Alien General: "Bring in The Beast", Human: "It's a Cute Puppy" | HFY | Best HFY Story

In an alien arena of despair, human captive Sam Durden uses ancient martial arts to survive and pets the alien beast, plotting an escape against the ruthless Ral'Vok captors.
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[@DeathclawJedi]

Hey I was promised a puppy where the Fazbot was the PUPPY!!!!!

[@tomhysell596]

these stories are like reading 1 chapter of a book and then throwing the rest of the book in the trash!

[@BeekillerJohanna]

Where is the petting of alien monsters that I was promised?

[@grantgunz]

4000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!

[@NortiusMaximus]

Why no mention of their indomitable human spirit?

[@mikewarfel7511]

The lead in bait sentence was never used, all the beast fought, much repeating of the same phrases, boring AI voice. Don't recommend wasting your time on this one

[@fizzguts]

Agree 100%

[@kathybarekman5454]

All true

[@dennismetrick7378]

Agreed

[@Mike64-hl6pt]

Agree!😊

[@philipsherman8838]

As entertaining as it was, no puppy, no petting....

[@roberthodge2771]

Why the H--- do they never have a series off of a story like this? One chapter for sure !!

[@CosmicTales7]

Thanks for your feedback, Wait 🤞

[@Killertomatoes13]

They didn't pet anything. 🥺

[@BunnyNiyori]

Repetitive two dimensional, but the worst was the click bait title.

[@jeromebarry1741]

I got a nice nap.

[@tonynelligan1930]

a good and reasonable start, so don't be an anime and leave things hanging, also don't be a part two that doesn't link with part one, and lastly put a damn dragon in the cave. maybe a baby egg they find and staying hidden till strong enough does a game of thrones on everyone.

[@ToolOG7]

Relax guys, i am sure that the tagline: "He pets our beasts" means that The Human actually killed the alien Beast with ease.

[@CricWillow]

Yeah, it is normalised nowadays.

[@williamwallace9826]

Nonsense

[@nickconder6272]

the disappointment was 'palpable.'

[@CosmicTales7]

THANKS FOR YOUR FEEDBACK, It helps to improve

[@breannahidalgo6328]

So they threw him in the colosseum

[@FeralPreacher]

Aside from the spelling and pronunciation mistakes, not a bad first part. Seems you lost (or haven't had the AI bot writer pen the rest) the interesting part of the story. Your tag line is never part of the presentation, and the presentation is boring and dead pan. The non-ending makes this a waste of time.

[@nooneofimportance2110]

agreed.

[@james2592OldLeatherSmith]

It's called BATE & SWITCH!!

[@oldmanfromscenetwentyfour8164]

Bait not Bate

[@james2592OldLeatherSmith]

@@oldmanfromscenetwentyfour8164 sorry never learned how 2 spell. GOD'S BLESSINGS ✝️🥎🙃

[@oldmanfromscenetwentyfour8164]

@@james2592OldLeatherSmith No, it's Bait as in Bait for Fishing, which is the point!

[@oldmanfromscenetwentyfour8164]

@@james2592OldLeatherSmith Bait As a noun, bait can mean anything that entices, or something used to lure animals or fish into danger. For example, you might bait a hook with worms or pie. As a verb, bait can mean to lure, entice, or entrap with bait, or to attack with dogs. It can also mean to purposefully annoy or taunt someone, usually to start an argument or fight. For example, you might bait someone by teasing them. Bate As a verb, bate can mean to deduct something, restrain something, or cause something to become less intense or widespread. It can also mean to moderate or lessen the force of something, or to flap wings wildly or frantically. "Bate" is often used in old language or language that's meant to sound old. For example, the idiom "bated breath" is a shortened form of "abated" and means to eagerly anticipate something. For example, you might watch an Olympic performance with bated breath.

[@james2592OldLeatherSmith]

@@oldmanfromscenetwentyfour8164 ok hot it ✝️🥎🙃

[@weirdredpanda]

Ugh! This is the second story I've listened to that promised one thing but delivered another. Get your titles right, please.

[@jimprice9703]

Not a single pettable puppy anywhere in the story. I am very disappoint.

[@keithperdue4993]

It's not "fought with danger', it's "FRAUGHT with danger", geez, learn something.

[@grogvaughan5649]

The grammar/spelling police got slapped back when I was in school. Consider yourself lucky to be as young as you are.

[@williamwallace9826]

But they set a world record for how many times you can use the word "fraught" in a 20-minute video.

[@grogvaughan5649]

@williamwallace9826 true. The one that gets me is "failure is not an option". I'm retired Army, Failure IS always an option, you just train until you have 3-5 backup plans to slap Mr Murphy with when he decides to show up.

[@homoerectus6953]

cosmic puppies are still good boi's bront.....

[@limplizard4375]

I hate the misleading titles. I was waiting for the puppy to show the whole boring story. It was too repetitive

[@soldierscotty1959]

This could have been a really good story. But the forced CC and the AI voice and scenes that never changed, ruined it for me!

[@alvermillioncranky8360]

No puppy? click bait.

[@bahane]

Scott Barron did it 1000 times better.

[@bunnyadams353]

Only reason I clicked like is to remember it's crap

[@williamwallace9826]

Title doesn't match the story, and the story doesn't have a conclusion. Waste of time.

[@AprilDuchess]

Where was the puppy? No puppy? I'm so very disappointed! While this story was well told, baiting and switching is a NOT nice thing. No thumbs up for you! *glowering now*

[@Seravat7]

No puppy!?! Downvote.

[@nooneofimportance2110]

God this is repetitive and boring.

[@phucdims1984]

Kinda lame, with a bunch glittering generalities.

[@Rubbermatt]

AI written & narrated trash.