БГ по Английски - Railroad Water

Концерт на день рождения БГ.
Дмитрий Скляр - "Железнодорожная Вода" Бориса Гребеньщикова - перевод на Английский.
Translatinоs of Bоris Grebenshikov's songs from russian.
Дмитрий Скляр - переводы, вокал, губная гармоника
Андрей Аш - соло гитара
Алексей Дерий - ударные
Railroad Water, quench my thirst
O Railroad Water, please quench my thirst
The summer is warm, that’s why I like it the most
The winter is fine, the window’s covered with frost
You can’t see me through the ice, and my path is lost
When I was younger, I was putting this world in its place
When I was younger, I’ve put this world in its place
Now I drink my чай, I eat my хлеб
Down the slippery slope I roll with no end
I stand on the top of the hill, neither here nor there
We knew each other, I’ve heard that that was a fact
We knew each other, I know that for a fact
But today your mind is buzzing like the saw
It’s too bright in here, and I don’t know what I saw
But here is my song, will you sing in tact
There are true believers, and those who look down their nose
And even I sometimes think I know which ones are worse
But when you wake up, try to hide your fear
It wasn’t a ghost, t’was only a sound, my dear
The train has left and you’ll never catch it, of course.
So, Railroad Water, quench my thirst
Railroad Water, would‘ya quench my thirst
It’s the end of December, and I’m writing my songs
Naked, in snow, lit up by a moon, like a ghost
But if you can hear me, not all is lost

[@Левон-з9с]

Дай мне напиться железнодорожной воды..

[@adrianminunu6539]

Хорошо, но немного монотонно. Больше мелодического развития!