Aliens Kidnap A Human For Fun, Quickly Regret It! | HFY | A Short Sci-Fi #hfy #sci-fi #aliens #humanity #battle #story #stories
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@purelightlove888826 күн бұрын
Awesome Story!! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌎 Thank-You!!!
@murphymmc26 күн бұрын
This story started out well, but when "fabricated from materials in his room" was used, it failed. The room was smooth, seamless, and yet materials for creating a sophisticated hacking device just happened to be on hand. Details added as needed to make a potentially good story fall flat on its face. Does anyone proofread and edit these stories?