Broken Ship (original song)

We recorded this song for my mom as a big THANK YOU for taking the time to proof-read Evička's graduate work! It was a huge help and I know you enjoy this one ;) Btw BLOOPERS are at the very end - we had quite a time recording it and this was not our first take, as you will see... :)))
I wrote Broken Ship a few years ago and it's now part of my bands playlist, but here's a version of just the two of us playing it. The lyrics at the beginning are inspired by an old English nursery rhyme (they are actually almost the same :)
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Lyrics & music written by: Dominik Pokorný
Performed by: Dominik Pokorný & Eva Nepivodová
Lyrics:
One, two, three, four, five,
Once I caught a fish alive.
Six, seven, eight, nine, ten,
I let her go again.
Why did you let her go, let her go?
Because she bit my finger so.
Which finger did she bite, did she bite?
The little finger on the right.
It's hard to sail home on a broken ship,
Face as pale as foam you can't fix it,
Alone on the road, no hope you're on your own,
It’s hard to sail home on a broken ship.
I was lazy at first then a bit too fast,
Digging for answers then I finally gasped,
I knew.
What's up ahead and in the past,
A blinding trick keeping us from,
The truth.
But the perfume on that body, the color of that hair,
those long blond curls slipping down her shoulders oh,
they made me forget, they made me forget, oh they made me forget, and now...
It's hard to sail home on a broken ship,
Face as pale as foam you can't fix it,
Alone on the road, no hope you're on your own,
It’s hard to sail home on a broken ship.
With a shallow breath and a faded view
A troubled mind forgets what it once knew.
As the sunrise shines on the mountains dew
A spark of luck ignites the life in you.
It's hard to sail home on a broken ship,
Face as pale as foam you can't fix it,
Alone on the road, no hope you're on your own,
It’s hard to sail home on a broken ship.
It's hard to sail home on a broken ship,
Face as pale as foam you can't fix it,
Alone on the road, no hope you’ve lost your goal,
It’s hard to sail home on a broken ship.
#homerecording #originalsong #bloopers #acousticguitar #violin #vocals #harmonies #folk #rhyme #nurseryrhyme #countingoutrhyme

[@greghulks6544]

Good song. Nice attack, changes of tempo, and beautiful vocal harmonies. 😃

[@dominikpokorny]

Thank you very much fellow musician! 🙂✌

[@I_am_Rainy]

I can't imagine someone followed me this talented been binging your music. I really...really love them so muchhhhh

[@dominikpokorny]

Thank you very much for the kind words! I'm very happy you enjoy my music 🙂 I always like to watch fellow musicians create and play ✌

[@mariepokorna3481]

Yes! Thank you very much! Listening over and over......

[@dominikpokorny]

It was our pleasure ❤️

[@Thelifeofanintrovert-fk8lb]

🔥🔥🔥

[@dominikpokorny]

⛵⛵⛵

[@dustindaihl6081]

This is awesome man! And lady!

[@dominikpokorny]

Thank you very much! 🙂

[@trevorhansbury]

Fantastic performance my friends great duet singing and playing bravo , new subscriber 🎻🎤🎤🎸👏👏🙏🙏

[@dominikpokorny]

Thank you very much!! And you have a new subscriber as well ;)

[@trevorhansbury]

@@dominikpokorny you're welcome and thanks also 🙏🙏

[@micahp.4356]

I heared a little bit of "The Imperial March" from Star Wars.

[@dominikpokorny]

Haha yes! 😎 You got it right, someone in our band had this idea I think when we were putting the song together

[@rodbrock4759]

Very nice. Well done !

[@dominikpokorny]

Thank you ☺️

[@alp9033]

You are getting better and better... esp. the last 20 seconds 😀😀😀 but seriously: You are getting better and better.

[@dominikpokorny]

😁😄 Thank you very much, kind sir!

[@omgwtflul5871]

Pecka! Poslouchám to furt dokola

[@dominikpokorny]

To potěší :) díky!

[@wafujigifushiva8868]

Precizní práce na ty housle. Jen produkujte dál 😎

[@dominikpokorny]

Díky díky, budem tvořit, jak to jen půjde ✌️😎

[@carlwaller_]

Love the sound! Keep it up🔥

[@dominikpokorny]

Thank you!