'Siren' - GTAV Machinima

[@coz4371]

A short story I made about this. More will come. Disclaimer: I am not a professional writer of any sort and this is just a hobby The sound of the siren in the distance brings me back to reality. I look down at the limp body of the store clerk lying on the ground. A gun in my hand. I can’t believe what I’ve done. The shock of taking my first life overwhelms me. All this for some money. I keep my eyes on the corpse as I grab the cash. The siren is getting closer. I run out the back, horrified at what I’ve done. The rain beats down, chilling my spine. I turn the corner and keep running, while looking for the car. A cop jumps out from behind a dumpster and points his gun at me. I raise my hands, maybe this is what I get. I feel the rain soak through my jacket and my bandana. Droplets land on my sunglasses and trickle down. Suddenly a bullet pierces through the night, through the silence, and through the cops head. The body falls down. The cop lets out a small cry as the light leaves his eyes. I look over to where the bullet came from. It was her, the Siren. She has black high heels, and tight black pants with gashes in them. A grey coat covers her back, and dark driver gloves cover her hand. Within those gloved hands lies a gun. It is gold and silver plated with fancy markings on it. She wears dark lensed aviators. Her hair is a luscious orangish red, her lipstick bright red. She doesn’t bother wearing a mask. I feel intimidated even though we’re on the same side. At least I think we are but she holds her gun up for a moment longer which makes me question our team up. Then, luckily for me, she drops her gun to her side and turns. She walks away as if she owns the place and from my perspective, she does. I take one last glance at the body of the dead cop and chase after her. I try and walk with as much confidence as she does but I know that I don’t. She gets into her stylish old car. Im not a car person but I can tell it was expensive. I open the door and get into the passenger seat. Without checking her mirrors she speeds floors it and we fly off the curb. I try and keep my cool but I am sweating like crazy. We speed through the streets when I see a cop coming toward us on the road to our left. It chases after us but isn’t as fast as us. It stays about a block behind but does not loose sight of us. Suddenly she smashes her elbow into her window. It shatters and she reaches behind her into her pocket and pulls out an explosive. Im desperately trying to keep my cool. She reaches her arm out the window and throws the explosive on the ground behind us. As the cop reaches the bomb I close my eyes. The explosion shakes me to my core. The car swerves to avoid a chunk of the burning car that was thrown toward us. How can I keep up with this girl I think to myself. This insane gorgeous girl, she takes my breath away.

[@ashskyqueen]

Cozbinot This is great! I love your view on the male character, how he feels and what he's thinking in the moment. You nailed it. Keep going with your writing this is very good. I'd love to see more. 😉

[@coz4371]

thanks. Plan to write more soon. Do you ever plan on making a part 3?

[@ashskyqueen]

Yes I do

[@coz4371]

Ash - Skyqueen awesome. I had a quick question about how long was the time between heists. Like between the first and the second one that you showed. I assumed a fair amount of time as the male character is much more comfortable robbing. Just wondering if you had a certain amount of time. Also I know this is a long shot but if you need any help on the new one wether it's editing or writing let me know.

[@rngmodz5314]

Cozbinot I regret pressing read more

[@jadensaied2324]

The sign of a talented director/creator, is the ability to tell a complete story without a single word

[@ashskyqueen]

Thank you :)

[@jesskadel6459]

Ash - Skyqueen you made your character look sexy and dangerous. like it !

[@kingwolf9034]

+Ash - Skyqueen mod what

[@ANDREWSAMY562]

I'm actually super dumb... Can u tell me the story?

[@TravisOtt90210]

This honestly is one of the best rockstar editor made short movies I've ever seen

[@RzEditz]

Dam this is insane, some of the animations of characters were used to perfection, spot on camera angles and a great song choice, insane stuff great job ash.

[@Dada9x9]

great use of the r* editor. The music sync & camera angles were on point

[@PayaweAmicare]

(　^ω^)

[@maxthememeboi]

Whats the song called

[@GrimAhren]

Most cincematically competent GTA video made with Rockstar Editor. Great job!

[@perplexBMX]

That ending was amazing. Really well put together, great work Ash!

[@DeadBoyVonn]

This video was amazing. Very well done 👏 when the FIB swarmed the house I was like "Well, this is how it ends" but damn. I wasn't expecting the ending at all

[@heavy_ang_patay]

4:05 "Sorry babe, I'm an ambitious girl, and you, you're just, small time."

[@ashskyqueen]

+Iamnotaspy47 I do miss Catalina lol

[@Doublepulse]

This is the kind of storytelling I'm trying to work with my new GTA Online web series. I love the emphasis of the music, shots and sound. Great work Ash!

[@UrBaconMeCrazy]

Your camera work just flows so nicely and the song coupled with the story has my attention the whole way through. I keep watching it over and over again, Ash its sooo good!

[@theWarlock590]

Whyyyyyyy?! Wasn't expecting that twist! Brilliant work Ash.

[@CARAMBAMEDIAVIBE]

The video is clearly made with a soul! It gives me goosebumps

[@WinterNukeYT]

This video made me a better FiveM youtuber. I watched this months ago and it still effects how I edit my videos.

[@sarcasm4905]

Amazing! This is the best GTA machinima I've seen. Great "directing", song choice.. Everything. Very well done!

[@ashskyqueen]

+Herkko Koskinen Hey Herkko! Always good to see you here! Glad you like it. Thanks :):):)

[@sametcicek5896]

+ash0191 ⚠⚠MAKE MORE VIDEOS THX 👍👏⚠⚠

[@CivicAndCBR]

i will honestly say this is the most well put together video of gtav i have seen given the mods and pc work though cant hate on a project done this well. Can imagine the time and effort put into it and i applaud you both.

[@ashskyqueen]

Thanks so much. Part 2 in production now. Coming soon :)

[@DocAlexandrite]

This was brilliant! I loved the ending, I thought it was going to be the typical ending where they live happily ever after, glad it made more sense than that. If you ever need help, or can help me, with a machinima just ask!

[@tomhibbert8963]

that was absolutely incredible, nice work man. Lots of inspiration i'm gonna use for my series on rockstar editor

[@Elias-yl7re]

This was the best gta video i ever seen and that music i dont think you can choose better

[@GAMEBAWSE]

Ive come back to this video to watch more then a few times the overall story telling and editing mixed with the song choice and the clips you chose to use came together perfectly! Really left a mark on me lol ;) Nice work

[@ashskyqueen]

Thanks! :)

[@sammantha5334]

GAME BAWSE same here lol I lost track on the times I've watched this video.

[@joshua910crab7]

She went through all of that 2 rescue him then killed him in the end...😂😂 lol

[@BloodLust180]

You sure he's dead? ;D

[@dankmemegod221]

+BloodLust180 well getting shot in the head normally does that

[@BloodLust180]

I never saw no head shot :P All I heard was the gun go off hehe

[@dankmemegod221]

+BloodLust180 you know something

[@BloodLust180]

I might......I might not ;D Who knows....

[@Jack_pev]

This is genuinely better than real movie trailers great job

[@zakwilkomusic5023]

Mate this deserves a Oscar! Excellent look forward to watching more!

[@Roronoa_D_Jose.]

this had me hooked every second of the video. What an amazing job

[@maxEPSYLON]

Holy shit!! This was so awesome! :O Great work Ash and Bloodlust!

[@mxndlesspunk]

That was awesome every camera angle, the storyline, the music great work my dude

[@JamoreOropeza]

Woah amazing! U deserve more subs and recognition!

[@GAMEBAWSE]

STUNNING edit one of the best GTA videos I've ever seen! Awesome job! 10/10

[@thomas_ireoneftw4547]

I love it I love the music the cinematics, everything. It made me see GTA V in a whole new light! PLZ make a part two it would be absoloutly brilliant! Thank you!

[@Dirneen]

It's a music video I dont think there is gonna be a other one.(the guy is also dead.Unless he relives I dont think there is a part two comming.)

[@septiceyesamuwu]

+Snip Teck you didnt saw that he got shot she might not shot him 😂😅

[@Dirneen]

+GermanZeRo Yes but in this case why did she aim him with a gun ?

[@alexander3079]

Such a great vid! Can't imagine how you got all this to work and an totally amazing story. Respect!

[@ashskyqueen]

Thank you :)

[@Scromanoe]

This is absolutely amazing man. I make movies as well but... This is really good!

[@x_Bl4ckw4tch_x]

The best of all gta Music Videos i ever saw nice work man

[@ashskyqueen]

+Goldenmann Thank you :)

[@Asfieldi]

Wow that's sick... the end is made, I think for each person, invent the end... that's cool but strange ^^ Really beautiful cinematics, nice story, I love the music and... good interpretation for mods, but... in multiplayer, do we have a risk to be banned with them? Good job as always, ash.

[@Asfieldi]

I rewatched it, I think she killed him because he's the person who provoked mainly these problems especially at the beginning ^^

[@ashskyqueen]

+Asfieldi No mods in multiplayer. Scene director allows you to program multiple characters in play at once in director mode, including both your online ones. I duplicated Bloodlust's character for the animated scenes :)

[@Asfieldi]

ash0191 wow, nice, I didn't know "scene director" I have to try that. Thanks ash.

[@ashskyqueen]

All info on mods used is in the description. Well worth a look. Great tools for video makers :)

[@Asfieldi]

ash0191 yes, thanks. But I knew all of these mods, not how use them with two players ^^ Thanks btw

[@StefanS02]

I got goosebumps. Thats really well made!

[@RisingJake]

Congrats on the mention, dudette!

[@jsquirrel9523]

+RisingJake dudette*

[@lazlivesgames]

ash I've watched your stunt vids so many times and as you know,I've been blown away by them..but,this vid is just O.M.G.. absolutely brilliant!! 👍 👌

[@whogotbeef2]

Great video Ash and Bloodlust ;)

[@RisingJake]

Ash, this is really well done. You are quite proficient at the Editor and I would love to see more of your talent! Sub'd :D

[@ashskyqueen]

+RisingJake Thanks! More on the way :)

[@TheRealHDee]

That was crazy. Awesome job.

[@workhardplayhard1927]

well deserved Rockstar mention!!! I'm trying to get on that list myself...lol awesome video and we'll done!!!

[@AgentZX]

Sick ash, song fits every part of the video and every scene´s keept my stuck to the screen. This is Perfection! love it!

[@kozmad_alin5374]

Had to come back to this one after the second one. You and BL are just.... I can't describe it with words

[@ashskyqueen]

Thanks :)

[@kozmad_alin5374]

Don't thank me, you are the one making the awesome videos :)

[@Tom_Fishing_Be]

It's fantastic ! It is one of the best video I've seen . Ash good job you have great talent! Continued like this does not change anything !

[@ashskyqueen]

+Jack Daniel's Thank you Jack! :)

[@crystalphillips8610]

Amazing as always, thank you!!!

[@WilliamSoffe]

Wow, that was absolutely amazing. Keep up the brilliant work!

[@KenCornflocker]

Most excellent! Unexpected ending, but a great one. Major props!

[@ashskyqueen]

+Ken Cornflocker Thank you very much. Credit due for +BloodLust180 and the mod creators too please check them out :)

[@KenCornflocker]

You need to join goodfellasiclan.clanwebsite.com/activity they would love someone of your caliber ther

[@ashskyqueen]

Thanks for the tip ill check it out :)

[@KenCornflocker]

Please do, I am watching your other videos.. Freaking impressive as hell

[@ashskyqueen]

Thanks. I have worked very hard over the past few years to get the shots. Love this game it's so versatile you can do almost anything :)

[@fatherandson1422]

God I never seen such epic and amazing video amazing work man

[@misterking761]

Great Video, I LOVED IT :D I watched it over and over!

[@ashskyqueen]

Thank you :)

[@antbren08]

great job Ash, i've seen a lot of these but that actually gave a tingling spine! pure excellence pet. 💲

[@ashskyqueen]

+antbren08 Cheers! Was a challenge but I really enjoyed making this one. Big learning curve :)

[@ItsJustGilly]

I watched this video A lot and I still love it! :D Saving it in a playlist ;D

[@ashskyqueen]

Working on part 2 :)

[@ItsJustGilly]

+Ash - Skyqueen AWESOME! Got notifications on :p

[@theedexter1996]

+Ash - Skyqueen REALLY?!?!? YES!

[@CoutaLove]

Please!!!! I will be waiting ;)

[@jack3046]

This is really a good film. Props to you, good job.

[@BroxShorts]

Holy shit Ash & Bloodlust180 you both did an amazing job on this video! Did you do the Animations with the Scene Director mod, or with the Trainer? I guess he got shot at the end because he was only focusing on the money and not on her? :0

[@ashskyqueen]

+oh Brox Both plus open interiors and ambience :)

[@minecraftgameplay2683]

+ash0191 can I have the link for this song he have touching my heart and I'm a boy:P

[@ashskyqueen]

+Minecraft Gameplay player.epidemicsound.com/#/search/?search_query=Whole+Inside

[@BroxShorts]

+ash0191 Great work! I thought it was only until I saw those animations :P

[@Batman---el9ey]

Another amazing video from you, thank you for giving this work of art.

[@ashskyqueen]

+Batman Asylum Thank you :)

[@diamondbiscutz9641]

Wow! That was absolutely stunning

[@thejoker-wu1sp]

damn that shit was super excellent.felt like i was watching a high budget production. who would guess a silent film could be that entertaining in 2017... shit was was awesome! excellent superb production!

[@Vertical_Horizon]

Awesome Vid,dude! Great work!

[@tatids7174]

love it! Ich schaue das mindestens 3mal an. Richtig gut gemacht! Respekt!

[@yayajpn]

Omg nice job Ash ! You used the r* editor pretty well ! But I didn't understand the ending at all :(

[@alsann3527]

+SombreNooB | GTA EDITOR j'ai vu ton comm et j'étais grave content je me suis dit enfin un français pour qu'il m'explique la fin bhe non en fait mdr

[@godmode9476]

Bruh i keep watching this over and over its soo good .

[@GipfelKuh1905]

You really should make an full Movie and use this as a Trailer :) Such an great work work !!!

[@ashskyqueen]

+Niklas Lubos Thanks Niklas. That's an interesting idea. I am working on ideas for a follow up vid. I will consider that :)

[@GipfelKuh1905]

+ash0191 if you need some ideas just contact me !! I have some really good ideas for an Movie :)

[@DavidDrops]

amazing! like its insane!

[@Maurice-mg6df]

Incredible ash ;) very nice bro!

[@Arentall]

you should do it even in hollywood. I'm serious. Great amazing work!!!

[@neelatif6517]

I felt like I watched a quality 20 century fox movie,this would actually be a great video and no lines just silent acting and the music :D

[@mirko_the_mod]

That was awesome. Great job!

wow. nicely edited and cool story :) Good job

[@leadroftherats8488]

Very well done! This is great stuff.

[@failguygaming8853]

Nice work, very entertaining :)

[@Jan.de.h]

Great video ash! Really like the agles :)

[@dudu_br4fre_957]

the best omg i loved this bro

[@prodigyfilms8170]

this was really good. keep up the good work.

[@NightmareCanFly]

This was incredible! I really enjoyed it, but you killed him :( :'(

[@minecraftgameplay2683]

I don't now but I think on this reason he think on money and not on she

[@kappa3052]

+Minecraft Gameplay bestes Englisch xD Ihm war die Liebe zu ihr wichtiger als das Geld und sie hatte ihn nur ausgenutzt um Geld zu machen.

[@minecraftgameplay2683]

Ok

[@minecraftgameplay2683]

Aber schöner film

[@Kevin-sk7ex]

+Minecraft Gameplay English on point👌

[@kaililkendrick]

BEAUTIFULLLLLL ABSOLUTELY BEAUUTIFULLLL

[@ashskyqueen]

Thanks :)

[@kaililkendrick]

+Ash - Skyqueen You should really contact me via skype, kik email, twitter, etc! This is briliant. I've been searching for fellow gifted rockstar editors for ages! if interested, here's my information. email: [e-mail] twitter: kailil kendrick kik: UnderarmCape xbox: UnderarmCape

[@ashskyqueen]

Wow! I just looked at your channel. You're very good :)

[@kaililkendrick]

+Ash - Skyqueen Thanks! I personally feel that that Michael's rampage video isnt that good compared to my other works lol. i wish i had pc

[@ashskyqueen]

You're pulling off some great shots without PC that's very impressive. Micheal vid did hold me until the end. I liked the dark feel and the soundtrack is a perfect fit. Normandy was awesome too and the comedy vids had me laughing. Keep it up :)

[@NetworkGate]

NICE Ash !!! really really nice

[@dereksdump]

ur one of my favorite editors for gta v

[@NikiHQ]

Ash, I love this. Well done.

[@ashskyqueen]

Thanks Niki :)

[@silentlady408]

One of the best video I ever seen on GTA ! great

[@ashskyqueen]

+Silent Lady Thank you :)

[@thesavage9716]

holly shit damn best editor of gta 5 I've ever seen, see it should bee more like this do part 2 please

[@streetmachine6697]

outstanding work! really well done!

[@x_Bl4ckw4tch_x]

7 years later and this aged well like fine wine. I remember watching so many of these good old gta self made movies. But today I find it nearly impossible to find them again cause I either forgot the names or youtube is filled with all these mod gta videos and so on.

[@someguy9112]

i dont know what else to say but wow. incredible ash

[@unbekannt826]

This Video is so AMAZING! I want MORE!! :D

[@ItsJustGilly]

4 years ago.. Still has me in awe..

[@BiggHefty]

43 people are haters. i loved this video. very well done and music fit the tone perfectly. great job.

[@ashskyqueen]

Thank you :)

[@misterking761]

GREAT VIDEO 👮😀 :D

[@knobby1142]

Wow just wow this is amazing it really is well done keep it up

[@LaStazy]

This is awesome ! It's just perfect i really like this !!

[@ashskyqueen]

+Nastazia Schnikova Thank you :)

[@OnlyAgainst]

After about one year I'm watching the video again. Still one of the greatest GTA Videos ever made. 💖😇

[@ashskyqueen]

Thanks. It's still my best daily performer. Very proud of it. Working on part 3 atm :)

[@OnlyAgainst]

Ash - Skyqueen I'm sure it'll be fantastic. You're my absolute idol. :p

[@hamyeager]

I'm literally in love with this 😍 good job

[@xxakbalxx6758]

I have no words!! JUST AMAZING!!! 8DDD

[@ashskyqueen]

Thank you :)

[@whogotbeef2]

that c4 throw epic

[@bane6104]

Awesome! I'm trying to get good with the editor, still working on it, only just started. Damn that is awesome though, thumbs up to that.

[@ashskyqueen]

+Bane Thanks. Editor is an amazing tool! Check out Scene Director 2.1 mod if you have PC it was essential for this video :)

[@bane6104]

ash0191 I only just uploaded a video of my own with editor just tonight. xD It's my first ever one. I've made a few mistakes in it but I'll get the hang of it. Hopefully one day end up smooth and grand! :D I plan to keep going with it because it's fun, I wanna get better.

[@BetteBalterZen]

That was fucking amazing... Almost brought a tear to my eyes. No kidding. Very well done. I enjoyed this ALOT. Keep it up

[@ashskyqueen]

+GrandTheftAutoZen - BetteBalterZen Thank you :)

[@timon4001]

+ash0191 Why did he die at the end?

[@benmoreton5175]

This is insane, can't wait for the film to be released 😂😂 Why did she kill him? It's got a 50 shades of grey feeling to it haha Absolutely amazing editing skills, I have come looking for inspiration for my own video, I'm going to give up now hahaha Well done to you 👍🏻

[@ashskyqueen]

Thanks Ben :) Part 2 is almost finished maybe you'll get some answers...

[@StandartSkill]

Insane Movie Oo Part II Coming soon !? :P

[@TheQuickPeanut]

ich glaube schon so was sollte man weiter machen !

[@deinemutterlp2967]

+Cryliax gebe dir recht man könnte einen 2 stunden film draus machen

[@GameMario51]

+deine mutter lp Gebe dir recht wenn man ein Film draus macht wehre es mehr Arbeit aber wehre geil!

[@TheQuickPeanut]

Jo glaube ich auch

[@lXe0n08]

+Standart Skill

[@tonyadrinkhorn6206]

By far the best shoe film I've seen

[@derthomas448]

what a great Video. its just amazing

[@CreepastianAnimations]

Amazing Video! Great work!

[@LeeAndrewVideos]

Very cool! Ending was surprising but better him than the girl. Also, the girl looks nearly like mine but without tattoos. :)

[@ashskyqueen]

+Lee Andrew Thank you. She kinda looks like me, but with a better bod lol

[@joeygabagool3066]

BRAVO! Nicely done.

[@TheAngryDoughnut]

absolutely loved it. Wished the chick was a little bit more prettier. But overall, this was probably one of the most beautiful videos I've ever seen!

[@ashskyqueen]

Thank you :)