CRITIQING my OLDEST comic // Phantasi

I apologize for the glitchy screen!! I'm not sure why that happened :(
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--I do not own any of the Music used--
Intro and Outro music:
AWOLNATION Hollow Moon (Bad Wolf)
Songs used:
5PM - Animal Crossing - New Leaf Music
Able Sisters Shop - Animal Crossing - New Horizons Soundtrack
Animal Crossing City Folk 6 AM Music
Animal Crossing City Folk Music - 5 PM
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Programs used:
Clip Studio Paint Pro - Drawing
Hitfilm Express Content Creator Pack - Editing
OBS - Recording
Toon Boom Harmony Premium- animation
Storyboard pro - Animatics
Drawing tablet used:
Wacom Cintiq 16

[@CreatureCabin]

My apologies for the glitchy screen!! im not sure why that happened, but if you all want a second part to this i will try to avoid that :) DO you want a second part??

[@LifesLines69]

Yes please - I actually learned a lot about writing a scene due to this video so thank you!

[@CreatureCabin]

@@LifesLines69 that makes me so happy!! Thank you! I’ll definitely do this again :)

[@sicbixch]

yesss, I've been a fan of your work for so long I'd love to see it :)

[@CreatureCabin]

:,00 thank you??? / pos I will defs do more

[@asheillustrates]

YES, THIS WAS HILARIOUS AND EDUCATIONAL

[@asherthetrasher6931]

Its so weird looking at this comic now since i used to religiously read it as a kid. You’ve definitely come so far in both your writing and art style!!

[@CreatureCabin]

Thank you so much!! I’ve finally reached a stage in life where I hold my writing and art skills on the same level, so this means a lot to me :)

[@AutumniaSalem]

My 5th grade self is screaming in nostalgia right now. Honestly, if it wasn't for Phantasi, I wouldn't have gotten into art and started writing my own stories. Even though I was a cringe kid with no idea what they were doing, I'm glad to have it in my life. Thank you Mo.

[@CreatureCabin]

AWW DUDE THATS SO SWEET :,)) thank you!!

[@janabrkic426]

"I avoid thinking, as a whole. .. wait" thats such a mood jkaksdj edit: now that I've watched the whole video, that was really inciteful! When making stories, I tend to focus on world building so I have minimal knowledge on how to write characters 😅 so this was really helpful : D

[@CreatureCabin]

Haha!! It’s okay we don’t need to think much here /pos

[@CreatureCabin]

After edit: Aah that makes me so happy!! Thank you!! I was hoping this would be educational for some because this is the kind of thing I would’ve needed to watch when I was younger haha. I’m glad it helped a bit!!

[@Alfreedom]

I'd be interested in a part 2, I enjoyed this a lot. I'm also interested in seeing the drastic changes between the characters and your opinions on them

[@CreatureCabin]

Noted!! Thank you!

[@ethelyuen]

After seeing this, I realised my comic didn't really make sense, so I fixed it thanks to the thing I learned while watching this❤

[@macabremonsterstudios]

Ahhhhhh!!! I remember reading it and thinking it was peak writing back in 5th grade akdnsnanam. But man seeing how much you’ve grown as a story teller in 4+ years is really inspiring!!! I’d love to see a part two! You’re comments are very insightful and funny 😄💗

[@CreatureCabin]

Thank you so much :,)) that’s so sweet

[@Yami_Draws]

Dude I can't explain how nostalgic this makes me feel!! I remember watching the comic dubs after the excitement of the comic pages,, This is so cool :DD!!

[@CreatureCabin]

AWWW OH MY GOODNESS

[@_Naivu0tashi_]

the nastalga im getting is making me so happy rn ^^

[@CreatureCabin]

AWWW Thank you!

[@_Naivu0tashi_]

@@CreatureCabin of course ^^

[@CherryBloosomProduction]

*BANG TABLE* JOLT! I will never not love that version even though his current design is amazing

[@CreatureCabin]

HAHAA AWWW I love his old character too

[@cd4473]

I remember your old channel and you were SUCH a inspiration to me! It’s great to see your improvement!

[@CreatureCabin]

AAWWW THIS IS SO SWEET!! Thank you so much for taking the time to tell me :,D I’m happy you could find inspiration in my work

[@qapano6]

your videos are always the highlight of my day

[@CreatureCabin]

AWWWW QAP THATS SO SWEET :((( /pos

[@asheillustrates]

PLOT-TWIST, PHANTASI JEMI WAS THE VILLAIN THE WHOLE TIME also, Mo verbally keyboard smashed at 26:40, i'm fucking dying 🤣 i felt like i was gonna throw up by how hard i've been laughing, but i swear i'm okay-

[@CreatureCabin]

AHDHHW WOW THANK YOU!! I’m glad you enjoyed!

[@Icyabandoned]

I would really like to see you making a video about rewriting your old comics. Since you mentioned it so much, I really like to see what it would look like in your current style!

[@CreatureCabin]

I’ve certainly thought about it! It would be a pretty large project so I’ll have to put more thought into how I’m gonna go about doing that, but it’s definitely on the KZbin ideas list! Thank you!

[@farixflame7525]

I'll say this again just like I said on TikTok, it's great to see you again old friend!! I hope you doing well.

[@CreatureCabin]

aww thank you!! You too!

[@aurizzim_]

I REMEMBER THIS COMIC

[@CreatureCabin]

you have bragging rights

[@nixiesprite]

real ones would watch the KZbin lives where mo drew the pages so you see the pages before they were posted 💪💪

[@CreatureCabin]

OMG I forgot about those 😭😭 THOSE WERE SO FUN

[@lazyeddie]

A blast to the past indeed- a cringe one that's for sure but good old one for me. Funny to think I was obsessed with Phantasi to the point where- it inspired me to make my own comic ( never did it got lazy threw it out lel) and to I think- some point I even made an oc that interacted with these characters XD Cringe old me I tell yea But even though it was cringe it still a happy silly memory of me of how much I just enjoyed it and was silly

[@CreatureCabin]

awww!! haha yes, it is cringe to me too but its still a nice memory! Im glad you enjoyed!

[@annalizacinco6823]

Where can I read all of your comics, I'm really interested!

[@CreatureCabin]

Thank you for your interest!! You can find all of my comics on Webtoon and Tapas! The links can be found in my Carrd in the description :)

[@MJknittingcryptid]

So old jemi used to be a deer but now the new jemi is a jade

[@CreatureCabin]

Yep! She was never a normal deer; i just never had a species name for her so i called her that. Now though, she has an actual race :)

[@MJknittingcryptid]

An actual race is a jade, deer, both?

[@CreatureCabin]

In road to the remedy; my current comic- the Jade is a race :D

[@gladyssawyers8261]

Moe like from the three stooges or mo?

[@CreatureCabin]

Haha just Mo