Bad Writing

[@RobertGreeneOfficial]

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[@isabellewhite3505]

Thank you! I'll implement your recommendations

[@Jollofpappi]

So many poorly written books out there with unnecessary jargons and big words. I’m grateful for writers who can share their wisdom with a clear and approachable writing style.

[@unantogwa8711]

Yeah. You are right...most of the writers focus on themselves unfortunately 😢😢

[@RuneyDulo]

Robert became my favourite author and my favourite speaker

[@abdul_kobi]

God bless Mr. Smith and God bless Mr. Robert Greene

[@chrisholland4832]

Simplicity reveals truth- My late grandfather took a writing class once. The teacher put a picture of a shovel on the projector and told the students that it was their writing prompt. Everyone starting writing paragraphs about shovels but my grandfather just wrote: ”Ode to a shovel: Set aside, set asunder, and in the end- set us under.” When the teacher saw his paper he told him that he didn’t need to take the class.

[@WinstonSmith-mu7ku]

Good little poem. Did he write anything else?

[@Ironbird03]

A great teacher is a valuable asset Thanks Mr Smith Thank Mr Green❤

[@sakshamchhatkuli271]

I am currently reading "Mastery" and have already finished "48 laws of power". I am intending to read all of your books. Your ideas has made me less naive about this world. Really appreciate your work, sir. Hope you are doing fine!

[@deltahomicide9300]

Had a similar experience with my illustration teacher. I don't even draw for a living but what he taught me was invaluable. You're cut from the same cloth thank you.

[@Simple-Indian]

Very well said. Writing (and speaking) is about communicating one's thoughts / views / ideas effectively to the target audience, not an exercise to show-off one's vocabulary, which is what many writers / speakers often do.

[@mahakether1029]

God bless Mr.Smith! Thank you so much for the advice Robert!

[@anakalos5082]

This is true. If I write something, initially i will write for myself just to get the ideas down. Then I will leave it for a while, return to it and then weed out words, sentences that don't strike me. Then I go in again and look at it from a reader view. Is it easy to understand? What does it communicate to a reader? Is there clarity?

[@antapeastronaut]

best Writing feedback I got was from my English professor in college: “What is this bullshit?” Context: I included a hypothetical scenario in an argumentative essay.

[@MrLordZip]

I too had my own version of mr. Smith when growing up. So thank you to all the teachers that left a positive mark on us.

[@headfirst6227]

It’s interesting how such seemingly small events can have such a profound effect overall. I would bet each one of us could find something in our own past that has that affect whether good or bad. From there, we can make adjustments to minimize any damage and accentuate advantages.

[@Orientalbackyardgarden]

Thank you, Robert. You very open to us ❤️❤️❤️

[@christopherbramwell8262]

I'm a writer yet not nearly the "prolific" writer that you are Robert. Your points are VERY well received. Making my points clear and to the point so that it's easily understood is my primary focus. Otherwise, my points aren't helpful. A comprehensive knowledge of highly technical terms just doesn't allow the reader to grasp the big picture or any of the underlying points that have meaning. Being "profound" for example. Using that particular word isn't always easily understood. The word complicated might be better. I often listen to your knowledge & wisdom and write your insight onto paper and I thank you for that. For example, "outshining the master" is highly insightful for me. All of your insights are well received my me and I am growing as a person as a result. I actually need to order one of your books. I'll start with THE 48 LAWS OF POWER. If I can just make the time to read it, I will grow to become even more successful and well grounded as a human being. Thank you Robert Greene.

[@MahdiTheMagician]

This is much more than about writing. This is about life.

[@language.wanderer]

Please Robert, share more tips on writing.

[@sirraldnus8590]

Keeping it simple as possible Making it enjoyable for both parties

[@Takeitlightly6]

His book was one of the best written books i read, easy to read, you can read it with little comprehension, you can be distracted and you can relate and cant keep the book down. I was slapping the arm rest reading the book. I clearly didn’t see the world same afterwards anymore.

[@hfowl2907]

Great clip! ❤ Your channel is the best

[@healthwealth-lifebasics]

You are my favorite author

[@jodiqoo8507]

Essay decided what's have your communication, i never think about it before, if you want to improve your essay so first thing you have to do improve your communication skill.

[@supriyaraja6678]

48 laws of power , amazing book .

[@ValentinBrutusBura]

I don't enjoy bringing up negativity or negative habits in other people. So, I'm after a topic to write about :)

[@vpoppv]

As a Junior in high school, my English teacher made me her TA. I was grading papers one time, and I was a bit stunned at how poorly written my fellow students' essays were until I got to one that was clearly superior: it was the foreign exchange student from Norway's.....Sidenote, same teacher invited me to lunch shortly after graduation and made a pass at me- one of the more unsettling events in my life.....

[@OAKVisualz]

Thank you.

[@JubayerWatt]

Telling a story in your writing is the best communication technique.

[@pyootchnich]

Dude. I’m an entrepreneur that has grown a company to a point where it is now very large. All I have around me are people who mimic corporate automatons. A lot of people now speak to build their brand rather than efficiently communicate ideas.

[@WhereAnt]

thanks robert!

[@collinfloyd4784]

Thanks for this

[@ComicPower]

The best advice is always the most simple. God bless Mr Smith

[@johnglynhughes4239]

Super advice.

[@bluemartin]

I wish I got this advice in in 10th grade. Had to figure it out myself up the 20s

[@sentanunw]

God bless u too sir

[@ValentinBrutusBura]

Yes, absolutely. On what grounds does one express "personal opinion"? That's art, not Phil. :)

[@andrewlol9095]

I’m calling Mr. Green(e) in the LIBRARY with the PENCIL

[@LokahSamastahSukhinoBhavantu23]

🥺 the only one who could understand is writing is me… haha and i think i made peace w that.. but yess moreee on this 🙏🏽

[@yourhighness2301]

Master Robert! I waited enough for your last new book 📖 but now my curiosity for that has vanished & dissolved. Chill & cheers Robert🥂

[@dennistanui7085]

0:21 me: wait, did I miss matrix movie?

[@Alexmar345]

We love you

[@Harrison-p7r]

Please make a video about ego being hypothetical

[@ValentinBrutusBura]

Yes, I could write more, maybe I am going to, who knows...

[@astrogirllll]

Would love more writing advice from you, thank you ❤

[@Guildofarcanelore]

Me too!

[@sooooooooDark]

same goes for sales/target audiences at least if u want to make money/please ppl with the product (which is actually not a given) u can also just write stuff how u like it, but it possibly will make u less money cuz u r not catering to a broad audience (unless of course u r the most normie of all normies and what u think is nice also appeals to the broad mass)

[@mkjyt1]

Nice.

[@CristianSalasCruz]

What's are your thoughts on linguists?

[@Jawharah111]

❤❤❤

[@peacesound1101]

His idea is a half-truth, who are these people writers write for? The people are in different groups. Sure, writers that the "average person" relates to have a better chance for success, but a writer who has ideas too "new" will get passed over no matter how clear the work, but such writers should try to write in a way that has reach. Writing for yourself is necessary for developing your themes, later a popular book can be written once the themes become second nature. There are readers too that know it takes effort to grasp a book that is complex and the uphill path gets you the gems.

[@JLO_96GT]

How can I get better at writing?

[@shankarbalakrishnan2360]

Tatiana met lebowski❤❤🎉🎉helps

[@mememaster69-n4x]

thank god mr smith tought or else this generation would have missed on a loot

[@hosseinvendetta2844]

The GOAT

[@1943colin]

Does he not know that 'improve' is the word he wants and not 'fix'?

[@Ilyabashi]

Robert, can you fix my life?

[@lakshya5946]

I thought bad handwriting at first 😅😂

[@SabrinaAngel]

❤

[@ThisisKRSNA]

Great share❤

[@SandeepR-lq1wd]

Now I'll think about this idea while sleeping 😌

[@sultondev]

Thank you a lot

[@thesponge836]

Writing is obsolete even with current AI

[@aggy9845]

😀

[@BrayanVargas-xn5us]

😮

[@susza89]

I am so shocked that a man of your intelect Mr Robert has fallen for the media narrative with covid, bitcoin, Trump and many others obvious lies. You were so wrong and now its obvious. I treasure your books, studied then (brilliant!) but still... it shows that there is alot of truth in "never meet you heroes". I hope all this was just an act to get good press and good publishing deals.

[@Vfhdjj]

I feel sad about mr robert cause he’s getting old

[@wajeeha195]

I want him so bad

[@JDogTBD]

Excellent point. Jordan Peterson is a great speaker but a truly horrible writer.

[@yousef9822]

He’s not even that great of a speaker

[@alirezas95sr89]

she or he ?

[@WilliamNobleBonninActual]

:)

[@phoenixrising4768]

❤