CORRECTED Ch 23’s Lore (FNAF: SB REWRITTEN)

I want to thank CycloneAbsol here because they were the first person to point out the mistake to me and saved everyone a lot of confusion! They have an entire Word document keeping track of the lore HERE: docs.google.com/document/d/13... So if anyone's interested, you can follow along the little details they've picked up from all of the incident reports, so you don't have to go through every episode again just to find one tiny clue :)

[@kiwiqueen138]

I want to thank CycloneAbsol here because they were the first person to point out the mistake to me and saved everyone a lot of confusion! They have an entire Word document keeping track of the lore HERE: docs.google.com/document/d/13cv5vH3MLErtsKX_7d_D6WB4ZJBWIHDYqvvpW-eNXkg/mobilebasic So if anyone's interested, you can follow along the little details they've picked up from all of the incident reports, so you don't have to go through every episode again just to find one tiny clue :) If you don’t know what I’m talking about, here is the link to the full playlist containing my FNAF: SB Rewrite: kzbin.info/aero/PLKMzqZUiHWUjzZj0jfJym1CTORp4rdEDD

[@cycloneabsol9405]

Yooo thanks for the shoutout, Kiwi!

[@Lizzy_Stories09]

Thx to the link I’m updating to my theory board

[@fallenxnova2469]

Unlike Scott Cawthon, when you make a small and understandable mistake with dates or canon you don’t make it seem like it’s apart of some bigger frustrating mystery. Good on ya.

[@gnarlyagent594]

it's all good! Personally I didn't even notice the mistake and everything still fits in my bookshelf of a brain perfectly fine!

[@cycloneabsol9405]

Hey, Kiwi, you can totally just actually take a break while you're on vacation. None of us will hold it against you if you just don't check the comments until you get back. Yeah, it rocks getting instant feedback from you when we comment, but sometimes (always) it's more important that you don't freak out about it while you're trying to rest. There's a time for working, and there's a time for not thinking about it. And when you're on vacation to the beach, that's the time for not thinking about it. Take care of yourself.

[@ThienNguyen-in6gx]

I missed the last video but thanks for correcting it anyway also victor Miller is actually like the best person here like he only took people who were already dead and didn’t KILL anyone or try to (looking at you Vanessa) and he’s not abusing the animatronics he’s actually doing the opposite. (Looking at you too JEREMY.)

[@RutiletheMischevious]

Yeah, every time Vanessa did some crap, or Jeremy abused the animatronics, I got so pissed off. Every time Jeremy or Vanessa came on SCREEN, I literally made the Yellow Diamond face from that one SU episode. Sorry for the cuss word

[@ThienNguyen-in6gx]

@@RutiletheMischevious What cuss word?

[@RutiletheMischevious]

@@ThienNguyen-in6gx "Pissed"

[@ThienNguyen-in6gx]

@@RutiletheMischevious ok guess your parents are strict and a bit too strict with what counts as a “cuss” word and what isn’t.

[@Thebluemamott]

We'll just put it in as an oops and look past it

[@Lizzy_Stories09]

After analyzing this a whole lot idk 🤷‍♀️ where to put moon 🌙.? What subject is he. Apparently at one point in time sun and moon didn’t share a body, so they had to be different subjects, unless yellow and blue mean anything…. 😒 it means something doesn’t it. Well I love your work!! And I think this has been and amazing rewrite so far so keep up the good work!!!! ❤️📖❤️📖❤️📖❤️📖❤️ time for me to review everything again I’ll edit ✍️ this if I figure it out!! My work is in the comments!!

[@Lizzy_Stories09]

My work= Rewrite I’m listening to, answers= I haven’t figured out yet if Monty is a subject yet. If so I guessing he’s subject 7. I don’t know where to place Moon. (I was going to put him with sun as subject 4 but at one point in this timeline they were separate, so it wouldn’t make sense? Or I could be thinking to hard into this.) Subject 6=Roxy; incident. does not like to lose, talks back, and finds ways to not curse but find loop whole as substitute (September 14 2075) Subject 5=Chica; incident. eating disorder (December 17 2078) Subject 4=Sun; incident. scared of unknown creature/animal: dog (April 7 2073) Subject 3=Freddie; incident. scared of the dark/ storms (June 20th 2074) (has stage fright) O.N.N. Comet Subject 2=Bonnie; incident. didn’t clean the bowling alley on time (October 11th 2076) O.N.N. Bubblegum Subject 1=Dj; incident. Stood up for Freddie (March 21 2082), but chapter 23’s cannon lore time stamp 6:33 through 6:47 said no connection to past self (there was nothing stating where in the timeline it was posted so it can not be confirmed, nor denied) O.N.N.Snowball O.N.N. Means old nickname Unknown codes? 1. P over 2 2. B over 4 3. M over 7 4. L over 13 Sorry for bad grammar!!! Love the rewrite!!!❤❤️📖❤️📖❤️✌🏼✌🏼✌🏼

[@kiwiqueen138]

Thank you for doing all of that, it makes me really happy to see people getting this invested in my rewrite! :)

[@Alice_The_Person3707]

Hey Kiwi? I do have a quick question if you don’t mind 😅 what’s your favorite color?

[@kiwiqueen138]

Purple :) It’s not because of FNAF or anything, that’s just a coincidence lol

[@Alice_The_Person3707]

@@kiwiqueen138 ooo fun! *cough cough* PURPLE BOI GO SHANK SHANK- *cough cough* awh man, what was that!

[@JustCallMeEevee]

I was kind of confused by the years from Chica and the gap in the years so I kind of figured that they were the same event and I didn’t want to look up the event that correlated with the year. Thank you for clarifying, though. We all make these kinds of mistakes, so I don’t blame you. 😊

[@thenevo3426]

Hope you're having a good vacation! Also bless you for making sure that the lore is well kept 😌

[@ThienNguyen-in6gx]

Wait I just realized there’s a mistake in the text version chapter 23 is labeled as 24.

[@kiwiqueen138]

That’s not a mistake, it’s just that Ao3 counts the prologue as “chapter 1”, which means that Chapter 1 is now labeled as “chapter 2”, etc etc, so every chapter is labeled one number above it’s actual position in the story. But thank you for telling me anyway, I even though I can’t really fix that part.

[@ThienNguyen-in6gx]

@@kiwiqueen138 ok thanks for clarifying it. :)

[@that1artsykid329]

FIRST

[@erikbihari3625]

Ok?