Creepypasta webtoons are worse than you can imagine

[@boatmancreatorofficial1866]

As an artist it feels like they drew this while trying to not get caught during silent reading time and that’s why the episodes end like that

[@Chalupa_bruh]

Honestly, that would make so much sense 💀💀💀🥶🥶🥶🥶

[@St_A1in0]

also don't forget the 🤢🤮🤢🤮

[@emperorlizZ]

Lmao

[@_Bedji_]

But actually the art style not bad. I mean, it's not one of the best, but u can see that characters are flexible and not a pieces of cardboard

[@fanatomic24]

@@_Bedji_ the best way to explain the art is "They have the ability to do better"

[@dmwanderer9454]

So weird when you remember that Jeff in the original creepypasta was like 13, but suffers from "The Onceler" effect, where now he is a hipster man-boy

[@Duhgel]

this^^

[@thaoquyenngo6005]

What is the onceler effect ?

[@fangirl3323]

​@@thaoquyenngo6005 same

[@zakoppi777]

im scared that i can both understand and cant comprehend the meaning of "The Onceler" effect

[@sammsarabefr]

@@thaoquyenngo6005 onceler is a character in the lorax

[@template585]

I'm an ex-Wattpat user and writer and I can confirm that the writing is infact something you would read on Wattpad except that whole 10 Episode would literally be in Chapter 1 and 2.

[@lumi6945]

as a wattpad user / writer (thats almost always on hiatus) I agree 😭

[@akira4759]

This is a whole one shot 💀

[@template585]

@@akira4759 A two parter to a one shot.

[@MiFer_08]

True

[@eadweard2214]

Wattpad is full of the unknown And I'd like to keep it that way.

[@E3Nerd]

Man if these webtoons can get readers then maybe I can actually make comics lol

[@MangoMagica]

Oh man same

[@NickName-be3li]

yeeehaaa

[@FuckYouho]

@mkultrasleepy but if you get the wrong audience you get youtubers like this after you

[@sfdjkdj43589stf]

the reality is you probably won't get readers beyond a couple of friends

[@s3atherny]

@@FuckYouho volooo

[@pUbErtYy_49]

If you think about it. This is actually horror not romance.

[@user-nb5jo2xi1g]

OMG IKR

[@neraslight4997]

Not even horror, horroRBLE, brings shame to the actual horror genre.

[@Mxtsukii0209]

Jeff just straight up followed the main character home, that's so creepy. That's not cute at all

[@hi.241]

A lot of shit romance is or could be considered horror

[@Rosetintedwater]

It's a relief genre actually.. When your finally done you feel so happy and excited!

[@wildbirbs9797]

Jeff in these comics is looking like Alastor from Hazbin Hotel a little.... without the ears ofc

[@umimatsu6221]

author actually mentioned that they were changing his design to sort of knock-off alastor so nice notice

[@hanyunya]

Except alastor is objctively way hotter

[@wildbirbs9797]

@@hanyunya idk I think he's cool

[@barbararab6390]

@@hanyunya and like, an actual cool character

[@YaoiCocaine1]

@@hanyunya not true.

[@reddstarr]

Am I the only one who thinks if this comic was posted in 2010-2012 It would have been considered good? Edit: oh wow, 6K likes.

[@ieuansmith518]

Wasn't that most of the creepypastas back then.

[@frozen7550]

I mean this is good. It's just a specific art style. A rough version of "Vivzipop" animations. It's on youtube.

[@ieuansmith518]

@@frozen7550 well Viv has bright and energetic characters with unique design, and recognisable silhouette, where as Jeff and the girl (forgotten her name) if you were put there silhouettes in front of someone and told them one was Jeff and the other girl and then you brought out another two silhouettes that looked like them which one would you chose? And that’s been a lesson in silhouettes, and why an artist really needs to make their characters recognisable from how they look as shadows, which in my opinion Viv dose fantastically.

[@frozen7550]

@@ieuansmith518 it's called sketch art... I mean this specific art made the same impact as being recognizable. As soon as I saw the pic I knew which comic it was from. The artist made it unique in their way. Reguardless, if it's a bad drawing or not, is subjective. Blatantly saying it's bad & the person is a bad artist when a handful of people enjoy their work. Is pretty unfair. Especially Viv is a professional animator who worked in Adult swim (?, I forgot which company). This artist from what I remember is a newbie comic artist. I mean from their bahavior in their other comics.

[@ieuansmith518]

@@frozen7550 yea your right, I just went on a rant for a second there.

[@frejyalrelle5780]

If there's a Jeff the Killer romance webtoon, there should be a Chalupa romance webtoon too 🥰😤🥵🥵

[@Chalupa_bruh]

The only perfect webtoon!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍

[@SkySloth]

Id read it

[@emperorlizZ]

I agree

[@YaoiCocaine1]

There should be a Solaire romance webtoon

[@strawberry_silk3364]

Bro- I'd read that

[@robinauseer499]

As an artist: Style is not bad, has enough uniqueness/personality to catch and keep an audience if utilized properly (e.g. there's a great story to follow). Although, if you ask me, some of those Jeff designs look an awful lot like Alastor from Hazbin Hotel...

[@Nightcore-336]

Ya

[@silver_jordann7482]

agreed, before I read your comment it reminded me of alastor

[@mrspeki]

I LEGIT think the same thing too! It just feels like a Alastor x Charlie ship clone!

[@meandyourmom3212]

the author actually confirmed in one of the episodes that she based his design off of him 💀

[@zacmayes2802]

I'm so glad it's not just me

[@rclark777]

So the author basically saw Harley Quinn’s backstory and was like “what if I just did that but casually downplay the manipulation and abuse!”

[@syppy7416]

which is ironic

[@MissCourtesy]

I mean when you look at what she's done to minors, you can kinda see why she thinks this is okay 😅

[@Zainab-fh5wm]

@@MissCourtesyomg what did she do?

[@-velsbellz-]

​@@Zainab-fh5wm I suggest you watch one of the videos discussing her drama.

[@Cute_Deth]

All creepypasta fanfics I've read in like, 2010 have always had the premise of, "I can change him" 😭😭😭

[@Mxtsukii0209]

"J-j-j-eff t-t-this i-is-n't y-y-ou :((" "I-i-i-can f-fix h-h-him guys!" "I-i-t's j-j-just h-his t-t-trauma :((" God I can't stand those "I can fix him!" stories

[@fruitmilk2863]

Or, “it’s okay he’s a killer cause he won’t kill me or my friends/family! :)”. God that was a different time

[@nocturne3220]

And he changes 💀

[@kaplingnag7267]

@@nocturne3220 oH LORD NOO

[@REALT0R.1]

nah bc even when i was in my creepypasta phase and still now the creepypasta and marble hornets has a big 'ol grip on me, i hated those type of fanfics/content and turned more to OC/self-inserts become creepypasta × whichever choice of creepypasta you simp for lmao, i have to say the creepypasta's are.. yes, especially Jane Richardson (different from the Jane the Killer we know, aka Jane Everlasting)

[@cree4658]

NGL I remember when I was 12 & into creepypasta I ended up finding Lexet's stuff on deviantart which was nearly a decade ago. Her art is the basically the same as when I first discovered her. Her art has barely improved. As a long time artist I think Lexet's artstyle is very bland, generic and even lazy.

[@skyshunts]

Her art looks like she tried to copy vizie pop art

[@weirddd469]

So I guess some people never grow out of the creepypasta phase

[@lumi6945]

I was in middle school when I entered my creepypasta phase 😭

[@ThatOneFur]

You shouldn’t judge someone’s style just because they didn’t “improve” as an artist myself I know others who are fine with their style and don’t wanna change it as well as see no need. Frankly I find your close minded self lazy. We don’t put down artist as that how problems happen. Maybe fix yours

[@barbiemary67]

@@ThatOneFur ikr? One thing is not liking their art, another thing is criticizing an artist for specifically not changing artstyle or not "growing out" of a phase - creepypasta phase, in this case. That just sounds close minded and ridiculous to me

[@yoyohayli]

Honestly, the artist might have initially drawn the episodes as print layout comic pages and then converted them into the line webtoon format, but didn't account for thr fact that one line webtoon episode is equivalent to multiple print page layouts. It's a smart idea to start with the page layout for print because it ensures if you want to ever print and sell, you don't have to work with unusable layouts and shitty resolution made for screen. But it also takes longer to then convert the pages to the web format after drawing. It's the method I plan on using for my upcoming webcomic.

[@iu1154]

I like your funny words, Magic Man.

[@The.Biggest.G]

I read it too, biggest mistake of my life. 💀💀💀💀💀💀

[@Chalupa_bruh]

Our lives have both been ruined by this webtoon 😿😿😿😿😿😿😿😿😿

[@liviwaslost]

@@Chalupa_bruhyup

[@fangirl3323]

Link?

[@bunny_boystuff837]

The cringe webtoons are back at it again

[@Chalupa_bruh]

You already know 😼😼😼😼😼

[@user-nb5jo2xi1g]

We must stay strong!

[@dreamiinotdream730]

I could make a better love story for Jeff and I can’t draw for shit. Jeff sees a mirror. He tries to kiss it but fails because weird fucking face. He cries himself to death as his eyes burn with the moisture he’s denied them for so long.

[@blitzlives1023]

Beautiful😍👏👏👏

[@Caesar000Salad]

Amazing

[@mikeymodz4675]

Goddamn thats a good story

[@meria2082]

Hpw poetic

[@bellAa_akaPlusheen]

better love story than twilight

[@SnakeRoadComicsOfficial3677]

And once again Analog Horror seems to be the only media to make bad creepypastas good.

[@mikadosannoji553]

crazy how scary faces on media have changed, it used to be hollow eyes with red pupils and blood tears now its those inverted fish eyes from the mandela catalogue

[@iancortescontreras6084]

Vibingleaf is the best example

[@Notkryo]

Creepypasta was literally ALWAYS shitty cheap body horror. It was never good.

[@iheartcilla]

@@Notkryo you probably just dont understand creepypasta 🤷🏻‍♀

[@triggerfairy4070]

​@@iheartcillaJeff the killer and all the other Jeff clones were pretty cringe though. Slenderman was alright cause there was an attempt at at least world building even though it was just some kind of creepy photo contest entry.

[@rayannasmith2336]

I know I'm late to the party, but there is another Jeff the killer webtoon where he is a gay man and his boyfriend's name is sugar

[@loverofyurigagarin1149]

Dawg

[@ArtundertheSun1]

No fucking way

[@bladescervix]

What’s the sauce

[@rayannasmith2336]

@@bladescervix Jeff Woods the killer creepypasta BL comic. The art is okay, despite not remember the half of the story since it felt like a oc X canon fic

[@loverofyurigagarin1149]

@@rayannasmith2336 BL?

[@dominiquewilson6499]

The art is fine, the story is W H Y.

[@Fikamar27]

Yup, this artstyle is actually good. The flexible anatomy, the unique voice baloon... But I still wish eye-bleach and that forgetting machine exist

[@fangirl3323]

Link to it?

[@MissCourtesy]

If only she didn't send nsfw content to minors 😅

[@jommisalami]

The Samsung alarm deadass gave me trauma flashbacks from the June of 2014 in my parent's living room. The house was somewhat organized then. My raggedy keyboard was on the floor near the fireplace and I was playing it. The light from outside, the beautiful sun through the pear trees hitting the brown, stinky leather couch just so. Those were simple times, but terrible times.

[@laylanop1346]

I genuinely hope youre ok now.

[@jommisalami]

@@laylanop1346 I'm doing better today, although I'm actually staying in my parents house for a week :')

[@zweipinguine]

I'm less confused by the romance than by the fact the prison lets a serial killer just roam around with... An axe? That he must've used since there's blood on it? And apparently there's nobody in the priskn except those three since nobody thought of stopping the two of just walking outside

[@doppiossparefrogphone1906]

i’m blonde and can confirm i make the worst possible choice every time 👍

[@cooperisswag]

same brother, 'tis a curse

[@mikadosannoji553]

theres a masked man with a knife coming towards you, you better not trip on the smallest particle of dust possible

[@doppiossparefrogphone1906]

@@mikadosannoji553 aw shit *stumbles over air particle and fucking dies*

[@user-me3ge8de4o]

Bruh i'm a brunette and i do that

[@midnights2631]

I'm not a blonde but I might as well be. My brother is blonde but he's doing better than me

[@charlieinthebox2422]

Art style has some life to it, it had a lot of potential

[@barbararab6390]

Its most likely heavily inspired by Vivziepop

[@FuckYouho]

THAT'S NOT LIFE THAT'S TUMBLR TITTY INFINITY ENERGY 🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤮🤢🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢

[@FuckYouho]

I think lexet needs to have Bones

[@taylort3674]

I feel like art wise theyre trying really hard to make Jeff like Alastor from Hazbin Hotel based on head and face proportions. Which isnt inherently bad to be inspired by, but it is when you notice it and that if you swapped two the personality given to Jeff is Alastors. And then it becomes more apparent Jeff doesn't have much personality. If they set it up so Jeff started to like her because she was almost stupid levels oblivious but nice to him it wouldn't be perfect but would be somewhat reasonable to say he catches feelings for the first person to show him kindness. Also i feel like the comedic less detailed drawings while meant to be funny diminishes whatever tone we're supposed to have. It tells an audience "oh we're not supposed to take this seriously" and that becomes the expected pace which i feel like wasnt the intent.

[@Ratatra]

Alastor has great character design, but I don’t really know how I feel about Jeff… 😅

[@taylort3674]

@@Ratatra id say agree to disagree on that. Imo Alastor does in a vacuum when his time period and most of his given backstory aren't a thing by character design standards because they dont strongly correlate when they should. He doesnt dress like his time period, his antlers are so small theyre not super noticeable. Jeff has the elements from the original image and story he was created from save for the cuts on sides of his mouth, and giving him an axe instead of a knife however most people do recognize the overall look the original image gave people of white skin, white hoodie, black hair, black pants. Basically in a vacuum maybe? But judged on character design standards regarding what theyre supposed to be designed after (Jeff and source material vs Alastors backstory and character details) Jeffs got more going for him in that department. The only thing hes missing is some scars on the cheek, skin graft and brun scars.

[@Ratatra]

@@taylort3674 what I mean is I prefer the character idea of a radio demon rather than a creepy guy, both are great, well thought out characters. ✨ I do think some of Alastors personality traits are overused. Idk… Jeff has more originality in that way.

[@Пинагод]

I get what you're saying, but I find it highly unrealistic for someone like Jeff to be falling for someone who offered him kindness, solely because he's _devoid_ of kindness. It could work if Jeff was still a teenager and is going through things. It won't work now that he's an adult (?) that's already snapped and has no thought of empathy, neither does he care about empathy (I mean he's a serial killer). It's like attempting to fix the Joker - Any person who actually knows how to empathize and actually give people proper kindness will know there's no plausible way of showing these people kindness unless it's as twisted as them.

[@triggerfairy4070]

This is just Joker x Harley lite

[@TotallyTaRz]

We only reading real horror this Halloween

[@Chalupa_bruh]

Facts 💯💯💯💯💯

[@strawberry_silk3364]

*Junji ito has entered the chat*

[@phuonglinhvu4856]

@@strawberry_silk3364you actually know that exist? I love that series

[@temmie_2283]

I had a cringy creepypasta phase and I feel like I wanna die uuuuuurgh

[@at0micn0vva]

Same💀

[@Valep400]

Same 🙃

[@fangirl3323]

Same 😫

[@user-me3ge8de4o]

Same 😭

[@midnights2631]

Same.

[@CandyThePuppy]

3:41 noooo, that chime gave me literal PTSD flashbacks to highschool- WHYYYYYYY?!?!?

[@Ieatnucearbombs]

*disintegrates into atoms*

[@skyshunts]

This must be why the artist just suddenly quit making new pages for it. I didn't know about the gross stuff the author did until later pages and went to comment section

[@TransmutedCuppyCake]

Nope. They stopped making pages on webtoons and moved onto their patreon because it turned into straight up porn from that point on.

[@lythrum2081]

episode 4's section's jingle gave me war flashbacks to my phone alarm waking me up at four for intense study sessions-

[@night4138]

Ngl while the art style is certainly something that is close to common, I like the way they draw Jeff just because they aren't drawing him as this hot anime boy and it's still different from other styles when he's not drawn as an anime boy Edit: literally all I have said was that I liked how the author of the webcomic DIDN'T draw Jeff as some hot anime boy. I never really read the comic nor do I really care. So for those yelling at me and commenting saying that "he's just a copy of Alastor" I say please stop. I only care that he wasn't drawn as this visually appealing Tumblr sexy man.

[@AridanaArelli]

They’re drawing him as a knockoff alestor tho 🧐 which initself could be its own Genre of oc's. It’s quite frustrating to see all the Vivziepop clones, just creating Tumblr Sexyman's and getting called "different" and "innovative" for it.

[@night4138]

@@AridanaArelli just because it could be similar, doesn't make it a clone. From what I have seen he wasn't really like Alastor. Could be some similarities between the art styles, but that could be taking inspiration from Viv's art style instead of copying it. Plus even if this comic's Jeff and Alastor are similar, ideas aren't original. The person could have never even heard of Hazbin Hotel or Viv in the first place. Two people can have the same idea and think they're being original

[@k4t161]

@night4138 Literally the creator DID confirm they based it HEAVILY off of Alastor. Plus if you were to switch Lexet's Jeff and Alastor's personality, there would be no difference.

[@chiannsmith6803]

It's like everything that made Alastor good, but slapped on a very awful character and with none of the charm. Eugh

[@night4138]

@@k4t161 I don't follow the artist so I just said what I knew.

[@blorbo6778]

There's an analog horror based on creepy pastas that takes their original stories and adds a twist to it, it's pretty good

[@daliahyde7183]

Spill the name plzz

[@blorbo6778]

@@daliahyde7183 it's on yt called the macabre experiment

[@anonymousperidot7446]

@@blorbo6778another good creep pasta analog horror channel is one called Vibing leaf

[@blorbo6778]

@@anonymousperidot7446 oo I'll check it out

[@rinblack533]

The art is something I think any practicing artist could do without sketching. It’s simple and fast my drawn probuably so I’m confused why each chapter is so short and uncolored. I’d be curious what their art looked like when they spent actual time on it

[@eat_buttons]

Yes, it’s not that the art is bad, it’s that they didn’t put any effort into it.

[@hufflepufflez3293]

Honestly I found this funny until the "this art is average at best". Because the expressions and poses are pretty fun, and the artist makes good use of a minimal mono palette when it comes to colors

[@Пинагод]

But compared to other comics, it's rather obvious that the effort given to this is average compared to the effort other artists do for their work. I think that's what this guy is getting at.

[@Пинагод]

And again - It _is_ rather average. I can tell that the artist is better at me in drawing and has a consistent art style - But that's just the bare minimum for standards on art. This simply just means I'm amateur, while they're average.

[@jommisalami]

As someone named Jeff I apologize for this

[@therandom_dude]

Their art looks ALOT like Vizipop art style

[@Nightcore-336]

It does

[@0ffguy248]

But even more edgy

[@Ratatra]

@@0ffguy248 👏👏👏

[@boom-chan]

I say it too

[@breezum5356]

the Vivziepop and Hazbin Hotel effect.

[@MyDadJustLeftMeXD]

What

[@ytu952]

@@MyDadJustLeftMeXD what

[@Ratatra]

✨✨✨✨✨🥚🥚🥚✨✨✨✨

[@The_chrome7483]

I honestly think the art is good, and it’s coming from someone who can’t even draw unless it’s a flower.

[@mattiasjohannorglaan2967]

Honestly, the art isn't that bad. It's pretty okay for a canvas webtoon. They clearly got some skills but by how low effort the art is, the shortness of epiaodes and how fast it moves I think they just want to get to the parts they like in the story.

[@LumaShiki]

Pretty goofy but kinda cute at the same time tbh. Always grew up reading and writing fanfics and seeing a fan comic just brings me back to those times. I’m sure the artist isn’t expecting some sort of award out of the comics, but they’re being made purely for their own amusement and an outlet for their own creative writing. As it stands it’s pretty cringe but I would in no way tell the artist to stop making it. You can tell they’re having fun and that’s all that really matters

[@slowggy]

We need more people like you fr

[@-Yep000-]

Agreed

[@sanrioandgraves8234]

Jeff is 15 my dude…the main character is an adult. She should be bullied

[@Пинагод]

And we're having fun cringing at it

[@TheMightyGlizzy]

I honestly kinda agree, but even by Wattpad standards this is really lazy 5 panels happen and then the episode ends Hell, I doubt this ending even satisfies the deviantart kids since even the payoff felt underwhelming from the buildup of these two lmao

[@lumi6945]

I'm so glad I'm not into Creepypasta anymore 💀 the fandoms kinda crazy at times.

[@CZ-JEWEL_Off1cial]

Yeah although I am returning to it because the for the memes

[@DymphnaWolf]

I actually think the art style is cute, although Jeff's design is putting off Hazbin Hotel vibes. It also reminds me a little of the old Beetlejuice cartoon from the 80s/90s, but I suspect that the artist probably isn't old enough to have seen that. The plot, on the other hand, is like a watered down, rose-tinted version of Harley Quinn's origin story

[@cultishmagic3276]

The art isn't even a sketch. It's a goddamn doodle ☠️

[@StyxicalMarzelian]

Bro chalupa, I caught the coco 19, but I’ll still be here to comment on every one of your vids

[@Chalupa_bruh]

I know for a fact you'll destroy the car owner virus 💪💪💪😎😎😎😎😎

[@renneklauz]

the whole artstyle and how the comic goes just reminds me of any regular fanfic comic of 2015 in deviantart

[@berry_cakeisgood]

Sometimes people don’t deserve rights and their drawing skills should be taken away too 💀

[@fangworl5170]

Ah, the Creepypasta fandom. We were all a part of it at some point, yet we can all agree that it's a steaming dumpster fire adorned in My Chemical Romance merchandise.

[@anonymousperidot7446]

That’s the best way I’ve seen someone describe that hell hole of a fandom

[@sleepymushroom7041]

I saw this exact comic when I was around (can’t remember my age, was in middle school at the time) I went through a creepypasta phase and happened to stumble upon this comic. You can say I loved reading it, years later I read it again and laughed at the fact that I used to like this kind of stuff 😂

[@pixiehellpup1579]

damn this girl really wanted to Harley Quinn herself into a jack the killer romance.

[@Theonefromcrk]

I had a better idea,Jeff uses the girl to get shelter and food better then the mental asylum and after using her for food and all for long enough he fakes he loves her to stay longer,and he kills her while she sleeps

[@PIutonium-239]

2:20 never confuse chalupa

[@catperson925]

2:08 IKR I TRIED LOOKING IT UP AND I FOUND “A DECORATIVE STRUCTURE THAT IS SUSPENDED SO AS TO TURN FREELY IN THE AIR” i guess he’s asking her if she’s a decorative structure?? Idfk anymore man

[@vinnyboi666]

Man, I'm glad I enjoy non-romantic serial killer shit more than whatever the fuck kinda 12 year old Wattpad author shit that was lmao- and I am still a JTK fan as an adult. Also, you got yourself a new subscriber 👍

[@Lefty-Loki]

As an artist, I personally think the art style is charming, it’s just the art is…a bit strange for my taste.

[@cheggycchig]

as an artist the art isnt the worst it could possibly be, but it also isnt great. Its very clear this artist favours drawing/detailing her self insert/her fanmade version of Jeff more then anything else. Which is really sad because I can see she has very good talent with drawing characters, and even the drawing of the house was very impressive. But some panels are so very rushed and lazy. Like the asylum in the first shot, just looks like a very rushed drawing. The chicken is also very rushed, it's literally just a sphere with wings. They also seem very confused with the color scheme, often going from straight black/white, black/white with a single color added, or full color. They definitely have capabilities as an artist but this webtoon would not be a very good example of it IMO.

[@ReeseHarison]

Can't wait for the slenderman twink femboy webtoon with 14yrG writings storytelling lol

[@comradekitty3759]

This looks like a bad alestor oc 🤔

[@Papitasma]

Fr

[@ThatOneFur]

If I remember correctly this was before viziepop did jack. I distinctly remember reading it a year or two before it

[@k4t161]

@@ThatOneFur Oh hey its you again. Fact check: Alastor has already been a character more than 5 years ago back when Vivzi thrived in Deviant art.

[@savannahhuso2134]

I saw this too and I just thought to myself," What the hell did they put my boi Jeff into this time?!" And as an artist her art reminds me of a shittier version of Vivziepop's art.

[@BrokenXDI]

Creepypasta + romance + oc/reader + webtoon = a big nono Coming from an ex wattpad writer and childhood love of creepypasta's i can already see where this is going and I'm both afraid and ready to laugh

[@gameknightplays1211]

Why does Jeff look like alastor in the cover

[@MOSCOWDEATH161]

i rlly like the "Jeff Woods The Killer" Webtoon, it has amazing art and the "Bl" parts are, well, they are there but, few and far between, its more focussed on telling the original Jeff the killer story and i think it has a real charm to it ^_^

[@MrSmile8742]

As a character designer/artist, I must say that the art is fairly what you would see in a high school art classroom. The art is simple and lazy, making it classified as just a sketch. While some sketches can be highly detailed and nice to look at, you start finding these types of sketches which are ugly and lazily drawn. One last thing that I noticed is that the characters look similarly close to Vivziepop's characters, which talks for itself.

[@eat_buttons]

I’m a high schooler…and I agree

[@NOTGreenieLOL]

2:07 Bro really said she's a mobile phone 💀

[@kalinaszek]

I like art, plot could be better

[@beezzaroll]

Author and illustrator here. I've noticed in the comments the "I can fix him!" trope. With my book, it can seem to start like that but really dives deep into the psychological world of the protagonist. No one is trying to "fix" him because nothing he's doing is seen as wrong (yet, at least.) It's the story of a child trying his best to live a good life despite the difficulty. But it's not just that. You have to trust me (it is waaay too long to explain on KZbin comments.) I have provided a sample I one of the chapters. It was a fantastically crafted box. James could tell the moment he laid his fingers on it. “This has to be carved by hand,” he murmured, looking around for a way to open it. A tiny hook, barely visible, was on the edge of the box closest to him. “Oh, there we go,” he said, flicking it open. The inside of the box was a beautiful marbled mix of leather and animal pelts. James wrinkled his nose; he had never liked dead animals. He assumed that Ronald had something to do with it. The collection of taxidermied animals in his room was haunting enough. With the empty house and the previous evening, however, the sight of fur sent chills down his spine. He was not focused on the design of the box, though. Rather the gleam of metal inside. Inside the box lay a hand carved bone. Or, at least, it looked like bone. It wasn't nearly as dull. A metal handle with real leather straps was bound to the hilt of the knife. The blade itself had ridges not unlike that of a bee's stinger or a fish hook. It looked like it would hurt, no, it looked like it would make you beg for death. A beautiful opalite stone was embedded into the base of the handle. "Why opalite though?" James thought. He knew he was trying to distract himself from the reason he had gotten this. He knew it wasn't going to work. If you read this (like at all) thank you so much for giving me your time. Building a "bad guy" protagonist is so much harder than it seems. thank you for coming to my ted talk lol

[@eatingshelf6135]

Interesting

[@dawnmccarthy1]

3:14 Resumes have a cover these days. The main resume is the page under it.

[@Chalupa_bruh]

In that case I retract my statement and acknowledge my idiocy 😓😓😓😓😓

[@dawnmccarthy1]

@@Chalupa_bruh meh Most people just send an e-resume, or send a pre-made resume template these days. Hard to find anyone that can do a proper one anymore. At least among those younger than 40.

[@J09-555]

I'm finally in my teens and I could not be proud of myself enough for not being into these. My parents raised me right 🙌

[@StopStalkingMe840]

Okay so I’ve read this multiple times, so i might as well put my opinions and reactions to other peoples comments on this. 1. It’s really 18+ and more romance. However some of the parts of horror are very well done. I dont honestly hate the plot line. 2. Everyone brings up the alastor thing, that was the point. She does explain in one of the episodes that she likes the alastor knock off. Honestly probably one of the better ideas. 3. I really do like this comic and like i said, love the plot but I do not support the author anymore. They had a lot of proof against child fiddling which honestly was sad to see something ruined like that.

[@Muffinzy]

As an artist, the artstyle is mid

[@jadeblade865]

it screams 12-14 year old kid who is good at it for their age or late 20-30 something year-old who is probably a pedo

[@ThatOneFur]

As an artist who’s dealt with perfectionism because of people constantly comparing and complaining about other peoples art and style, you are mid because you expect Everyone to have wonderful glorious art

[@strawberry_silk3364]

Er, it's good enough. It dose it's job. It could use some improvement....and a completely different story to be affiliated with.

[@ValiensArch]

@@ThatOneFur man tbh you need so stfu. First of all people can have opinions it can be harsh or nah you need to accept that, and tbh there's absolutely nothing wrong with "Mid" it means average??? It's literally the artstyle you see everyday and everywhere ;-; that's why the person said mid omfg

[@yourmothergaming384]

@@ThatOneFur and this kid is a gacha kid

[@catperson925]

Jeff: heyyyy bbg~~~ are you mobile? Anyone with at least 1/4 of a brain cell: WTF

[@LarnrothSDergan]

I guess the artist is a huge fan of Viziepop, because of course Jeff looks like that.

[@doggy_lady_laura4379]

shits scarier than the actual creepypasta

[@Druskii_dubs]

Chalupa Romcom webtoon when

[@Chalupa_bruh]

When this video hits 5 billion likes 😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼

[@TimingIsRight]

It’s just a copy of Harley Quinn, literally the same roles

[@ProbablyAFurry]

Wow! Alastor and jeff had a child. Don't now how they did but they did.

[@MyDadJustLeftMeXD]

Must've been a Sentinel Trial or something

[@frankuxa2157]

Did you know Jeff’s face is mangled not handsome.this person disregarded Jeff’s lore. Can’t wait for the slender man on were he becomes a high school teacher

[@sammsarabefr]

Exactly! Bro lost his eyelids.and became burnt

[@buckethead_jr-yh7si]

Hearing the alarm sound “By The Seaside” gave me whiplash 💀

[@d.kemeling5539]

Her artstyle has those vibes of the art you get in like schoolbooks

[@rosemary3029]

Nah fam that doesn't hold the torch to the uncanny valleyness that i see in my schoolbooks

[@zombitin]

the Tiny part made me physically ill

[@Anonymous-73]

Jeff is at most 15 years old and the Self-Insert protagonist is about in her late teens or 20’s. She could absolutely fold Jeff in a fight even if he is somehow taller.

[@HEADLESS-B00GIE]

as a creepypasta fan (yes we still exist) I love reading cringe webtoons like this to have a good laugh lol ur vid was amazing btw

[@Kyomoro2.0]

My dumbass thought it was made by VivziePop bc of how Jeff was drawn 😭

[@Nycticora]

5:34 As someone who literally has to carry a rake with me whenever I step out the door due to my crazy rooster who will attack on sight, I agree. (I'm not kidding, I have a scar from when I let my guard down to open one those stupid, fricking water feeders that were sealed by the gods or something. He came up behind me, ran at my legs, I turned around then he stabbed me in the ankle and brought his talons downward leaving a stream of blood down to my feet.)

[@sadgirl_gutter797]

Holy shit!

[@carlosmiguell.delacruz7597]

A common kind of grass is used to cover the ground in places such as lawns and parks. Grass is usually the color green. That is because they are wind-pollinated rather than insect-pollinated, so they do not have to attract insects. Green is the best colour for photosynthesis. Grasslands such as savannah and prairie where grasses are dominant cover 40.5% of the land area of the Earth, except Greenland and Antarctica.[4] Grasses are monocotyledon herbaceous plants. They include the "grass" of the family Poaceae, which are called grass by ordinary people. This family is also called the Gramineae, and includes some of the sedges (Cyperaceae) and the rushes (Juncaceae).[5] These three families are not very closely related, though all of them belong to clades in the order Poales. They are similar adaptations to a similar life-style. With about 780 genera and about 12,000 species,[3] the Poaceae is the fifth-largest plant family. Only the Asteraceae, Orchidaceae, Fabaceae and Rubiaceae have more species.[6] The true grasses include cereals, bamboo and the grasses of lawns (turf) and grassland. Uses for graminoids include food (as grain, shoots or rhizomes), drink (beer, whisky), pasture for livestock, thatch, paper, fuel, clothing, insulation, construction, sports turf, basket weaving and many others. Many grasses are short, but some grasses can grow tall, such as bamboo. Plants from the grass family can grow in many places and make grasslands, including areas which are very arid or cold. There are several other plants that look similar to grass and are referred to as such, but are not members of the grass family. These plants include rushes, reeds, papyrus and water chestnut. Seagrass is a monocot in the order Alismatales. Grasses are an important food for many animals, such as deer, buffalo, cattle, mice, grasshoppers, caterpillars and many other grazers. Unlike other plants, grasses grow from the bottom, so when animals eat grass they usually do not destroy the part that grows.[7] This is a part of why the plants are successful. Without grass, soil may wash away into rivers (erosion).

[@EuanFarren]

Why did you write a whole damn essay on grass?

[@helo9316]

​@@EuanFarren touch grass moment

[@bj_cat103]

this jeff is a copy of Alastor from Hazbin both in appearance and manners. He's even using the same word, "sweetheart" a lot

[@shayziekaizie]

I’m an artist, the art direction behind the story feels confused. It’s trying to mix in both some variant of anime and the Hazbin Hotel artstyle at the same time.

[@ToothDecay1965]

Is it just me, or does Jeff kind of look like Beetle Juice in this comic (or at least his smile reminds me of him)

[@Robbie_fries2012]

Most romantic thing Jeff says Jeff; hey bbg are you mobile~

[@Jane-ow7sr]

Why can't they just leave creepypasta in the 2000s? My 20yo cousin is still into Homestuck unfortunately. It's a terrible condition.

[@ReeseHarison]

Unable to leave old 2000s Fandoms is a serious condition lol

[@gabbyn.3049]

>20yo cousin >still into Homestuck I'm sorry for your loss.

[@Jane-ow7sr]

@@gabbyn.3049 Thank you, it's been very rough. She's just a year older than me Please pray for her

[@strawberry_silk3364]

Girl- there is no recovery from that.....

[@donthaveaclevername9330]

I'm 70% sure the artist copied Alastor for the cover which doesn't make sense since the art style is inconsistent, and Jeff has eyelids even though he cut them off...

[@WizeeeKat-qu8vb]

I've been a fan of Creepypasta since I was 11 years old or younger. I am so freakin sad to see what it has become😥 Luckily, there are people who ACTUALLY make it scary, like David Near. Y'all NEED to hear the Morgue Files and his story of Jeff, the BEST version of Jeff The Killer I had EVER seen!!!

[@deadlydingus1138]

You can tell how Jeff is going to be depicted by whether or not the artist gives him eyelids.

[@blackrosejinx5563]

writer AND artist here! The art is, as you said, average. It's not terrible by any means but there's definitely a lot better out there. Writing wise, it's a meh at best. The episodes are horrendously short and the plot moves along at what can only be described as a snail's pace. I can't even critique the plot all that thoroughly because of it's length. I think it's possible to take a story such as this and make it good, however the female lead just doesn't have a lot of character, and she's supposed to be integral. That often is the biggest problem when it comes to making more of a self-insert type story, the female lead tries to be transparent to allow for projection, but in the end she's the blandest character. There's nothing all that special about the story, there are a million otheres like it, so in the end it's kind of just...meh

[@nugget1667]

I always thought that my art or artstyle had a problem until I saw this video. Bro didnt even tried to draw properly these are straight up doddles 💀

[@dysfallacyyt]

the only thing i can draw are ponies bruh 💀💀💀💀💀💀 lmao bro thinks hes alastor

[@Mister_Dee78]

LMAO YOU USED THE SAME SONG AT 5:19

[@kicknicky]

Yes people the creator basically made an Alastor copy cause the comments brought it up. So it’s literally just Alastor

[@randomguy_justpassinthroug7885]

romance is the true horror here 0:57

[@corvidae1544]

as an artist the webcomic art is giving vivziepop

[@eliasbelphegor7140]

This gotta be the funniest reaction vid I found, I love watching people shit on romanticised killers

[@Alicentdollie]

Imagine shipping yourself with a killer! A killer! I know its a thing to simp for red flags but Keep them in your fantasies!

[@noemibanyar]

02:02 WHY HE HAS AN AX?!?! HE HAS A KNIFE!!!!!!!!

[@CZ-JEWEL_Off1cial]

Why did he steal ticci toby weapon