I Fixed My Build with Your Comments...

[@MasterJ30]

Thats way better but, there should be a cool closing transition into the game after the loading is done

[@Dragzell.]

Make the bike slower in the donut

[@rallicat69]

please yes

[@Lazoole]

I think that would look better

[@VoresKanal]

Yes

[@blurred-]

The player-avatar thing actually isn't that bad, it's just a couple of lines of code. All you need to do is put a dummy in the pose you want the character to be in, and then make a simple script that puts the HumanoidDescription of the character into the dummy, like this: local humanoid = character:WaitForChild("Humanoid") local dummyhumanoid = dummy:WaitForChild("Humanoid") local description = humanoid:GetAppliedDescription() dummyhumanoid:ApplyDescription(description)

[@maskstorm1]

doesnt work

[@TommyflamStudios]

@@maskstorm1 the last line should be dummy.humanoid, not dummyhumanoid (it’s just a typo)

[@maskstorm1]

@@TommyflamStudios ah ok, I real need to learn lunar

[@turbin3dev]

make it so when you're about to finish loading the bike zooms off along the road

[@TrikksFNLive]

I was just about to recommend the same thing

[@trlskeleton5888]

That would be sick

[@ScriptingPortal]

The donut its self looks a bit weird so maybe make it smaller, and pivot around maybe the players leg turning the bike if yk what I mean,

[@Elavra]

player avatar is amazing idea. Its not up to us to get you to 500 likes to make it, its up to you if you want your game better quality or not 🤷‍♂

[@FancyCatt]

True

[@cedricschenkels6540]

Maybe when your done loading the character drives off? Btw good job!!

[@QuanQuantum]

I think maybe some more lighting effects on the loading screen could look awesome! Maybe some more dynamic lighting in the back or something.

[@makeitxx]

Constructive criticism here, I think you should slow down the spinning a little bit, maybe like 50% slower or more, and I think there should either be a fade, or a cool transition when your done loading like the bike zooms off or something, also just for a little detail, not sure if there’s purposely nobody inside the cop cars, but if not then maybe add some rigs in them, otherwise this one is def better

[@TrikksFNLive]

Turn the transparency of the donut on the road down a tiny bit so it is more subtle as at the moment it looks a little out of place

[@napnap_32]

I think the tire tracks could be better tbh but overall cool concept

[@thegamingproyo4417]

I think it would look pretty cool if your screen fades to white because of the smoke hitting the camera from the bike and then it transitions like that to your character

[@rallicat69]

7:00 hire an animator if you don't already have one

[@rehmanaather795]

Wait you're the guy from the DevKing video " Can i make a roblox game in 24 hours". You were the builder

[@RoBuilder]

Yep

[@Ambitious_Aligator]

I comment my own liked 👍

[@cl0kc]

🤖

[@Ryber1]

Very funny……

[@Mrgrotop]

Your I replied 👍 comment to

[@Flaim_101]

1:11 Yoo this flip suggestion was my idea if he does that that would be lit 🗣️ (Porlly not exclusively my idea tho)

[@Raz3mnrax3mn75]

RoBuilder You rocked we are shocked😮 cool! :)

[@qawzee]

yo bro, make the bike have THE CLIENT avatar, like it loads up the humanoidDesc. of the player. That would be much more cool. (players like to see themself on these things)

[@Kapruz]

he said it would be hard to implement but its not lol

[@qawzee]

@@Kapruz it is NOT hard at all.

[@qawzee]

@@Kapruz actually TOO easy tbh, easier than making a custom character for it it takes literally 6-7 lines of code lol

[@234rrf]

just telling you, you are ALMOST at 1000 likes on your one video so that goofy bike might be added soon hehehe

[@sixzeroguides6617]

Instead of the solid triangles in the top left / bottom right, change it to a circle pattern thats solid in the corner but slowly goes transparent or smaller towards the center

[@Alexanderfem]

Add cops in the cop cars, and make the donut slower

[@Chillingwithextremeplayz]

You should add golf carts and a dirt bike track

[@LeoWinsAll]

Looks like you are making that player on bike feature

[@TheChickenDev971]

Suggestion: you could make the bike slower and add yourself in one of the cop cars

[@felmish9381]

I think you should add a secret loading screen that happens like one in 1 million for a user and the user would also get a badge and the loading screen can be like the cops are chasing the biker

[@rallicat69]

cool idea but i feel like it's not worth adding right now since the game has a lot of things that need to be prioritized instead.

[@wazey6752]

put brian 636 bike in a wheelie when hes doing a donut and animate the players with his knee up against the seat of the bike

[@Hmm-id3vq]

Amazing! Keep it up! You are great that you take people's suggestions seriously :). Believe me, many dont.

[@StickChimpp]

You should rotate the front of the bike more to the inside of the circle and turn the wheel a little to the right so it looks like he's/she's doing a burnout instead of riding in circles.

[@FancyCatt]

Make the bike and the cops drive in then stop and go into the scene you had then when it finishes loading it zooms off past the road also make the donut slower

[@SpenderPanda]

@RoBuilder Add citizens walkin on the street with coffee or office document or just chillin on phone, a car parked in the ally. Otherwise it's nice

[@AquacyOfficial]

what font do u use in ur thumbnails, also maybe do something with the cop cars cuz it looks a little weird with them just barely doing anything

[@begi-dll]

to not fly across the whole map, just select the object (for example a cop car) and press F

[@PACKSTABBER]

make the wheel spin as its drive around the donut

[@Nos_Duh]

I feel if the bike went a little slower it would be near perfect 🔥🙏

[@okedokie]

I'm definitely curious how the loading screen is handled on the backend, is the player's camera just positioned there until done loading or does the player get teleported between?

[@Onepiece0752]

Its good but what about making a loop donut end when the loading is over with a wheelie??

[@TheOneNon-ExistentGamer]

If you make the bike go a lil slower and have the tail end of the bike sticking out a lil bit it would be great

[@Verzy1908]

Need to fix decal glitch / z-fighting, make the decal more transparent.

[@shamusmoore]

The captions in the video are just... ugly is the best way I can explain it. Try adding some sort of stroke to the text

[@SLIDMARKY]

Add a few decorations at the back @Rodev ("Like people or few bush or tree or fence And Add Signs")

[@bensmulian2950]

to load a player character on any humanoid of same "R" type (r6, r15 etc.) this command should work. I would guess the scripter already knows about it, but anyway, here it is: local Players = game:GetService("Players") local humanoid : Humanoid = script.Parent --[[(path to humanoid). this of course, should be replaced according to where is the script is placed]] humanoid:ApplyDescription(Players:GetHumanoidDescriptionFromUserId(123456 --[[the loading Player's UserID Should replace this]])) hope this helps in any sort of way. (just noticed the top comment XD, welp, there are a ton of ways to do anything so choose whatever way you want, if you want.)

[@StolenTextures]

wouldnt that effect data saving

[@BurgerBoy6713]

you can just make a part in the loading area and select it and press F and the you will teleport to it

[@purpleAnims]

Robuilder make the lights not spotlights but actual part that are blue neon and the script is simple is that the first step its that the left light is set to transparent 1 and the right is tranparent 0 and then it change the transaparency to the left at 0 and the right to 1.

[@NyghtCorn]

PLEASE add fog to the loading screen, it'll make the loading screen environment look alot bigger than it is

[@Masterlulu]

RoBuilder you ATE 💅

[@qawzee]

4:46 Do you know you can just make it by changing the humanoidViewer property? Much better to find your rights at explorer.

[@pumkinplayground7848]

Imagine doing a donut while in a police chase 😭

[@b0bMC]

The different colored bricks on the background building looks a bit odd

[@bobbi7460]

if u click something in the workspace/explorer u search for press f it should zoom to it

[@BeesLegoDepo]

What if for the cop setup, two crops are throwing down a spike trap but the bike hits a jump over it, while the other cops are in pursuit

[@BeesLegoDepo]

I think the setup is still good either way

[@SightDashGD]

make the song thick of it play in the loading screen lol (jk)

[@duzzzle]

make it have a drifting style instead of going circles normally

[@HarryTheDev]

I think the donuts could’ve been my idea so I hope it was and I hope I helped

[@IDGplayz]

EVERYONE LIKE THE VIDEO

[@Questionmark000-h9s]

How do you get different studio icons!?

[@Ambitious_Aligator]

I think u should just keep the lights blue and red

[@piaxas]

This might look bad on low-end device's ,i think it will better if it us made out of animated images

[@ConfusedAlt]

Already at 500 likes

[@Unknown-lw7df]

make it be night mode on loading

[@shxoomz]

5:35 skin tone color? 😭

[@MagicDeveloper]

no animations? daytime?

[@daanvk3264]

The car logos YOU FORGOT

[@MrBirdy-xz5tr]

looks like they need to add it 600 likes

[@Js0n44]

there are no police in the cop cars

[@Potato-d5b]

make cop car's window black so we cant see empty cars

[@MusicMan-uv5jn]

That's awesome

[@RealBamboozed]

Three more people need to like before 500 likes

[@benitez3438]

the uhhh dealership is not working i have a clip i can send it to you

[@Alafandri]

personally I like still images more...

[@YzPinda]

You got 500 likes so you must do it now

[@F33DA]

Amazing!

[@whenis2.254]

Yo RoBuilder, bring back questions at the end of the vid!

[@MrDingleberryHimself]

Hi Robuider My first time commenting because this is my alt account my main account on yt cant comment for some reason. I would like to tell you that i like your content :)

[@longnap_]

LETS GO

[@Streetfight101]

still looks scuffed lol

[@itsmouse4369]

no views 3 comments??

[@ghostlytf2hvhking842]

instead of manually scrolling all the way to change something why not just select an item that is in that area and just press F to teleport there in studio

[@_-N0B0DY-_]

the reason ur studio is buggy is cuz ur using the new beta studio

[@dains6623]

3 people can't be first 😂 Also it's good you're listening to your fans criticism

[@person12334]

Idk why people even hate on you if they dont want to play the game then thats their choice (btw u inspired me to start modeling in blender)

[@AleksanderK07]

Change the music. It dosent match the loading screen at all u need a more vibe

[@Player_101_]

456 VIEWS IN 40 minutes?

[@TheBoyssssss123]

Not to be rude but its not good. It looks like he is driving 200 miles per hour in circles not doing donuts.

[@SuperOriginal]

what the hell uploaded 1 minute aog why am I so early

[@PhoenixVids123]

First 35 seconds since upload

[@Lando98345]

I was first 22 seconds slow bro

[@RamleYt-s9z]

yo bro can you make the game free? cuz i dont have robux

[@Rmn-gamer]

750 likes💀

[@SkyReaper.]

Day 6 of asking robuilder to make me a game

[@torsnes123]

i liked it

[@Epa_byggare]

HIIIIIIIII i love your vids

[@MuhammedNuhmaan]

hey man can u help me get my game back

[@Vymos]

5 minutes gang

[@softisffsfan8133]

5:38 Thats kinda racist...

[@Potatogoodyea]

Womp womp get over it he clearly wasn’t trying to be racist

[@rallicat69]

dude, racist means you are unfair / discriminatory to a specific race. (like treating a race differently) you should learn what words really mean before you use them.

[@Sunvr2]

BRO WHAT A RIPOFF BRO PLEASEEE MAKE IT 0 ROBUX TO PLAY IM TO BROKE 😿😿😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

[@MartiDevv]

first

[@Wilhelmuswellop]

damn here dangerously early

[@joshuanewk2514]

It is still hot garbage

[@GameZone-xr4jo]

410th like

[@Ambitious_Aligator]

Views 2 no minutes fell of bro 😂

[@cookieland925]

Either the highlight tool ruined the order, or you just scrambled the words It's "no views in 2 minutes bro fell off 😂" ... Sorry I'm a grammar geek

[@Lando98345]

First