Avoid This Mistake in Your College Essays

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[@rakshnaanachiyarsuresh1217]

Thanks, but would be really helpful if you can include alternate sentences. But to be honest as an international student I find your videos really helpful.

[@jokriv4138]

Im pretty sure hes saying not to overdramatize because they care much more about why you love these things

[@rapidmontheawesome6343]

How do you not “overdramatize” a sentence while meeting the requirements of an essay at the same time?

[@divakedia4361]

Read the line and see if it could be short without loosing its essence and that there are no unnecessary words or phrases.

[@humbertoorozcoreyna5689]

@@divakedia4361 yeah but you have to write 3000 words tho

[@shreysomani359]

bro its 650@@humbertoorozcoreyna5689

[@sulfurx777]

Before seeing the answer: 1- refusal to commit to other things; lack of acknowledgement that things could drastically change his thoughts or feelings in the future. 2- Defines his existence into one interest.

[@einflys4984]

Hm, honestly looking at these I'd say both were a little poetic, and gave me the thought of "Is that all?", like that sort of thing is the only thing you'd be interested in and making yourself sound narrrow and incapable of anything else.

[@katieandnic]

Theater Kids be like-*we need to over dramatize everything*

[@laimawolf6826]

Me,who absolutely lost motivation for school: nope,the sentences are perfect.

[@Cobra-yo7fx]

Nice video!

[@wishstudios5071]

Also, in many essays, you should avoid using terms that refer to yourself. Unless, of course the essay is about you.

[@TheAuthor4911.2]

I usually just try to hold my teachers captive with long sentences about a subject so that the next sentence can be shorter so it doesn't take too much time to write. But, I also don't explain too much because who knows, you could be smarter than the teacher.

[@ben9159]

Me watching his vids after already submitting my app: Hmmm yes

[@anabsolutebuffoon]

I thought it was about the run on sentence

[@Imulti]

When your essay is supposed to be 3000 words unnecessary words become necessary

[@arjunramakanth4370]

I thought you were going to say that the sentence was generic and could be applied to any hobby, so make the sentences more specific about your relation to and love for the hobby, but overdramatization is also a good point

[@Theotimus]

It sounds cool af though

[@-ThePROnooB-]

But essay has to have some yap

[@acozyone2841]

nice vid but IS THAT A HARP COVER OF A MOMENT APART BY ODESZA OMGGG

[@samuelknibel2682]

Hi guys I'm from Brazil and I want to know waht is essays.

[@emocrab7545]

An essay is a writing assignment

[@thenewboeguy_official]

This was posted 2 years ago and has only 30 comments

[@musicalbowtie7657]

I spy absolute statements

[@ZBREAD.]

But- but- how am I supposed to fill out the letter requirement!?

[@ASA-xm8cf]

Are these videos also useful in Europe? GPA and essays I believe are U.S. things and I don’t think they appear in the E.U. education system.

[@dzonihajduk]

Not sure about this one beo

[@arminscolossalballs5858]

I’m it in college why the hell are you in my recommendations in shorts every day

[@spiralspark8523]

Then how am I supposed to write a 1000 word essay?

[@faton2966]

Too generic you be used for almost anything

[@Cobra-rl2yw]

I thought saying that you are going to not do anything else and dedicate your whole life to coding or football

[@isaacbrown1514]

Bro, I do that but, less sounding smart

[@turtleashes4371]

More like I will die if I don’t do football and I will die if I don’t do coding