[And then there were none] - A 3rd Life Poem

[@evihippogrief772]

"the hand still alive, he follows his king" "he fell from the grief, and then there were none" My favorite lines

[@janestorm5737]

those are ma fav to XD

[@PTUBE101_]

14 little Minecrafters Unseen threads connect themselves The Canary calls His rancher falls And then there were 12 12 little Minecrafters A Box of secrets well hidden The dog dies A Secret Soulmate lies And then there were 10 10 little Minecrafters Their odds were almost great He fell to the warden He fell in the open And then there were 8 8 little Minecrafters The ship was a good mix It burned They burned And then there were 6 6 little Minecrafters Homewreckers couldn’t make it anymore Found together Soloed by the Moon And then there were 4 4 little Minecrafters Their intense animosity grew Found by the Moon The exes were doomed And then there were 2 2 little Minecrafters Both filled with shock and stun A sacrifice was made For a moment there was one This 1 little Minecrafter The Moon moments from being done Repents for her mistakes And then there were none

[@applepieguy6456]

I absolutely love this. How long did it take you to make this?

[@PTUBE101_]

@@applepieguy6456 Not Gonna Lie About maybe 10-20 minutes

[@davidtran9455]

@@PTUBE101_honestly that’s really impressive. for this quality it would probably take me hours and i still wouldn’t even come close to

[@YourTypicalHuman]

That is AMAZING

[@PTUBE101_]

@@davidtran9455 I was basically just brainstorming on the spot LOL I also made one for Last Life if you check my other comment on the video Not sure if I’m gonna make one on Limited or Secret Life though🤷‍♂️

[@sweetann9338]

“he fell from the grief” I absolutely love this line

[@daisyrobinson4326]

🎶 sometimes, when I'm lonely, I sit and think about them, and it hurts to remember the good times 🎶

[@DawnOfWonder868]

What song is this?

[@marcusbeach1762]

@@DawnOfWonder868abba - angel eyes

[@runedoom]

With scar

[@its-a-me_Ari]

@@DawnOfWonder868 angeleyes by abba. It’s originally on the vouz les vouz album but I think it’s also on more abba gold :)

[@BrandonCatalano-wq4sm]

Amen

[@KeganLeavess]

Literal CHILLS from this! Following along with the progress was such an awesome experience, but wow does the recieting of the poem really enhance it. The artwork is so beautiful! It feels very medieval-ish with the way it's outlined, but with a modern twist!

[@EverenArt]

Thank you so much! I totally see the medievalness of it! Didn't think of it that way until now!

[@danielkaser1408]

First came the chills, then came the tears... WOW, this is good!

[@Acerz_JL]

“His dogs can’t protect him. Then there were ten” OMG Why is it so sad. So good though

[@dylanwoodcock8620]

This was wonderful. It was paced slowly but over quickly, it displayed events accurately, the formation of the drawings and how they were presented reminds me of a comic that accurately displays the sessions and events of the series. All of these things correlate into a very good representation in f the 3rd Life series.

[@EverenArt]

Thanks my dude! :)

[@ShayerSUtsho]

Could you post a link to the comic you mentioned?

[@shadowdragon2730]

I love the Watcher Symbolism with Grian's final departure. Every line was beautiful, the art was great, it was phenomenal!

[@jacquemat5944]

This is good I hardly know what to say! "He burned like his tree," hit me especially in the feels! Beautiful art, thank you for making it for us!

[@addy9764]

Same about the tree!

[@th3.f0r3st]

I like actually cried what the fuck this hurt so bad I haven’t even watched Ren’s pov yet but the “He followed his king, and then there were five” HURT

[@unavailable_leDog]

*I HAVE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE WHAT IM FEELING AFTER THIS (to good to be true)* D:

[@RubyPiec]

Text version: "14 little minecrafters, like you've never seen. Two were found in the desert, and then there's 13. 13 little minecrafters, in madness they delve. She aims for the kill, and then there were 12. 12 little minecrafters, two now rest in heaven; Bloodlust consumes him, and then there's 11. 11 little minecrafters, the last day begins. His dogs can't protect him, and then there were 10. 10 little minecrafters, hunting down the line; Killed twice, reunited, and then there were 9. 9 little minecrafters, they go over the gate, He burns like his tree, and then there were 8. 8 little minecrafters, a kingdom no longer leaven; A flipflopper falls, and then there were 7. 7 little minecrafters, Dogwarts reduced to bricks; The king has now fallen, and then there were 6. 6 little minecrafters, the hand still alive, He follows his king, and then there were 5. 5 little minecrafters, no longer at war; A clock spells betrayal, and then there were 4. 4 little minecrafters, a search for bigb; A pass is revoked, and then there were 3 3 little minecrafters, unsure what to do; Old loyalty's prevail, so then there were 2. 2 little minecrafters, fend alone in the sun; Friendship is broken, and then there was 1. 1 little minecrafter, the day he has won, he fell from the grief, and then there were none." Explanation: The first death was SolidarityGaming, him and Grian died during the Battle for Red Desert (although only SolidarityGaming lost his last life) The second death was ZombieCleo, who tried to kill Renthedog but failed, as InTheLittleWood and Skizzleman attacked her. The third death was Skizzleman, who Leeroy Jenkinsed himself into the Crastle, hoping to get the red winter axe, this obviously went wrong as he died during this, killing nobody. The fourth death was Smallishbeans, who had a whole lot of dogs, whom couldn't protect him. The fifth death was Smajor1995, who was finally reunited with SolidarityGaming, his husband in 3rd life The sixth death was Etho, who burned while fighting impulse in Dogwarts, I don't know anything about his tree though (the one that burned in the village?), I just know it burned and he was mad ever since The seventh death was Tango, who just was murdered. Literally nothing else about it. The eighth death was Renthedog, who was the king of Dogwarts. The ninth death was InTheLittleWood, who was the hand of Renthedog. The tenth death was Impulse, who was killed by Bdubs, his ally, after being ordered to do so by GoodTimeWithScar. The eleventh death was BigB, who just like Impulse, was killed by Bdubs, their ally, despite having a no kill pass. The twelfth death was Bdubs, who was knocked into a pit of water with GoodTimeWithScar, and GoodTimeWithScar finished him off, despite also having a no kill pass. The thirteenth death was GoodTimeWithScar, who was eventually killed in a 1v1 fist fight in the desert by Grian, his ally. The fourteenth death was Grian, who jumped off Pizza's grave to bring an end to the series.

[@red5_skywalker]

The 8 little mincrafters section is actually "a flip-flopper falls, and then there were seven."

[@RubyPiec]

@@red5_skywalker ooh, why?

[@Ashyiar]

this was really well made! The atmosphere was really well done, as well as the art. Keep up the amazing work!

[@siriusyo7344]

This gave me chills, well done!

[@floweringmantis198]

THE FLOWER HUSBANDS ONE BROKE MY HEART-

[@LilDevyl17]

How many talented people does this Community have? To be able to draw so well, and then to come up with a poem like that? DUDE! All of you Guys, Gals, Demons, Ghouls, and Multi-Fandom Fiends never cease to amaze and impress me! Keep Up the Good Work!

[@nurseryferns]

this hits so hard, i love this poem

[@CaptainKillroy]

This poem was amazing and the visuals did wonders to help. I really liked it

[@timwoods2852]

This more serious tone really gives the deaths weight. The 3rd Life series is pure fun and they're all friends, but they are still competing with ench other, and only one can claim victory, but at the cost of those friends no longer being around. It's a cold, hollow, melancholy victory. The fun is done, so why keep playing? Time to end it all and start anew.

[@aquaticalyang483]

14 little minecrafters Time grasped through their screen The canary will fall And then there were 13 13 little minecrafters His hours were shelved Gave his team the axe And then there were 12 12 little minecrafters Minutes fueled his aggression The last looked in shock And then there were 11 11 little minecrafters With his family again TNT strikes the clock And then there were 10 10 little minecrafters A chase caused decline The ground caused a fall And then there were 9 9 little minecrafters He put trust in his fate Backstabbed by the desert And then there were 8 8 little minecrafters Another killed in succession Her bloodline was out And then there were 7 7 little minecrafters Out of enderpearl tricks An arrow through his head And then there were 6 6 little minecrafters In his stumble he dived No more bad remaining And then there were 5 5 little minecrafters His fireworks roar He fell from the mansion And then there were 4 4 little minecrafters Nosy to a degree Were soulmates no longer And then there were 3 3 little minecrafters And as anger brewed A betrayal among teams And then there were 2 2 little minecrafters He tried hard to run His tie slashed apart And then there was 1 1 little minecrafter The countdown had rung In eternal void he was watched And then there were none

[@aquaticalyang483]

17 little minecrafters Books and quills given are unseen Always a loner in the end And then there were sixteen 16 little minecrafters A curse was now clean Yet the canary now falls second And then there were fifteen 15 little minecrafters He had tried to flee His fencepost stopped him from escape And then there were fourteen 14 little minecrafters Fired up on a planet so green A block broke beneath him And then there were thirteen 13 little minecrafters Gave hearts and raised health A pit dropped his own And then there were twelve 12 little minecrafters Had a panicked expression Dishwasher out of its misery And then there were eleven 11 little minecrafters An enderpearl had been sent But eyes of time now mean nothing And then there were ten Ten little minecrafters Rooms mysterious yet divine A broken heart now left shattered And then there were nine 9 little minecrafters Chose the wrong son to call great A fragmented bloodline now in ash And the there were eight 8 little minecrafters A tnt filled aggression Three against the last roommate And then there were seven 7 little minecrafters A bow hidden in bricks An arrow impaled his back And then there were six 6 little minecrafters His world no longer alive A body knocked upside down And then there were five 5 little minecrafters Mounds of dirt at the core Reduced to gravel and rubble And then there were 4 4 little minecrafters Made himself a nominee Sacrificed thrice for others And then there were three 3 little minecrafters Hearts still remained few A band’s last member split up And then there were two 2 little minecrafters Through the moon and the sun Fell down a ravine And then there was one 1 little minecrafter “She’s dead Scar, you won…” Succeeded his task And then there were none

[@llamaberry5091]

Woah the absolute chills the voice acting, the poem with the rhythming, and art, it's so done beautifully. I love how it's slowly counts down the members who died it's so good, fantastic job. By the way it the narrator you if so fantastic job!

[@EverenArt]

Yeah it's my (Katy's) voice :) and thank you!

[@Octopipeline]

This really reminds me of the game What Remain of Edith Finch. It wonderfully captures the sad melancholy of reading stories about the dead.

[@zyrandomness197]

I need to go rewatch it because there’s so many awesome animatics and I only half understand them ;-;

[@TheJadedDragonArts]

I am at a loss for words... That was phenomenal! Now ima go cry for a bit, cya.

[@Void1350]

wow! the way you presented that made it so much more dramatic than it already was. good job!

[@athyrsonmr]

This makes me want to rewatch the series.

[@Just_One_0]

1. This is a great poem, it perfectly summarises how the end of the series goes while still having a nice touch to it. 2. Reminds me of the 10 little soldiers poem from "And Then There Were None." Maybe that was the inspiration for this poem?

[@ThePosionousViper]

CHILLS- I just checked, 3rd life was 2 years ago- I REMEMBER IT LIKE YESTERDAY BRO! OML I feel old ;-;

[@Godzilllayscool]

The 3rd line made me tesr up.its so sad to hear thst *His dogs cant protect him*

[@acerniss]

This is great. I really liked the reference to Agatha Christie’s ‘And Then There Were None’ and how well it works with this!

[@Jkimnotlolll]

“the day he has won” was my fav

[@StarAxolotl]

I wish I could like videos more than once. Every time I see this-

[@Lord_Ildra]

This was so cool! and i'm glad you decided to read it yourself, you did it really well! and the sound effects were great!

[@EverenArt]

Thanks so much! I was really back and forth on whether I should read it and I had such a good time adding the sound effects!

[@DawnOfWonder868]

Oh my gosh I loved it!!! I was expecting a big timelapse of working on it and was very pleasantly surprised by this!

[@scaringthecrow]

Crazy how this and your DL Running up that hill videos have become two of my favorite comfort videos.

[@sydneydenny7491]

I feel like this piece isn't talked/ loved as much as others, but it should, so much depth in this and it really shows how much death happened and how quickly they all fell.

[@zatheraththeiii805]

why is no one talking about the line "the clock spells betrayal"? ITS SO GOOD

[@ambermeredith112]

WHAT! that is so cool! I love how you can turn something as simple as third life into something as sad, and as beautiful as this. Well done Everen, well done. =D

[@Piper_Allen]

AND TODAYS OSCAR GOES TTTTTOOOOOOOO EVEREN!!!!!!! (and Omegathekid)

[@janestorm5737]

i fall asleep to this, but wake up with nightmares... i love it..

[@littlelucas553]

This is the darkest yet coolest minecraft poem I have ever heard

[@NightinLark]

Duudeee the watcher detail on Grian's tragic win-

[@flying_with_the_stars]

Literally cried. So powerful, even though it's about a Minecraft smp. Wow.

[@ninga3533]

This poem was absolutely amazing I bet if any of the members see it they would love it

[@pancake21709]

It is illegal that this wonderful poem is not more popular this was so good

[@chris2thejmedia]

The 7 to 5, ie the fall of dogwarts, is chilling yet oddly poetic (yes I know it's a poem lol). The hand follows his king, even to the grave

[@Grimlin.]

AHHHHH I come across this every once and awhile and get chill each time I watch it

[@FinCrestProductions]

``killed twice then reunited ``WA SO HOLESOME FOR FLOWER HUSBANDS LOVE IT

[@stuckerfan2563]

For those who don't know this was based a reddit post on r/thirdlifesmp by someone named omegathekid. The person already have made multiple poems one for last life and two for double life

[@robowyatt398]

i cant tell if im getting goosebumps because its cold or because of how amazing this is

[@Expriexp]

not me crying at the dogwarts part 😢 i love their duo ❤

[@Angelo609]

For those curious, the original poem “The Little Soldier Boys” is by Frank Green and is a great poem. Gives me chills anytime I read it. Lovely adaptation of the work, love the art style and the poem’s theme suits the series so well!

[@Aureus_Snow]

17 little minecrafters A story yet untold But one little minecrafter Lost her life to the void 16 little minecrafters A shriek is all it takes For the little canary To hit on the brakes 15 little minecrafters A warden takes more then 1 The ones that watch smile The deaths have only just begun 14 little minecrafters One good time is all it takes For the villain to douse his flames 13 little minecrafters Something so small Yet with a sword Stabbed through the heart Open deaths door 12 little minecrafters Scars on his face Didn't save him From meeting the 14's fate 11 little minecrafters The sun shines too bright Icarus falls By shining light 10 litle minecrafters Slayed by the blessed Atleast for now He's layed to rest 9 little minecrafters Going 3 for 3 The good times slayed again Watched near the willow tree 8 little minecrafters Then the sun falls As icarus came too close Forgot to build up his wall's 7 little minecrafters Inpulsiveness alive Killed by the wind Or was it the tide 6 little mincrafters Remain alive Double the B's Killed by the widow's pride Until there were only 5 5 little minecrafters Small side by side Beans take the pride Gay come inside 4 little minecrafters A long game Comes to an end Killed by a potential ally Killed by a friend 3 little minecrafters 4 kills into one game Everyone that dies Ends up in the same place 2 little mincrafters A chase that ensues Dead before it's realised He thought he would lose 1 little minecrafter Left all on his own The same task over and over When does he go home...

[@romanneonick2449]

Wow good job! Can you please explain your poem?

[@Aureus_Snow]

@@romanneonick2449 It's about secret life. Lizzie fell in the void Jimmy was killed by a Warden And so on. There's also a small reference to the Watchers. People referenced are Canary = Jimmy (Canarycurse) Villain = Scar Icarus = Martyn (Killed by Grian AKA the Icaruscurse) The blessed = Scott (Ally blessing) The sun = Grian (Icaruscurse) Widow = Scott once again (Widow curse)

[@creastalunga7199]

this is the most underated thing in the universe

[@DragonArt-Z]

This was SO COOL! My favorite line was probably when etho died.

[@ShayerSUtsho]

The dread in the music, the wisdom of disaster in the voice, and the chaos and emotions in the art style... This is soooo good!

[@flower7747]

This is so dark I love it I feel like it sums up what happened very well and very ominously while leaving enough out to make you want to watch the series to get all the details and names

[@chloebees-]

2:42 THE EVO SERVER SYMBOL THINGY AHHH I LOVE THIS

[@2placename]

Reading it myself was great but the voice over makes it 100 times better

[@twigbranch4556]

CHILLs, LITTERAL ChILLS 😭

[@lisa_wistfulone7957]

Ohhh. Oh My. The art, the solemnity, the music and effects…. A Beautifully composed and Poignant piece designed to break us…. I Love It!💔💖

[@bluelightning2681]

This was amazing ! the only thing i didn't understand was why Grian is depicted as slipping of the edge in stead of a clear will of jumping. But overall it's still great !

[@ak6ll]

How does this not have more views, incredible. Got the same chills as if it were Dan Stevens narrating this one

[@avux_]

OH WOW! This was so good! Love the art, and the poem was so good.

[@luminoustarisma]

Oooh, this tickles my Agatha Christie chills so much

[@Veevanilla2134]

I LOVE THIS I WATCHED TO POINT OF MEMORIZATION AT THIS POINT PLZ MAKE MORE

[@StarAxolotl]

... That was incredible...

[@HyloRxse]

Ooooo this is so good! It's haunting.

[@littlewrengaming]

CHILLS. This is absolutely amazing! Great job both of you!!!

[@Ghostpepper.creates]

I love how the watcher lore sews into this❤

[@mako_1135]

Wow- that's litterally all I can say just WOW. I personally struggle with any sort of poem and this- well this is simply a masterpiece! As soon as I finished I actually was like "Welp, time to make several accounts and watch, like and subscribe multiple times!" Sadly I do not know how to make multiple accounts. But if I could I would! I applaud you. This was beautiful!

[@GoingSwimmingly]

YOOO that’s just so grim and epic???? And the reading helps it so so much as well!

[@ryancampbell4456]

I am blown away. The writing, the voice and the artwork were all incredible. I love the Life Series and everything about this video was absolutely incredible. what a beautiful sum up of the first season.

[@Azerick_]

This...this is incredible! I haven't even finished the video yet, still only at 30 seconds in and I have to stop and write a comment. The style of the poem, the stark visuals, the way the poem is presented, the background music, all of it combines to form one of the best, in my opinion, pieces of artwork in the 3rd Life fandom! Edit: crying over Scott rn, brb

[@carterlove7293]

The fact that you can take the phrase "little minecrafters" and make it eerie,,, props to you.

[@mr_lemonade4230]

Well done!

[@MistressHela]

This is incredible! I have literal chills

[@dragongal9714]

Last year my highschool put on the play and then there were none. Basically it's a murder mystery that follows a poem with a similar name. This was really cool!

[@Cindersss24]

How? Just how do you do it? This was so magical, and enchanting. I cried. It's insane!

[@rosesaysmeow8358]

Good Job. Death order: Jimmy Cleo Skizz Joel Scott Etho Tango Ren Martyn Impulse BigB Bdubs Scar Grian And Then There Were None.

[@violent-backed-starling]

this is absolutely brilliant!

[@einhornsarah8]

Watched it again right now, and still got goosebumps, I love your works

[@buzemihai7372]

Just... EPIC.... first time commenting in years on a video... it gave me some Game of Thrones vibes ....AWESOME!!!

[@einhornsarah8]

I just noticed that I haven't actually said how bautifull and cool that is. I love every second of it.

[@kayserivt]

“Hunted, then reunited” “Then there are 9” Me: NOOOO MY HEARTTTT

[@bobvelwest]

thia is really cool. makes me wish I had watched third life more recently and could remember it better but about halfway through I started getting it better.

[@flameboi5238]

I have watched this 6 times and I love every second of it thank you for making these kinds of things for other peoples entertainment and enjoyment

[@liliananavarro8852]

He burns like his tree and then there were 8 is my absolute favorite line ❤

[@Escapestarlight]

Oh my god, this is devastatingly beautiful! The emotions really hit me with the narration and wonderfully done illustrations. Just incredible.

[@leanyamaxfield3151]

5 Billion out of 5

[@drakehatch9171]

That was chilling! The way you pronounce all of the words gives me the creeps! 10/10, did watch again!

[@Savannah_831]

I saw this poem on reddit a while ago, im glad that there is an animation to go along with it now!

[@StickFigureFollower]

These are always incredible! You do an amazing job!

[@gabrielleandsamuel4073]

Wasn’t sure what to expect. Since I’m not really a poetry person, I wasn’t sure if I would like it, but you won me over! This is great!

[@teddykatdurpstepper]

Omg, you wanna know how good your poem is? With each verse I could name who was killed off as the number counted down. WELL DONE

[@akitty8481]

Things like this don’t usually make me sad, but this genuinely almost made me cry. Wow.

[@emberhawk14]

This was beautiful, gave me chills

[@User47928]

This is awesome! Massive props to you! This is amazing! The animation is beautiful, and the poem is just… mwuah! Chefs kiss to u!

[@PTUBE101_]

14 little Minecrafters 24 hours, all green The Bad Boy fails The Curse prevails And then there’s 13 13 little Minecrafters The T.I.E.S. enjoyed themselves Then the S. made a sacrifice And then there were 12 12 little Minecrafters Another Bad Boy no longer livin’ With that, the Nose grows And then there’s 11 11 little Minecrafters He was fighting for his family and friends Blown up by the i. And then there were 10 10 little Minecrafters The T. had his life on the line He tripped, ran out of time And then there were 9 9 little Minecrafters His mom was too late Witnessed the death of her son And then there were 8 8 little Minecrafters Mom tried to stay livin’ She joined her 2 sons And then there were 7 7 little Minecrafters A neighbor trapped in the mix Shot in the chaos And then there were 6 6 little Minecrafters The now neighborly Bad Boy made friends to survive He slipped off his own creation And then there were 5 5 little Minecrafters The E. fought for more Engaged in battle, fell to the Gills And then there were 4 4 little Minecrafters Wanting to win for BigB She tries to kill the Gill And then there were 3 3 little Minecrafters A final fight with few A betrayal took place The i. saw his face And then there were… 1? 1 little Minecrafter A outcome of shock and stun Time ticked down And then there were finally none

[@piratecharzilla5900]

This is so good

[@Acerz_JL]

Amazing. This is amazing

[@PTUBE101_]

@@Acerz_JL My favorite part is using the abbreviation letters for Team T.i.E.S and especially the lowercase i. for impulse

[@skarloey1214]

Amazing Simply Amazing.