An Alien Princess Seeks a Human Mate for Her 16 Year Old Daughter| Galaxy's HFY Sci-Fi Edge

[@alunwheeler3422]

Great story shame it wasn't longer 🫠🫠🫠

[@richardrombouts1883]

The opposite of make love, not war. What are they fighting for? What does saving the galaxy mean, if they don't have time for some intimacy?

[@crushing_the_losersof_the_7726]

Nathan and his Special Forces wiped out Valthors stupid and incompetent forces causing ValThors rage was priceless

[@johnwaynegates4857]

Finish the story

[@seanskelton2007]

you mean another story that isnt finished?.

[@crushing_the_losersof_the_7726]

Nathan and his Special forces trained the Queen’s Troops pushing them hard until they could do most but not all of what’s Nathan’s troops could do. But their success was Great.

[@wilkjg1769]

I found some good elements in this storyline, but it is also too verbose. This entire story could be easily condensed into one that would flow better and maintain audience interest. Another issue that seemed to detract from this presentation was poor narration. I suggest choosing a warmer voice that isn't so choppy. Good luck with your channel and I hope you do well.

[@dsharaf]

Weak ending and too verbose

[@ralphdeem6635]

Garbage!

[@crushing_the_losersof_the_7726]

Nathan’s Special Forces wiped out Valthor’s incompetent troops he Valthor has no chance his superior troops wiped out valthor never to comeback again they continued to train the Queen’s troops for the future.