5 years later and this poem has never lost its power!
@keelyzellmer26578 жыл бұрын
Jellesa Edwards this poem will never lose its power!!!
@user-ns5vt1id6h4 жыл бұрын
9 years later
@brucef43293 жыл бұрын
@@user-ns5vt1id6h FACTS
@jennifertheiss94722 жыл бұрын
12 years later and still ;-;
@lovelybird500410 жыл бұрын
Its gets me every time when she says "I would drown myself in the Pacific Ocean for you to kiss my corpse cheek because I often forget you have lips" I cant stop the tears!
@davidbritt4674 жыл бұрын
2021 and I still search for this. Timeless and powerful
@courtneylogan17243 жыл бұрын
Same. Watching now. It's iconic.
@Panamaswaife2 жыл бұрын
Who’s still watching and crying in 2023? 🙋🏾♀️
@rothutbiene3 ай бұрын
Me - October 24, 2024
@RavenNavarre3 ай бұрын
@@rothutbiene November 9, 2024
@itsonlyemanuel582627 күн бұрын
@panamaswaife Jan 2025
@TheViciousCabaret10 жыл бұрын
Doesn't matter how many times I see this, it always makes me cry.
@ryanlee1913 жыл бұрын
I'm 29, White, and Male... I cried too... So much emotion, very Beautiful!
@lovelykali2 жыл бұрын
11 years later and this poem still rips at my soul. The pain she conveys. The metaphors she conjure. The magic she makes in this poem. Whoooo.
@MsMika14 жыл бұрын
Everytime--EVERYTIME I watch this little girl...plead with her own mother to love her...it breaks me into tiny little pieces... When she came on stage crying even before speaking one word, I knew THIS poem was HER story... Simply a talented beautiful young lady...
@motorcitymangababe10 жыл бұрын
No Shit man, she deserves that standing ovation at the end
@paydro1626 жыл бұрын
“Human just have crazy tendencies when they just want someone to love us” 🗣🗣🗣🗣
@ilovethelord12313 жыл бұрын
I watched this on Showtime OnDemand...I BALLED. This poem was the absolute BEST ALL NIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@standup4change14 жыл бұрын
The way they ENGULFED her in LOVE at the end, makes me cry harder!! It's like they wanted to give her the HUG she cries out for!!!!
@kingtrey45679 ай бұрын
2024 and this poem is still powerful!
@MsWhit201311 жыл бұрын
I'm dark skinned, my mom redboned. I'm scared to even imagine what this felt like. She's strong because she was able to express herself.
@morgancurry40988 жыл бұрын
That wasn't the point of the poem.
@MsWhit20138 жыл бұрын
+Morgan Curry that's how I took it. What is the actual point?
@morgancurry40988 жыл бұрын
+whitley coco She used the favorite "color" anology because she wanted to be her mother's favorite color. This is a girl crying for her mother's attention because she hasn't been there for her, or her siblings. She was saying she would change into her favorite color just to receive a hug from her mother. The color in this poem had nothing to do with being light skin or dark skin. She would change into any color just to be shown affection. If that makes sense.
@MsWhit20138 жыл бұрын
+Morgan Curry oh wow. I never saw it that way. Thank for that!
@destainegolder1488 жыл бұрын
Thanks for explaining this because I was trying to figure out was this written by her expressing her feelings towards to her Mom or was it a poem about being actually neglected?! I get it now I felt that it was so heart wrenching..
@lettucelive13 жыл бұрын
"I'm sure you'd look at me more often if I was the color that made you smile." Man.
@TheTacOToldMe29 жыл бұрын
Please don't ever delete this video!!! Please please please! This is incredible.
@TheAvannessa13 жыл бұрын
"Im not crazy ma, humans just have crazy tendencies when we want someone to love us". That was brilliant. This entire piece was just beautiful, I couldn't help but tear up at the emotion being pushed out from this girls voice. Truly an amazing poet.
@caswift20xz3 жыл бұрын
I’ve been looking for this for years
@allenboy2121513 жыл бұрын
Im a grown man, infantry soldier... and this had the tears flowing down my face
@LeeHeckman10 жыл бұрын
Some poems are meant only for those who hear.
@ronellekiss14 жыл бұрын
hey i saw this poeam for the first time tonight and it got to me. this is the reason why the LEGEND JAMES BROWN SAID GOD REST HIS SOUL WE ARE BLACK AND WE ARE PROUD. this poem should live on for eternity do not be afraid if you are black love the skin that you are in the skin that god gave us . for peace sake love who you are and FOR FUCK DO NOT BLEACH.
@TheJoya12343 жыл бұрын
11 years on and this poem is still powerful/ devastating
@utopiad411 жыл бұрын
WOW! The people who state that they don't get this poem truly baffles me. Maybe you don't he it because your to young, or had love poured on you all your life. Or maybe you are without a soul. Those that don't "GET" this poem, don't even worry about it. You'll never get it!
@harrysjulie10 жыл бұрын
A beautiful response :)
@n3rdg4sm6910 жыл бұрын
Welcome to america, and more importantly dystopia. I live with 4 siblings, one of whom is a baby. I probably get less attention than her, and I'm fine with it cause such is life. Sorry all you hopefulls, but this happens, and it's not even uncommon. So, what
@jsmyth0249 жыл бұрын
Ms. Utopia Or maybe they just don't understand it? Maybe she spoke too fast for them, or they aren't audibly inclined and the imagery confused them. People judge so harshly what they can't understand. Even if it's someone else simply saying, "I can't understand".
@bri86346 жыл бұрын
Ms. Utopia why don’t you try explaining it instead of belittling people who don’t “get” it. Maybe some people don’t understand poetry as fast as others.
@cenyat22746 жыл бұрын
8 years later I still cry... so much power
@Suvi112813 жыл бұрын
I love this girl... so passionate, so emotional, so intelligent, so touching.... This is actually perfect, the only spoken poetry that makes me bawl. I love this girl, I really want to give her a hug, and my god, she's so brave.
@dfigsy Жыл бұрын
Still makes me cry every time ❤
@JimmyJamesMcCrary Жыл бұрын
Still one of my favorite pieces! 😩😩🙌🏾
@hajasidimesherif87775 жыл бұрын
Years later, I am here, as a mother to be that never had mother 🤦🏾♀️
@nyaneece14 жыл бұрын
"Humans just have crazy tendencies, when we want someone to love us" MOST TRUTHFUL LINE I'VE EVER HEARD!
@missshannonsunshine10 жыл бұрын
I'm crying so hard.. I can't even relate that much. Just thinking about all the pain she felt made me cry
@MsLovelife199810 жыл бұрын
Amazing
@taune0314 жыл бұрын
This poem is so good. Mostly because of the presence felt before she even begins!
@jellyfishSurprise5 жыл бұрын
I still cry every single time I watch this. So powerful, so raw, so emotional. ❤
@MsWhit201313 жыл бұрын
dang :'( this seriously makes me cry, the part that made me cry the most was when everyone ran up to hug her. This makes me grateful to have a mother because it brought tears to my eyes to even think of how i would feel if my mom didnt love me.
@Forbrtishesyesonlyy13 жыл бұрын
I saw this on HBO. I thought that poetry was really lame. But when I heard this poem I stood still, in silence, and unknowingly began to cry. Very very deep.
@Uniklymade114 жыл бұрын
I cried right along with this youn poet. For many years I thought I'd been adopted. I cooked, cleaned, good grades, every thing 2 make her love me and/or see me, but she was/is oblivious to my existence. Yesterday, today and tomorrow n I doubt it will change the way she ignores me. Damn..... I can really relate. I will continue to "LIKE" this poem n poet.
@261egipt12 жыл бұрын
No it is about wanting to be loved truly with no strings attached or judgement!! Nobody is perfect!!The world has everyone on one thought when we all think different!! Just hold your children and love them no matter what "color" or what they do!! GOD Is Good!!
@thefaultinmyways7 жыл бұрын
I’ve watched this poem a million times!
@kelsiee45416 жыл бұрын
TwistedPoise me to
@lollipop99041212 жыл бұрын
I write poetry to express my pain but I will never be able to make anyone else feel it as well as she did.
@imanirm4 жыл бұрын
10 years later and wow
@jefffedor723910 жыл бұрын
A deep pain and longing for love.A voice cries out in the hope to be heard.The echo of love from above her only comfort and the wish for love on earth.Cry out Cry out listen listen and heal.
@mssecretasianninja13 жыл бұрын
she makes me want to cry, to hug he....to love her.
@ShaeMacMillan11 жыл бұрын
Damn tears sneaking out. I hope a rainbow shines for you today
@lexismith521712 жыл бұрын
I hope one day I can move people with such powerful words like she has. This, was just soooooo beautiful.
@PBreezy1914 жыл бұрын
i AM CRYING LIKE A BABY. THIS IS TRUE FEELINGS.
@Dare2Preach13 жыл бұрын
the more i listen, the more i understand, the more i love, the more i feel. this iz real..
@YummyCupcakification12 жыл бұрын
My class watched this today. Every single other person was like "WOW shes ugly and she is crying! wow." and after 10 seconds, i was literally balling my eyes out. I didn't care about the others making fun of me. Because this poem is amazing.
@Wiz_Kizzy25 жыл бұрын
10 years later 💪🏾💪🏾. Great job Natalage
@OneCraYzeeChk713 жыл бұрын
This was so moving. Holding back the tears just felt so wrong.
@breezewifey2 жыл бұрын
Every single time I watch this I get teary eyed.
@oxnatieeox13 жыл бұрын
People on this earth will never love us as much as our heavenly Father
@acemacckin0913 жыл бұрын
Lord , I cry EVERYTIME I listen to this .
@misskimhall13 жыл бұрын
Wow!!! I'm crying... This is a powerful poem. I want to hug her and let her know she is loved, even if I don't know her. I love her spirit.
@writingchic12313 жыл бұрын
OMG! This poem really spoke to my heart! each breath she toke allowed me to think a little harder, breath a little lighter, and talk a little louder! As a child people may think I can't understand what this poem is talking about, but i understand more than you would every believe!
@dragee2913 жыл бұрын
My eyes are wet.... That's sooo beautiful and so deep. She have a big talent! This text are a therapy for her and I hope she's ok now...
@candyland198614 жыл бұрын
the ending hit me..."maybe then you'll finally see that all five of us are in fact your favorite color" i think everyone can relate to wanting your mother to love us to be most important to them...i dedicate this to my mom
@BarlowBabehhh13 жыл бұрын
oh god the first time i saw this i was in tears from the first word..her passion...incredible..
@Numsmangomelondelish14 жыл бұрын
I just saw this and had to see it again. She is absolutelty beautiful!
@quoridlls14 жыл бұрын
Couldn't help balling when I watched this. I knew she had a perfect score. All heart soul and spirit. it touched me so much I thought we should all stop and realize something just made us ALL cry. How often does that happen? And, by the way, I'm really glad the next team up brought it too cause this young lady was the Toughest act to follow!
@ik3alv412 жыл бұрын
She really touched me. So emotional right now .
@marice97912 жыл бұрын
omg...i just cudnt stop crying in this..and im not usually emotionally moved and i was just thinking...boy do i wish i cud be ur mother so i cud love you so much that u wud never say such emotional things and recite more happier poems....man, i cud just hug you
@jusbreezybri13 жыл бұрын
in tears this truly hits home and im onli 19 i kno how sad this is for especially begin this young sometimes all u every realli need is a heartfelt embrace wen they all ran to her i kno she felt a release it worked for me
@dragee2913 жыл бұрын
My eyes are wet.... That's sooo beautiful and so deep. She have a big talent!
@ygplayer0213 жыл бұрын
REALLY REALLY GOOD PIECE.. I also do spoken word too but at 1:47 is something in person i have never seen anyone do and it gave me chills how she was able to change her emotion drastically in a split second..
@HorridHazuki13 жыл бұрын
"Humans just have crazy tendencies when they want someone to love us." That's definitely what got me.
@bobbsthebuilder13 жыл бұрын
In tears...I know this feeling all too well, but it was just me.
@walnutshellwarrior13 жыл бұрын
Poetry is an expression of one's self. It is vocalized emotions. Feelings bound by words. A good poet can make his or her audience experience everything expressed in the poem seemingly firsthand. I know the depth of her emotions as she wrote this.
@lsdmolelekki12 жыл бұрын
This girl reminds me why i still write poetry.
@lea154693 жыл бұрын
10 years later and this still brings me to TEARS 💔
@Lala2thick2stick13 жыл бұрын
i love this poem so much! so many ppl don't even know about this poem because they don't show the poetry slam on showtime anymore!
@angelbreon13 жыл бұрын
Tears , Tears & More Tears....Amazing .
@blink13xiii13 жыл бұрын
i cry... every single time i hear this.. the emotion she put into it and the way it crawls into my skin, im hispanic and i know it gets to people of all races. wonderful job.
@eveexists827311 жыл бұрын
Wow. Holding back my tears.
@Jenn504xoxo13 жыл бұрын
I just watched this episode on HBO and I am completely in awe. Jay Davis you did an amazing job.
@ABSVabeautifulsunsetvlog14 жыл бұрын
Natalage, that was one of the most incredible pieces I've ever heard. Hold on to your gift young woman. We're all privileged to have been blessed by your heart on paper.
@pinkdayzi0614 жыл бұрын
I saw this earlier today on HBO.. & it made me cry. when my mom got home, I showed it to her on here, and it made me cry again. & now as I watch it a third time, I find myself in tears again... feels like she was speaking from my soul. I know exactly how she feels. such a strong young lady.. absolutely amazing.
@RealLifeRamya312 жыл бұрын
i teared for this one... beautiful just beautiful
@akatso14 жыл бұрын
saw this for the first time last night. Absolutely beautiful, tear after tear fell from from eyes..
@Aloha40114 жыл бұрын
I have watched this several times. Her words moved me to tears....AMAZINGGGGGG! Congratulations to all that participated in "Brave New Voices"
@ecobajapanti6913 жыл бұрын
im 34 n i write poems from time to time but nothing come close to this i never cryed so muched like i did when i seen it... good job u have a gift that GOD has blessed...
@RiPdLl7 Жыл бұрын
This poem will never not make me get emotional 🥺 no matter how many years pass
@LADIIGORJUSZ0113 жыл бұрын
she had me in tears.. me && my brothers qo throuqh the same thinq with our mom..
@sydriam99913 жыл бұрын
the first time I saw this I cried...I love this poem.
@cara27714 жыл бұрын
unbelievably stunning. so brave, so brilliant.
@Lhipz66713 жыл бұрын
This was just...so deep. Had me crying.
@RandaFulzs13 жыл бұрын
.....I love her and this poem is just beautiful
@jjt5313 жыл бұрын
Okay I held my tears up until I heard these words: "....I would drown in the pacific ocean for a kiss on my corpse's cheek because I often forget you have lips..." my God this girl is so ADMIRABLE &... BRAVE. You don't have to be in the same position to know where she is coming from in this poem, just hearing 2:10 of her spoken words is like taking a walk in her world. MUCH REPSECT!
@tierrahayes135911 жыл бұрын
DAMN BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES... SO DEEP YOU CAN FEEL EVERY WORD OUT OF HER MOUTH... YASSSSS
@chikaodemena6 жыл бұрын
My heart hurts every time I listen to this. So beautiful, so deep so powerful,, so creative.
@mjdreamgirl0914 жыл бұрын
so deep it leaves you breathless
@breaiaAkaSleepy14 жыл бұрын
this is the best poetry i have ever heard in my whole life. ive watched it 30+ and till this day it makes me cry. i cant get enought. i wana see more of her poetry!
@venusofthemoon14 жыл бұрын
I swear i cried when i first heard her. So powerful and the most beautiful
@eswa200211 жыл бұрын
This young woman.... is unbelievable. She is a strong, yet... in pain. Much love to her. Jay, stay strong.... keep doing what you're doing... you are helping people everywhere... deal with pain... sorrow and the need to be loved. I understand it has its costs.... but keep your head up... stand up and be heard.... you might be young in age.... but your wisdom is that of a sage. Can anyone tell me how to contact this young woman directly. She is an inspiration.
@oodietichenor5546 жыл бұрын
I’ve had an amazing relationship with my mother but this poem always brings tears
@lyingmongoose11 жыл бұрын
I went to like it, but I already had and I was upset. Why can't I hit like again and again and again?
@TheeNells13 жыл бұрын
no words are sufficient enough to describe how excellent this is, was and will always be.
@valaridel50303 жыл бұрын
‘ All 5 of us are in fact your favourite colour’ hit a little different
@LittleGamer90910 жыл бұрын
it's truly amazing how words can have such a power over you
@Degeyful11 жыл бұрын
Out of all of the poets I've watched this is my fav. Brought tears to my eyes
@jennifervoss3236 Жыл бұрын
I have no words other than beautiful ❤
@ScatteredKisses14 жыл бұрын
I struggle with this with my own family every day.. but these young people have the courage and strength to raise their voices and let their SOULS be heard! Amazing!