Can't Stand to be Apart [MLP Grimdark Reading]

[@0hvist]

SPOILER ALERT: Their Cutie Marks were actually trying to combine the CMC to become a new Alicorn through Fusion.

[@leilanivaughan-williams3038]

"And found Applejack pissing outside the door" Sorry, the pronunciation was too funny XD

[@Sparrow9642]

Leilani Vaughan-Williams XD! After listening to it, dear God it does sound like pissing rather than pacing

[@farahismail13]

"Do you still have that feeling?" "what? the pain?" I heard paint, and I was thinking "Yeah, a nice bright shade of yellow." XD

[@Flowerbarrel]

Uh....Starlight’s village suddenly ain’t looking too bad.

[@AJponyAPschannel]

well o/o this takes the definition of, can't live without, to new levels

[@Sparrow9642]

Indeed

[@amyalday8329]

this shows that once your friends, your supposed to stick together and be friends forever! like there is no point of new friends in life.

[@katiemorris2126]

They should have asked etheir twilight or zicira for help

[@dawnelizabethy]

you're a great reader! i loved listening, you've got a captivating voice.

[@QueenMeowTigeress]

*eating popcorn* wow Great job reading this!

[@Thedragonlover95]

Ok who gave the fillies a knife?!

[@joshuagarcia5804]

It's been a while since I've heard an MLP Grimdark. This is great!

[@KairiMorin]

Oh that's dark.

[@bluejaymtj4308]

Yay!! Glad to hear it completed after the editing live yesterday!!!!! This sounds amazing!!!!😄

[@Sparrow9642]

Thank you!

[@erikandlueshapeshifter4602]

Why am I still watching these at night?!

[@queenlatrodectushasselti7711]

The best sociological safety of reading creepy stories is by reading them at day light

[@jamese9812]

Wow, this is incredible. Way to go on the reading and I can't wait for the sequel I heard mentioned. The concept of their destinies being strung together like this is creepy and quite intriguing. Keep up the awesome work!!!

[@redclover8387]

Holy crap this is creepy! and really well told, nice job^^

[@SophTheNeko]

Listening to r ur vids while hitting bongs outside in the evening while drinking ice tea is what perfects my evenings :0

[@SophTheNeko]

6:20 I THOUGHT U SAID "found applejack p¡ssing" for a second 😭

[@SophTheNeko]

Oh God that was so dark...

[@jsanto210]

you have such a soothing voice

[@katelynbodiford5680]

Juan Santo Yeah he does it's so awesome :)

[@joseescobedo7899]

This story is like the anime parasite

[@bemorefrooti5839]

If there's ever a time you're short on little to no voice actors, notify me. I'd be more than happy to help.

[@Sparrow9642]

I'm very low right now, send me a voice reel in a sound file to my email, and I'll look it over

[@bemorefrooti5839]

Sparrow 9642 Alright. Would you mind letting me know what your email is? I'll record it in a moment.

[@Sparrow9642]

I'll PM it

[@bemorefrooti5839]

Sparrow 9642 Understood.

[@bemorefrooti5839]

Sparrow 9642 It'd be best to delete your response now. It'd suck to have random people emailing you XD

[@loveacorn]

Rip..... crustarder

[@katelynbodiford5680]

Mai See Thao At least they're free from their pain from their Cutie Marks.

[@dariustucker1690]

It feel like I can watch this Awesome SHOW!!! And going sleep with it

[@Mistymorning614]

Well are 3 died and now what happens to raroty rainbow and apple jack sigh

[@aniawypych230]

As soon as you mentioned the blood spilling from every opening I was like "You bitches got Ebola😂👐"

[@creationx6337]

I give you props for your good narration, the... well, the narration was good and superb, and there are usually some grimdark and creepypasta I like, but this one was just morbid, twisted, fucked up, horrific and just dread and not in a good way. For others, it might have been all that in a good and bad way for them, but this story have actually scared me for life! 😰 Or at least... for a week or so, or a few months until I almost half way forget and move on completely from this. This have gotten me a little emotionally damaged🤕😥... that’s what I get for letting my curiosity win... It was tragic and a soul crushing, tragic nightmare on their hard work, goals, life, hopes, dreams and destinies. Once again, I give the narrator and writer props, but this just rubs me the wrong way and is not my cup of tea. I’m going to have to listen to a lot of upbeat music, watch a lot of comedy, remove this “what if” thought out of my mind, scrub my brain clear with steel wool, and R&R. 😥

[@Sparrow9642]

Siman Markson That's what grimdark is, and it's intention. Trust me, stories like Cupcakes and Butterflies have me scarred, but that's what inspires me to keep going. This story is indeed messed up, and that's why I chose to read it. It's invigorating and disturbing, giving it potential to be a great grimdark

[@creationx6337]

Sparrow 9642 Still, I give you and the writer a lot of props, and I hear/read what you’re saying, but we all have custom, specific preferences, and this one did well at what you told me, but I still have my preferences. Grimdark like Cupcakes, Experiments of Twilight Sparkle, Cheerilee’s Garden, Rainbow Factory, the Muffin Universe with Minkie Pie, Sweet Apple Massacre didn’t really affect me like this one because those were just kind of like AU’s residing in the Creepypasta universe for me. I haven’t read Butterflies or Little Miss Rarity yet, but I heard maybe enough bits and pieces about it to get the gist of it, and I might have to brace myself for Butterflies “IF” I decide to read it. But you pick good though. 👍🏽😅 And the story did keep my attention on it after my curiosity won, but I still stand by my personal and polite opinion, so don’t get me wrong you did great, but the story... eh.

[@loveacorn]

I'm having chill's on my back because I'm drinking icy

[@twistednemi8176]

I thought they were gonna sew themselves together...

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

This is really good. Poor them.

[@littlepip4014]

Think you'll ever be at brony con? Id love to meet you!

[@Sparrow9642]

Bella Chan More than likely not, as I live on the west coast, and the finances would be ridiculous. Plus, I'm not keen on travelling out of state, especially alone. I might make it to my local con CMPC maybe next year, but all depends

[@fatecosmic923]

wait... did nopony notice all the blood?

[@ellathecat4775]

Yep

[@ellathecat4775]

So the cutie mark is curse or not?

[@revaslatts8011]

You need more artwork! Also, this one gives me Goosebumps vibes.

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

Reva Stalls RL Stine's Goosebumps Series? Interesting.

[@zapcraftihoof8318]

Huh, I suppose these events happening can make sense in a way. After all, ever since they found out about each others existence, they've been searching for their cutie marks, always searching and spending most of their time together. When they got their cutie marks, I'm sure I wasn't the only 1 who watched the episode and saw them floating and being surrounded by an electric ring as they got their cutie marks. That electric ring could symbolize how they are all interconnected with each other, their destinys perfectly tied. I'm just glad they aren't tied together like this in the show

[@switchtale6432]

Kitsune 1994 They could make up a story to hide the removal of their marks, and get treated for their injuries at the hospital, until their wounds would heal up. Think about would you want a Cutie Mark that put you through a great deal of pain until you died? Because I would not :(

[@kyraakato4569]

This was sooo Creepy and Cooool

[@Spyro757]

Must have more

[@blueiceshards3106]

very good reading!

[@spadescan]

I have a grimdark! So it goes like this: Me and my friend were playing an RPG game, on a website. But in the middle of playing, we saw a pony join us. Because of the pony's presence our game said ErrOr_PonyNotFound. I freaked out when my computer turned off. I tried turning it on 6 times, and finally, it worked. It said shut down because removing virus. Then when I logged in to my account, it said in red letters: "Your Next." I checked my window because I felt like I was being watched, and there was the pony, her dead, lifeless eyes staring into mine. She said as she broke in through my window: "Your Next!" And then she started laughing like a Maniac. End! Could you read this for me, some pony? Please, because I am a family friendly channel. Thank you!

[@Sparrow9642]

Scat Cat I've already done a grimdark like that, it's a story called "The Survey"

[@zapcraftihoof8318]

@@Sparrow9642 can you give me a link? I would like to see that story

[@DarkTheAuthor]

Wheres starlight when you need her xD

[@michaelcruz1422]

IM ONLY 11 YEARS OLD!

[@tamstar370]

They should've went to Twilight for help

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

TamStar Maybe they were in too much pain to do that Twilight at least appears in the sequel story.

[@honeybee4144]

How.. How have they not bleed out?

[@TheSpectator7]

That what I thought too, all those times apart or ill they're bodies wouldn't be able to replenish blood fast enough?

[@virginianotis1588]

are all 3 with a ilnes

[@CommanderSilverShield]

Oh my celesta this is bucking creepy buck this I need to read the comments

[@snonyabeeswax]

Im glad this isnt canon

[@CommanderSilverShield]

This is bucked up OK i will not swear

[@Sparrow9642]

Kevin Frisbie I don't disagree. This fic is dark and twisted, which is why I luv it!

[@CommanderSilverShield]

Agreed this is bucked up but interesting in a weird twisted way

[@phantomtail2270]

Take a shot every time they say Blood

[@ahmedhamid7903]

Phantom Tail oml TYSMMMMMM

[@Fireprincess_10]

I'm never having friends again.😨

[@jerryorange9104]

If the were smart the would of cut there mains or tails off

[@flaminginferno6641]

Is it me or the more we watch the closer we get to vomiting

[@kyraakato4569]

BUT was Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

[@creaidanthehedgehog4560]

How do you guys think this would end up turning out if COVID-19 was ever even involved exactly?...

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

Creaidan the Hedgehog Good news it's over now babe and the Poor CMCs.

[@M.W.K6996]

I'm the kind of person who prefers the female characters to be voiced by actual females.

[@Sparrow9642]

M .W. K I'm low on VAs right now, so I had no choice

[@M.W.K6996]

I hate when that happens.

[@Sparrow9642]

M .W. K Right now, I'm very limited as far as voice actors, so plz enjoy what I can provide

[@thesatanicgemsgroup5873]

+Sparrow 9642 I can help voice act

[@Sparrow9642]

The Satanic Gems Group Send a sound file of the voices to my email.

[@marijanmarijan8332]

that's disturbing

[@joseescobedo7899]

STOP CUTTING YOUR LEGS MY LEGS FEEL WERID

[@Fireprincess_10]

Jk

[@kyraakato4569]

It was Pawesome!!! The voices are strange cause` its not boy voic`d and girl voic`d I don`t like that like that Fanfic or Comic.Scootaloo is a boy and Rainbow Dash too, because they speak like boys they`r hairs like boy`s yea, that why

[@fatecosmic923]

LPS Kathleen Art wha? English please?

[@ViolarulesGaming]

Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash are mares. They're tomcolts.

[@chocolatethewaffle9997]

LPS Kathleen Art scootaloo and rainbow dash are not boys

[@AuroraRoseWinters1995]

LPS Kathleen Art Rainbow and Scootaloo are girls. Just cause they have more masculine sounding voices doesn't make them boys. I can make my voice go really deep but that doesn't make me a boy. There are girls who have low range voices. There are also boys who have high pitched voices. Are the boys who have high pitched voices girls? No. No they're not. Looks do not = gender. I could be a girl and dress in all men's clothes and cut my hair like a guy but that doesn't make me one. It just what I want for my appearance. Remember looks don't = gender.

[@myrtlejones28]

What the Fuck is going on here?!

[@jacobblackard2574]

This is the most messed up I listened to