Another Sad Story

WARING: May make you cry. I love writing short stories. I would love to know what you think about them so please comment and rate.

[@dougtaylor8070]

the boy is really sweet. their love was so strong it hurts

[@dragontatsuya6723]

Well written, very good for a short story. Although I didn't cry, because I knew this was made up, the idea really got through. The sad thing about this is that this actually happens almost every month. Keep up the good work!

[@AusGal260469]

wow a beautiful story you definately have a talent, sad that they both ended their lives but lovely that he couldnt live without her, thank you for sharing xx

[@EmJW98]

I didn't cry but I never do. After reading this it made me think of what I would do if that happened with me and my boyfriend. I got a HUGE knot in my throat and I couldn't speak. This is so heart felt and great! Good job!

[@vhacci]

No matter how many times I watch this video.. it will always put me into tears. Such a tragic, really. I wish all guys are like that who would end their life just to be with the person they love so much. Please do more sad stories~!

[@saigames721]

I'm crying its so painful I could feel the emotion. I can't stop crying. You did a great job

[@QueenOfGr1991]

I cried reading this it is a really heart touching story. It just made me appreciate what me and my boyfriend have thanks.

[@melvintan1751]

It really deeply touched me and reminded me of my past and preset. I love the presentation. I love the font, the background and everything you expressed. Keep it up.

[@amandapanda374368]

This is... Heart BROKEN :( I know I won't do something stupid like that. I'd just be quiet for years, not speak to hardly anybody, and won't be happy for a long time. I'd take the pain even tho how BAD it hurts. I'd cry myself to sleep. I will be very upset no matter what. But, if I lost the guy I am with, I sure won't get with nobody, I want him to be my last of EVERYTHING even tho he may not be my first. Well, you make good sad stories.

[@crazichick2]

This was the most beautiful, ris-taking story i ever read. Im moved!!! BRAVA!!!

[@shonajamesxx]

i cried soo much :( i do feel for that boy as he say his love hanging and then sacrifised himself to be with her, now thats what i call love :') x

[@MilkAndCookies2596]

OMG! I am over here balling like a little baby. You should write more stories like this, yes they make me cry but I enjoy reading them to remind me how lucky I am to have a bf that makes me happy and that I am happy with my life.

[@AprilRain41598]

OMG im legit crying right now! as soon as it read, "turn around and ill be hanging in the closet" i just lost it!!! amazing short story!!!

[@kayleejohns8739]

thats very sad but it proves that if your truley in love then you will do ANYTHING for the ones you LOVE

[@corgilover126]

don't listen to the haters !!!!! haters gonna hate right? that was a beautiful story.. it had me in tears

[@killerkid11208]

Am I the only one that doesn't have enough feelings to cry over this?

[@jazzylaughing6446]

this is the saddest one ever but that is actually the real bf and gf

[@mywebweb]

I was in the mood to cry and this really did it for me bawlin my eyes out right now...

[@TheTechnoCreator]

Very hard not to cry yet I easily whimpered most sad story on KZbin I'm so sending this to my girlfriend love it and love her Xx

[@timothygill9391]

sad story kinda show how strong love can be . But "some" people who take their life away are selfish, they dont understand how much pain the people who love them will feel or how depress it will make them.

[@nikaylalittle7308]

It's sad but, I didnt cry, they have powerful love!

[@inesbalbuena7105]

Omg i cried it was so sad.hopefully i wont have to livenin pain like that so good luck with that

[@xlulu620x]

Awww thats the kind of guy you want when he usually says i'll die for you :"C

[@torinelson2014]

Brought tears down my face.

[@CuzULuvMeKhawxxx]

this is so sad but i found another sad story before about a brother and sister and that story had to be the most beautiful yet upsetting story i ever heard :'(

[@poter223]

VERY BEAUTIFUL STORY..

[@Marina-lj4fq]

in tears... great story

[@lovergirl3001]

I watch this every year ever since my friend died and the reason is the same thing happened with the phone call, the note and the closet

[@sophiebourget9425]

sooooooooo sad i cried the whole time love your stories right more

[@paris101nicole]

So beauiftul, I wish I had a written copy I could read whenever, Wow

[@marykdavis7710]

Absolutley wonderful story your a very good writer and having stories with such conviction is wonderful and intoday's world story or not hon situations like these do happen and every day (:

[@Iloveyhugonzalez]

omg this should be a movie ..... everything was so unpredictable an dsad i loved it :'(

[@mariahconnors6438]

I was crying at the end!! (I cry every night though and most people probably think I'm depressed) good story

[@LeBeauPapillon1]

Wow...................When he read the note and it said "But turn around and i will be hanging in my closet" I cried.....So hard......

[@chexyface13]

okay i was like crying buckets..as much as i did on titanic..so beautiful

[@Selastine14]

A really nice and sad story. The hanging in my closet part scared the hell out of me./:

[@KACJ1812]

omg. i started crying at the part when he pulled out the knife. this is so sad i hope this never happens to anyone

[@lillykoala]

I've NEVER cried for a KZbin video before . Congradulations.

[@ricomonoful]

I loved it... Except the creepy part of the note on where u say, I am hanging on te closet behind u, that scared me, lol

[@ZimmaGal12]

That is so sad :( im actually crying right now :( beautiful story of love x

[@babygirl103ful]

I have never cryed this much my whole life i swear.

[@TheBrittanytrosclair]

I don't usually cry to theses but this one made me cry sooooooooo hard :'(

[@1tigersrule]

it was so great. i will cry every time i watch it.

[@hopeslatton50]

Would totally make a good tearjerker movie! Second Romio and Juliet!

[@xoxokathyluvsyouxoxo]

omg how can you enjoy something like this! im crying my eyes out

[@haileycamacho6561]

I like the heart writing

[@taylorlisa22]

I cried so much xx well done for an amazing story x

[@dgirlgirl120]

Awwwww

[@lacev123]

omg awwww -crys- atleast they will be together at last and they will be happy :)

[@CyndiRodriguez95]

BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT

[@365blackkid]

that reallly really freaken sad.... this story has me in tears...

[@MusicLoverrs77]

VERY GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!

[@leslyruiz5782]

thats true love right there im still crying!!!!!!!! :'(

[@jasmineyanez50]

Omg :'( such a good story maker you are!

[@briannamora4611]

you know its sad if i cry beacuse i almost never cry aand this is one of the rare occasions i did it was beautiful

[@Iconiac4life2900]

This story literally had me in tears! ;(

[@EmilyHisham]

i love it

[@MoInspirational]

I think she was going through depression because my cousin committed suicide as well and he was a depressive.The story was sad and kinda selfish but beautiful and incredible because he didnt want to live without her so he killed himself do they could be together.You are an excellent writer.I was about to cry but I couldnt cause seriously I woutldnt stop.

[@lowryder1998]

This was the best story I ever seen great job

[@CrossKiesha]

First sad youtube story I actually cried about. For once it wasn't kids spking lyk tis. It made it so much more emotional and moving, if only more people realize. I didn't cry because of the story itself, what the boy did was stupid. I cried because I'm afraid this might happen to me. I cried because this made me realize I can't go die. I have to stay. For my love. Even if I wish for him to forget me, he never will, I know that. I don't want harm to come to him, I have to live...

[@SisiJV]

i really cried...wait OMG i really cried!!!!it was a very good storyi can't wait to hear another one.

[@GladeOurWorld]

what effect did you use for the typewriter effect? :S windows live?

[@smiley6045]

This is so beautiful! Made me cry! ❤

[@kenneth01219]

amazing song and it makes me cry

[@Christianangelbaby3]

Well.. I cried my eyes out.. Look right now no one knows that suicide is really bad here in Mississippi.. It's not going so well... I've been abused so many times in my past and my real mother never cared she was a drug addict.. Love is something that lasts and isn't supposed to be torn apart.. I love everyone.. Don't go down hill love everyone every chance you get BC once they are gone they go so quickly and u won't get to say goodbye.. So love everyone god loves you..-\3

[@violetmcguire6294]

I started crying and knew what would happen the moment he turned around in her room :((( I'm still in tears

[@DanceGurl68]

loved it. *clapps* that was so sad. wut font was used?

[@lindsayhill1283]

omg that's sooo sad he can't live without her x

[@WildPenguin123]

LOL! It says you love writing short stories but in the video you say you're sorry for the lengthy video....XD But it was a good sad story! I really did love it!!

[@Buntsukii]

I love sad stories this was very good....

[@number1peetafan]

So SAD I just cried I loved it

[@luciagarciaromero7201]

Amazin story tht made me cry!

[@Fily986]

i wished i had l7v like this and this really did make me cry! i'm crying hard.

[@shodanlaw1981]

@ragnarokrock Thank you, someone who actually understands why I think it is dumb. Also, you make a great point, why didnt he call 911 or something, he just runs away like a weirdo and jumps into bed. On a more serious note, suicide is not an answer and I feel like this video makes it all ok.

[@AlexiaMarie16]

Good story. Very sad!

[@kanashiiaki14]

nice story i love it

[@hetaliasealand7463]

most of these stories aren't sad, but i saw this and it was so sad and it was bueatyful. thank you so much!

[@NumberOneCapitalsFan]

this is soooooo good. but i am crying sooooooo badly right now, even though im not the crying type.it was so sad. yet so good

[@arianadare9640]

this is really sad! i wanted to cry because it was to real things like this happen all the time and it sucks

[@Roflolmao65]

wow u r a good writer i am fricken balling right now!

[@paigegliddon9351]

That's so sweet and now I'm crying :'( x

[@jennyoneill1309]

i literally got so scared when the note was saying look behind u...i was covering my mouth good video but rly depressinggg

[@nelsonwells2288]

I love this story! OMGOD I'm crying right now.

[@OzeraGurl731]

Omg this is really sad I love it

[@goodgirltasha]

that was so sad :( 10/10 luved it

[@wackdha6033]

omg i cried so much such a good story

[@miiimiiikyuuu]

I didn't really cry, but it was a really good story, i liked it. Do you have more stories like that?

[@shannonrogersxo792]

OMG This is so sad made me cry! xx

[@Cocotherabbit101917]

Actually cried!! *crys*

[@OllyMursBiggestnumbe]

It brought tears to my eyes.

[@meggieschriewer4289]

Amazing!!!! I cried

[@liam3354]

omg that is so sade but i can see that he loved her so much

[@ChrisJazzie16]

i love this moive!!

[@Teamoj11]

damm i am crying.. make more stories i love it...

[@toldyou123able]

i cried for d rest of the day,u could be a writer dude....

[@mayamoulton]

Ohman! :'( I'm teary eyed!!!! This is so sad !!!

[@shrutiroxxbagwe]

wow! what a story.

[@913163509]

I bawled my eyes out it was horrible about the lives but also sweet....

[@alexisfreeman9944]

Very sad but loved the story :)

[@musicmakesmehapp1000]

i feel the holes in my heart being awakened lovely story though