English teacher practically skipped over it -_-... Thanks a lot!!!
@mrbruff8 жыл бұрын
+Nightwatcher 2.0 awesome!
@teamcori7 жыл бұрын
same
@prabasiva65447 жыл бұрын
same
@kaitlynmassey90746 жыл бұрын
It's the same here for me... the context given in this video has helped me understand this poem so much better!
@darrel67244 жыл бұрын
Ive always loved this poem
@elenajackman79407 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much Mr Bruff. You have saved my sanity and Literature grade during this stressful revision period. Thank you so much for everything you do.
@mrbruff7 жыл бұрын
+Ellie Jackman no problem
@DanMcKay7 жыл бұрын
"Back then if you were a rich, posh boy, you could buy yourself in and make big decisions - it was kinda crazy" *looks to 2017's America*
@mrbruff7 жыл бұрын
hahah
@fraochmataz5 жыл бұрын
woww
@abdullahelkafi62805 жыл бұрын
right i was thinking the same
@prabasiva65447 жыл бұрын
OMG I HAVE To admit that u are simply AMAZING It was really helpful as it was easy to UNDERSTAND - crystal clear Thank You sooooo much I dont know how to explain how much u helped me but THANK YOuuuuuuuuuuu so much for all your help
@mrbruff7 жыл бұрын
+praba siva thanks for that lovely message
@root23807 жыл бұрын
oi guys 60,474 views and only 950 likes?? give him at least a little validation if this saved ur english gcse
@j.19855 жыл бұрын
yeeeee
@molliebirbeck4 жыл бұрын
259,000 views and 4.4k likes now
@joshuaappiah7 жыл бұрын
you honestly have no idea how much you're helping people... I can't thank you enough Mr Bruff
@mrbruff7 жыл бұрын
+Joshua Appiah thanks!
@itsmike11225 жыл бұрын
omg im soo going to fail tomorrow! ;-; Save My Soul!
@salmayusuf38115 жыл бұрын
lol Same :(
@andrewhayes79125 жыл бұрын
If only i could have told you the poem that came up lol. Hope you got a good grade :D
@zakariyaibrahim12335 жыл бұрын
No one cares
@kashofficial57765 жыл бұрын
*He is Technically ur english teacher LMAO*
@ChrispyBoiYTP4 жыл бұрын
Did you do it?
@LonelyPandaBear7 жыл бұрын
could you say that the repetition of "canon...canon..canon" in the third and five stanaza show the futile cyclic nature of war?
@mrbruff7 жыл бұрын
yes!
@laylacakes17523 жыл бұрын
can u please explain more x
@avinator13558 жыл бұрын
26:49 hahahha laughed my arse off
@mrbruff8 жыл бұрын
+Avinator13 had to rewatch it to see what you meant. Forgot I mentioned Coolio
@liamexter8 жыл бұрын
Haha, I love how afterwards Bruff casually says: 'either one is valid' 😂
@dofflelover221b67 жыл бұрын
looooooooooooooooooooooooool
@ayushkedia26117 жыл бұрын
seemed like he got possed .lol😂😂
@josephjmurphy17186 жыл бұрын
Avinator13 same I love this guy 😂😂
@ld-ih3ht8 жыл бұрын
See, when I understand a poem like I do now after watching this, I really really enjoy this! :)
@mrbruff8 жыл бұрын
+Abby Lake great!
@naomi34474 жыл бұрын
@@mrbruff where was the draft of the draft of the poem found
@rachelalexander77627 жыл бұрын
This video blew my mind, we only went through the positive message the poem has praising the soldiers in class!
@nathanlawrence59397 жыл бұрын
Oh the memories, this was my favourite poem in the "conflict" anthology that we studied in 2016. I'm doing English now for A Levels, and I just wish that the poems were still like this! I miss doing GCSEs.
@mrbruff7 жыл бұрын
+Nathan Lawrence :)
@horacethecheese10097 жыл бұрын
Could you also say that 'volley'd and *thunder* 'd ; *storm* 'd at' is imagery of a violent storm that describes the enemy soldiers as an unbeatable surrounding force, such as the sky?
@willhobson27723 жыл бұрын
stealing this
@hiccup64423 жыл бұрын
@@willhobson2772 just thinking as a further point. the use of the natural adjectives to create the storm imagery is a semantic field. Nature is synonymous with good and natural and just. By creating the idea that the Russians were an unbeatable force like a surrounding storm it could also suggest that the light brigade was going against nature and therefore god himself. This could be criticism of following the archaic rules that lead to the soldiers deaths. You could use this as a contextual point about victorian Britains expectations as well as Tennysons beliefs about the church. Just a thought lmk what you think
@willhobson27723 жыл бұрын
@@hiccup6442 very interesting perspective, not sure I’d even be able to remember it all in exam though
@demsoc4206 жыл бұрын
"All that was left of them, left of six hundred" could be an ironic allusion to the war motto of "no man left behind" - the irony being how the soldiers were forced to flee without ensuring all were there and that the majority of soldiers on the battlefield were indeed left dead, within the Valley of Death
@NoodlesStageSpace4 жыл бұрын
I DONT KNOW WHO NEED TO HEAR THIS BUT LIKE THIS MANS VIDEO
@gejesgejesj41075 жыл бұрын
This is by far my favorite poem from the anthology. It really contrasted with the other solemn, grieving poems.
@mrbruff5 жыл бұрын
Yes I really like it too.
@tanveersandhu47965 жыл бұрын
26:49 absolute legend, hero
@rachelhumphreys37417 жыл бұрын
Love all the videos that Mr Bruff makes and find it really easy to make notes . Would appreciate all the knowledge Mr Bruff gives to people even more if it was on a Spotify podcast
@bee31628 жыл бұрын
my GCSEs are going to be in 2018 but I am already checking out your videos, thank you for breaking this down for me. Videos really help because its what I do with my life so these videos really help me remember everything!
@mrbruff8 жыл бұрын
+Erin great!
@veryfiedd4 жыл бұрын
Really found the video useful and I struggle quite a lot with poems, you made everything crystal clear and you've reduced stress that I've had for the incoming mocks and then GCSE's I got in a few months. Thank you so much.
@mrbruff4 жыл бұрын
Glad to have helped. Good luck!
@destiny-powerhouse32606 жыл бұрын
Sir, I am watching one of the Power and Conflict videos every day and am finding it very memorable. Thank you
@andrewansell96012 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this analysis. The historical background was fascinating as was the insight into the word 'wondered'.
@onwaya41939 ай бұрын
just wanna let you know youre still helping y11s now lol. mock exams in about a week and im doing really well watching these while i do my own thing
@emilysmith36266 жыл бұрын
Mr Bruff thank you so much! I am so bad at English Literature, especially poetry but your analysis has helped me so much to understand all of the poems! I'm going to do my exam in May and I'm sure you've helped a lot!
@GuyBurny6 жыл бұрын
same here
@sophiemoore71577 жыл бұрын
loved how this analysis was mainly focused on form and structure found it so useful!
@mrbruff7 жыл бұрын
good!
@7Idi0ts Жыл бұрын
24:24 damn Mr Bruff spitting straight fire also the pause afterwards I'm watching at 1.5 times speed and even I thought that pause was long just made everything sound better
@Alan-dd2bn7 жыл бұрын
WOW! Very helpful! I can now nail this poem in the head when writing about it! Thanks
@thomascarvellmusic37058 жыл бұрын
Thanks, helped me a lot. Best of luck with your channel.
@mrbruff8 жыл бұрын
+Tom Carvell (ThePianoLad) thanks
@igorkwiecinski72486 жыл бұрын
This was the best video I have ever watched on this website. Thank you so so much. God bless you.
@mrbruff6 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@sheebaakhtar33574 жыл бұрын
Me with my exam in a few hours while also in a global pandemic 👁 💧 👄💧👁
@littlethins45615 жыл бұрын
'I'm cancelling you'- Mr Bruff on Alfred Lord Tennyson's Marriage
@cyclenutter27152 жыл бұрын
Got this exam in just 12 days, never enjoyed poetry analysis so much! Thank you for all the key points and most of all for making it engaging :)
@mrbruff2 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@feifizheng99864 жыл бұрын
My English teacher asked us to watch this for coverwork and on the side she put a little note saying, and I quote, 'He raps at one point in the video!' That was pretty much the only reason our class watched this and suffice it to say, we were not disappointed.
@mrbruff4 жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@jemimathursz36106 жыл бұрын
omg this is amaaazingggggg!!!like i was so dreading revising this poem as it had no meaning but now..!!
@oliviaa79737 жыл бұрын
Thank u sooooo much Mr Buff, ur videos help me so much, getting help from these videos will defo reflect on my grades
@IzzyClennell6 жыл бұрын
Your variety of interpretations of dactylic dimeter are so mind blowingly clever! Thank you!
@nellex1475 жыл бұрын
The way i screamed when you got onto that oxford analysing, that is a crazy concept
@l-ja55976 жыл бұрын
This poem makes so much more sense now, thanks ever so much!
@tanishaparekh86907 жыл бұрын
"wondered" an amazing analogy
@ayushkedia26117 жыл бұрын
was really confused before😕🙁. Now I understudied the whole poem. thanks to mrbruff
@samcooke4077 жыл бұрын
loved the short interlude of rapping! i think it might actually help me remember :)
@cutescinerd37346 жыл бұрын
This is such a great analysis! Bought one of your revision guides to say thanks :)
@o.steinman38555 жыл бұрын
This used to be my least favourite poem, but you've really shed a new light on it
@mrbruff5 жыл бұрын
Great!
@jatsukiox81677 жыл бұрын
Who's last minute cramming everything for tmr
@manoorm46987 жыл бұрын
GlobalGamer TELL ME ABOUT IT😂😂😂
@simranpanesar28327 жыл бұрын
Jessica Sunuwar Yesss it's too much 😭😂
@ginge6416 жыл бұрын
So you guys got an extra month before your exams? Lucky bastards.
@PoprossRocks6 жыл бұрын
I know right
@jasminebarker62166 жыл бұрын
i only hav a week and im JUST going into gcse 0n0
@The-ch1rz6 жыл бұрын
If I were you, I'd speed up your audio. I'm listening at double speed and the message comes across perfectly in half the time
@jessicaharding1587 жыл бұрын
Absolutely wonderful! I was told by a friend that you are really helpful and she has gone on to get fabulous English grades, which I now hope to too. Thank you so much Mr Buff. :)
@mrbruff7 жыл бұрын
+Jess Harding :)
@imogen91377 жыл бұрын
'thank you for sticking with it': thank you for making it!! 😄
@pizzamanpezzz34385 жыл бұрын
Thanks for all the help your analysis helps me a lot 👍
@francescawatson72346 жыл бұрын
Also the 2nd half of the word “wondered” is “dered” which is like how they ‘dared’ to go in to the valley , the risk of it etc
@ellieheinsenxox24106 жыл бұрын
Your videos really do help me!!! Thank u!! I have much better understanding of the poems :)
@ploppolarbear33942 жыл бұрын
I've been revising the poems with my exams coming up soon, I dreaded revising this one, but you have made it so interesting and the Gangsters Paradise cameo was appreciated.
@anitataggart10548 жыл бұрын
Amazing piece of analysis. Thank you. My year 10 class will benefit greatly from your research. :)
@mrbruff8 жыл бұрын
+Anita Taggart awesome!
@jackhodgkinsontv23084 жыл бұрын
24:21 he was just sitting there in his room singing that and after just regretted it. I bet
@fizaowais24167 жыл бұрын
My English lit exam is today and I have spent my morning listening to this as prep 😄
@emilydaw30194 жыл бұрын
24:23 lil Bruf
@Username-ww2cd4 жыл бұрын
I can now write an entire essay on the word "wondered' 😂. I don't need to memorise the poem, just that.
@bredamaune20283 жыл бұрын
Thanks for this brilliant analysis.
@mezuk377 жыл бұрын
"All the world wondered" is also a quote from Revelation 13...Thank you for the analysis. I think this is my new favourite poem!
@mrbruff7 жыл бұрын
thanks!
@Joseph-ku4he4 жыл бұрын
Found this super helpful - everything you do! So informative and gets me through each week of home learning. Thank you very much Mr Bruff!
@jakeconery11317 жыл бұрын
You are truly a life saver keep it up!
@videocurios7 жыл бұрын
Superb Thankyou I have posted many of the greatest recitals from rare gramophone records of this poem at my videocurios channel,and have animated Tennyson reading his own poem at my poetryreincarnations channel. Mr Bruff your discussion of this poem has left me with a much better understanding of this poem which I consider to be the mother of all modern English language war poems. Stephen Crane's American civil war poem "War is Kind" is probably the mother of all modern anti war poems.
@ACTIVE_10-168 жыл бұрын
Thank you. I am about to teach this and listening to the video had make me identify more things than I thought of. I have the ebooks and they are amazing! Would recommend buying.
@mrbruff8 жыл бұрын
+Rees Skelly awesome. Thank you!
@mrbruff8 жыл бұрын
+Rees Skelly so glad to read that
@chelsea.kandemwa7 ай бұрын
When you talked about the dactylic meter Ihad no clue what that was but once hearing about it I'm definetly going to include this in my writing and im now so confident on this poem. This poem and Bayonet charge was my least favourite poems out of the lot but after watching this I am so interested in it. Kinda hoping this is what my exam will be on.
@mrbruff7 ай бұрын
That’s great!
@mollyrose81946 жыл бұрын
Get mr Bruff a record label
@lolaprice55976 жыл бұрын
Wow! Thanks again Mr Bruff!! Amazing
@ganrimmonimАй бұрын
I'm not sure why this popped up in my recommendations. It's a very interesting video BTW., it's certainly a powerful poem. I last read it at school, back in 1995 and found with only a couple of minor errors I could recite it from memory almost 30 years latter which really says something about it.
@mrbruffАй бұрын
That’s very impressive!
@tanishakalutota41883 жыл бұрын
I just want to say : THANK YOUUUU!
@oliviaelliott13336 жыл бұрын
This is amazing! First time I’ve made notes on one of the poems for gcses!:) I’m taking my gcses this year and am very nervous!
@riannejohnstone7 жыл бұрын
Thank you so so much this has been a huge help for my exam tomorrow 🙏🏻
@freddiehill15128 жыл бұрын
Wow I feel so intelligent now!! Im gonna rock these exams! Thanks Mr Bruff
@mrbruff8 жыл бұрын
+Freddie Hill great
@uthmanbinimran73955 жыл бұрын
Best analysis ever!!!!!!!!!
@Justme-od8lk4 жыл бұрын
Thank you Mr.bruff
@mrbruff4 жыл бұрын
You're welcome!
@sorbunnessa69668 жыл бұрын
Your videos are absolutely amazing! they are so helpful and it is helping me during my English work. Please make more!
@mrbruff8 жыл бұрын
+Sorbun Nessa new poem analysis every Saturday
@cybercab2 жыл бұрын
This analysis is excellent. Thank you. Thinking I should do an audio recording of this.
@eni8674 жыл бұрын
When he rapped, I paused the video, liked and subscribed, then carried on working
@nchowdhury74393 жыл бұрын
incredible video: the work put in clearly shows
@reynoldschris3627 жыл бұрын
Great video, continuing to help on my way to my great GCSE results ;) haha keep up the good work!
@TC-xx1sv6 жыл бұрын
Please not he was the POET LAUREATE NOT POET LAURETTE. This is a spelling error. You may be penalised. The correct spelling is : poet laureate
@tommyscott85116 жыл бұрын
Cramming all these videos is helped by putting it on 2x speed
@alicefran87437 жыл бұрын
This is SO AMAZING. Just spent 70 minutes sitting and pausing this to make a spider diagram. (Which I do with all your poetry videos!!). They help me understand the poem so much better. How many quotations would you recommend for learning from each poem? It's so stressful having to know each one in so much depth-especially when we're only going to have to write about two !!!
@elkay62637 жыл бұрын
I would say four quotations from each poem, and really good meaningful quotations, which is what I'm also doing. NEVER memorise about 10 quotations from each and just throw them in. Memorise four or five extremely meaningful from each poem and use them in the exam alongside structure and context, keeping in mind you only have 45 mins.
@jackharman45167 жыл бұрын
You make the soooooooooooo much easier, thank you
@chaitanyachakradeo22787 жыл бұрын
really ingenious - interesting analysis of both interpretations
@eni8674 жыл бұрын
This made me appreciate poems
@mrbruff4 жыл бұрын
That's great to hear! Thank you
@iramabbass19082 жыл бұрын
Hello:) This has been very helpful; quite perceptive and complexed ideas explained clearly. Thank you very much.
@awnammar76602 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much, you gave an amazing and clear analysis, keep up the good work!
@mrbruff2 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@awnammar7660 Жыл бұрын
@@mrbruff ur Welcome !
@slickjumpedoverthelazydog4 жыл бұрын
we did charge of the lightbrigde as our first poem
@Naaxdoley5 жыл бұрын
thank you so much for this. Absolutely amazing how i learn so much more from your videos.
@mrbruff5 жыл бұрын
Great!
@Ghost____Rider7 жыл бұрын
If I get a 7 or 8 (7 is my predicted grade but tbh I want an 8) in English literature I will be indebted to you sir 👍
@esthermay70662 жыл бұрын
this is 4 years later but what did you get?
@Ghost____Rider2 жыл бұрын
@@esthermay7066 I got a 9!
@esthermay70662 жыл бұрын
@@Ghost____Rider wow, that's awesome!! Was Mr. Bruff your main source of revision?
@Ghost____Rider2 жыл бұрын
@@esthermay7066 I wouldn't say he was my main source but I did end up memorising a lot of his analyses and regurgitating them in the exam. This was a long time ago haha but I think I also just practiced essay questions *a lot* which really helped. And I made up some exam style questions that I thought might appear and I sort of memorised them. Just make sure you have something to say about each quote in the anthology and you should be good :)
@tyler86965 жыл бұрын
This really helped, thanks a lot. I just purchased the book from Amazon!