[Enn] Shiro no Musume English Fandub -- "Bystander"

After so many years I finally had the courage to sing it! U__U Thank you for all your patience and support!
Originally written by: Aku no P
Originally sung by: Yowane Haku
www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm9305683
Cover by: Enn
English Lyrics by: Enn
Mixed by: Chzta Records
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Twitter: @ennsings
Tumblr: @ennsings
Lyrics: ennsings.tumblr.com/post/11289...

[@archetypalheart7572]

Shoutout to Clarith for being the only character to resist a demon's influence

[@Mikey-TMNT-is-the-best-turtle]

Yeah!

[@tylerbutner9494]

Fr

[@MintMilky]

Technically Adam wasn't a demon so that's why she could easily break her contract. Although looking at it closely, Adam did not make contracts with anyone, only with Gallerian

[@Ya_boi_thorn]

I noticed the larger the shard the more impact the person had on clairth's life

[@ThoughtProvokingVlogs]

Good observation!

[@scout_princess]

Len (Ailen) has nothing? :(

[@Ya_boi_thorn]

@@scout_princess he was closer to michella than clarith so she probably doesn't know who he is. It's actually supported at the end of this song. Rilliane was about to be killed by clarith but Allen's ghost went in front of her to save her. This stopped clarith and she wondered who the vision was of

[@scout_princess]

@@Ya_boi_thorn okay thanks

[@Ya_boi_thorn]

@Landon Israel is this on there?

[@justsomeone1150]

Len is all like Len : hey I didn't DİE for NO REASON

[@brambleberryproductions1235]

Eek-

[@thedabisme61]

Well he did die for no reason in like idk. EVERY SINGLE VOCALOID VIDEO HE IS IN.

[@whitelily6658]

Thedabisme in the story of evil he died for reasons but in the rest of Vocaloid and Evillious hes

[@whitelily6658]

I mean yes

[@justsomeone1150]

That's len for ya he dies every 5 minutes and come back like nothing happened in the next day

[@justthatoneflowerkid772]

"As if protecting someone.......precious?" Me: VIOLENTLY SOBS

[@ChrysanthemumLelie]

I'm late but still ):

[@iammatt3174]

Me too buddy. Me too.

[@Strawbi_Boba]

😭

[@weabowoshi]

That really caught me off guard, my god

[@mystical_tailz6330]

:,D

[@akuma4321]

"so that was the story of... the real lady of sin." chills every time.

[@s8j7s71]

Rilanne and Allen switching is the worst kept secret ever

[@aliabaxter7397]

I would argue it's not. I mean, Rilanne and Allen obviously knew, Haku/Clarith knows, and I think Meiko/Germaine and Kaito/Kyle find out at some point, but I don't believe anyone else knows. There worse-kept secrets. If only five people ever found out, it's pretty well-kept. Sorry if I sound petty or bother you because I'm 2 months late. Just needed to point this out.

[@edenp2465]

@@aliabaxter7397 Germaine and Kyle found out before Clarith, they actually found out before Allen even died. They didn't stop his execution because he told them that he killed his foster father and Michaela (even though he didn't actually kill Michaela).

[@moimeiko]

Don't Yukina also know and wrote a whole book about it?

[@venomaniia]

Meiko Yes, I’m pretty sure Yukina knows as well. Of course none believed her.

[@ice_bead]

Chartette (Teto) recognised him moments before his death too if i remember correctly

[@calicosy__9085]

am I the only one sobbing at the fact that Rin made a brioche bc ya know that got me- like in an "everyday's snacc is brioche now bc i miss my brother" kinda way

[@yami8479]

More feels come from knowing that he (Allen) learned that brioche recipe from Clarith.

[@prettiest_boy_in_town]

I'm crying abt the same thing 😭

[@prettiest_boy_in_town]

​@@yami8479HE DID??? HE KNEW CLARITH??? (I haven't watched the show or read the books, I only recently found this playlisy)

[@incw.2601]

​@@prettiest_boy_in_townTHERES A SHOW???

[@prettiest_boy_in_town]

@@incw.2601 I THINK...??? There were a few comments on a diff song from this series (I don't remember which one) and they said smth about an anime show on this story. I'm guessing that show is where they got the art in the video from

[@smolsowo1415]

The way she delivered the "as if protecting someone..... precious?" Just made it all the more understanding of how the pieces are put together for her and how painful it is in different stories

[@lunarwarrior1614]

Everyone seems to be crying about Len (or Allen).... And I seem to be the only one here sobbing because of Clarith's life. So many people can relate.... ;-;

[@umbreno]

+LunarWarrior16 MOTF *raises hand* I am one of the people who can relate.

[@lunarwarrior1614]

UmbreonWolfLover //hugs We can all relate.

[@CarlosCarlos-sv9os]

I feel so sorry for Clarith,she lost her only friend.DONT WORRY I WILL BE YOUR FRIEND.*hugs*

[@eileenisshadow5853]

Wait, isn't her name Yumi?

[@JaimeColere]

Little Shadow, Forest Girl No, her name is Clarith

[@starpool04]

Everyone here crying about either Allen, the Yuri feels, or Clarith's life in general... but like.... can't we just cry about everything together? There's so much sad stuff in this song, why are y'all picking and choosing? Let's just cry together guys, c'mon. I'll bring the ice cream.

[@sarahfreezis2322]

Yeah, like, every character of this series has a tragedy part in every life of their own. All because of Prim 😠. Ney did brutally stabbed her to death, but I don’t see that’s enough for Prim, even though (most of) everyone has a fairly good ending (Still not sure if I should forgive Prim a bit since she has HER Syndrome; or it’s just me being childish and hate her so much that I don’t care about that 😓)

[@marshiboi2991]

Why is DDLC being mentioned here? /j

[@sarahfreezis2322]

@@marshiboi2991 he/she’s just mentioning the love between Michaela and Clarith (Haku & Miku)

[@marshiboi2991]

@@sarahfreezis2322 whoosh

[@lilishipper174]

I will just cry for Kyle

[@crystalv190]

My heart throbbed as you sang "what was that image that flashed in front of me that fateful night when we were by the sea? Who was that young man who threw himself between us, As if protecting someone precious..." Len-tan TTATT uuuuu... I can image in so vividly! Your amazing voice has made my day! Absolutely beautiful! Thank you

[@Ennsings]

Kurage Hime yeS because that's the reaction i was going for!!!! thanks!!! Q_Q

[@rubiot_wyn8343]

how could it be len tho >.> he died at the guillotine

[@Potato-sg6qr]

@@rubiot_wyn8343 his spirit like in regret message

[@izuk0stories729]

Yes! 😭😭👊

[@lullamiine]

"O, how I wish that I weren’t alive” I had been saying that since I was five Tedious days and years went by All I ever did was whimper and whine People in my village were all so fair With eyes like gems and beautiful green hair They whispered and chattered and looked at me with spite For my hair was tinted with a ghastly white Secretly hidden deep inside the woods An old oak tree a thousand years withstood There I was standing with tears in my eyes Praying to God with languishing sighs Wretched a life is when lived alone With nobody’s company but your own I dare not ask for much from where I stand Just for a person who could hold my hand I found her next to the ancient tree Her fragile body, limp and weak With no one around I had to try my best Carefully nursed her back to consciousness Gradually, naturally, our lives entwined I learnt to leave my lonely days behind She became everything that I had got Despite being everything that I was not Gleaming like emeralds in the sun Her hair was more enchanting than anyone’s Her face was fair, and her voice was bright Captivating anyone at first sight Why would she show love and sympathy To one whom was so unworthy as me? Could it be pity I saw in her eyes? Were the oaths of friendship only white lies? She took me into her arms as I trembled with fear Her soothing words flowed into my ears “Never had I met another as beautiful as you are” Hearing that, I broke down in tears They can laugh and mock my ways Hurt me with enmity and hate They can shame me, slander me into disgrace I won’t fear, I won’t cry, I have you by my side You who gave me all the worth I need inside We fled from the village into town Found some work and settled down Things there were different in every way But with her I was happier each passing day Gradually, naturally, we started a new life Working for a rich merchant’s wife Even with these hardships we pulled through The bond between us it only grew One day in the mansion we met a man With colbalt hair and thus began This sickening story of jealousy and rage When he met her everything started to change He was king of the lands across the sea He fell for her and so did she Rejected the love of the neighbouring queen Lighting the fuse of destiny The land was devoured by the roaring flames of war Mercilessly, the queen she swore “See to it that all the women with green hair are dead They shall thrive in these lands no more” Everyone I loved and cared Not a single one was spared Except me because of my colourless hair Why can’t I die in her place? Why do good lives go to waste? Does this all boil down to unchangeable fate? “O how I wish that I weren’t alive” I had been saying that since I was five Tedious days and years went by All I ever did was whimper and whine Aimless and lost, I started serving my Lord Working in a church next to a port The breeze brings in rumours of the death of the queen Executed at the guillotine I found her right by the choppy sea Her fragile body, limp and weak With no one around I had to try my best Carefully nursed her back to consciousness Gradually, naturally, our lives entwined I learnt to leave my lonely days behind She became everything that I had got Despite being everything that I was not In the confessional at night I overheard Her admitting her painful crimes, each and every word Ah, a flood of emotions ran through my skin So that was the story of… the real lady of sin On the small little shore where the giant big waves roar She walked there alone, her feet cold and sore I followed and walked up from behind her Pulling out a knife I took with me to kill her Raising it up to finally have my revenge It’s for you my friend… There’s an apology I’d like to make To you whom is safe in God’s embrace In the end I made a different call I did not avenge your death after all She must feel what I felt a long time ago Full of loneliness, full of woe Wretched a life is when lived alone With nobody’s company but your own The girl who couldn’t do anything before this Learnt how to cook and bake her favorite desserts She made brioche for us today at tea I have to say she’s done it perfectly What was that image that flashed in front of me That fateful night when we were by the sea? Who was that young man who threw himself between us As if protecting someone precious? ------------------------------------------------------ (I'm just going to use it for myself)

[@onlineresident2174]

I needed it too. Thanks buddy.

[@thedabisme61]

Yay

[@-.Cherry-]

The fact I heard it all in order ( Daughter of evil, Servant of evil, Regret message, and “Bystander” [aka this song that we just heard] ) I somewhat understand the story now..... The 2 twins of the yellow kingdom was separated at brith. The girl became the queen while the boy became her servant. The girl fell in love with a prince from a blue kingdom but the prince fell in love with the girl with the green hair. The boy twin also meet the girl with green hair and fell in love with her, but sadly he had to kill her because of his sister’s, the queen’s, jealousy. His twin also ordered him to bring a army and to destroy the yellow kingdom and so he did. The blue prince, in rage, join forces with the red kingdom to kill the queen. The male twin told the queen that they were twins and told her to change clothing with him (aka swap places with him) so that she can escape. She escaped and the male twin got killed in her place. A few years later she meet the white hair person which was the green girl’s friend and became friend with her. Then one dusk she was admitting her crimes to the sea when the white haired girl heard it. She wanted to kill her and get revenge for the green haired girl, but the male twin’s soul came back to confront the yellow twin and to stop the white haired girl from killing his sister. So the white haired girl didn’t kill her and didn’t get her revenge. Sorry I wrote too much.... I got waayy too excited after I heard this song.😅😓😥

[@brendon5069]

Riliane and Allen were twins born in the kingdom of Lucifenia. Riliane, the older twin sister and Allen the younger twin brother. This kingdom has Three Heroes: Leonarth Avadonia, Mariam Futapie and Elluka Clokworker. The twins were not separated at birth. They were always very close to each other and loved each other. One day, when they were 6 years old (a thing happend but I'm not gonna write so this text won't be too big) Riliane lost her memories. And their father, the king, died frrom a disease. Allen was adopted by Leonarth Avadonia (so they wouldn't have the problem to who would be the ruler) And Leonarth already had an dopted daughter, Germaine Avadonia. So Germaine is Allen's new older sister. When Allen was still living with Leonarth and Germaine, at 13 years old, their mother died of the same disease. Leonarth let Allen work in the castle, so the people who new about his true identedy as the prince (The Three Hearoes and the minister +Allen) could compare him with Riliane, to see if he would be a better ruler, and figure out if they should revealed the truth so that Allen could rule insted of his sister. Allen didn't care much about it tho. So he started working as a servant, although he could be a guard, because he had good fighting skills (his foster father taught him). Germaine had a fight with her dad because of this. So Riliane, after the death of the queen, being the only heir to the thone (or so, everybody thought) she started ruling her kingdom, Lucifenia but she was still a princess. With respect for her mother, Riliane only wanted to be crowd queen when she was old enough, but she was never crowd. Riliane always hated Leonarth, she reaaaally hated him, but she couldn't kill him just like she kills the others so she ordered Allen to kill him (she didn't know he was his adotpive father). Germaine found her father's body surronded by other people and it was obviously Riliane's fault. Germaine loved her father very much and always hated the princess (or queen, even if she's a princess she rules like the queen) and swore revenge. She started reuniting people in screet for a revolution. Meanwhile, Riliane and king Kyle from Marlon were engaged, they always were, it was an arragment. Riliane was really in love with Kyle but Kyle didn't feel the same way. When he was traviling to Elghgort (the green country) he met Michaela and fell in love with her. But Michaela didn't feel the same way for him (unlike what this dub says), Clarith and Michaela were in love. But even knowing that Michaela was in love with a woman, Kyle broke up the engagment with Riliane. Riliane was furious and started the Green Haunt. Kyle was was very upset because of this and he joined the revolution (that already had many people by now) to kill the princess. Then Allen did those things and Riliane escaped. Now Riliane was 15 and Clarith found her. Clarith is very sweet and gentle and Riliane was still mean and rude, but she got better and they became really good friends (I ship it xD) Several years later Clarith heard Riliane's confessions. I left maaaaaaaaany parts out, there is much more. If you want to know more, I could send you a link to the wiki and send you another link for this story written~ And of course there is also a manga.

[@Dime_Moe]

Pink Diamond ...Where did you get that story from?

[@Purple-and-Starlight]

@@Dime_Moe There are novels and a manga based on these songs. You can find fantranslations of them on Tumblr. There's even a musical based on daughter of evil and servant of evil, Wich you can find on KZbin if they didn't take it out yet, but it's doesn't have subtitles.

[@chlorineii]

There’s also a song called “Waiting For a Response” after Regret Message and this.

[@Dime_Moe]

Desirée Ragona I know. I’m asking where Pink Diamond got her story from, cause the story cherry told is literally the only one I’ve heard of. I’ve listened to most of the songs, and know the story.

[@rachelwalmart]

Y'aLL OUR POOR BALL OF ANXIETY LOST HER GIRLFRIEND, SHUT UP ABOUT ALLEN (mostly joking, don't take this too seriously)

[@Slime_for_Brains]

Dude. I feel that. I feel bad for Clarith. She lost the first person she ever loved, and vise versa.

[@chimeridian]

Everyone be crying about Len.. and I'm here.. Sobbing about my Yuri feels ;w;

[@linebeckland83]

Mekiko who's yuri again?

[@valieauxx1033]

Linebeck Land83 Yuri is another word for lesbian, but in anime’s. Which she means, since miku died, Haku cannot be with miku.

[@linebeckland83]

@@valieauxx1033 ahh ok

[@chris-wq1ph]

Bruh I'm here with you T^T

[@stephenmcginnis5488]

ikr

[@AliSakurai]

*sits down and listens* 8 minutes later *cries a waterfall* SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!

[@wos_liwet]

I guess the "Seven Deadly Sins" also have it's own opposites, "Seven Heavenly Virtues". In my opinion, Haku there resembles Chastity, as she doesn't have any worldly desires (Idk if friend is included). And Miku resembles Kindness, as she's very kind towards her, and i guess toward KAITO too. And, YOUR VOICE IS GORGEOUS

[@wos_liwet]

Though Haku commited revenge ("Junior" sin of Wrath) in the end, her Patience was able to hold it off

[@wos_liwet]

Thus, the two (Miku and Haku) resembles Temperance, Patience, and also Humility. WAIT! IT'S FIVE VIRTUES ALREADY!

[@tidaloctoling715]

あや子月歌 doesn't Allen resemble the virtue of humility?

[@wos_liwet]

Tidal Octoling Umm... I guess? He comit the "unspecified" deed, such as"Sacrifice","Help", "Forgiveness". IDK where Allen resembles Humility

[@tidaloctoling715]

あや子月歌 Oh my bad I was thinking on how his sister is pride and how humility is the opposite of that my bad

[@esper4605]

The infinity of "yes" this has formed in me is truly infinity.

[@Ennsings]

***** yesssssssss

[@user-kt1no7yx1u]

She didn't fall for him though. She said she wasn't really interested in guys in the book and told him she didn't feel the same way. Michaela and Clarith were the ones in love.

[@PlatonicDIVA]

Clarith doesn't know that, for all she knows they did actually develop feelings

[@tylerbutner9494]

That is true!

[@sarahsan5946]

​@@PlatonicDIVAno that's not true

[@nosleep_p]

​@@sarahsan5946 Wasn't Clarith under the assumption that Michaela and Kyle developed feelings for each other until she told Clarith that she wasn't interested in men in the novel?

[@sarahsan5946]

@@nosleep_p your right they have feelings for each other

[@Clipped_Angel]

I really like your voice and i love the fact that you rewrote the song to make it singable in English while keeping the original meaning and didn't just use the literal translation

[@talizorahvasnerd]

Elly Gershovich the only dubber I can think of that actually uses the literal translation is Rachiedan.

[@saschalevi6486]

I found Daughter of Evil around 3 years ago. I found this today. I spent a solid minute just gapeing with a short-circuting brain.

[@frostfire6579]

When she says "unchangeable fate" she sounds like she's crying

[@tiercel5561]

She is. Clarith already accepted everything that happened in the Story of Evil and yet, it still pains her to have it happen as it did.

[@tsubakiblossom]

I'm crying. I'm freaking crying - full out tears and ugly sobs. I mean, I know how the story goes... it was certain I would -- but damn. The end was perfect. Perfect in all levels. That end of .... '...precious' was what got to me because LEN!!

[@arceuspower1018]

3 years late, but check out kept waiting for a response

[@Eckef]

@@arceuspower1018 That is actually fanmade also I know this is a year late x_x

[@arceuspower1018]

@@Eckef yeah, but it's still by far more one of the most emotional songs, dispite being noncanon

[@CherrySteinz]

This first time I heard this I found it heart wrenching then when you hesitated to say precious I felt my heart shatter. You put so much emotion into there and despite a small difference between your Riliane and Micheala voices I could still tell the two distinctly apart.

[@roesslyng]

That's just That's what I'm calling a perfection How sad that there's no your version of Wooden Girl But still thank you a lot

[@firebird3176]

Lukas Bondevik you got your wish

[@firebird3176]

Lukas Bondevik nvm

[@juanmicael]

Poor, poor Clarith.

[@malachiteyesterday8659]

Juan the story of clarith and Michaela is so sad. Like yeah the whole story of evil is pretty sad but theirs specifically always makes me very sad.

[@JaniyahZephirin-belle-ts9lg]

This friendship sounds like more than a friendship

[@bozoame]

This is far later than when this was made, but it took me three days to realize the man who stood between them was Len. I'm crying ugly sobs now.

[@CJCroen1393]

I don't know why, but I find something beautiful about the way you sing "I have you by my side..."

[@sofiachaves7725]

"on the small little shore, where the giant big waves roar, she walked there alone, her feet cold and sore" regret message,right?

[@Ennsings]

yes!

[@_rem.rem.remi_]

when I heard the last line I was like "thank you, Len, for saving time!"

[@x4gottenmemoirsx]

wow i did not expect this song, but it's great nether the less. It's a rare song that isn't really covered by others. The song itself is interesting, but the original one hurt my ears a bit so i'm quite happy to find you singing this~

[@Ennsings]

x4gottenmemoirsx it isn't covered a lot, no, but a lot of people requested it (and i DID promise i'd take the request haha) i thought the original one was great too, though ;) thanks for listening!

[@venusstar2556]

When Len died I was crying so hard I couldn't even speak for a week or so. School was hard when I didn't talk for that week. I love school tho. Everyone's crying about Len, crying everydsy when I'm listening to this song.

[@tunafish8471]

由貴奈氷室 but.. he always dies in every song :’)

[@SerenEirian]

"He fell for her and so did she." Canon Michaela: *confused lesbian noises*

[@icarussapollo2923]

"Who was the young man who threw himself between us. As if protecting someone precious...?"

[@UltimateDumbass16]

these songs are by far my favorite vocaloid songs. They tell a wonderfully sad story, each one giving more and more information that just makes you want to cry

[@pokeloon15]

Best fandub I've heard of this song!

[@iceluvndiva21]

Man....I relate so much to Haku. I was harrassed a lot growing up because of my mental illness and learning disability. It got so bad I attempted suicide. I would have if not for my best friend and basically sister. It was her kind words that saved me that night. I don't know what I'd do if she was murdered.

[@bee2729]

i was a fan of the story of evil when i was a kid but i never saw this one!! i really love it though

[@sarahfreezis2322]

There’s more u can find on Evillious Chronicles Wikia. Story of Evil is just a part of it (tho its official name is Daughter of Evil series)

[@shigushigu741]

Late by a year,, but Just wait till I tell you there's around 85 songs in the entire series (not just the Daughter Of Evil saga) and that most of them tie in together to make one highly complicated story There's also a ton of novels as well

[@Kessukii]

​@@shigushigu741whaaaatt? Where can I find it?

[@hinatastrike]

Holy shit your lyrics and voice are amazeballs. Underrated youtaite, you

[@Ennsings]

Strikey Chan hahaha i'm just glad people like my fandubs :D thanks!!!

[@NoXterium]

Enn sings your voice is really special! I love the sound of your voice on the ifuudoudou cover. I think these "darker" and "deeper" sounding singing fits your voice the most.

[@vishous303]

This was well worth the wait. Absolutely beautiful. The only line that some what erks me is the " and so did she" line, but it is far forgiven by how well you sang the song. It's so hard to find good covers of this one, so thank you.

[@Ari-zf3dk]

I'm not the only one? I like to pretend it's just Clarith not realizing that Michaela wasn't interested in Kyle. In the novel, it does imply she thought Michaela liked him(take her dislike of the necklace for example). Then again, maybe you just don't like it for another reason and I'm all alone on the mourning of Clarith/Michaela.

[@vishous303]

No not at all. I was actually thinking the same thing, I just couldn't remember if Clarith ever realized Michaela wasn't in love with Kyle in the novel on not. It's been a while since I read the novel. And your not the only one with Clarith/Meichaela OTP love.

[@Ennsings]

***** ahhhh i didn't realize because i didn't read the novels / manga! i got all my information from the original lyrics so i made some assumptions.... i'm sorry i got that part wrong, but thank you for liking it anyways!

[@vishous303]

Oh my god! You replied directly to me! Some one who makes videos I love actually replied to me! Ahem, anyways, really? That's actually really surprising since your entire story of evil song series has some of the most novel accurate lyrics I've seen. It's one of the reasons I like them so much. That and your passionate voice. Keep making great stuff, and if you do get the chance check out the Novels/Mangas, they're pretty interesting.

[@Fwemy]

Haha, that comes a bit late but I read that: Michaela is still alive. Clarith was told that Michaela orginally was a forest spirit which had been incarnated as a human by magic. She learned that Michaela had been chosen as the successor of Held and was to become the next Millennium Tree. Gumillia, a former forest spirit of Held, recited a spell to summon Michaelas spirit from the sapling. Clarith so spoke with Michalea and sadly found out, that the spell could only be used a few times. Finally understanding that she had to move on, she and Michaela confessed their love to each other in unison before the ritual ended. After the ritual, Gumillia gave the sapling to Clarith and suggested she plant her in the forest. The story moves on, but thats what I read about the two and Michaela's death. ^^ Honestly, I ship Michaela and Clarith! :3

[@StormyBuckets]

A family can be a sad lesbian and the evil queen she swore to hate (who is also a lesbian)

[@tomboyjessie1352]

Your amazing! You put a lot of emotions into the characters!

[@Ennsings]

Megpoid Gumi thank you! i try my best ;__;

[@tomboyjessie1352]

Enn sings your welcome :-)

[@murxidealexander5977]

This cover is absolutely beautiful!! The lyric are so unique, and your voice is perfect! Well done my lady! I simply love your fan covers! My four personal favourites are: Daughter/servant of evil, black vow, and regret message. Beautiful ♥

[@Ennsings]

murxide alexander thank you, i'm glad black vow is on your list! ^///^

[@RIRIN485]

WHY IS DAUGHTER OF WHITE ISN'T ON SPOTIFY 😭 LIKE I JUST WANNA LISTEN TO IT ALL DAY BUT I CAN'T 😭😭

[@CherryCoffee420]

So turns out, she didn’t kill her, and just taught her how to live, *damn*

[@pikachie4671]

Ikr

[@teacup4561]

Yeah this is an amazing translation, and your voice sounds great with the song!!!!!! Love this!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@tiercel5561]

Clarith - the only one in the Story of Evil with a virtue - Patience. No wonder even demons fear her.

[@BreadBoxVideo]

Your voice is beautiful and your capacity for writing lyrics never ceases to amaze me. Fantastic work, you've done it again.

[@Ennsings]

David Toth thank you so much! these lyrics were actually finished some time ago, i just had trouble with the singing haha

[@nightshade-warroir6915]

Your English lyrics fit the song so well, your voice matches the song so beautifully~ One of the best covers I've heard for this song, brilliant job~

[@Wolfsbaene]

Your singing was flawless, no shocker there. What really made this outstanding was the voice acting though! I particularly loved it when Riliane's lines came in. Wonderful job!

[@Ennsings]

Azeran Warrens thank you! i had tonnes of fun singing her lines!

[@thedabisme61]

So... I just realized. Miku was loved by Len and... whatever the blue guy was and has this lesbian feeling for the white girl.... so a love Y. like a love triangle.

[@pakdemu_3233]

I know it's 2019 but i want to say this. If not because Clarith, Rin will be dead. She is the only one who accept Rin even after bearing everything she did. And she think that Rin is the same like her, alone, doesn't have anyone.

[@CherryAnime203]

I'm crying... the lyrics are absolutely fantastic. There is no way to make it any better. This was amazing, great job! I just love your voice so much. ; w ;

[@caramelldansen4352]

AKUNO MUSUME *slams my head on the piano*

[@LesbiansMarie]

Oh yeah, they were totally best friends in a historical way, weren't they?

[@Ennsings]

totes gal pals

[@RedRosemary]

@@Ennsings omg they were gal sticks

[@RedRosemary]

@@Ennsings why does it translate to stick

[@xellrov2911]

I just notice this after watching several times I think clarith doesn't know miku love her cause it is portray in the music that clarith think miku fell in love to Kaito so sad😭😭😭

[@teacup4561]

This is a very excellent translation, I love it I really appreciate the effort put in to make it sound natural in english while maintaining the same meaning as the Japanese. good job!!

[@angerykorbypancake1613]

Your voice is so beautiful!

[@tinyangryace31]

I've been searching for an English cover for ages, thank God I found this, it's perfect

[@RainbowEssence-c3w]

Very nice, this is an underrated vocaloid song and Yowane Haku is an underrated vocaloid, so thank you so much for covering this! It's a difficult song to to an English cover of, since the words don't so easily translate and often have to be changed to match the melody. This is perhaps my favorite of the Story of Evil songs, because I can sadly relate to it. All my life I have struggled with low self-esteem and feelings of inferiority. Growing up, I had an older brother who bullied and abused me and made me feel like a burden to our parents. As I entered puberty I struggled with anxiety and severe acne, and it's left me with many scars unfortunately. So I can relate to the girl in the song, the "daughter of white" because I too often struggle with feeling ugly and that I am worth less than others. I feel petty complaining though, because I am very fortunate in that I have two loving, kind parents who have always encouraged me and told me I was smart and praised me for getting good grades. My teachers, too. There was my older brother that bullied me, but you would think one person versus my parents and teachers wouldn't have that much of an impact on my self-esteem. Idk, I just know I can relate to the song and I'm grateful you covered it, so thank you and again good job!

[@fraguess]

omg... as soon as i heard your voice, my throat began to close itself because i knew the combination of the song+your voice was gonna make me cry your voice is so good omg, makes me emotional

[@Napstabloookie]

After so long I still think this is the best cover of this song. I actually just 5 Stared it today through KZbin. :>

[@extremesubtlety]

aaaa this cover is so good!! I love the lyrics too!

[@dinarmaharanihasnadi1938]

I never thought this song would hurt me again. You have such an amazing voice and write such amazing lyrics ;-;

[@malachiteyesterday8659]

I really like this version! I never found it because I always search daughter of white for this, thank goodness it came up in my recommended!

[@JellyChristal]

This gets overshadowed by regret message ❤

[@chrissi975]

The best version there is!

[@thehammycycle3047]

Cant. Stop. The. Replay. Button

[@infinitenicknames2408]

I'm not crying, it's just the ninjas chopping onions again.

[@xandyxguan]

Best English dub of this song I've heard so far. xD

[@cptnsfti]

Oh my god Enn that was amazing. One day if like to sing with you, even if only for three seconds. I was actuall trying to find all of the story of evil in English and had a disastrous time finding this song.

[@Ennsings]

Pastel C. wow you are too kind!!!! i can understand why they're hard to find; the lyrics to the series are all very long and difficult to translate, but i'm sure more will pop up eventually ^^

[@kofiilicious]

how did i just find this it's a masterpiece help I can't stop listening o>o

[@anji42085]

I love how you low key sound like eponine from les mis in this like it really fits clarith

[@natt_tenshi2707]

Oh my God I absolutely love this song and your english dub has only made me love it even more! This was just so beautiful! You did an amazing job as always

[@Ennsings]

Natt Tenshi thanks so much for the appreciation!

[@Starlight-Tale]

You've done beautifully. Not only does it sound perfect, but the video looks really nice and I can tell you put a lot of thought into it. It's very clever.

[@natsumehide3978]

I am sobbing, how can someone with live this hard can be.. This kind?

[@project_genshin3935]

This very cover is servearly underrated :( I love this so much

[@sazukick]

Your voice is everything. I love it so much, this cover is as beautiful as the original (or even more)

[@holyroomba2814]

So this video is like, 4 years old but I have to say, I FLIPPING LOVE THIS SONG!! Your voice is so pretty! The lyrics are amazing too! This has definitely become one of my top 10 favorite songs, keep up the great work!

[@MichiMichiricheDang]

okay. okay wow i wasn’t prepared to cry today. hi i LOVE you and i love your lyrics so so so much?! tears are actually flowing out of my eyes as i write this HAHA i actually can’t convey how happy this makes me. gonna our this on repeat forever, thanks!

[@brambleberryproductions1235]

So Here's the thing I never really hearx much of Daughter of White, and so I didn't fully know the story behind this song (or most of the Story of Evil, tbh) And I didn't know that Len I didn't know he-

[@sarahfreezis2322]

Well, you can read the LNs to see the story clearly. I guess that the Wikia is quite tough for you to understand (Please forgive me if I underestimate you at something 🙇‍♀️, if you don’t, then yeah, sometimes the Wikia is hard to get in my head tho 😅)

[@sarahfreezis2322]

And, yeah, Allen loves Riliane so much that he begged god Sickle to let him save his sister 😭, despite having to stay in the Black Box as his order at that time ☹️

[@shiteyanyo1111]

OMG YOUR VOICE IS SO UNIQUE AND BEAUTIFUL

[@ixion9775]

these are such gorgeous lyrics wow it brings out the story so perfectly that my eyes teared up at the end amazing voices during singing too!! i don't know everything about this is just amazing okay

[@Ennsings]

☂ i x i o n ahhhh thanks for everything!!

[@xDoomfirex]

Actually thought it was going to be terrible since its hard to get the emotion right in translation. I noticed you made a few choices to edit the translation. It is very good. Yikes this was six years ago thanks for this.

[@Piyratheon]

Yes! One of my favorite songs, I'm absolutely thrilled to hear your take on it! Love it! Well worth the wait ;)

[@Ennsings]

HM-Dragon-Dreamer i'm glad you liked it then! since people were messaging me about this i was really worried if it'd meet their expectations!

[@bellacupcakes4765]

2:40 - 3:01, me and my 2 besties quote even if everybody bullies or hates us. The feels btw T~T

[@jonastder4616]

This really needs more attention- at long last , this song gets some love!

[@Ennsings]

Jon Astder ikr!!! the original song is wonderful in its own way

[@izzy9451]

definitely the best dub ive seen so far :D

[@ayanohattori6502]

I hope you're taking requests.. Can you sing the sequence to this? Thousand Year Wiegenlied. It's so beautiful..

[@Ennsings]

Ayano Hattori i'm sorry i can't take requests at the moment because of so many unfinished personal projects! (and real life!) ;___; but i will keep this suggestion in mind!

[@ayanohattori6502]

I never thought you'd reply.. and thanks! Sorry for asking you while you're so busy with things..

[@punpun13206]

O, how I wish that I weren’t alive” I had been saying that since I was five Tedious days and years went by All I ever did was whimper and whine People in my village were all so fair With eyes like gems and beautiful green hair They whispered and chattered and looked at me with spite For my hair was tinted with a ghastly white Secretly hidden deep inside the woods An old oak tree a thousand years withstood There I was standing with tears in my eyes Praying to God with languishing sighs Wretched a life is when lived alone With nobody’s company but your own I dare not ask for much from where I stand Just for a person who could hold my hand I found her next to the ancient tree Her fragile body, limp and weak With no one around I had to try my best Carefully nursed her back to consciousness Gradually, naturally, our lives entwined I learnt to leave my lonely days behind She became everything that I had got Despite being everything that I was not Gleaming like emeralds in the sun Her hair was more enchanting than anyone’s Her face was fair, and her voice was bright Captivating anyone at first sight Why would she show love and sympathy To one whom was so unworthy as me? Could it be pity I saw in her eyes? Were the oaths of friendship only white lies? She took me into her arms as I trembled with fear Her soothing words flowed into my ears “Never had I met another as beautiful as you are” Hearing that, I broke down in tears They can laugh and mock my ways Hurt me with enmity and hate They can shame me, slander me into disgrace I won’t fear, I won’t cry, I have you by my side You who gave me all the worth I need inside We fled from the village into town Found some work and settled down Things there were different in every way But with her I was happier each passing day Gradually, naturally, we started a new life Working for a rich merchant’s wife Even with these hardships we pulled through The bond between us it only grew One day in the mansion we met a man With colbalt hair and thus began This sickening story of jealousy and rage When he met her everything started to change He was king of the lands across the sea He fell for her and so did she Rejected the love of the neighbouring queen Lighting the fuse of destiny The land was devoured by the roaring flames of war Mercilessly, the queen she swore “See to it that all the women with green hair are dead They shall thrive in these lands no more” Everyone I loved and cared Not a single one was spared Except me because of my colourless hair Why can’t I die in her place? Why do good lives go to waste? Does this all boil down to unchangeable fate? “O how I wish that I weren’t alive” I had been saying that since I was five Tedious days and years went by All I ever did was whimper and whine Aimless and lost, I started serving my Lord Working in a church next to a port The breeze brings in rumours of the death of the queen Executed at the guillotine I found her right by the choppy sea Her fragile body, limp and weak With no one around I had to try my best Carefully nursed her back to consciousness Gradually, naturally, our lives entwined I learnt to leave my lonely days behind She became everything that I had got Despite being everything that I was not In the confessional at night I overheard Her admitting her painful crimes, each and every word Ah, a flood of emotions ran through my skin So that was the story of… the real lady of sin On the small little shore where the giant big waves roar She walked there alone, her feet cold and sore I followed and walked up from behind her Pulling out a knife I took with me to kill her Raising it up to finally have my revenge It’s for you my friend… There’s an apology I’d like to make To you whom is safe in God’s embrace In the end I made a different call I did not avenge your death after all She must feel what I felt a long time ago Full of loneliness, full of woe Wretched a life is when lived alone With nobody’s company but your own The girl who couldn’t do anything before this Learnt how to cook and bake her favorite desserts She made brioche for us today at tea I have to say she’s done it perfectly What was that image that flashed in front of me That fateful night when we were by the sea? Who was that young man who threw himself between us As if protecting someone precious?

[@ladydreams330]

omg this is amazing, your amazing

[@YokoFujioka]

seriously gorgeous, the accent was a really nice touch

[@xxqueenofwolfheadxx2011]

I still love it you sing so good I love it please do more

[@Laury2Seas]

You made this so perfectly. Q-Q

[@ladydreams330]

your the best singer I have ever found on youtube

[@WenQi7]

Your voice is beautiful

[@Ennsings]

Maya Neo i try my best to differentiate; hope it worked! thanks!

[@firebird3176]

You have a fantastic voice!

[@lirin1948]

It's really good!

[@RaemiChimiko]

Clarith, please remember that Michaela and Ayn will always love you til death