READING THE LAST SENTENCE OF YOUR BOOKS!🗡️📖 reacting to your novels!😲🏰

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hey writerly loves! today i am so excited to react and read some of your amazing last sentences of YOUR books!✨eeeee! i lowkey loveee writing last sentences for chapters and even whole books because its just so special and beautiful! (i should have shared my last sentence too!! ah) well, if you wanna hear my last sentence of my last finished book...see below 📖🌿
"between sunset and moonrise, between life and death, between love and hatred they met. and they loved. and they lived" (project.i first met you in a graveyard).
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[@Rosabella.Thorne7]

My first line is: She was dead. And the last line is: I killed her. And, no. Whatever you're thinking is wrong. There's a huge plot twist.

[@Ifyournotanobxfanwhyareyouhere]

I NEED THIS NOW ILL NEVER BE COMPLETE UNTILLLLL I READ THIS BOOOOOKKK

[@noelle_reads_alot]

Please publish I neeeeeeeed this booook

[@urmom-hs4uy]

How can I read your book

[@ananeu]

okie! i'm sorry you all - this is a reupload! - some technical difficulties >

[@allyb1772]

don't worry ana, it's nothing major!! and you made a reupload so everything is fine ^^ thank you for your hard work as always~

[@aether_apps]

I loveeee your vids like whenever Im going to write I always put on your podcast and in one of my aesthetic books there is a chacter called Robin bc I love the name

[@TheYasminStuff]

Can you read more of our first paragraphs again ?

[@lilianaszabo3289]

I am so happy to finnally find a fun and good writing community as a writer!!!💖💖💖🥺🥺🥺🖋️🖋️🖋️

[@EmuReader-ux5pg]

6:19 this one was mine and I just want to say thank you so much for all the beautiful words about it you are literally my role model and your commentary was so appreciated and I admire you so much and this was so lovely to watch 😅

[@ruby-core.1221]

YOU'RE IS SOOO GOODDDD

[@Minecraftsheep-ji7ir]

No I have decided that yours is the best in the whole video Absolutely exquisite writing 🫢👏

[@sweettooth5766]

I am a plotter and have just started my story but in case you do a part two here is my last sentence: "He hugs me and whispers in my ear, "My midnight princess". For context: A girl falls in a hole and ends up in a different realm. She meets the prince and they go on an adventure. She wakes up, goes to school and meets someone that looks exactly like the prince.

[@ananeu]

love thisss!!

[@thelibraryofuselessinforma1852]

last lines are always the best part... I thought I'd add one of mine :) "She didn't speak of Rodrick much in the years I knew her, but as I slip away myself, I smile imagining her with him once again."

[@whosminou]

ahh i'm sorry i immediately thought of rodrick from "diary of a wimpy kid" loll

[@fifiwafa6696]

omg the last one was iconic ; the way I gasped !! lol... I knew you would re-upload the video cuz that cut at like 10:31 as I recall was not explainable lol.. anyway the video was amazing as usual and your reactions are so sweet and lovely; I'm happy there are so many creative people in this community; you guys are gonna be great authors !

[@KidsNetworkCrafts]

Ahh I didn't manage to get my last lines in time! :< Anyways, if you do a part 2, here are my last lines!- *"You know, peace was never an option. Not even for the 'Bringers of Peace'." said V.* *As we watched the calm water of the River gush by, it's mystical aura of blue mixed with the reflection of the sunlight, I hoped that what V said was false -- that we would be able to live like normal mevines afterwards, with nothing to worry about else than homework.* *But of course it wasn't.* __________________________________________ -- "Astrodroirs and the Cave of Answers", book 1 of the Astrodroir series (release date planned for 2023) (Names in this comment are changed, & the text is not official) Thanks for reading!

[@taliw7736]

cool!!!!

[@KidsNetworkCrafts]

@@taliw7736 thank you!!!

[@unfortunateonejohnson8114]

Where are you gonna release it? On Amazon?

[@KidsNetworkCrafts]

@@unfortunateonejohnson8114 Yep! Hopefully, I'll manage to get in on Amazon.

[@bookwriternerd42]

OMG I LOVE IT

[@ghostyml]

Ik I’m really really really really late, but I only discovered your channel some weeks ago (loving it!) and I really wish to share the last “sentence” of a book Im going to write someday. This is a romance btw :) Here it is: “*I slowly closed my eyes again. Wishing I’d fall asleep again, just once more. I want to see her again.*” More content to the last lines of the book/story: “*I woke up to my mother squeezing my hand. Screaming. Shouting. Yelling. The doctor rushed into the room. I had been in a coma. I’ve been in a coma the whole entire time? I slowly closed my eyes again. Wishing I’d fall asleep, just once more. I want to see her again.*” Something like that :)

[@harlivy5003]

So I love that everyone is sharing the first and last lines of their book so here's the first line of mine. This is an enemies to lovers book, by the way. This is the prologue. Blurb: Azure, a land of the elves, is running out of magic and a couple of teenagers go to the magic doors in order to save their lovely Azure. "“Show me your thorns,” I whispered, my hands dragging along the bloodied edge of her torn shirt. “And I’ll show you hands ready to bleed.” "

[@xtonibx5770]

"She had a thought; that she could step in front of a moving car and maybe Uriah would realize that he should never refuse to hold her hand. She wondered if the silver lining was worth inflicting that pain upon herself. Eventually she decided that it would be worth it - and so she did." This is about a 12 year old girl who always wants to hold her 15 year old brother's (Uriah) hand. This is a chapter ending, not a very last line, but I wanted to share.

[@ohsnapitslauren1007]

I like ur makeup btw! And loved the video!

[@we11s99]

Are you going to make a part 2? That would be super cool!

[@elsielovescartoons]

I love your channel so much Ana!

[@Literature_Introvert]

I love how excited Ana gets reading these last lines. I just know if some of her subscribers like published their books and stuff she would support them.

[@_lwndo]

0:40 i love her accent sm here😭❤️ “epic”

[@ANPaige]

Hey Ana! So, I saw your prompt but didn’t have a sentence in time lol - I thought of one as I saw the intro to this video 😂 “Lightning strode along the corridor, looking at the various works of art, all by painters that she adored, when she froze, staring at something she’d never thought she would see again. The painting she’d made, at the beginning of it all, now hung in the place of highest pride at the very end of the hall.”

[@anthonybloodylockwood]

Do you think you could do this but the first sentence's instead?? I think that would be interesting because you can predict the beginning and the ending.

[@yumekaissilly]

yeah!! :D

[@ananeu]

great idea!!❤️

[@urfavvacquaintance]

Hey, I'm a new subscriber and I just love your videos, they get me so motivated to write stories and give me great advice! I also wanted to give you a video idea, so instead of separating the first and the last sentence you can react to the first and last sentence together to see how much the story changed. I think it would be so interesting to see how the last and first sentence have different meanings.

[@ananeu]

oooo hiii! thank u so much! I welcome u bestie hehe❤️and ee! that’s an AMAZING IDEA! id love tooo! hehe ur amazing! keep writing love❤️

[@Marmarcantbreathe]

Ik im really late but here’s mine

[@theoneandonlynom]

oml, these are all so good bro

[@Flowerz-2510]

That last line is the same as the first, it is She was gone. I haven't begun writing yet, I've barely started to plot, but I've had this idea for years now, and the backstory is that the main character, Marley, grew up in an abusive and neglectful household. Her only friend that stayed, that actually cared for her was her grandmother, Wyllow. However, Wyllow died from undinosed breast cancer when Marley was 13, when the story starts. The opening line(I'm not counting the prolouge and epilouge that I'm planning on adding, btw), 'She was gone' continues to discribe Marley walking in her neighbourhood on new years eve, near midnight, as the wind whips and the rain falls, being fairly cold. She lets herself feel, mourn Wyllow's death, if only a moment, before putting back up the mask. When she gets to school after the break, a boy her age named Levi befriends her, at least tries, but eventually she relents and slowly starts to unmask around him. At the end she's faced with a hard decision, keep trying to figure out how to stop the magic bomb created by the villian, strong enough to blow most of her city, and risk not getting it quick enough, or sacrifice herself by jumping off the very tall tower into magically dangerous water below, which would seduce the bomb to a 10 meter radius, but kill her in the process. And as this will but written in 3rd person, the last line is, 'she was gone' Oh, and Marley developed that fattest crush on levi, and left him a video, originally for them to watch when old, or if she caved into the suicidal thoughts and died. She said everything she had always wanted to say, how she loved him, even she was afraid, how she wanted to be with him as they turned grey, and even a bit of how bad her mental health really was, how she was sorry for every time she was cold and distant. Levi, missing her so much, snuck into her room and found the tape. As he listened, he realized that all those times he had butterflies in his stomach, looked for her approval, wanted to be as close to her as possible and never let go, wasnt normal friend behavior. He had had a crush on her, too. Only to late. Apologies for the frickin' novel, but here's my story, my baby 💜 If you ever see and book titled, 'Gone' with some shade of purple on the cover, read the summary, it might be whatever this is💜 ( btw the bombs anti-gravity, only being movable by human touch, so can't really chuck it off the side and hope for the best)

[@neuroticnovelist]

I know this is a reupload and I commented on the og video but I wanted to say thanks again for reading mine and your sweet reaction 💓😍🥺💕 all the last lines were so good! I can’t wait to read everyone’s published work some day!!

[@ananeu]

awww ur too sweet! tysm for your amazing words xx so inspiring❤️

[@karenxx3]

omg update?? i loved yours

[@AphroditeLee]

awww man I am soooo sad that I missed this! I would have LOVED for you to read one of mine!

[@Prophecy-Foretold]

Well, since everyone else is too, I figure I'd drop my last sentences here 'She reaches forward and grabs my arm. The air shifts around me. Everyone is gone. I'm in the void. Not the void this time. The afterlife.'

[@fshtshgsjgdkhft]

Ahhhhh no, no, there must be moreee

[@Prophecy-Foretold]

@@fshtshgsjgdkhft there's a second book :)

[@noelle_reads_alot]

Mine is “Now Briar, this is going to hurt very, very much.” And it does. It hurts more than anything I have ever experienced.

[@mylittlebones30]

No because your eyes are really so pretty 😭 Soft/bright brown eyes are BEAUTIFUL what you saying girl

[@maddieee777]

9:05 damn!!!! That was so great!! That like would move me and if that last sentence moved me that book has to be fricken amazing! 11:19 yo!!!!!

[@Acetronomy]

Love listening to the last sentences, always so intriguing. The last sentence in my story will be somewhere along the lines of: "And I shall paint the skies in crimson and red, the last colours you ever saw against my lifeless body." Have a lot of variations in mind but it'll be like that!

[@ananeu]

omg!! are u kidding? THIS SOUNDS AMAZING

[@Acetronomy]

@@ananeu AHH TY!! I appreciate that sm! :D

[@achild4062]

im a beginner writer, and this probably is terrible but I'm doing this just for the hell of it, here's the final little bit of my book "what lurks in the night" Shivers shot down her spine as she heard the door fly open, Theodore running out into the night. Annabelle's greatest fear came to fruition as she heard the rip of flesh and the screech of the direful creatures, followed by the thud of her lover on the cold concrete outside. She ran through the house, ripping things off of the tables and shelves as she went. Seeing Theodore as he lay on the ground in a pool of his own blood, tears streamed down Annabelle's face, leaving a trail in the dirt that caked her skin. Annabelle collapsed to the ground in front of him, sobbing and pulling him close to her. "Oh, my sweet boy, I'm so sorry," she sobbed, pulling him into a hug. As she pulled away, wiping his hair from his face and looking into his eyes, the creatures lurked behind the trees. "I'm so sorry," she cried. He smiled weakly at her, oh how she loved his beautiful smile. "I love you, Mara. We're going to see each other again someday. I'll be waiting for you, alright?" "Please, don't leave me," She begged, "I can't live without you, Theo! Just hang on, please, I'll make this right!" She begged, pulling him into another hug, but this time, he went limp. The realization set in as his weight bared against Annabelle's arms, his last breath escaping his lips in a loud sigh. "No, no, no, Theo, stay with me!" She screamed. "Theo, please!" Annabelle looked up at the creature that snaked around a tree, "Take me too! Just do it already, damn it!" The creature rushed over to Annabelle as she screamed and cried over Theodore, and with one strong blow, it plowed through her stomach. As the blood drained from her body, she lay her head on his chest, she realized the one thing that she thought would keep her alive had killed her.

[@Lesbofroggy]

If that is bad, then my work would be absolutely disgusting!

[@achild4062]

im js insecure abt it being bad, thank you though!!!

[@Nahnahnahsister]

This is going to be the last piece of my novel when I finish it! Alaska Monroe thumbed over the spine of her first published book. A series of poems carved from the experiences and losses she’d faced in her years. With watercolor green eyes, she swept to the final page and read the dedication she had written. About a friend buried in Alderwood, a small town on the outskirts of the world. And one she now only saw once or twice a year. She held her breath, bittersweet ache making her heart hollow. Then, flipped to the final words scrawled onto the book. ‘This book is dedicated to the people who made writing it possible. To Birdie Maye and Thatcher Rhodes, the pilots of the paper plane.”

[@tinychangbin]

As I look out onto the open landscape I feel free. Free to do whatever I please. I step outside and take a deep breath. I murmur a‘ ’Good luck.’’. They’ll need it. I haven't written this book yet, I'm just planning and I thought of this character escaping an institution for the criminally insane .

[@maddieee777]

Hi Ana! I am starting the plotting process of my book because I kind of fell out of love with my old story. I hope that someday my last sentence will be featured because I know that someday I will get there!

[@Blusurii]

Hi ana 🪴 Great video like always! ~~~ Luv you! 💗 i know u wont read this but here’s the last sentence. ~~~ Sirens screeched from across the woods. Making this process alot scarier for the two. Enclave sighed his body stiffening, “i promise, were going to get out of here.” He turned to his freind with a soft smile. “I hope so.” Demo’s fur bristled in the cold misty air that rushed past. “Im going to teach you the ways of the rouges now,” He stared into the dark sky, with hope “So, grab a flame and follow me.” From that day, the two continued their dreadful journey across the woods, to find shelter, food, and life. Srry it it was bad! And this is about cats escaping from the police trying to capture them, but their friends have already been captured so they try saving them before its too late. 💗 hope you enjoyed.

[@ananeu]

ahhh! are you kidding me!? this is AMAZING!!❤️oooo your book sounds so so intriguing xx

[@marixlla]

I love your editing and I’ve been watching your videos for a while now. How do you come up with such great name ideas for your characters? I always struggle 😭😭

[@ananeu]

oooo!! id love to do a video on that!! would u be interested❤️❤️

[@marixlla]

@@ananeu Yes totally! :)

[@Aspiringauthorwithasweettooth]

I’m just sharing mine for fun cuz why not Last sentence of “As Long As I Have My bunny girl I’ll be okay”: What are you doing, Miko?” Haruto said while rubbing his eyes, “It’s so early in the morning..” he mumbled. Miko put down the pan she was holding and turned her head to look at Haruto, “Isn’t it obvious? What does it look like I’m doing?” She then smiled, “I’m making breakfast for the boy I love.” Last sentence of “Poppy”: The three of them ran through the waves, barefoot in the sunset, all laughing. Poppy was laughing so hard that there were tears in her eyes. She was overflowing with happiness and couldn’t stop laughing. She had never felt so blessed. May was in the past now and Poppy had just begun.

[@Mythical.1212]

I'm not fully finished with my book yet but when I am the last sentence would probably be Her chest rised up and down as she faced the people she grew close to over the year "you don't understand the Raven King is my-" she took a deep breath "the Raven King is my father."

[@Saltines1387]

The last sentence of my book is: My eyes teared up as I read the words at the bottom of the page “kisses from the moon “

[@Dear.pandalove]

The last line of mine is ‘’Okay I didn’t really die but they don’t need to know that’’

[@frostyhannah]

I know I'm way way way way way late. Six months late but here is my last sentence Kenneth put his universe ring on and was about to leave when Halo ran to him and hugged him around the waist. Kenneth made a small laugh and said, “gosh, you’re acting like I’m going off to war or something,” “I know but I want you to be safe and come back,” she whispered. Kenneth hugged her back and whispered to her, “Don’t worry, I will,” It's the un edited first draft and I don't know how good it is. 🤨

[@s.gabrielle07]

"From what started as science and a hope for a brighter future now turned to her selling her soul at an ancient temple to a god she’s never heard of. And for what? An answer? She couldn’t take it anymore, she didn’t care if she died at this point. The freedom of the world mattered more, the future of the people mattered more. And no one, no one, could stop her.” I haven't actually finished my first draft yet and I completely change around the plot about every 10 business days but I THINK I'm finally getting somewhere

[@s.gabrielle07]

(I know its a year after the vid was posted I'm a new subscriber lol)

[@nereid149]

ik i never got to see this prompt, but i just really really wanted to share mine, this one is a children's historical fiction, and i think it's pretty good: As more drops fell from the sky, he began to hear Chance and Leo calling his name. But he wasn’t done yet. Surely the directions would get washed away in the rain before Henry could get to them, but he still bent back down and stuck his finger back into the thick mud. Right under his marks, he wrote, -Ezekiel i haven't went ahead and edited it yet, (i haven't even finished the first draft yet lol) and i know it's more than one sentence, but i'm quite proud of it :)

[@GenCHarv]

I wish I was here when you posted this so I could drop mine

[@lilac9115]

hii, really like your videos! They actually motivated me to write a novel that have been stuck in my head for a very long time. I didn't see your post in time and i also didn't finish my novel yet, but i have a great idea of the end, so i'll write it here if you feel like doing a part 2: " And, with a mass of determination, I cut my throat with the Yellow-sided cutter, letting my blood spill through my room. I heard my mother shouting my name, "Riley! Riley!" While trying to keep Adam and Hailey from seeing this awful scene, but right now, the only thing I saw was Madeleine, smiling at me. And, for the first time since her death, I smiled, a smile of joy, and my eyes let out a few drops. "I missed you, Maddy." I whispered before closing my eyes, letting my soul rest for the first time since my best friend's death. Since the death of Madeleine Peterson. " Novel name: HAYLOFT: The death of Madeleine Peterson. Sorry for any spelling mistakes! English isn't my first language and i basically wrote my story in French, but i'm thinking about doing a full translation in English once it's finished! Thank you anyway and baiii.

[@jaydynyockman]

Is it too late to send in a book ending and if not where can I post mine?!!

[@Greysonfairy3209]

this is the sentence I did last chapter soooo- yuh (btw I dont really do drafts I like to make edits to my story and leave it as is soo- yuh) (and Im doing the whole chapter LMAOOOOO anyway, this is Chapter 22, Elizabeth's scary moment, so yuh and they are spilt into 2 POV's, Elizabeth's and Elli's) Elizabeth's POV: Elizabeth sits in the clearing with Squirrelflight, just chilling, she then sees Ryder and Rocky in the entrance of the camp, she stood up, and walked over to what’s going on. “Bramblestar, What’s going on? I don’t mean to interrupt” Elizabeth dipped her head in respect, in a polite tone. Bramblestar’s amber gaze returns to Elizabeth’s gaze. “Oh Elizabeth! I was just going to tell you actually, so I got news on CC and…unfortunately he was found unconscious” Bramblestar mewed, moving his tail to reveal CC’s bleeding body. Elizabeth looks in shock, as Jayfeather and Alderheart move his body to the Medicine Den, she turns her gaze to Ryder and Rocky, hoping for some cat or person to explain. “Speaking of CC, Ryder or Rocky, can you two explain what you just explained to me??” Bramblestar asks, his tone softed a bit. Rocky explains to Elizabeth that it was a stab wound and it had a PZ scent on it, thankfully he was found by Ryder just in time. “We also found another person with him, a she with a wound on her head, She was most likely knocked out.” Rocky explained as he revealed a black haired she. Elizabeth carried her to the med den to be checked out, she explains to Alderheart and Jayfeather what happened and sets her down on one of the nests. An hour later, Elizabeth chats with Brightheart as Jayfeather comes over to her. “Hey, Eli? I’m just here to tell you that CC should wake up as soon as possible.” Jayfeather calls out to her, as Brightheart motions her to go see CC. Elizabeth nods, she stands up and walks to the Med Den, Alderheart and Leafpool turn to Elizabeth. “Oh! Elizabeth, do you need something??” Alderheart pads over to her, with question in his mew. “Hey, Alderheart! No, I'm just here for CC. And for Elli’s mom” Elizabeth explains as Elli, the kit that Rocky and Ryder found, turns her head around before gazing at her unconscious mother. Elizabeth walks over to her brother, sighing before turning to Jayfeather. “Can I sleep with him tonight?? Pleasee! Skye did that when Rosepaw was a kit!” Elizabeth’s voice sounded kit-like, her eyes fluttering at Jayfeather. Jayfeather hesitates before nodding at Elizabeth. She squeals in happiness, dancing silently. Elizabeth moves closer to CC, she hums quietly. Suddenly, she sees a spark of movement in CC, she taps on Jayfeather’s shoulder. “Can you get CC’s plushies?? It’s in the Warriors’ Den” she asked Jayfeather quietly, her tail twitched. “Uhh, sure thing, Elizabeth! Hey, Alderheart! Can you watch over CC with Elizabeth? I know she’s the Head Communicator, but just in case.” Jayfeather answers Elizabeth before calling out to Alderheart. Elizabeth moves to her brother’s nest, holding onto CC’s hand. “Elizabeth, I got your brother’s plushies!” Jayfeather came to Elizabeth’s view, his mew was filled with happiness. She placed CC’s plushies next to him, she saw him stirred in his nest. Elizabeth yawns, laying down next to her brother and sighs, closing her eyes. Elizabeth woke up to a yowling noise, she jerked her head awake and saw CC’s nest and saw that CC was missing. she scattered around. “CC?? Where are you??” Elizabeth whispered quietly as she went over to Alderheart’s nest and tapped him on the shoulder. “Elizabeth?? What do you need??” Alderheart asked Elizabeth groggily, his paws stumbling to stand. Elizabeth points to the nest that she and CC were sleeping in, gazing at Alderheart’s tired eyes which widen into shock as he scattered around, looking around CC and calling his name. That’s when Brightheart came in with Ivypool, whom looked furious at Elizabeth. “The winged mouse brain is in my den!” hissed Ivypool, her gazed fluttered from Elizabeth to Alderheart. Elizabeth sighs, heading into the Warriors’ Den. She sees CC scared out of his mind, his soulless eyes widen in fear. “Hey, CC! It's ok! It's me, Elizabeth.” Elizabeth reassured her brother, creeping a bit closer. CC comes to give Elizabeth a hug, suddenly Elizabeth hears terrified yowls and screaming coming from the entrance of the camp. She takes a peek at the entrance. “PZ is invading!” screamed Micheal “Wait, Right now?!” Elizabeth said in surprise “Yes!” shouts Micheal, his eyes glittering with fear. Elizabeth runs to the Warriors’ Den to get CC, whom was curling up in fear, she looked back at the entrance which is now full of PZ members, and suddenly it struck her! The Nursery! She grabbed CC and sheltered him in the Med Den. “Protect CC!” she tells Jayfeather and Alderheart. She runs to the Nursery to see four kits, Nettlekit, Bubblingkit, Blossomkit and Featherkit huddled together, gazing in fear at the PZ member. Elizabeth lunges at the first PZ member, doing Bluestar’s Method before getting thrown near the brambles of the entrance. Elizabeth stood up to see Bubblingkit getting sedated. “No!” Elizabeth screams, lunging again pinning the PZ member down. “Kits! Go into the Medicine Den! Jayfeather, Alderheart and Leafpool are waiting for you.” she tells the kits. Blossomkit, Nettlekit and Featherkit rushed out of the Nursery, leaving Elizabeth’s view. Suddenly, she felt heavy weight and yelped. “Aww! The Head Communicator isn’t so tough after all~” sneered the PZ member as Elizabeth hissed. Suddenly she felt a sharp poke in her neck, Elizabeth suddenly felt weak and tired as she used the last of her strengths, her vision blurred as Grey lunged forward as Elizabeth’s vision became all dark, leaving Elizabeth in a dark void. Suddenly, Elizabeth saw a bright light and then, the fields of StarClan beamed in the stars, and Bluestar and Firestar stepped up. “Hey. Elizabeth! You will stay in StarClan until your body recovers. I know this is like a ‘leader’ only thing, but StarClan wanted to do something different this time.” Bluestar explained to Elizabeth, her ear flicked. Elizabeth went ahead and sat down with Brightstar and Firestar. “Um, hey Brightstar and Firestar?? Can I chat with you two??” she asked the two former leaders. Elizabeth shuffled her body a bit, moving positions. She grabbed her plushbaby. “Sure! Do you wanna catch up with us??” Firestar nods as Brightstar smiles at Elizabeth, he gazes at Elizabeth’s emerald green eyes. “Sure! So, Brightstar, GalaxyClan is doing….um, I guess fine under Hollowstar’s rule, well so far.” she answered, chuckling. Brightstar, Firestar and Elizabeth chats a bit more and Bluestar and Longtail as well as Mousefur also joined as well (Elli’s POV) Elli huddled up with her teddy, she starts to pray to StarClan when suddenly, four kits, whom sh remembered by pelt, Blossomkit, Nettlekit, Bubblingkit and Featherkit. “Elizabeth got sedated! She’s in the Nursery!” Nettlekit yowls as her denmate, Bubblingkit was being carried by Featherkit, whom was unconscious. “Get her to a nest, I will go get Elizabeth, Elli, wanna come with me??” Alderheart tells Nettlekit to bring Bubblingkit to a nest before returning to Elli’s gaze. She nods, standing up and grabbing her teddy. Elli ran to the Nursery to see 6 almost 7 PZ members and she obviously can’t take them on herself. Suddenly, she saw a bright like pelt which returned her gaze, she turned to see Firestar and Bluestar, whom she saw in the Moonpool. Elli went ahead into her battle position which her mother taught her, she yelled her battle cry, lunging at the PZ member, she pinned the PZ member down, suddenly, she got dragged down. “Just call on me, just call on my name! Like you need me!” A voice in her head rang out. Elli does a powerful blow to the PZ member, she bit his arm, she moved her tail and she rolled out before being pinned down again, struggling to get free, she remembered the name of the bright pelted tom. She grunts, looking around. “Brightstar! Firestar!” she yowls, screeching, Firestar and Brightstar does a Fandom Group Takedown, Brightstar does a powerful blow to the neck and Firestar does a powerful blow to the leg, a another masked like tom by the name Stoneleaf, pins the PZ member down as Elli slithers her way out, she then sees, Glimmer and Adora whom were both badly injured and Glimmer looked like she was about pass out, Elli saw that the PZ member was about to do a blow, Elli ran calling a Fandom Group Takedown, dealing a powerful blow to the PZ member. “Adora! Go to the Medicine Den, I will get Elizabeth.” she called out to Adora, whom was carrying Glimmer. Leaving Elli’s view, she was left with about 3 or 4 PZ members, she cried out again, feeling a strange power inside of her, she lunged, pinning the PZ member down, she growls, hatred flamed in her eyes as she gazed at the PZ member’s eyes. Elli’s tail twitched irritably, she gazed up to see Elizabeth’s unconscious body. “Oh…Elizabeth! Why wasn’t I there?” Elli thought, she held onto Elizabeth when suddenly, she felt a sharp poke in her neck, she turned around to see a freckled like she-cat gazing with malice as Elli felt dizzy, she stumbles towards the Medicine Den, Elli pants as cats and Fandom Group members stared at her as she felt herself collapse. “Elli! O-oh no! Elli!” She heard Alderheart’s voice which sounded very close but far away at the same time. Bluestar and Firestar showed up alongside Stoneleaf and Brightstar whom were chatting. “Elli, you are going to stay here with Elizabeth until your bodies recover from this sedation” Bluestar’s voice made Elli’s ears perked, gazing at her (End of Chapter 22)

[@ForbiddenPixel]

I know I'm horribly late but I thought id put my last scene here! "As they led me to the room where I would meet my end I couldn't help but feel something inside of me, Like I felt like a child again. How I felt when my life was still together, The room was cold a dark a single lamp hung over the chair. They strapped me in so I wouldnt move, I was about to die. I thought it be peaceful bliss. But it was like something was taking over me I started screaming begging for mercy like the kids begged me before. This was karma. With a click I was shaking screaming dying in the Electric chair..." "Mommy, why won't you help me..?"

[@ashlee77]

Wow Wow Wow I wanna read your book so badly 😳😳😳

[@user-me7cj9yr8f]

Omg these are all so good! Lmk if you’ll be having another video like this, I’d love to participate! ❤

[@thegeezers7723]

And soon we continued into our peaceful heaven for infinity. the final sentence in my first novel called ghost hyde.

[@thegeezers7723]

thank you

[@Sunner143]

Here’s my book ending!!! “ I watch as her eyes lose the shine they once had, her clothes becoming soaked with cold droplets of water. Tears rolled down my rosy cheeks as I wrenched out a strangled cry. Holding her hand, I could feel the warmth vanishing, a ghost of a smile on my lips. I wish they could have been there - when I killed my best friend. “ This is just a draft, but I hope you like it!🫶

[@mystical_sneks]

Intro: Hi! I'm definitely a month late, though I only really discovered you recently, as I am writing my own novel and really needed some background noise and may I say, playing your videos in the background made me really productive, almost finished my planning before writing a draft for this novel I'm creating. Anyway, this is a potential ending sentence... I will give some context after the line, but not all :) Line: Sometimes the stories we read and write by ourselves can come alive... At least, I know mine did. Context: This is going to be a wlw romance vampire novel that focuses on a poet who tends to isolate herself, pushing herself away from love, finds her lover in the same university as she. As other romance novels, they typically put the love interest as the person who doesn't want to fall in love and the main character wants to however I wanted to twist it. The main character fantasies being in a relationship but fears being actually in love and tries to avoid it at all costs. The main character tends to cower away from love, and so as the novel goes on, you see as she first rejects the idea of loving someone to falling hard for the love interest, which I think is a wonderful concept. Sorry if it's not that good! I tried my best

[@ananeu]

wow! this sounds so good!!! eeeee i love this ideaa!

[@mystical_sneks]

@@ananeu Thank you! I’m excited for it!

[@mystical_sneks]

Okay thought of another.. “Haley… I know you’re upset with me but listen… Everything will go according to plan… I won’t let you get hurt” “What if I do get hurt Violette…” Haley stepped away from Violette, shaken and afraid. “I promise you my love… I won’t let that happen..” Violette pulls Haley right to her body, allowing for Haley to freeze as her body presses against Violette's. If this is my last, I feel like this could be foreshadowing. First book: Falling in love. -Where the main character finds herself falling in love with someone Second Book??? (potentially): Being put in pain- the relationship being hard to cope with, addresses empty promises and how they impact people. I think the second would kinda show Haley starting off really happy, she's happy in the relationship with the vampire but as the book progresses, Violette makes empty promises and so the love is distanced. Violette in the second book is going to hurt Haley in someway. I won't get too ahead of myself, gotta write the first one first but yeah. Third book: Moving on from love... The book would be Haley getting over Violette. All about her changing and trying to get Violette off her mind... The ending I know for certain though: It'll be circled, so basically I will pick a line from the first book where Haley first falls in love and then that'll be the last line showing a repeated cycle. I think this would be a cool idea, because I kinda originally wanted to full happy ending and just the characters getting together but I can feel this impact readers more.

[@phantasielle]

my first line: "I'm the only person you can trust." my last line: I don't know which one of us pulled the trigger, but I got my wish. it's a first draft so it's a lil bit of a mess but im working on it

[@jasmine_rice]

Well, THAT took a turn! It sounds awesome tbh

[@aether_apps]

I do write books for me but one of them is aesthetic and its called Magic Apple its not as aesthetic as you think! Andthen the other on is funny and its called Henry and Tilly's 17 story Treehouse

[@mayafransson3799]

Hi! So I have a question, if you are posting your books where are you posting them? I've been trying to find you but don't really know where to look ahahaha. But Maybe you haven't published but anyways, love your channel!

[@Ifyournotanobxfanwhyareyouhere]

My first line is: This is all a lie and my last line is: This is all a lie remember

[@noteglitch5032]

Yall are here writing last sentenses for your unfinished wips and I'm here trying to figure out how it will end. Help ! 😅 I'll write the context and give me ideas if u like. A twelve year old girl named Zi was possed by a dead dragon's soul. The dragon would once a year possess her completely to wreak havoc. After killing the only person who cared about her by accident, she was sealed away in a pitch black prison for a month. She wasn't the same of course. I don't know how I'll continue after that, and I don't want it to end in "she was sealed in there forever. the end" The thing is that I have tried so many times, over the course of 2 whole years, but this character is always doomed to a madness arc.

[@noteglitch5032]

My try on ending this even though it makes no sense: I watched as the wind lifted flickers of embers floating downwards through the smokey mist. It looked like snowfall at sunset, just like the day he began to drift away. That day engraved into my memory, just like all the other horrors that happened. For the first time in forever, I smiled. Smiled at the wreck I caused. Grinned at the scent of the smoke. Laughed at their sorrowful cries. Guilt is no more. "I'm finally free!"

[@kamifangirl3338]

hey ana! I'm wondering what books your reading right now!

[@ananeu]

im reading johnathan strange and mr norell!! heheh

[@kamifangirl3338]

@@ananeu ooo sounds interesting!

[@VOID_FNAF_]

Well I’m not done but here’s the first one if anyone can give tips “Rias gray eyes widened with fear, her black short hair flowing by her face as she fell the air beating her back” That’s what I got!

[@Lesbofroggy]

I wouldn't include black and short, I would remove one, because otherwise it would be too much I think, and you've probably described her looks before by that point.

[@SimplyyNxvy]

Hey I missed it but I’m interested in what people think of mine note:I have not finished my book this is just a thought She looked back into her brothers eyes but the angel she once saw in him was gone

[@sarajak]

MAKE A MORE RECENT PART TWO

[@natalieansley2932]

I like these videos because they’re interesting and fun but I think these writers need to keep in mind that there aren’t any valid critiques in these videos… like these writers will have a rude awakening when they work with an editor. These videos are great because they are positive and encouraging but I hope they keep in mind that their writing needs a lot of work in most cases.

[@pixelsbykris5494]

*has brown eyes* ..... U_U

[@thuythanh2169]

Hi ana, I'm Nhung, or I have many English names like Lisa, Cristia. But as a writer (haha, is it? I don't know can I be a writer a not) please call me Ali Dely or Ali for short. I have watched your video again and again, and sorry for this lately comment. I watch them whenever I writing, studying, even when I giving myself a short break. Your video are the best, your worlds are so beautifully, and most important thing is you're my idol. I admire you a lot, you have a really good relationship with your words but I don't, I mean my relationship with my words is not as good as I want. Like I said, I don't know can I be a writer or not but you were inspiring me. You help me a lot with my short and long story. I really want to tell you about my new story but I'm afraid that it can be annoyed you, if you want to read a little about my story, please reply, I always wait for you, my queen

[@ananeu]

aww of course id love to hear your beautiful stories!! i really do believe you are meant to be a writer. even if you’ve only thought about your books or written one sentence - you are a writer!! i am so proud of you for trying, and for leaving a message. your support and words have made my day! (and don’t worry, you English is lovely). I’m so excited for yuu!! I’m sure ur writing is amazing xx

[@thuythanh2169]

@@ananeu omg - I have waited for ur reply and now it's here. Thanks ana! I'll tell you about my story later;)