An HFY Story : The Laws of War | RE063 ~ Deathworld, War and Humans

[@Darth.Fluffy]

A certain friend of humanity once said, "Good men don't need rules. Today is not the day to find out why I have so many. Hmm?" All the things that we have rules against, are things we've already done. And we're always thinking up new shit.

[@rmwright70]

Thinking up new 'stuff'. We (humans) are good at that.

[@Raz1286]

See: Geneva Suggestions

[@kurtismiller9544]

For DA SKWERL and his Nest

[@Michael_Brock]

Another great story, and excellent reading (storytelling) as usual!

[@GarmrsBarking]

If only those rules were followed now...

[@roberthayes7679]

Geneva checklist

[@cameronlang6858]

Love the channel, thanks so much for your efforts, we all appreciate your tremendously

[@allenmorgan1007]

For the Algorithm, for the Author(s), for the Disembodied Voice!

[@timobrien2813]

Thank you both. UKUK

[@johnnikitakis876]

ELON! Where's my Universal Translater!

[@xessq1]

right???

[@anathardayaldar]

Mom: We have google at home.

[@KwaterbugBUTCHER]

For the Algorithm ,For the Author(s), For the Disembodied voice! For the Squirrel 🐿

[@dirtydandirty201174]

👽

[@anathardayaldar]

10:14 DEEEEEEEE monetized! lol

[@JohnTheRaeder-xf5sh]

Noice!!!

[@Jakes3130]

🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

[@nikolassaraiva9088]

I this a little quit for anyone else? I had to double the normal volume I use.

[@Kirsten2933]

Like 326 🇨🇦😎👍

[@aaronwilliams6862]

Good story but really the officers aren't put on trial immediately for war crimes? They didn't just glass planets they glassed human planets

[@CorkyBrown-kd1lt]

Great as usual

[@merlinathrawes746]

From the sounds of it, the officers that gave the orders to glass planets were aboard the ships that were either outright destroyed or didn't survive the boarding actions.

[@t3h_m0nk3y]

[@GnarledStaff]

Writing tip: you can read military fiction if you want to learn how to write a battle. The awkward staring at each other was a bit jarring, and the overall story lacked action or passion, but your prose was sufficiently coherent so adding a little more emotional response and action in the story could take the writing to the next level.

[@rydergolde3169]

while the constructive advice is nice, you might get more mileage out of it by commenting on the OP's actual story, rather than a narration