[Correction 82] This is the reason why the picture doesn't look good.

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[Correction 82] This is the reason why the picture doesn't look good.

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@Create-nf1go 6 ай бұрын

めっちゃわかりやすい。ただ修正するだけじゃなくて絵作りの根本的な考え方みたいなのを教えてくれるから自分の絵にも応用できそうですごく有り難い。

@user-ic7uv5ke9u 6 ай бұрын

元のイラストからかなり素敵だし、あまり描き変えずにクオリティだけ上がってるのすごい！

@rukich777 6 ай бұрын

元絵も素晴らしく上手いし、更になおき先生の添加や元絵のリスペクトも最高!

@rom_404error 6 ай бұрын

構図のセンスが素晴らしい

@aomame2927 6 ай бұрын

このイラスト好きでまた見たいと思っていた添削回だったので再掲嬉しいです！

@IshikaShanai 6 ай бұрын

The way you painted the light onto the dress was like magic to me! It made the fabric of the dress come alive. 😊

@user-xi7oi5xs1v 6 ай бұрын

めちゃくちゃカッコいいシチュエーションおしゃれで好きですー！適当に描いた方がむしろ良いところと、描き込みした方が良いところ、目立ち度の足し算引き算、勉強になりました✨

@user-dq5nf3te2x 2 ай бұрын

丁寧に描くということの大切さがよくわかります…！

@user-mochinomochi 6 ай бұрын

描き込み具合にメリハリがあって映えているイラストって憧れます～先生の動画で身につきますように😖

@adeptgirl3454 6 ай бұрын

This was a good lesson! I often have this problem of putting equal focus on the subject and the setting.

@jp.... 6 ай бұрын

奥のものをシンプルに描いたり淡い色使いでまとめて遠近感だしたりするの全然出来なくて、つい暗くしちゃうし細かく描いてしまうからこの方本当にすごいと思う、、、、、。優先順位をつけて絵を描きたい；；

@fdhuahodoios 6 ай бұрын

ラフ見てうっま…！と言ってしまった。

@user-oc3ci5wj4v 6 ай бұрын

この添削めっちゃ好き！元絵も添削後も良すぎる！

@AlexanderArts 6 ай бұрын

On the left character's face one big improvement that wasn't mentioned was fixing the lighting on the mouth. The original artist drew highlights on the left side which made it seem the mouth was just painted on. Saito-sensei put shadows in that same place to show that the mouth has depth and the light can't reach inside there.

@user-wd1vo1yw2v 6 ай бұрын

再放送有難うございます！再放送なのに…いつも負けてしまう気まぐれじゃんけん

@kuranosuk Ай бұрын

依頼主に大共感する泣

@user-wn9vv2mj4l 6 ай бұрын

色使いが好きです！あずきちゃん懐かしすぎるー私も面長ならないよう気をつけてるけどなっちゃう。

@pepopeponyo 6 ай бұрын

添削後かわいすぎる！！！！！

@user-tc7hg8hm8j 6 ай бұрын

難しい…🤔 さすがさいとう先生

@palitodegalleta.4790 6 ай бұрын

Nunca me cansaré de aprender con los vídeos del profesor, siempre humilde y con ganas de enseñarnos ❤️ un saludo desde España

@kurage_mothimothi 6 ай бұрын

これめっちゃ好きだったから嬉しい

@J3ss4u 6 ай бұрын

The base picture was very decently done and laid out, so props to the artist. The correction just further increased and helped out to bring out its charm. Excellent pointers by sensei, nothing too crazy but it does makes quite a difference

@godabandonedmesoibecameaba8984 4 ай бұрын

I kind of preferred the original background because it makes the place look more welcoming. The point of the picture was to make the girls more approachable and provocative and if the place is cold looking girls will also come off as cold and distant.

@user-bj2bi5ig6r 6 ай бұрын

はじめまして、いつも素敵な動画をありがとうございます！夫婦で楽しく拝見しております。先生が手前の女の子の服の光の色をオレンジに塗っていらっしゃった事について私）普通赤い色に光が当たると単純に赤が白けたピンクを選びがちだけど、オレンジを選ぶ先生の観察眼が素晴らしい！旦那）カードやポスターなどの印刷物になる事を想定して、印象付けるために全体のバランスを見てオレンジを使っているのではないか？と意見が対立しました（軽い喧嘩に）先生はどちらの意図でオレンジ色を選ばれたのか気になり質問させていただきました。長文乱文で失礼いたしました。