Alien Executioners Land on Earth, Death Itself Answers the Call | HFY

Alien Executioners Land on Earth, Death Itself Answers the Call | HFY | Sci-Fi Stories

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@devonbickett349 Ай бұрын

It's almost laughable that Zharok believed he was an ultimate killer but when Death came for him and his unit they became quivering hatchlings still inside their eggs

@golubgolubovic8991 Ай бұрын

GRIMM REAPER VS ALIENS 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

@chuckintexas 8 күн бұрын

One of best A-I reads I've heard . Seriously . Well done . Still , there was no emotion in the experience . A human reader would have imparted that unmistakable sense of presence and emotion that A-I just can't deliver . Still , this really was one of the best A-I reads I've envountered . Good short-story concept . A series of short stories on the same overall topic would build out a "universe" well worth inhabiting ! Well written . If THAT was A-I _too_ , I can't speak to its aporopriateness . All I can relate to is my experience , and overall it was a net-positive 👍 .

@melindasisk5738 5 күн бұрын

Azriel loves his humans why do you think the Angel of Death makes sure we aren't alone when we die.

@albertbennett3211 15 күн бұрын

Death doesn't care for competition.

@cb5117 16 күн бұрын

No malice or pettiness here, I simply believe honesty and objective truth to be infinitely more important then feelings. Positives; -You generated some interesting foundational world building. -The beginnings of some character development. NEGATIVES; -Wild, over the top, overt verbosity. It felt as if you had an open Thesaurus, searching and cramming unneeded terms, tropes, and catch phrases, as a means to “intellectualize” the level of your writing. -Cliche machine. If you’re going to utilize, as your centerpiece storyline, the most timeworn, overworked, overused, if a hackneyed idiom had drunken, angry, philandering, incestuous, late afternoon, 45 minute revenge sex stand with the stalest, overtly mundane, glory days whoring, wildly and uncaringly mundane, overused sluty theme, birthing the anti-Christ of cliched, threadbare platitudes; “THE HUNTER HAD NOW BECOME THE PREY/HUNTED”……for the love of all GODS, ya gotta come at it from a different angle. That theme, conservatively created in the Pre-Paleolithic Age, is a concept that still appeals to people, but it’s absolutely paramount to early M. Night Shymalan “wtf did I just witness” originality, the shyte out of it You cliched the cliche, with cliched clicheness, and beat the living cliche out of the cliche with cliched cliche. Understand?

@davidhunt1350 14 күн бұрын

bursting into flames, he looked up at their ships laughed, quietly sheathed his sword very quickly, looking at the ground while pointing at the ground with one hand & without looking up pointed the other hand above his head directly at the main ship, without any words spoken, the officer in charge of the ships sat nav video imaging knew exactly what the message was,,, without a word, "the rest of you are late for your own funeral, I have your new permanent quarters awaiting your arrival'', he then straddled a Harley Davidson that quickly & miraculously appeared from out of nowhere, & as he fired her up the roaring engine, of death echoed up as far as the under belly of the ships carriage as he very slowly rode away as if hoping to be followed, Ghost Rider had some new toys to play with.

@MsKinnara 4 күн бұрын

This video and this Twist ending with Ghost Rider would make a great short movie.

@davidhunt1350 4 күн бұрын

@MsKinnara 👌👍🙂

@GimmieTheGaff Ай бұрын

Great idea for a story. Thank you.

@Kendro311 14 күн бұрын

That's what I was thinking. Actually both original and BA. Pretty metal. 🤘🏼

@WingnutJSL 3 күн бұрын

Very good story well done.

@grnbrg 12 сағат бұрын

I once saw him kill three aliens in a bar with a pencil. A fucking *pencil*! Who even does that?!

@briancopeland8459 Ай бұрын

I am totally u impressed with the audible narrative. I don't know if it is a.i. or an actual human (which I doubt!) But it is so badly read and disjointed, it is as if the voice reading the story had never done it before, chopped sentences, rushed words, pauses in the wrong places, come on, Give me the narrative and let me read it, even I, an ordinary guy with normal education can read better than this! If it is a human, go learn how to give life to what you are reading!

@jennifersafford8487 21 күн бұрын

8oi

@steverabson4049 19 күн бұрын

I think all of these types of story are AI. I'm thinking of adding some of my stories as well, but I would definitely do some audible editing before I released it.

@mialiahh9228 15 күн бұрын

@@steverabson4049 Not quite all. I recall seeing one channel where some actual people read it! They even showed their faces at the beginning. *le gasp*

@EPIC_WORLD_STUDIOS 10 күн бұрын

Have you seen how you type? Hypocrite

@rhondatrout1360 Ай бұрын

That was awesome!

@schillieyoung4307 Ай бұрын

Yep dress a ninja up to look like death and while he’s being attacked the invisible ones kill the enemy 😂humans had 100 words to find the blind spots.

@ChristmasVavFFLi_And_Snowflake 10 күн бұрын

Death, you who lived as none is above you , I'm taking my souls back.

@falsehope4421 Ай бұрын

Of course death just shows up out of nowhere for no reason, why exactly does earth have this entiry and none of the other 100 planets did?

@tobiasnicol3115 Ай бұрын

Death knows, unemployment and too much sparetime on Earth sucks.

@falsehope4421 Ай бұрын

@@tobiasnicol3115 yeah, fair enough

@obsidianofblades 20 күн бұрын

My personal guess? Earth has always had a strange worship of Death - the last stragglers may have turned to it for help, offering the slaughter of the enemy.

@Yourmom-sb9lk Күн бұрын

Because death is an earth entity genius 🤦‍♂️

@warrentrueman8892 6 күн бұрын

This was another mere human... This was John Wick

@AndyCaley Ай бұрын

I think you meant hulls?? And com - not calm. So much more as well. Don't be lazy. View and correct before release

@AndyCaley Ай бұрын

Annoying conviction - how about gnawing???

@chrisacd5895 13 күн бұрын

I've said it before I'll say it again, do one with Dracula!!!!

@greggwilliamson Ай бұрын

Were there no more humans? Why did Death himself need to be there? All I've read, heard, or understood about Death, says that all he must do is touch you. Why the battle? Death is incorporeal, why not just appear, touch and move to the next? If there were no humans, why were the "executioners" sent? This entire thing is about as airtight as a screen door. I have just wasted 25 minutes of my life I cannot get back.

@shawnsanborn2057 16 күн бұрын

Hahahahaha! Toobad!

@dandrewtsinnijinnie4504 16 күн бұрын

And no link to the reddit page to read

@Absalon68 Ай бұрын

Oh-gawd, that's really bad!

@civillady13 14 күн бұрын

No one can defeat death.

@robanybody3363 12 күн бұрын

Jesus can

@wernerviehhauser94 12 күн бұрын

Bill and Ted did.

@robanybody3363 12 күн бұрын

@wernerviehhauser94 😂

@robertlavedas4964 10 күн бұрын

And don't forget the little boy in "6-string samurai!". He killed death

@terrye8401 Ай бұрын

Why does death look like Darth Vader

@zomfragger 18 күн бұрын

It's just a background image for the story. KZbin requires you to have something playing on screen even though it's just audio story.

@JohnDoe-fb4fb 16 күн бұрын

You mean why does Darth Vader look like death? Because of the image.

@macmcleod1188 10 күн бұрын

The only real similarity is the helmet and even that's not exactly like Darth Vader's helmet. He's a guy in Black armor with a black cape. I think you should have had a scythe personally.