Composition II: How to Write A Descriptive Essay + مثال تطبيقي

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Friendship is one of the most important human relationships on earth, and everyone has a friend or two. So me as well I have a best friend, her name is Sofia, I love her deeply and everyone in our family sees us as two sisters not as a friend because we spend most of the time together. Sofia has a black long curly hair,and a dark brown eyes, she has a round face, she is tall and fat girl.sofia is funny, she can makes me laugh, although I am sad, also she is kind because she loves to help people, and take care of animals and plants. Furthermore, she was nice to me too when we were in boarding school, she was always with me, we studied, ate,played together, sometimes she does some work for me, like washing my clothes, making my bed, and also helping me with my homework. In the end, I hope we stay friends, despite the distance and life's problems.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Friendship is one of the most important human relationships on earth, and everyone has a friend or two. So I as well have a best friend, her name is Sofia, I love her deeply and everyone in our family sees us as two sisters not as FRIENDS because we spend most of the time together. (try to write short sentences, not long ones) Sofia has a black long curly hair, and DARK brown eyes, she has a round face, she is tall and fat girl.sofia is funny, she can makes me laugh, although I am sad, also she is kind because she loves to help people, and take care of animals and plants. (too long the sentences that make your reader unable to keep focusing. ONE information PER ONE SENTENCE) Furthermore, she was nice to me too when we were in boarding school, she was always with me, we studied, ate,played together, sometimes she does some work for me, like washing my clothes, making my bed, and also helping me with my homework. ( the same previous remark. Express ONE idea in each SENTENCE.) In the end, I hope we stay friends, despite the distance and life's problems. ---So I as well have ----Generally speaking, part from the above remarks, it is good.

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But what is the thesis statement ​@@AhmedElrhazi

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[@rachidaittajer6333]

hello Sir and Ramadan kareem .I have a weird question and I would like if you can answer me about it The question is how many part that the essay has

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Ramadan Kariiim ssi Rachid...The essay normally has 5 paragraphs (not always) it can vary from 4 up to 6, but usually 4 or 5 :)

[@rachidaittajer6333]

​@@AhmedElrhazi but if they ask us in the exam the same question what I have to say . four or five???? That what I wanna know

[@AhmedElrhazi]

@@rachidaittajer6333 Look Rachid, it depends on the nature of the question you are given in the exam. For example, if they ask you to write about the reasons of brain drain, the NUMBER of REASONS you are going to state in the essay will decide how many body paragraphs. Ssuppose you will discuss THEE reasons, then normally the essay will be like that: --Introdu -----Body parag (reason 1) -----Body parag (reason 2) -----Body parag (reason 3) --Conclusion =====Now you have 5 paragraphs in this essay. Is that clear now.?

[@rachidaittajer6333]

​@@AhmedElrhazi yeah yeah I got your point but the problem is the system of Ibn ToFail university is a bit different from the other universities . let me inform you that we are not writing any paragraphs or essays on the paper of exam .on the other hand. They give us the QCM exam and we have to choose . that's why I asked you that question Any way .Thanks for your efforts and keep going you are the best

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[@AhmedElrhazi]

All the best inshalah

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Welcome!

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[@AhmedElrhazi]

@@fatimaboutouga4703 with your practice you will improve quickly. Just read and write to better your writing style.

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@@AhmedElrhazi ok.inchallh. thank you for your efforts

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[@AhmedElrhazi]

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Sir can we write and describe at the same time ?

[@AhmedElrhazi]

What do you mean by write and describe at the same time ?

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@@AhmedElrhazi narrate and decribe Between desceiptive essay and narrative essay

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[@AhmedElrhazi]

You are most welcome

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[@Mr.Bekhakh]

شكرا على هذه المجهودات ولكن أريد توضيح فقط إذا كان ممكن In the essay generally we often demonstrate at the end of our introduction how many paragraphs we will write . for example when it comes to problem solution essay, we mention the solutions at the end of Intro which means we identify how many paragraphs we will write that approach comes with all essays types or every single one has its standard? wait for your answer thank you

[@AhmedElrhazi]

العفو أخي الكريم...سعيد أنا استفادتك من الدرس. كل نوع من essay عندو rules دياولو . بخصوص problem solution essays كقاعدة متفق عليها في thesis statement كتعرض solution to the problem you have already stated in the previous lines of the introduction. Thesis statement = your solution to the problem كل التوفيق لك

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Can you help me I’m writing one on Christmas trees and need ideas :)

[@AhmedElrhazi]

How can I help you?

[@anaislugo3384]

I can’t think of an object or am I very good at describing something

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[@gulstangul3373]

I’m understanding all the rule but I have a problem with my ideas I cant get the wonderful ideas 🥺

[@AhmedElrhazi]

I'm happy you have understood the rules (which is very hard for some students ) . Good ideas depends mainly on the way people see things, BUT by READING a lot of stories and novels you will find it easy to get wonderful ideas

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Bhraaa f9rttt fikk 3ad db o nta tht essay Wch had s2 ghnkhdmo gha narrative o decriptive essay

[@AhmedElrhazi]

GHY Official Sorry to answer your question late (better than never ;) ) -you'll study many types of essays

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[@AhmedElrhazi]

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[@AhmedElrhazi]

I haven't studied them honestly. I can't promise you. But name some of them to me to see if I have read any.

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