CLEANER ARRIVES AT THE MANSION: SEES HER PHOTO IN A BLACK FRAME AND FREEZES...

[@katherinebuterbaugh8470]

Good story keep bringing them and I will keep watching them.

[@UnfoldedStories_US]

09:54 - Linda's heartfelt confession about her sacrifices and the pain of leaving Mark is deeply emotional and beautifully delivered.

[@DelightedSAfrican]

I enjoyed this story, and especially this narrator's excellent pronounciation and her calm voice. A few loose ends kept me waiting for them to be resolved, such as: The daughter was asked to clean the mansion before the new owners moved in the next morning, for double pay. Once she noticed the photograph of her mom holding her in the library, she clearly stopped cleaning the house. Was she paid? Who finished cleaning the house? If her dad was moving in the next morning, how could the photo already be in the mansion? The next morning she and her father confronted Stephan. What about the move while they were doing that? Her father came across as weak, letting his daughter confront Stephen first. She was working very hard cleaning several houses a day to provide for her mother who needed medical treatment, but she had time to go for lunch and other visits with her father. Her mother apparently showed no signs of ill-health once the reunion took place, baking bread and cooking meals each day. Groceries cost money. Not working would make it difficult to afford them. If her father had spent years searching for her and her mother, why was the focus of the story only on the relationship of the daughter and her father? Why did her parents not reconnect? There was too much time spent on sentimental "for the first time..." repeats instead of developing the story, such as the parent's relationship, the mother's urgent need for the previously unaffordable medical treatment. The daughter behaving maturely instead of being hot and cold, making progress, then starting again with uncertainty about whether she wanted to accept her father in her life? Why did she not move aside and allow her parents to renew their love? She sounds like a spoilt girl.

[@bessieoriotis5104]

A good story,but you took too long on the trust factor. A little more action and change for the better would have been better. The mom needed more help from her husband. She needs comfort. You could have looked into that.❤

[@CynthiaJewellcy]

He wasn't her husband