我是英文老師🙈沒有考過IELTS,但TOEFL拿滿分的🙈Writing和speaking是要一點點技巧的,要把意思表達得好一點,可配合一些elaboration skills,例如 1) 先general(用topic sentence)後specific(用例子) 2) 正反兩面 (假如+..就會。但假如-..就會。) Vitamin C is vital for the growth and repair of all body tissues (重點). It is involved in many body functions, including absorption of iron, the proper functioning of our immune system, wound healing, and the maintenance of cartilage(例子). If our body have enough vitamin C, we can be protected against diseases as it boosts our immune system(假如,正). However, if we do not take enough vitamin C in our diet, we will be dogged by health issues ranging from dull skin to chronic inflammation (假如,反). 類似這樣😂💪🏻💕